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Chapter 20 – Defiance

Callum woke suddenly and all at once, with the exact same clarity as the first time he’d been woken with magical healing. While he couldn’t remember everything that had happened with surety, he did know he’d been terribly, terribly careless. He should have teleported away the moment he sensed another mage on the edge of his perceptions. At the time he’d thought it might be one of the Larsons, since they did live there after all, but since he’d basically never seen them out of their store he should have smelled a rat.

A pair of shifters suddenly moving, and moving quickly, had been what twigged him that something was wrong, but a flush of panic had frozen him for a critical few moments. It hadn’t been the shifters that had taken him down, though, because he had a vague recollection of being shot with something. So it was probably some equivalent of a sniper, but that wasn’t any comfort. More the reverse, since it showed that they were properly equipped to neutralize someone like him, and do so safely. At least they’d gone with the nonlethal option rather than putting a bullet through his head from five thousand yards, but it was exceedingly unpleasant to find out that they could outrange his sensory range.

Of course his major mistake was his continued contact with Gayle. Once he’d gotten his hands on that homebond and the spatial enchants he should have just vanished, no matter how much his basic sense of decency rebelled at the thought. Even if he’d done that, he never should have agreed to meet her again after resolving her issues to his satisfaction, let alone followed through with it. He’d just been so glad to have a normal interaction that he’d overextended.

He was pretty well screwed now, though, the pleasant fullness of health giving way to a curdled gut as the full impact of things caught up with him. The Mages In Black had come to take him away and he should probably be thankful that they weren’t at this very moment pulling fingernails or whatever just on the principle of the thing. Callum’s thoughts started to scatter away and he took a few deep breaths, squeezing his hands into fists as he surveyed the room he was in with his spatial sense.

It was heavily warded, enough that he couldn’t push his senses out past it without a lot of time and effort. The interior of the room was just two chairs and a table, not unlike the interrogation room he’d been held in when they’d first found him. The big difference was that this one had no door, and that he was cuffed to the chair that he was in.

There were extra bands around his wrists and ankles that registered oddly to him, distorted and opaque, obviously enchanted but with something far beyond his knowledge. He was also dressed in a plain sort of coverall, rather than his original clothing, but he couldn’t say that was a surprise. In fact, that was more or less what he had anticipated.

Callum focused inward, and found that his teleporter chip was still where it was supposed to be, down in his abdominal cavity. He almost groaned in relief at the discovery, but suppressed it, instead concentrating on feeding vis into the little focus buried in his gut. Even that much flexing of his internal energies stirred his vis against his skin, and the bands crackled, sucking up the excess vis and sending an unpleasant sensation through him, something worse than the jangling of his teleport field.

He froze, muscles twitching in protest, but the restraints only siphoned off the vis that extended out of his actual body. Though Callum hadn’t intended on casting anything, it was clearly impossible while wearing the bands. Or, well, impossible for him. He was fairly certain they wouldn’t have weighed him down with so many if they were foolproof.

They probably had known the moment he was awake, but Callum finally opened his eyes, shifting around to hide the fact that he was focused on channeling his vis inward. It would take minutes for the thing to charge, and he really hoped that the bands didn’t stop it from working. He didn’t think they would, since they weren’t sucking his vis out through his skin, but they’d probably cut him off from making more so he had to do it on a single tank, as it were.

The interrogation room looked as bare to his sight as it did to his senses. White walls, white floor, white ceiling, white ceramic table and chairs. It was only the different shades of white that really did much to separate one from another. The sterile, almost surgical feel was chilling, and the only thing that it was missing to be straight out of some horror movie was a blood drain in the floor.

His jumpsuit was grey rather than the jail-orange he’d expected, but was still the classic prison-wear he’d seen in media. The situation looked about as bad as it could be, and the only thing that eased the hammering of his heart in his chest was the slow trickle as the teleporter focus charged. From his experience it took about five minutes, which meant he had to hope they’d try to talk with him longer than that.

Callum half-expected that he’d be kept waiting, though his knowledge of interrogation techniques was limited to certainly-inaccurate police procedural shows. Less than thirty seconds after he stirred, though, two people appeared in a twisting of teleportation magic on the far side of the room. The glimpse he caught of it implied that the enchantment for it was wound into the ward structure.

One of the two was a square-jawed man dressed in plain black with no markings, some kind of uniform that looked vaguely tactical, rather than formal. The other was a familiar face, the weird toothy fae agent from the Department of Arcane Investigation that had come to his house in Winut. By contrast, her uniform was blue, formal, and even had a number of insignia and medals on it.

