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"Young Queen might need to learn to love herself....Learn to protect herself..."

Be careful with your comment. The life of young queen is in your hand now.


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Mitch

"You never learn your lesson" A Future Queen cannot be completely pacifist, Young Queen must learn to fight and protect herself...Or how will she protect her own people...

Magical Trevor

Changeling Guard! Help your ward, Young Queen!

Senf12

maybe a randome Queen Chrysalis appears

l3loodKnight

The pony approaching is Apple Jack who came to get some Everfree forest herbs from Zecora. She knows about the Chaneling Queen and tries to do what she can to patch her up until Zecora returns from the forest. On the plus of things FlurryHeart just attack and almost killed a diplomat. Expect her to be in a lot of trouble when twilight learns she almost killed her second neice.

Julius Costa Peters

her aunt that was in Zecora taking her tea blend

Duke Of Donuts

Just to be different, how about Rainbow Dash or Scootaloo.

Lorvianne

damn pacifist

UxieKnight

Oh crap well she lives barely.... You must learn when to be pacifist and when to be aggressive The pony is Rainbow Dash or Applebloom I say

Lorvianne

that pony is.........BIG MAC tatataaaannnnnnnn!

Charostrasz

Applebloom, she heard about Plunderseed and came to Zecora's hut to look at him.

Incarno

The random pony is your mother, along with a few hundred changelings. I doubt she'll be too happy when she finds out what's happened to you.

Edmon Star

Changing guard

Anonymous

Twilight

Masao

Twilight

Gunmetal Gator

It's Applebloom going to water Plunderseeds.

J V W

Derpy, because she is the cutest pony. And this adventure needs a little Derp!

Drago Whooves

it's applebloom, looking for potion ingredients

Nioxi Sterling

So yeah, we've been railroaded, just like I thought. I'm not participating in this anymore, this is too big of a burn. Word of advice, don't spend three logs telling us every idea we had is a failure, it kind of detracts our part in this and makes it so that it's just your narrative.

Smart Alec

Apple Bloom was watching Zecora's hut while she was away. She notices when Black Vines arrived with you. Noticing you're hurt, she begins tending to your wounds with your First Aid Kit. She also uses your Love Gem to restore your Love. A side affect of the magical blast to your horn was a magically induced nightmare, running for your life from a monster and not getting away. The monster strikes you down. As it's about to land the finishing blow, you see it's face...Flurry Heart.

Stardust

Apple Bloom

NexusX

Applebloom most likely since zecora is like a mentor to her, and coming by for a visit.

UxieKnight

She went with what the majority was suggesting also you have to keep in mind that this story is going off of more realistic terms you're forgetting in Cannon changelings haven't been said to be trustworthy also this filly is the daughter of Queen chrysalis who invaded Camelot kidnapped Princess Cadence hypnotized shining armor and try to Lockaway Princess Twilight Sparkle when she was a unicorn. This is the problem everyone Michelle Play Passive when Lovelace clearly had it said that this was how very hard it was going to act it's our job to figure out how we can get around this obstacle and unfortunately we failed she wasn't railroading us she lettuce railroad ourselves at least the majority because people were being too passive

Nioxi Sterling

Yeah, no. Have a character who is so unrealistically biased against an entire species that the idea of one not lying to her is inconceivable. It's not like she lives in a society of tolerance and forgiveness where in a certain city Changelings are at most given an odd look for being uncommon. Let's also not forget that she's apparently been raised to be completely okay with killing when, in fact, a total of one character in the series has been killed. Sort of. He was kind of already not alive, but also alive sort of. Sombra really doesn't count as a kill.

Quanta

Vavacung didn't tell us everything we gave him, he only did what most people were saying, at least for the first two logs. This one has some additional data because some of us (ie : me, lel) suggested impossible feats, I guess to prevent anyone from saying the same impossible things for future logs in case they didn't go through all the comments and figured it out themselves. Going back on what happened, I noticed that a lot of people went for the same plan of attack (actually like everyone that wanted to attack said the same thing), but those of us that went for the defensive were too few to be noted, and all had different ideas making it really complicated to work with, I guess. The only one that was used, and ended up saving her, was that secret stash trick. Nice one btw Borg Lord :D Things is, usually we only have small decisions to make, like for this log for exemple, those don't require much thinking. But some logs need more thinking as the decisions we make could put her in great danger (:cough: like now : cough:). I suggest people consider their comments like if they actually lived the situation themselves, but with the Young Queen's point of view. To end this long comment (sorry Vavacung, I can't prevent myself from arguing xD), I find it hard to believe a lot of people didn't understand after the first log of this battle that Flurry Heart wasn't going to listen to anything we say, and so they kept trying to reason her anyways. It was obvious that she was in berzerk mode and would consider anything Young Queen said to be a lie (therefor the need to have an outsider she respects say it for us, like Starlight).

zenoshikage

That would be your bodyguard.

Quanta

Your father followed his daughter to stop her because he recognised his mane colors on you but arrived too late. He entered the room right when you were getting away but still managed to cast a tracking spell on Plunderseed's vines. He teleported to you in the Everfree Forest and as soon as he arrives, he start tending to your wounds.

Quanta

But I have to admit, my judgement is biased, as I wanted her to avoid the fight. I guess Vavacung was trying to force us to fight here, and even if we had the perfect escape plan or found the perfect way to calm Flurry Heart down, he would have probably found a way out to force the fight. I might be wrong about that though ^^' All in all, she's still alive, so ... Yay !

WhiteFang59

Have to agree cause I don't remember seeing any mention of dropping all of your weapons. Half of us called for using sword to defend or clever alternatives like the Love Gem but were shout out due to the majority

cyros gold

I vote twilight coming to visit zacora, it's why she wasn't home.

Duke Of Donuts

In D&D, being alive is winning enough sometimes. You could've killed an ambassador and become wanted because of it even though it's in self defense, as long as you are alive, you still have a chance to turn things around. I must admit, while it could be annoying, I have nothing but admiration to those who never abandoned their morals and resolve despite the situation forcing their hands.

Saturn22

twilight , who came to take a tea with Zecora

Mitch

You are correct, Loveless was trying to get the Young Queen to learn that sometimes, as a Queen, she must fight for herself and her people. But alas, now she must learn the hard way now, her failure, because of our mistakes (Being unrealistically good to those who only wish pain on us & Showing weakness to your enemies as a Queen = Terrible Future Leader).

Cylestea

twilight

Clay

Shining Armor? He did get the note and when both you and his daughter vanished he must have rushed over.

Mitch

It is likely to be Applebloom, who was practicing potion making.