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King

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Orchamus

And so Ingvild is intro'd, such an adorable sweet heart. Also lol, Sona and Rias's rivalry rearing it's head in the future gonna be a Kaiju fight.

Eli

another fun chapter, thank you for continuing this story.\

Loghead101

Damn no Tiamat, hopefully she’ll still be in the cards for the future. And was not expecting the Leviathan clan so early, especially an extra member. Glad to see Ingvild was woken up early. Even though Katarea is the head of the house there has to be some convention to contest that claim considering Ingvild has the clan trait and her grandma is still a pureblood. Or we could still wait for the peace summit and she gets no-diffed. And Sona certainly chose a hell of a fruit. And while I do believe that there could be a Jormungander fruit, in the One Piece world it would be one of the most unfortunate fruits to have. A sea serpent bigger than islands that will drown in water. And the familiars were all nice touches. I know Homies are created by giving soul to the inanimate but maybe Izuku can do something with his two doggos. And again, booooo on no Tiamat! Bring out best dragon milf! And let Aika have a Mommy fetish with her. That would hilariously unfortunate for Draig. As always great stuff Prime, can’t wait for more and just saw you got Nascent Soul on your mind. Was a bit worried that might have gotten left out but glad to see we’ll get more. Have a goodnight!

Shura

Fuck yeah, lets gooooo. All of your stories are bad for my health, because every time a new chapter comes out I reread the story from chapter 1 and lose sleep. Lmfao.

Tyler

Wait hold on did we miss lavinias first smut scene or did she just watch them "break in the bed"

Craig Jacks

Man, I was not ready for Izuku slowly but surely turning his friends into legendary monsters. I knew Sona's fruit was a Mythical, but I clearly thought too 'small' after seeing what it was! Her power is kind of horrifying, and Rias's was already a "flee on sight" level threat! I'm happy that Izuku & Rias now have an awesome home, and happier for Ingvild Leviathan being awake, even if it was bitter-sweet for her. Hopefully, since her Sacred Gear hasn't activated yet, she'll have time to readjust before anyone finds out about her. Though if she ends up joining Izuku's Peerage, then all the powerful beings his friends are becoming will keep her safe. I also kind of hope Izuku gives Lavinia the Gas-Gas Fruit, since it'd be extremely difficult melting ice with fire when she can remove all oxygen from the area. Ajuka Beelzebub must be in a constant state of happiness, like a child in a candy store that keeps finding better sweets every day! He and Izuku now know what causes the Sleeping Sickness - and this makes a LOT of sense as to why it only affects Devils - but they can't stop it from happening because of what causes it. And everyone found some awesome Familiars, with Asia finding Rassei! I can't wait to see more of this next time!

Craig Jacks

If I saw what Rias and Sona can turn into on a whim, I wouldn't want to be on the same CONTINENT as them, much less see how many lives I have to waste attempting to harm those two individually. And I hope Loki has an aneurysm when he sees Sona become the freaking World Serpent, and Izuku has wolves named Hati & Sköll! XD

SeventhSeraph

“Rassei”? A mix of “Raijin” and “Issei”? Raises questions, that’s for certain. How does Asia know him, if that’s the case.

Serpens Kaos

At least we now have in-universe confirmation that he exists (As I'm sure Vortex said he was, but still), and will probably be showing up either during the Excalliber arc, or the Peace Summit.... maybe both, as Asia knowing him means he has a connection to the church in this universe.

Serpens Kaos

Devil builders: It's magic we don't gotta explain shit! Of all the upgrades he did and could have gotten, Izuku being able to see out of Indra and Pelle's eyes makes the most sense, as they're not just regular homies, they're made from his own soul, they're still part of him. Ajuka is loving the shenanigans Izuku is causing.... though not enough to eat one himself Leviathan has been awakened. Very early so that should be interesting Another mythical Zoan, non-canon but if I had to guess it will be Loki's fruit when it's eventually revealed, if his isn't Fenrir (It should be a reference to one of his kids, that's all I'm saying as my prediction) 'he was really thankful that One Piece weapons were apparently one-size-fits-all...' I don't know if that was a dig at, or just a reference to how Zoro and Oden shouldn't BOTH have been able to comfortably wield Enma. Izuku has puppies!! Asia has her Sprite Dragon, same name as canon.... meaning Issei is part of the church in this universe. Will he be showing up with the other 2 exorcists during the Excalliber arc? Should be less akward than canon, given while an exiled nun or whatever you want to call it, she's still human.

