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130 - Salvage (Patreon)

Published:
2026-02-20 17:00:25
Imported:
2026-06

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LenaraSys

Ah, a void god. That'll be fun.

Stonedoll

I actually like that we are getting a bit of foreshadowing of future threats, it felt like there was a lack tension that we finally now why the system is continuing to push Vivi to get stronger. Although the author did drop a hint back when she met Aeris: “The Dragon King could fly down from the Sky-Pillar Range and raze the mortal lands whenever he pleases. An unknown horror might wake from a millennium-old crypt. A second Shattered Oracle is perpetually one over-ambitious glimpse away."

TheMortalRuins

Really enjoyed the chapter! I'm really liking Ember and her reckless energy and I look forward to seeing what the Fell Apostate is doing on the other side. Keep up the good work!

Jonatan

Twilight Celebrant promised he would be back and since its only him that are fleeing from Vivi he will probably bring allies of his own to counteract Vivi somehow.

Finch

I actually really appreciate all the different POVs. One of my personal complaints about poorly written Isekai, and especially OP MC Isekai, is the world often feels so... empty. You will have a fleshed out MC, a handful of supporting characters (often the MC's harem), maybe a side character or two, and perhaps a villain. These will be the only characters doing stuff in the story. The result is a setting that feels a bit like a videogame which only "loads" parts of the world when the MC and his allies are around. Fleshed out worlds should, instead, be constantly in motion, with lots of different characters from different cultures with different perspectives all trying to achieve their own personal goals. Partly because that's how the actual world works. But also partly because it is a lot of fun to throw a woman who has a good heart, the social skills of a wet cat, and the personal firepower of the Soviet nuclear arsenal into such a world, just to see what happens. This chapter is a good example of the world ticking on along. The Apostate knows there is a near-omnipotent hero running around. Given this, he really has two options. He could hide untill the threat has passed, but then he doesn't get to do any cool (and I am sure very necessary in his mind) rituals. Or, he could get out of dodge. He does the latter. This makes sense for him to do. It also makes sense for the irresponsible, idealistic, and impulsive faildaughter of the dragon king to hold a madman-theory-esque negotiation with said ritualist. Vivi doesn't need to be around for these people to do things- so we need another POV to watch the fireworks. Ember is the best choice, because if we were in the Apostate's head it would spoil his full plan. And also it's spookier to be in her head when the eldritch stuff is going on. This is all just my opinion, of course, but I like chapters like this one. I much prefer a big world with lots of people doing stuff, to all Vivi all the time.

Gopard
>>203686347

But then again... What the fuck is this maniac doing??? Does he honestly somehow belief that he will find strength and power in the void of all places? And does he WANT to destroy the world or something? I cannot figure this guys angle out at all...

Josh Delgado42

I rather appreciated this chapter. I like having other perspectives than just Vivi's. Like others say, it makes the world feel more alive as there are things happening in parallel, the world is not just Vivi, after all. I'm rather glad that it makes me wish for more of Vivi's perspective as I'd rather leave myself wanting more than getting tired of her perspective. I'm a big fan of the apparent villain making plans and acting on them, while people attempt to guess what they're planning at. It was fun to see a bit of his thoughts while having some world building through "mantle-breaker" and the name of his order. Thank you so much for this chapter!

icesharkk
>>203691779

voidbeast revenants and other voidsoul nonsense? i much despise the villain archetypes of "you have no idea whats comin only i can savetheowrldwithmymadravinglunacythatiwillabsolutelynotexplaintoanyonebecauseotherwisetheoplotwouldfallapart." that said they do make for wonderfully hateable punching bags

Argent Twig
>>203702975

Very well thought out comments. These comments IMHO enhance enjoying the chapter.

Argent Twig

"You are a sorcerous oaf. The right path is not littered with the wreckage of your travel."

Silver

I want to massacre a city full of innocent lives, for a higher purpose which I refuse to elaborate, but you are stupid for trying to interrupt it. Now I am forced to *not kill* these people and work out a deal because my ritual may implode and kill me. Also I need to run the fuck away and lock the door because the Sorceress will *definitely* kill me for this. Give her my gloatings because not even she can pursue me here. Oh, did I mention you are a stupid child for interrupting my evil ritual? God I wish Vivi tear open space-time again, drag his ass out, and spank him like the little b*tch he is.

bcdp
>>203876445

It's so sad that our princess doesn't know that Vivi already went to the other side. Throwing that fact into his face would have been such a good comeback.