Roses For Avalon | Page 147 | Lines (Patreon)

One last encounter between Roshim and Avalon to send off this chapter

We haven't had time to unpack what Avalon is or what he can do. Sadly that's an explanation that'll wait for later chapters, but the reader ought to have the impression that Avalon can show people things he wants them to see

Here, the reader should feel the full embrace of open air, the water, the mountain. In page 127, we saw a similar landscape, compressed to one panel; here, the vision has expanded. I'm tempted to cut the other panel to let the vision fully encompass the reader