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DeadSlime

Thanks for the chapter!

Druid

How very depressing. While I imagine it'll take a while, I am looking forward to the time when the masked one is thoroughly eradicated.

adrien

Notice how he mentioned protagonist energy, he may know that he is in a novel, or at least know about troupes

Lenora

Really not a fan of ‘protagonist’ energy in a story that didn’t start out as satire or with a narrator perspective. Takes me out of the story. Maybe you could use some other term like Change Agent or Lynchpin or something? Unless you’ve decided to break the 4th wall intentionally

AirSak2000

Foundation Establishment? Did you mean Elemental Realm?

Jakob

The Masked One is a fellow reincarnator from earth, using terms like "protagonist energy" and "NPCs" shows that he is genre savvy and doesn't view anyone here as real. Using a more "in-world" term would go against his character entirely

Touch

I hope Mc discover they’re puppets, take pity on them by not killing them, then got betrayed even though puppets didn’t decided to do it themselves Get them character development coming!

Adleiavde

Somehow i think the target is not the mc, maybe the guy who's hiding in the group he joined?

RedFaux

He is almost certainly convinced himself that he is the only "real" person around