Serpens Kaos

Also, don't know if you have plans for everyone in the main cast to eventually have Devil fruits, but ones I think would have good synergy, would be: Kiba with the Supa Supa no mi, if he could channel his Sacred Gear through his df, he could turn his body into demonic or holy blades. The other is Akeno and the Goro Goro no mi, given her whole thing is Lightning, and why shouldn't she be able to turn her entire body into Holy Lightning? The ultimate Anti-Devil attack! XD

savitar

I liked the chapter, poor Izuku since without realizing it he is a magnet for women. I think he and the Canon Issei would not have gotten along at all hahaha. I have a question, do you intend to use the ExE universe or the Maleranche? I can't say that I have seen mistakes in the chapter, it is very complete and explains the story in great detail. Everyone's face when they see Sona will be epic and I wonder what Katarea's reaction will be when she sees the sister of the one she calls a thief as a great water snake. I wonder what good old Ajuka would be capable of with Vegapunk's lineage research. Just curious about the last bit. Great chapter and eagerly awaiting what you release next.

White Fang 12

I have an idea but I'm not sure what you would think about it. What if Eri somehow ends up in the DxD universe? You've already clarified she's Izuku's daughter, and it might be interesting to see Rias and the other girls react to Izuku being a father.

Craig Jacks

For Kiba, I think the 'Supa-Supa (Dice-Dice) no Mi' or the 'Buki-Buki (Arms-Arms) no Mi' to make him a walking armory. For Akeno, maybe the 'Inu-Inu (Dog-Dog) no Mi, Model: Kyubi no Kitsune (Nine-tailed Fox),' because the shenanigans she could get up to with a transformation power would be hilarious. For Koneko, the 'Nikyu-Nikyu (Paw-Paw) no Mi' so she can reject things and greatly improve her offense. Imagine her using 'Internal Destruction' + Pad Cannon. For Gasper, I'm thinking the 'Suke-Suke (Clear-Clear) no Mi,' which, much like Toru Hagakure in MHA, would allow him to reflect light and redirect lasers. And for Lavinia, the 'Gasu-Gasu (Gas-Gas) no Mi,' since, as I said in my review, it's extremely difficult to melt Absolute Demise's ice when she can remove all oxygen from a wide area and control any gas while being nearly invulnerable.

Craig Jacks

This version of Izuku (almost any version I think) and Canon Issei would not get along because Izuku is effortlessly doing what Issei wishes he could do, and Issei would be more jealous than he is of Kiba being a "Pretty boy" to ever get over it. Izuku has the personality to actually (possibly) become a "Harem King," while Issei's longing for genuine female companionship and his desire for a harem are fundamentally opposed to his personality.

Craig Jacks

I kind of wish that had happened too, since Izuku going through all these changes while trying to balance being a responsible father figure to Eri would be amazing. Hell, All For One could have met Eri when he met Overhaul, used his 'Gloop Warp' on her, forcing her into the battle to distract Izuku so All For One could try to steal Izuku's Quirk, and then send them both into "The Void" when he lost.

King

Do you think izuku can turn a blizzard or hurricane into a homi?

Esteban Gonzalez

Pv Out of curiosity do you have a idea of who's gonna be Izuku's queen obviously it's Rias but I mean for he's peerage as well as the other pieces? No name drops just wanted to know if you have a person in mind?

Donal Smyth

Theoretically? Yes. Izuku could do that easily Will he? 100% up to Vortex, whether or not he does.

Karan McIntosh

Hmm, I wonder, if Izuku consumed a devil or fallen soul that had a sacred gear, would he then have access to that sacred gear? What if he cosumed multiple? One person with possibly multiple sacred gear. That would piss a lot of people off.

Craig Jacks

Devils, Fallen Angels, and other non-human beings can't have Sacred Gears unless they're part human, since the Sacred Gear System that God created is only meant to 'bless' humans with Sacred Gears. Though there is a way for Fallen Angels to take a SG from a human, which is what Raynare (or Yuma Amano as Izuku knew her) was trying to do to Asia - steal her Sacred Gear, which would have killed her. But it is possible for Izuku to gain a SG himself, since some of the Longinus Gears have wills of their own, such as Regulus Nemea, which means they have a "soul" of sorts that Izuku could take, making it a part of him. Also Izuku is still (technically) fully human, so a SG with its own will could possibly choose him if it deems him worthy.

