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I figured I've been doing this comic long enough that I can do some callbacks at this point, and that scene from pages 39-46 is one that I'm glad I could touch up on and dive a little more into how it was for Nera. I've been doing more serious moments as the series goes on, but this is the first time I feel I've gone more into emotional territory. It's a very different vibe when writing it and it feels like I have to be more careful with it; like you can't push the subject too little or too hard, have to find the sweet spot. I'm piecing together in my head how I want Luci's and Asi's interactions with Nera to go and I think it'll lead to some fun character development for Nera.

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MetaMystic

The dynamics of Nera's gaze are great! On the previous page, she was *looking away* from present to gather her thoughts. On this page, it's as if her eyes were never open, but she could "see" an importat moment of the past... and something of the future...

BWAnubi

I have recently join this little adventure and I must say that the story telling and character development is on point. I’ve been going back to some of your earlier comics and noticed your development as a writer and a storyteller. I must say… I am impressed. Keep up the good work.

TheOtherHalf

Thank you very much! It's hard to gauge where my progress is so it's great to get an outside opinion on it and glad to hear my writing is holding up!