The fae took the seat across from him, while the tactical guy stood behind her with arms crossed. He had the usual bubble of a mage, but the shields were a lot more intricate and powerful than Callum had seen before, and the bubble very clearly had been extended to cover the fae agent. Callum didn’t think the guy was just a bodyguard though, since he was pretty sure he’d seen the man’s face before someone had reduced him from semiconscious to unconscious.

“Mister Callum Wells,” the fae said, which at least confirmed that he’d been identified. Not that he was surprised. “We have many questions for you.”

He raised his eyebrows at her, but didn’t reply. In truth he was thinking about how to play the conversation, because while he wanted it to take some time, he also didn’t want to give anything away. Or anyone. His habit of using burner phones and discarding them regularly should protect Lucy and Harry, but there was no way they’d miss the cache of records he’d gotten. Hopefully those had been scrubbed of anything that would identify either Harry or Chester as the source.

“You are Callum Wells, spatial aspect?” She prompted.

“That’s my name,” he admitted. The words came out commendably steady. If it weren’t for the magical healing he’d probably have been croaking them, and as it was his mouth felt dry.

“Were you complicit in destroying the vampire nests in Winut, Choral, Kenneshaw, and New Agers?” For some reason, it surprised him that she want ahead without any introductions or even a cursory reading of rights or the like. Though he doubted he exactly had rights at the moment.

“That’s quite specific.  What makes you think that I was?” It took him a few moments to decide on the appropriate wording instead of blurting things out. They had him dead to rights, but he wanted to know how. He might have missed some obvious trace or it could have just been them assuming the rogue mage and the mysterious killings were connected due to Occam’s Razor.

Oddly, the fae frowned and glanced back at the Mage In Black, who shook his head ever so slightly. She glanced back at Callum and sighed, drumming her fingers on the desk. Eventually, though, she came to a decision.

“Really, your enchanted steel already gave that away; we’re more curious as to why.” The agent crossed her arms. “It’s a blatant violation of GAR law and it doesn’t even seem to be your problem. The history we have on you is suspect but if you are just a late-bloomer from West Virginia, you have no business being out here.”

“Why?” Callum struggled to keep his face straight, because of all the things to give him away he didn’t think it’d be the stuff he used to clean up his tracks. In hindsight it was obviously an issue. it took hours for the enchantment to dissipate and he’d used the ball bearings in places where no ball bearing should really be. “Did you know the vampires in question were murdering people?”

“That’s not really relevant,” she said, and he shook his head at her. He didn’t want to be too flip, since he didn’t want the guy lurking behind her to wander over and give him a few restrained beatings for his lip, but he thought the best way to play things was as someone not impressed by their authority. Which was true enough, since what he was really impressed by was their ability to wield force.

“It is to me,” he told them. “From where I sit, the question isn’t why I had an issue with those vampire nests, it’s why you didn’t.”

“So long as they stay within their allotment, they are still within GAR mandates. What you did⁠—” The agent cut herself off, realizing she didn’t have to justify herself to Callum. “So, to the next question. Was anyone else involved? Do you know what happened to Chase Hall?”

Callum nearly laughed. Though he didn’t much blame her for not realizing he was Chase Hall, since she’d only seen him the one time under that guise, and he’d been sure to make Professor Brown look different than Mister Hall. He pressed his lips together instead, considering whether or not he should admit his alternate identity. His initial instinct was to deny everything, but that game was up. The best he could do was try and get information from them instead.

“Interesting that you should bring him up,” Callum said. “Why was it that you told him he was a signature witness?”

“I’m not here to answer questions, Mister Wells,” the agent said with annoyance, but the Mage In Black shifted slightly, as if he’d seen something interesting in Callum’s reply.

Callum realized that he couldn’t be too clever with the questions and answers. He wasn’t trained in espionage or counterintelligence or even in how to answer questions properly without a lawyer. Given any reasonable length of time and he’d either betray something he didn’t mean to or give them a reason to break out the torture equipment. Really it was all stalling for time while he trickled vis into the focus in his gut.

“Well,” Callum said with a shrug. “So far as I know he’s fine.”

“And where might he be?”

“I have no idea,” Callum said, amused at how true it was. He really didn’t have any idea where he was.

“We’ll come back to that,” the agent said. “Who do you work for?”

“Myself,” Callum replied promptly. “I always have. Never got along with bosses. It seems I have problems with authority.”

“Very funny,” the agent said, without any enthusiasm at all. “You may see some leniency if you name all the members of your organization.”

“You know, I’m not clear on exactly what I’m facing here. I’m not even sure who you all are, or under what pretense you dragged me in.”

“Yet, you weren’t very surprised when you woke up here,” she pointed out. “Don’t be disingenuous, Mister Wells. You’re quite aware of all the reasons you’re here.” Callum shrugged at that. He was hoping for more elaboration of the statutes since he’d never actually seen the full set of GAR laws.  The MIB took a step forward, standing beside the agent rather than behind her. She glanced sideways at him, but leaned back to yield the floor to him, confirming that he was more than a bodyguard.

