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Neil H

I really like this chapter in general, although IMHO deducing he's from another world could use a little more setup. As it is, it's not really clear how his mind jumped to that conclusion.

Kynan

I think I'll delete the last 3 paragraphs to it ends with "incredible conclusion." When he confronts Ke Yin, Ke Yin listens to his reasoning, so I think it'll be better to do the reveal there that he suspects Ke Yin is from a different world, especially since his reasoning is explored more in that chapter

Ekko

Tftc Love that you took my advice and made it real. Han Ruoyi feels probably like the protagonist of his World at the moment. Let's see what this arc leads to, because I can't really see a way on how this world can benefit Ke Yi. Maybe more training time? But that he can get else where

MrrC

Agreed, eg why not imagine a time traveler from a time when roukineas more plentiful or from a different plane....the jump to different world is too convenient

Big Lumpy Beetle

He could trade his knowledge of true qi for all the manuals of techniques that who knows how many rouqin gave created and refined through several centuries

Big Lumpy Beetle

I mean, depending on what he can teach, some of his methods, especially tripple harmony could reenergize the world, creatin rouqi, or even true qi out of soul essence, which may replenish

Tom C

With the knowledge they have of the celestial sovereign and his ultimate power… I can see the “incredible conclusion” being something to do with him. It would be a logical step imo. If KeYin is not an evil demon then he’s a force for good potentially. Celestial Sovereign was highest point of good right? My guess! TFTC

Touch

He could probably get all those rouqi techniques though, it’s so similar to qi at least the basic would transfer

Arhsnag

Maybe move the entire last paragraph to the begining of next chapter. Now that the conclusion is gone the chapter feels incomplete.

Brandon Terry

Unless they stabilize this world it doesn’t matter. Best I can see this arc coming too is a way to generate rouqi cause that or a root of the world tree in order to stabilize it. If it’s deteriorating so fast people remember it in 2 generations then the world is doomed in another few years with out either of those. Good news if it’s a root he will be able to pull already living creatures into his universe well before most. But those are the only 2 things I could see happening

CrouchingWombatHiddenDropbear

Ke yin's main superpowers are from the friends he makes along the way. He has like already two friends linked to his soul. I bet you Han Renyi has hidden depths.