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20 Min Hilichurls animation (Patreon)

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2024-06-22 12:04:50
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2026-06
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Content

The animation is complete and available early for sapphire members. Ruby and diamond members will get access to it on the 27 of june with an alternative version for sapphire and diamond members.

Thank to all and enjoy.

Files

Previews only

4.06 GB folder on MEGA

2 files

Comments

Tentaclelover3000

Love the mask version, would be nice if they also had piercings in these.

Test

Responding a little later than i thought, but As expected, its the video was excellent. I wanted to give some overall thoughts and feedback since I really like your work and I hope some feedback can help improve your work for next time. so Most of my criticisms will be more general ideas/missed opportunities that you could do in the future rather than pointing out some spots that could have used a bit more polish, since I understand the tight deadlines are the main reason for those bits.(sorry for the essay response) Mona -I think her scenes are super solid, so I have little to say other than they are very hot. If anything I think some throat bulge and dripping saliva from the edge of her mouth during the dedicated blow job scene could have helped sell the intensity more. Layla -I liked the layla scenes , but it was a little odd that she didn't have that much dirty talk compared to the others,. A very pedantic point I have is that I feel that the mitachurls cock was a little thin for his size. I'm assuming its like that so it would fit in Layla better without breaking the model too much, but it looks a little odd when it is fully out, so I think it would look better if it was a little thicker for those shots at least. But on a similar note think i would have like to see Layla have a a bit more squash and stretch when getting fucked. it doesn't need to be extreme but I think some stomach/pussy bulge would help sell the size and force of the mitachurls compared to the hillitrchuls better. Also i think i would have liked to see layas eyes rolled up a bit with smaller pupils during some of the lifting seans just to convey how good she feels more. Jean -I think the jeans scenes are very good. I really liked the x-ray this time around. I think the additional texture and ribbing you added this time improved how it looked. I will say i think think the cock could have used the same shading/highlights fin that shot to make it blend in better sense its a bit flat atm. and personally i think there should be much more cum in a x-ray shot. Like it should fill most of the space by the end of the shot, because I think one or 2 spurts is kinda unsatisfying. arlecchino/ganryu -I think their scenes are awesome with great posing and framings. Probably my favorite section in the video next to the opening mona scene is the double mating press. It's very well done. I like how both curls have different rhythms, my only nitpick is I would have liked both of them to finish around the same time, and for it to hold on the finish just a second or 2 longer. The mask version Blond mona is an interesting choice, I almost thought it was fisil for a second. personality, i would like it if the girls overall were just a bit more tan, like a shade darker. I do like the color matching tattoos this time around. It's more cohesive. And it's probably just a me thing at this point, but I think the half masks are hotter than the full mask. Final thoughts -I hope I didn't come off as too negative, because I really liked how the project turned out. I know you plan on remaking this video in the future and while I don't know how you ultimately plan on going about that, I personally wouldn't mind if you scaled back on the amount of sex scenes if it meant you could polish the key ones more and make them as best as you can. then you could fill the extra time with the lore you want to add, and i think that could have the potential to be fantastic if executed well. But as it is currently , this is some solid stuff and you should be proud.

AssDepik
>>141624598

Thank you very much, i need to improve. I still consider myself as a amateur to be honest.😁

Beidou Supremacy

Awesome work on this! You delivered! ❤️‍🔥 Can't wait for what's next!

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