“You’re here under the auspice of the Bureau of Secret Enforcement,” he said in a low rumble. Which sounded like the most ridiculously totalitarian police Callum had ever heard of. “While the Department of Arcane Investigation is handling most of the aspects of this case, the BSE has a very specific question for you. Where did you learn about the techniques you informed Gayle of?”

“The what now?” Callum was genuinely confused. “I just found some stuff on focuses—”

“The offensive healing,” the BSE man interrupted.

“I don’t know what you mean. It seemed pretty obvious to me.”

“What was obvious?”  He pressed.

“If healing can make the body change in one way, it ought to in another, and some of the failure modes for biochemistry are pretty strict.” Even as he spoke, he wondered if the issue was rather like spatial mages being no more than stevedores. Healing was rare, so it might be rather more guided and guarded than other aspects.

“Mister Wells, healing magic is magic, not biochemistry. Perverting its purpose with misapplied mundane ideas is abhorrent, and violates every guideline that Archmage Fane has laid down over the centuries. You have poisoned Gayle Hargrave’s future with your so-called obvious insights.” The BSE man clearly had a better measure of him than the agent did, because that was the first thing that actually bothered him.

“That, I do regret. I didn’t know that was such an issue.  But how much trouble is it, really?  She was trying to skip apprenticeship anyway.”

“She will have to enroll with the Bureau of Secret Enforcement,” he said darkly. “With the knowledge she already has, there is no other choice. She is lucky that Archmage Hargrave has taken an interest, or things might be worse for her.”

“It seems a little harsh to punish someone for something that anyone with a little education could figure out in a couple weeks,” Callum said, scowling.

“Gayle Hargrave is exceedingly talented,” the MIB declared. Which she might well be, as it wasn’t like Callum had anyone to compare her to. “And it is a travesty that you’ve twisted her mind toward corpsecraft and death rather than giving life.”

“It’s your own damn requirements to have an offensive option,” Callum glowered at them. “Besides, if she’s that talented, the more fool you for hiding her away,” he told them. Part of him wanted to help Gayle somehow, but it was likely she, quite reasonably, blamed him for her trouble. If he got in contact with her somehow it’d only compound the issue. Which didn’t mean he was going to abandon the obligation he had to help her, if she wanted it, he’d just have to be circumspect. Besides, it sounded like he’d need to figure out the magical secret police in the future anyway.

“Were you trying to recruit her for your organization?” The fae spoke up again, cutting off a further remark from the MIB.

“A pocket healer would be a great idea, but no, I wasn’t doing any recruiting. I just saw someone struggling under unreasonable restrictions and thought I’d help.” The MIB’s eyes hardened at that and Callum thought he’d gone too far, but the fae merely grunted.

“You might make things easier on her if you were forthcoming about your organization,” the fae remarked. That almost made Callum lose his temper, but he managed to restrain his tongue. Instead he contemplated them for a moment while he wrestled with himself, then finally spoke.

“I suspect Archmage Hargrave will not be happy⁠—” He nearly lost his train of thought as the teleportation focus suddenly flashed into full activation, thrumming uncomfortably through his body, just under the skin. “⁠—you’re using her as a bargaining chip when trying to question me,” he managed to finish with only a minor stumble.

“I think you underestimate the seriousness with which BSE takes a rogue organization,” the MIB said with disapproval.

“I don’t think I do. Any such thing would be an existential threat to the little dictatorship you have. It’s simply that after this conversation, none of you are going to see me again. But I might be seeing you.”

“Threats, now?” The MIB scoffed.

“It’s not a threat. I’m just telling you what’s going to happen,” Callum said, and triggered the teleportation focus.

***

Ray swore as Callum Wells vanished from inside the locked, heavily warded interrogation chamber, the blocker cuffs rattling as they tumbled to the floor and the jumpsuit silently slumped into the chair. Agent Zhen, the BSE agent overseeing the interrogation, slapped the panic button and additional wards went up, doors closing and locking of their own accord. Agent Denver, inside the room, flashed his shield, obscuring both Felicia and himself from view as Zhen rattled off code into his headset.

“Case Samekh; alert level four, units five through nine sweep and clear, origin A-7; Dalet, set auth two five two.”

“How the hell did he do that?” Ray said, as a squad came stomping down the hallway to properly clear the observation room and interrogation cell. It would have been better to ask why he did that. If Wells could teleport out of cuffs and through BSE wards, then he hadn’t been captured.  He’d allowed himself to be taken.

