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Gwalmeich

Just another Tuesday for the grand city of Primarche.

Zormor

I'm sure this is not the direction of the plot, but I think it would be quite interesting if the dragon princess were to die or be seriously injured here. I feel like it would force the Dragon King, who we have thus far only heard of third hand, into the story.

Connor Shearn

Why does anyone live in the north?

DB

Mr. Apostate may be in for a wee bit of a surprise upon finding out who is lying in wait just behind door #1...

H3lg3

Thanks for the chapter!

Finch

I wonder what the apostate is up to with this ritual. Is he there to exploit the wound left from the breach? Or is this the "business in the north" he mentioned in an earlier chapter?

Sriad

I think that if he knew his response would be "don't threaten me with a good time."

Argent Twig

There is a classic syncrisis "comparison and contrast" with a commonplace humor moving to a Lovecraftian horror. The feeling of chill from theft of vitality is done rather well. I am not sure how the Apostate achieved a dominion from the city leaders/nobility.

Argent Twig

Still very nice horror Dunwich. Very nice horror which done well, I meant.