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BookDragonling

*sigh* I had a feeling that the blue sun academy was going to continue being ignored when this fruit showed up and it looks like I was right.

Scion

Are you trying to keep his blue sun levels and Red Sun equal with his q cultivation? For me there's no reason for him not to spend you know one hour going to increase his red sun energy

Kynan

The fruit is in the inner world so if he enters the Two Sun's world. It will continue to decay. By the time he arrived at either academy, it could very well have disappeared

Kynan

There's a lot of hints in this chapter about the events for the next few chapters. I won't give it away myself but I'm curious if anyone picks up on it

Vincent Mason

It'll come in time, and I imagine when the Blue Sun Arc comes, it'll be something that joins the understanding of both schools of sun energy into a cohesive whole.

jaeger972

while I'm curious what this new world entails, i would prefer establishing a firm foundation with what he currently has available. it's not that bad yet but i don't want any of his advantages to become obsolete in the future. Having too many different locations with different characters could lead to bloat quickly as well. i was a bit disappointed that he didn't make contact with his friend the last time he entered the 2 sund world. I'm not saying that what you're doing is bad, I'm just putting out my concerns for the future. Over all I'm very impressed with the quality of your writing given the quantity of it as well. You should probably take a break before you burn out.

Perf

I prefer this over the Twin Suns World. I'm sick of the time loop.

Scion

Remember their save points for the time loop...

tonright

I personally also prefer this cultivation world. The Twin Suns world is interesting conceptually, and I do look forward to exploring more of it. I'm just very ready for events to progress in that world in a major kind of way. I don't know if I can read that same village attack for what feels like a tenth time in a row lmao.

Adleiavde

hints? hmmmm... It mention the nergy of the fruit being 'primal' so maybe a world where u gain strength through beast-power or something, maybe something more 'shamanic' idk.

Darune Albane

I agree many authors screw up by doing a too fast upward power growth .. as long as he finishes what he needs to do in 2suns in the end though

Kynan

Another comment addressed the same potential problem. My answer is as follows: (1) I've planned things out far in advance where events will line up eventually. Similar to how Li Yuan was killed in chapter 38, yet he came back to life and got his revenge in beginning of book 2, only then to find out he's under the control of the Masked One. (2) As for travelling other worlds, I've also explained that not every world Ke Yin travels to is for him to learn a new magic system. If that was the case, he'd become OP too fast and most of his abilities will become redundant as it all becomes a mess. I hope that answers your concerns

Scion

Yeah I agree he needs to get to a save point soon so that way we don't have to deal with the village again

RedFaux

He wakes up as a beast. He already was a farm boy, why not a different species?

RedFaux

He wakes up as a Beast. Already been a farm boy, what's another species?

Marcin Okulus

Where is third chapter?

LordRhyolith

I kinda feel that it would have been to early for that atm anyway. They are kinda soul cultivators, and I think their elders should be able to easily see through the shroud technique the protagonist has. I think Elder Molric mentioned that as well.

Amazon Shopper

My guess for the gold fruit-it’s some “golden gods” realm where they put out lures to try to get immortals/spiritual beings to go to them and then capture/dissect them. Giving ke yin a healthy dose of fear for extraplanar travel. Maybe learning a technique to get images/learn about a realm remotely before he goes into it

Tom C

No point saying ‘don’t die’ - it’s his fallback option for returning to the cultivator world! With all of his dying, I’d be surprised if KeYin doesn’t develop some sort of connection or resonance with Death / the death aspect or something similar. TFTC