Which meant he wanted to be there, and that was worrisome. Ray had no idea what the man’s game was. Was there something within the BSE building he was after, or someone? They already knew he was incredibly dangerous, even if they didn’t know how, so he could do a lot of damage if he got free inside a secure site.

It certainly didn’t help that his group had something that could nullify fae compulsion. Felicia’s voice hadn’t worked on Hall, and didn’t work on Wells. He didn’t know of any mage foci that could do that, and he knew there wasn’t any magic around Hall, so he had to consider there were fae involved in the organization as well. Overall, it seemed like a horrible looming mess of a threat.

“It might be he can get around magic-blocker cuffs and the wards,” Zhen said, tearing Ray’s attention away from inward contemplation, and standing away from the controls and letting the BSE squad check everything over. “If he’s actually Archmage level, it’s possible. It may be that he had a homebond implant, but we checked for that. It’d have to be some model we’d never seen before.”

Ray grimaced. Implanted focuses were not exactly common, partly because they were illegal, but mostly because it was extremely difficult to direct vis somewhere a mage couldn’t sense. They were generally placed right under the skin, so a mage could fill it by touch, though tooth implants were popular in certain quarters. Not that Ray had ever had one, but he knew they existed.

A homebond implant was on the obscene side of rare and expensive, given the demands put on the relatively few spatial mages and the limitations on proper enchanting materials. Teleportation enchantments required the absolute purest materials. Duvall kept them from being overwhelmed, but there was an insatiable appetite for more teleports, more homebonds, and more spatial storage. The Archmage had a waiting list a mile long.

If someone else was making spatial enchantments, that was unheard of. One that couldn’t be detected by a resonator was even more worrisome. Unfortunately, there was no real consideration given to something that shouldn’t have existed.

They hadn’t run him through an x-ray machine or the like; there weren’t even any on the premises. With dedicated healers, none were ever needed. Even checking for focus implants wasn’t exactly standard procedure, though in this case they’d made the extra effort, running a magic resonator over his whole body. If there had been anything that a mage could sense to target, the resonator ought to have alerted them. Between the magic-blockers, cuffs, and being completely stripped of all foci, he shouldn’t have been an issue.

“Blood tracking?” Ray asked, and Zhen nodded, speaking into his headset.

“Rheonor? I need a blood tracker on Callum Wells, the one we just sent over. Great.” Zhen waited, then nodded and looked to Ray.

“Wells isn’t in the facility. Rheonor’s trackers have a ten mile range and last through sunrise.”

“I’ll take Felicia and get my glider,” Ray offered. With a ten mile range and some fifteen hours to go, there was really very little chance of being able to find the man’s bolt-hole. It was presumably somewhere in the United States, but it would take a lot of luck to stumble across it.

“We have a Transporter on standby,” Zhen said, not too unkindly. Ray didn’t much like it, but he had to lump it. This was more the BSE’s case than his, now, though at least he could make a report on the identity of the murderer. The subsequent escape, though, that was something that would probably stay redacted for a good long time.

On the other hand, if BSE was taking over, Ray wouldn’t have to deal with the fallout from whatever Wells had been up to. Which was something of a relief. The case had been cryptic and frustrating from the start, and to end in so spectacular a blunder would have been bad for his career, and that of his partner.

Felicia gave him a questioning look as they met up in the halls underneath BSE headquarters, the two of them following an escort out to less secure areas. Even though both of them were DAI agents, Secret Enforcement trumped their authority. He returned it with a brief shake of his head, not wanting to complain about their hosts while still in earshot.

“Where is he?” The Archmage that confronted them the moment they stepped outside the secure area was not the Archmage that Ray was expecting. He didn’t know where Hargrave had gone, but it was Duvall that was standing there, looking irate. Ray had never seen her in person, but the House uniform made it very clear who she was.

“If you mean Callum Wells, he is no longer in DAI custody,” Ray said carefully. He wasn’t going to spill what had happened without authorization, even to an Archmage. “The Bureau of Secret Enforcement is in charge of things now.” He did, however, have no compunction about throwing BSE under the bus.

“Secret-keeping whoresons,” Duvall swore under her breath, and vanished with a flare of vis. Ray figured her interest in the matter was because she was a spatial mage. The spatial mage, really. She’d pioneered portals and teleportation over three hundred years ago and, most importantly, spatial expansion enchantments. She snapped up every spatial mage that appeared, probably because she needed them for the GAR teleport network.

Their escort shot them a betrayed look, and Ray shrugged. He sure as hell wasn’t going to risk an Archmage’s wrath. Even if spatial magic wasn’t exactly fearsome, she might ban him from the network or something.

“C’mon,” he said to Felicia, heading for the teleport out. “I’ll fill you in.”

***

“I guess my first instinct was right,” Agent Jahn said, looking down at his coffee. “He played a pretty damn convincing mundane, though. The question is, what is his connection to Scaletooth?”

