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Nick

Well the intended way of getting Vivi's attention is a big magical flare right? What is a destabilizing ritual if not a big magical flare?

Ivon

Sometimes I read some of the other comments left here and wonder if I'm even reading the same book as the commenters.

Aihnman

She's carrying a sword as a dragon?

Phsteven

Half dragon form, so sorta like a dragonborn from d&d, but with wings.

NeverendingMixUp

Well an exploding bone thing is probably a good signal flare..

Etez

Same. Lots of NPCs. I don't even bother commenting on this story anymore cuz of that xD just randomly opened the comments and saw this as 2nd up

linkhyrule5

Given what he was doing last time, I suspect it's going to be more along the lines of "exploding reality and dimensional barriers"... Which is even better as a signal flare, but miiight have some unfortunate side effects.

Codered999

Jackass, you shouldn't have been doing the ritual to begin with, the fuck you expect someone ignorant of the consequences of breaking it to do when they can't attack you directly

Argent Twig

Must say this again. Read deeper and bookmark this chapter. These two are excellently written. "When even the gods are trembling, I know I walk the proper course.” Shakespeare would steal that quotable.

Connor Shearn

I think that caught Her attention.

deKu

Omg the dialogue in this was so powerful. I am so impressed