Primordial Vortex

It was absolutely a dig at Enma lmao Yes, Issei is part of the church. I'm pretty sure I mentioned that at some point so he will be showing up eventually

Primordial Vortex

LOL I THINK I'm done with the mythicals. At least for now. Yup, I really wanted Ingvild in here and I didn't want to wait until the end of the story to introduce her. She's definitely joining his peerage, though not as a queen. Ajuka having the time of his life lol

Primordial Vortex

Brain was HARD rejecting any smut so yeah. She'll get a scene eventually when they have an actual date. ...I hope LOL

Primordial Vortex

You have NO idea how hard some of my betas were pushing for tiamat lmao. I had to put my foot down because per her canon description.... I literally could have yoinked Tiamama from FGO and that just wasn't happening... *again*

Karan McIntosh

Hmm, just been rereading and came to a possible eastern egg. Either that or my mind is seeing things that aren't. Izuku said that Ingvilds sacred gears felt similar to the boosted gear. Is it possible that it is the other dragon? The one that was fighting Ddraig, the red dragon emperor?

Craig Jacks

Vali has the "Divine Dividing," which is the rival Longinus to Ddraig and the Boosted Gear. Ingvild has...I forget what its called, but it is a Longinus, just one that hasn't been discovered yet, since there are only 13 known. And luckily for Ingvild, only 4 people, including herself, even know about it.

Ryuu

welp just blasted through this story again last night cuz I'm eagerly awaiting the next chapter. Which I personally find hilarious cuz this isn't the story I came to patreon for but has quickly become a number two if not number one for me it's just that good and fun to read. Keep up the great work on the stories Vortex.

Asaf Montgomery

Will yasaka be part of the harem?

Wolf Games

I do hope this comes back . I also wonder if ophis will take interest in izuku sens he got out of the void alive

Craig Jacks

I think Great Red would notice first since he's in there, though Orphis would learn eventually as Izuku appeared from her 'home'. What either of the 2 Dragon Gods would do is my main concern, as Izuku is technically an intruder to their universe, but he's also a unique entity that would interest them both.

Jaimeson Kirkbride

So i joined the patreon just for this series and loving it. Also i had a brain blast since the creator of one piece is still alive in the time Izuku was transported to could he be commissioned to make a complete devil fruit encyclopedia for him to expand what fruits he could make since it was stated in the first chapter that the devil fruit encyclopedia was incomplete. Just a thought i had

Jaimeson Kirkbride

Also another concept i thought of would be making a homie from the dimensional gap to open the potential of returning back to his home dimension. A void type homie acting like a map and portal like the infinimap from danny phantom

Craig Jacks

That could work for Izuku to return home, but since he's not just in a different dimension but 200 years in the past, he'd have to wait that long before making the attempt, otherwise he'd risk altering his past by going back before All For One sent him away. Making a Homie this way could work, but Izuku himself has no idea how he got there, so he'd be risking way too much trying to cross space AND time. Cutting his way across one way when the timelines match up would be much safer for him, and if he waits that long, he could show up back home, possibly with his wives and children, so then they can experience life in his world. :)

Jarik Bruppacher

I'm guessing Issei for not yet explained reasons left with Irina and joined the heaven -faction (how that works out with his libido will be fun to read about XD). Also I'm looking forward to Izuku meeting the Hero-Faction of the Kaos-Brigade; his reaction to that bunch of racists and murderers calling themselves heroes will be explosive.... I can already see him tearing into Cao-Cao and lecturing him what being a hero truly means..... after kicking his ass into the next Millennium.

Craig Jacks

I imagine Izuku would look at the "Hero" Faction similar to how Stain viewed modern-day heroes, but with a less extreme response to how they should be dealt with - unless they double down on being cheeky instigating goblins, then him 'em with 100% Detroit Smash to the head. I'm legitimately looking forward to the potentially scathing remarks Izuku will have for these intelligent morons, and how they fail to understand what the word "Hero" means while proving they're anything but.