“The real question here is: how is there one of my spatial mages running around that I wasn’t told about,” Archmage Duvall snapped. “I’m the Archmage here, they go to me! No exceptions. When I find out what House is conniving behind my back, there will be hell to pay.”

“That is absolutely something we’ll look into,” Zhen said seriously. “It sounds like there’s more than just him, too. I could tell we caught him off-guard asking about Chase Hall, so there’s some avenue of attack there, if we can ever find the man again.”

“Which I doubt,” Jahn said mournfully. “Both Wells and Hall were only found because they got caught up in other things.”

“We’ll need those records,” Zhen told him. “If this group is dabbling in restricted magic, we need to know everything.”

Jahn grimaced. That had been the most surprising thing to find out, though he did agree with Callum a little bit. Some of the so-called restricted magic was not particularly difficult to figure out, provided the mage in question educated themselves in mundane topics. Though few mages did, and mixing with mundanes wasn’t exactly encouraged.

The incident with young Gayle Hargrave was quite unfortunate, as healing was one of those aspects which was carefully managed. Unless one specifically designed their shield to block it, healing aspect would resonate with a mage’s vis instead of being blocked by it. Archmage Fane could instantly kill a roomful of mages without even seeming to do anything, and in fact, had.

Most people didn’t know it, but Fane was the mage equivalent of the nuclear option.

What would become of Gayle remained to be seen, but she was going to have to be pulled into the deeper levels of GAR regardless, and become properly briefed and trained on being an offensive healer. The major sticking point was Archmage Hargrave becoming personally involved, because that pulled House politics into everything. Thankfully that wasn’t his problem, but he still had an Archmage actually present he needed to handle.

“Considering that they may have some access to restricted knowledge, is there any light you might be able to shed on matters for us, Archmage Duvall?” Jahn asked politely. “We did not generally consider spatial mages to be particularly dangerous, but you are the expert.”

“It’s not. Spatial is the only completely peaceful affinity. There are some advanced tricks, it’s true, but nothing that would threaten an actual person.” Duvall sneered. “Maybe mundanes, but not people.” Her hard gaze pinned Jahn to his chair. “He’s being used by someone else for this evil work because of your incompetence in not finding him earlier. Fix that, or I will make sure your career ends here, John,” Duvall finished, mangling his name.

“Yes, of course, Archmage,” Jahn said, concealing a wince. It was useless to wish the past was different, but he regretted picking up Callum Wells in the first place. “We might start with Hall, given how each of the incidents involved the more mundane applications of force.”

“I don’t really care,” Duvall said dismissively. “I want him found, and I want him turned over to me.  I want to know who taught him, and I want to know what his bloodline is. Everything! I get only one space mage every thirty or forty years at best, and I need every one I can find just to maintain my transport system!”

“We’re doing the best we can,” Zhen said.

“Do better,” Duvall replied.

***

Lucy had long ago leveraged her IT support credentials into proper surveillance of the GAR computer network. Nothing too untoward, of course, since there were people who would notice significant prying and whose attention would be disastrous. Still, she had a number of notifications to alert her to anything significant being discussed in unencrypted emails or texts from company phones.

Her work office was a bit of a dungeon, with a partly⁠-purposeful rat’s nest of cables going to servers and big monitors displaying indecipherable network traffic graphs for anyone that happened to poke their heads in. She, personally, had a smaller setup with a bunch of laptops and some privacy-screened monitors that was more discreet. It was inside a smaller enclosure with a fridge and a bathroom so she didn’t have to wander out into GAR proper. That was partly for privacy, but partly because she wasn’t a mage and people knew it.

Much of her private area was taken up by a pair of 3D printers, one for metal and one for plastic, along with a worktable strewn with microcontrollers and electronic prototyping miscellanea. There were a few microdrones and similar toys as well, which she used for occasionally carrying memory sticks or the like around the office. Not that she couldn’t walk, it was just more amusing to pilot a drone to do it.

She had long ago automated most of her part of GAR’s network, which was relatively small and tame compared to mundane corporate networks. The servers didn’t even use the same protocols as mundane ones for everything, so network traffic was fairly sedate and most of her actual labor had to do with fixing people’s email accounts or adjusting privileges. Most of her work time was actually spent watching videos or snooping around for her other job.

Normally she only got a few low priority pings, barely anything worth mentioning. GAR was, for the most part, a fairly boring bureaucracy and nobody much cared about the budget for the next fiscal year or who was taking the lunches from the third-floor break room refrigerator. None of that interested her.

