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Let's see what Zahra's been up to. Miko's got Five's motivation up, now it's time to bring in the other piece of the puzzle.

I'm curious, how easy are the 3 middle panels to read? It's supposed to read top left, right side, bottom left and I tried placing the text bubbles to lead the eye in that direction, but does it work? Or do you guys naturally read it as top left, bottom left, right side?

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Memerk

I been meaning to ask this: are you going have Zahra keep the hijab?

K H

I managed to read the panels in the right order. So I think your plan worked out. The talk bubble coming from the right side helped too.

Magra215

Time for surprise sex

Happytimes

No problems here, just Zahra getting nabbed into a closet. And yeah, the text messages helped me read the middle panels the right way.

Cantaloupe

I really hope the next panel just has Miko and Five standing next to each other naked and Zahra just joins right from there lol

Replica_Rabbit

Miko can beat the boss alone

Brady Schaefer

I read them in the right order, so it seems like it works pretty well

Slasher333

It took me a sec to get the panel order right, but that's likely just because every other time I've seen comics with panels like that (that I can remember) it's been both left ones first, then the right one. The text bubble did help though.

TheOtherHalf

I don't know much about hijabs, but from what I've seen I think it's important to keep it on. Plus she kinda doesn't have a design without it.