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Cayden Greenhalgh

I like getting some different perspective, it’s just that wouldn’t Daoist heiyu be able to instantly tell what level of cultivation the girl is? Cause he’s a lot more powerful… it’s not really that important but it kinda stuck out to me

Kynan

It's true he can, but I wrote it this way to imply that he doesn't even care to look which shows his blatant disregard for anyone under the Stellar Realm. Whether she is stage 1 or 9, to him that's "basic cultivation".

Kynan

I felt it was too dark so I've rewritten it and changed it to give us a glimpse into a version of the demonic dao

RedFaux

I like how half the fake wisdom, the stuff not related to Cultivation, is a actually applicable wisdom he's just to unwise to notice