The alert that went off regarded Professor Brown, aka Chase Hall, aka the Vampire Ghost Killer. That had settled some in recent days, as a lack of any further action meant a lack of any further gossip, but she still scrambled for her computer and started skimming through what her programs dumped into her personal devices. When she started reading she felt a flutter of panic, a chill going down her spine, but when she sorted out the abrupt ending of the communications, she started laughing.

“You got away from the spooks? Goddamn. Way to go, big man!” She turned and got a soda from her fridge, since she didn’t have any alcohol in her corner office, and lifted it in a toast. “Here’s hoping I hear from you soon.”

END BOOK ONE


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Comments

AsterasIX

Brilliant. They managed to both underestimate him and very largely overestimate him. I love how even the archmage thinks (or at least pretended) that there isn't an offensive use for spacial mages. And really, how did they not realize that a basic understanding of biochemistry is enough to turn healing into killing.

InadvisablyCompelled

Oh, no, they understood it. Witness that Fane can kill absolutely everyone. They just don't teach it that way on purpose.

sqeesqad

"Maybe mundanes, but not people" really says a lot about their shitty society

Andrew

Thank you!

MaxM

Half of the things Callum does are excellent examples of why you don't play poker against people who don't know what they're doing.

Yates!!

Lmao homie got the fuck out

Keifru

If he's in a Truth Area (which, being an interrogation cell, would be really weird to not have that there), then shouldn't they be aware he's not lying about being baffled about the 'Secret Knowledge' bit of healing and they should be pushed away from thinking he was provided it as Secret Knowledge? (Gods, patreon responses are shit for quoting areas...) ` "“The offensive healing,” the BSE man interrupted. “I don’t know what you mean. It seemed pretty obvious to me.” “What was obvious?” He pressed. “If healing can make the body change in one way, it ought to in another, and some of the failure modes for biochemistry are pretty strict.” Even as he spoke, he wondered if the issue was rather like spatial mages being no more than stevedores. Healing was rare, so it might be rather more guided and guarded than other aspects. “Mister Wells, healing magic is magic, not biochemistry. Perverting its purpose with misapplied mundane ideas is abhorrent, and violates every guideline that Archmage Fane has laid down over the centuries. You have poisoned Gayle Hargrave’s future with your so-called obvious insights.” The BSE man clearly had a better measure of him than the agent did, because that was the first thing that actually bothered him. “That, I do regret. I didn’t know that was such an issue. But how much trouble is it, really? She was trying to skip apprenticeship anyway.” `

sqeesqad

I have to say that these last two chapters felt rather forced, and kind of pointless, as if their only purpose was for the benefit of the reader in the form of exposition

malcolm white

great, can't wait for the book itself.

Valewall

Great end to the first book, Great wrap up leaving you waiting for more.

Delaney Manders

If they're scared of basic biochem, just wait until he introduces them to higher math - anisotropic topographies (which he _should_ be able to create) are going to blow their minds. Literally.

Kirrocen

Duvall's right. It's not space that kills people, just the stuff in it.

Luke Preston

thanks for the book

Andrew Denton

I have been reloading this page all day for this.

Anonymous

Meh, they’re the end of book 1. Needed to tie some things up and establish plot for next book. Seems fair to me.

Jacob

Bwhahaha that was great also space magic being the harmless magic..... Bwhahaha ahahaha ahhh oh this is gonna be good

Coleman Bland

I’m not sure what about this chapter made me laugh harder. The assumption that one man couldn’t be doing this all on his own, the fact that the grand space wizard has been lying through her teeth about the magic the whole time, or the fact that even the magical shadow government couldn’t afford an x-ray machine in America. —Here’s to the end of the beginning.

Patrick

Technically the space magic itself is harmless. It is what passes through it that is dangerous.

Gremlin Jack

I am becoming more and more convinced that when you named this story 'Paranoid Mage' you did it because of the amount of paranoia the protagonist inspires in everyone else. Great chapter :D

Zeta

you seems to be missing an 'S' in the title there. Paranoid mages, haha.

Ryan Naquin

"Mister Wells, healing magic is magic, not biochemistry." Even the secret police are blind to what magic is. Magic is change. I doubt anyone other than the archmages understand that concept. Keeping that idea under wraps is the only thing holding up their little organization.

xanartik

This is practically Youjo Senki, with the misunderstanding fields.

Daniel Sifrit

Yep, that went about how I expected. The capture was needed to push the story forward. How long would his being a ghost be interesting?

ShotoGun

Winning plan. Research advanced physics and weaponize entropy. Imagine pointing your hand at a skyscraper and deleting it from existence with matter erasure.

Dietz

We haven't actually seen evidence that magic can do that yet. It's all been the very direct 'blunt force' kind of magic, barring the Fae stuff, which also seems rather limited.

NoodleGod

Nice! Lovely work!

