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Krenn

I wonder when he'll get a blue sun or I'm his inner space. It will be interesting to see the expressions of this worlds inhabitants when he's got both sides cohabitating within him.

IdolTrust

Escape event v2. Similar to the escape from the sky bound in the town but with more flair. I’m not saying that it wasn’t a good chapter but it’s similar. I think that lightweaver is going to nuke everyone with holy power and on the MCs death bed he would store some of the holy power to make a mini blue sun.

Quyan640

If it can’t be hidden I can see it going either way, they could awestruck or discriminative. Like hybrids who are mistreated by both sides for the latter. Of course both ways can lead to the protagonist being forcefully experimented on.

IdolTrust

What most likely would happen is that he would do the same run on his next loop then unleash his holy power to get taken by the light weavers to learn from them.

IdolTrust

I think his master is the traitor because he seems just enough insane to switch sides to learn from the blue sun to complete his science experiments

Sparkley Unicorn

Paragraph 35, Building is missing an "i"

Sebastian Lachs

While millenniums isn't technically grammatically incorrect it doesn't fit stylistically in this story. Just use millennia.

Ekko

Nah, I don't think so. He seems more more good guy insane not bad guy insane