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I think one of the hardest challenges for me is pages with a lot of dialogue; making room for all that text while making the direction readable but still coming up with different shots of the characters can be rough. This was a satisfying page to make though, slowly trickling in some development for Asi, but I also came up with a new story element while making this page. Wonder if anyone can guess the hint in here! We're wrapping up this chapter so just a few more pages to go!

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audioreads and movie news

I’m guessing the hint thing has to do with the colored to finally be free

Happytimes

Wonder what the purple text means. To emphasize Asi's feelings, or her host body speaking up? And love that last panel. Something about two characters resting while leaning against each other gets me so sentimental.

Replica_Rabbit

Man, I love this scene. Do love nice quiet moments, were characters just talk

GrimAwakening

🥹🥹🥹 absolute cinema

Silver

To finally be free and choose someone she wants to hang out with since she just looooves Nera.

Mordaeus

Soft, sweet, and real. Well done, my friend.

Phaser

Such a wholesome moment

MetaMystic

Great development! Words, glances, and postures blend beautifully... From intense fire to pure water: a truly intimate moment after the fiery climax! The purple expression — as Asi's irises? — didn't appear in the WIP version... perhaps it underlines that the frantic pursuit of pleasure isn't just a whim but is aimed at the *pleasure* of freedom (and being oneself)?