Dietz

Okay, so the answer to the big question is exactly what Callum pointed out way back in the beginning; Mages are taught magic wrong in order to control them. It still feels a little flimsy, but at least the why of it being restricted has also been put forth. Weird to think healing mages are so deadly, but it does check out with how healing magic was explained earlier.

Nairne

I don't think it's that they couldn't afford it - it's they just wouldn't get it, because a healing mage could fill the function. They do seem to be operating on the premise that there is nothing greater than magic, so if something can be solved with Magic, they will not bother with mundane methods - though if someone at GAR has a speck of reason remaining that might change ( it remains to be seen if it will and to what degree if at all ).

Solo

Archmages control their fields and are hundreds of years old. This means they, and the mages they teach are out of the loop for modern scientific development. The Archmage of spatial magic may not even know of the theory of relativity.

The Walrus Transcendent

House politics, presumed secret organizations and a predilection for convenient explanations rather than informed ones. GAR and the mage Houses are gonna eat each-other alive due to this one dude's shenanigans, aren't they. Edit: Ohgod, I just realized, they're gonna drag dragonblooded into this, and that's gonna go badly for everyone within blast radius. Plus whatever pushback they'll get from the Fae when GAR starts pushing too hard.

Some person

The fae are now suspected because of his resistance to the mind bending bull that chick uses. So I believe you are right there, and the houses will take any opportunity to tear each other down. Dictatorships and autocratic society share this stupid power play crap so it will at the very least be entertaining to watch it burn …

Konstantin Parkhomenko

We have a potentially compromised and “corrupted” impressionable youth that we suspect may have been targeted for recruitment by a mysterious and secretive anti-government organization. Whatever shall we do about her? Oh, I know — let’s induct her into the secret service and give her a security clearance and a bunch of restricted knowledge — because infiltration and information leaks are totally not a concern 🙄🙄 Once again, the depth of the mages’ common sense and foresight are astounding.

Pebble

If Gayle will now be part of the secret secret (yes I said it twice, that's not a typo) society, then she and Callum will likely run into each other again. It would be interesting to get some Gayle PoV chapters every so often, showing her growth, and her changing (hopefully) views on the mage society. Maybe she'll start out resenting Callum for wrecking her life like that, but as time goes by and she gets to see more of the "darker" parts of mage society, and how they deliberately hide knowledge from each other, she might change the target of her resentment to the current structure of mage society itself. She might even get her hands on a recording of Callum's interrogation at some point, which might help push her over the edge if she is still hesitant. After all, she was basically lied to by everyone (even if most of them were just as unaware as herself), and had her potential held back. Then when she learned something that made her so much more capable, instead of being praised and celebrated, she got the short end of the stick. Also, since she already experienced what a little bit of mundane knowledge could help her achieve, she probably will continue learning. Even if they will try to restrict her access, that will probably make her want it even more. Gayle so far seemed to have been living in her own little bubble, seeing things in a way that was convenient for her, like interpreting her parents reactions as if they were secretly helping her by getting a tutor. I wouldn't be surprised if Archmage Hargrave simply saw her as a useful political piece, instead of a treasured family member (probably the same for her parents to some extent?). The family servants might not actually have been so happy about their situation as Gayle thought, but she simply saw things through a filter. In other words, Gayle is about to get a crash course in how the world really works.

Bat

So who else thinks the teleport system is using space mages like human batteries? I get a sinking feeling every time the spatial archmage shows up

Randall Klatt

Indeed. Their whole society views mundanes as "lesser." It's interesting too how you can't "opt-out" of participation in their bullshit. It leads me to believe that perhaps his parents didn't want him to be part of the magic world and give him the freedom that he never had, assuming that they are still alive out there somewhere.

The Walrus Transcendent

To some extent it's not completely stupid. One of the best things you can do when you discover an opponent's intelligence asset is to try to flip that asset to work for you. Ooon the other hand, that's not necessarily what's happening here, the intent seeming to be to enforce the approach of security via obscurity, which has cemented itself as dogma for the mages despite it being a monumentally dumb idea.

Pebble

I sort of got that vibe as well, but I doubt it. Callum had a look at the teleporters and even if his knowledge is very limited, I feel like he might have noticed something like that. Also, it was mentioned that they are out there running errands and stuff. Perhaps it's more that the network requires a lot of maintenance to function. Maybe it needs to be calibrated often. Or they are employed as a sort of Teleport Traffic Controllers, maybe even along the lines of the switchboard telephone network.

Carl Mason

It could be interesting for a very long time, it depends how it is done.

Carl Mason

~On the road again~ I just can't wait to get on the road again~ Good for Callum, escape from illegal detention, confuse your adversaries, give up a bunch of secrets and resources and start over somewhere else. Hopefully far away. I hear South America is nice.

