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Dune Slaya

Thank you for the chapters, this feels like a much cleaner ending than the previous.

EclecticReader

Thanks for the chapters! A potential suggestion if you would rather have ended the current book at the previous point. You can add the first paragraph from this chapter at the end of the fight as a sort of teaser. That would give the reader a decent resolution without changing too much. It would also make the next chapter from the alternate point of view even better when they get to read it. I'm no author though, so take my advice with a healthy dose of skepticism.

Mat

Can someone please explain to me why everyone’s mad about the cliffhanger on the last chapter because I thought it made sense

Neil H

Tangent: Azure's theories remind me of the multiple death theories from the Sherlock season 3 premiere.

Codered999

It's not about it making sense, it's the frustration of how it feels like an unclear resolution and the annoyance of a cliffhanger at the end of a book.

Dec

Thanks for the clarification chapter. Was a bit bummed by the previous end. This one gives resolution and provides hope to discover the future

tonright

i forgot no chapter today oof

DeadSlime

Isn’t it obvious it’s call Soul Severance, wouldn’t that imply that it severs the soul from the body so basically just cast his soul a drift.

Neuos.t

I definitely like the idea that he is able to connect to the inner realms of other cultivators, dead or otherwise. It definitely has a cool dynamic. I'm starting to wonder if the 2 sun world is a world much further down the path to detororiation, maybe a cultivator who dabbled in demonic cultivation and accidently lead a entity to have entry to their inner world

1FantasyFanatic

I’m confused why he isn’t more upset and why he thinks he can go to the two suns world again? The POV chapter from Kal and the MCs own observations made it seem like time was running out for the two suns world. I genuinely thought this was make it or break it time. Now the MC is acting like it is no different from any other loop.

Craig CJ

I kinda think Ke should not have gone on this mission. The reward isn't worth the wasted time(except for the author 😂) he would have learned "the truth" when he got stronger. I feel there will be a lot of asspully plot armor moments that could have been avoided by scrapping this dumb mission from the story.