Allora Lee

I loved this wrap up!!! I could see him justifying and relating to Gayle, and saw it being the slow plague that killed him -and I’m once again thrilled at your ability. Not to mention that duval is so funny she’s just like “I don’t care what the man did -could’ve committed genocide -you’re not killing him. He’s mine! And I’ll work him to death before you cause ME to work more!!!”

James Kirschner

Can’t wait for Callum to realize spacetime is one inseparable continuum and therefore he can also control the flow of time.

The Walrus Transcendent

He is fully aware, and has tried to do forays into that already when he was developing his pseudogravity telekinesis.

Alex Lindsay

Good chapter. Nice to see the mostly positive responses after the previous posts comments.

Deinos

Thanks for the chappy! I like that you went in-depth in the dos and don’ts of what he did/didn’t do. But that actually didn’t matter to me much, what Does matter to me is: How in the hell did his teleport work through all the wards? Even if he wasn't an identified spatial mage I'd assume wards strong enough zo either stop him or splatter him on the attempt.

Deinos

Nop, you really want to play poker against noobs, what you don't want is them to have a full house every time.

Dietz

Well, technically the teleport in his gut is like the business end of a wormhole as far as I understand. Since the link was inside him it bypassed the wards, since he wasn't going through them but his own intestines.

Faolen

Them: This criminal scum just played us all! Him: I'm in such bullsh!t right now.

yannick schwende

Damn, awesome chapter. I like how both parties are paranoid about the other, makes it more hilarious in a way :-)

HollowVessel

This feels like an interesting example of tech far out pacing the organizational ability to deal with such. The Magic folks haven't paid attention to non-magic folks and have several gaping security flaws due to this negligence. Also the way its written here, reminds me more than a little of the way Harry potter had a separate mage world where normal people were considered third class if even considered at all. It just felt like such a strange connection once my brain made it I had to say it.

Zarik0

Yeah sry im going to bail out, they are to many little thing who are off here and with the last chapter.... That just killed the thing, (the thing that was why it was mega interesting in the story and i was impressed by the MC and his situation) its just a joke now and forced thing so the plot go into this direction and with unateral, unplausible and irealist thing Just some and not all of the little thing who are just off in my view: His perception is some hundreds metter no? like they all out of perception when they shoot a net and a dart on him, with the distance here he get splattered into meat with how much force they need to push this on him and so fast that he dont have time to react and detect it, this is so off and poor excuse/explanation for this in my view, using only this for explain everything previously in the last chapter is just... this is not enough and quite subpar "basic sense of decency" to what? go see her again for ask if she passed? when his live is in the line? give her a phone burner number to mp him to told the new if its really unsuportable for him..... "He’d just been so glad to have a normal interaction that he’d overextended." ....how its a "normal interaction"? plz.... Why did he even stirr so they come? well can look at what question they have so get some infos instead of just playing dead (risky but acceptable) but why did he fucking SPEAK with them? if in only 5 mn he is out with his tp, what can he gain? instead of giving them infos and milking him, just stay silent ....... (the room have maybe surveillance who can look at his biometric and all other stuff so they can know if he tell lie or other thing like magic mind influence or etc, to many reason to just stay put and say nothing if its only 5 mn for charge his tp....... Dont gonna speak about all the talk who is just pull out hair type reaction with some line he say.... He just give them so much infos and give them a profil of him "“I don’t think I do. Any such thing would be an existential threat to the little dictatorship you have. It’s simply that after this conversation, none of you are going to see me again. But I might be seeing you.” “Threats, now?” The MIB scoffed. “It’s not a threat. I’m just telling you what’s going to happen,” Callum said, and triggered the teleportation focus." So unecessary and dangerous and given them infos on his next decision/action/attitude....... why he dont just turn his head looking at something distant in the wall, widen his eyes and exclaim "What th.. and paf teleport out" so much better to create mud and disturb thing instead of revealing that HE teleported out and gonna after them in the future, they gonna go into hunting another ghost with this and look into their internal affair and with the archmage and all politic with family and faction that sure to turn some shit and occupy them and do damage at some point when something come out and if he go into hiding and not leak any lead when something like that appear when they screen their internal affair and a battle/tension between the different faction poop out when some mud is turned he is golden Well we know where the direction and focus of the story gonna go (big change with this forced change of direction and focus) and all blabla and drama incoming, and this is fine im sure the author will do a good job on this and put a good story overall (he already proven he is enough good with his past story and can do it) im just a bit dissapointed he killed the primer and concept and interesting tension and suspension of disbelief of the first 20 chapter he have created (who was fairly a "new" and rare thing and quite amazing), this suck in my view on how he have done this transition (forced/rushed/unplausible) when nothing was still over and can be more developped with way more chapter before gradually going into this new direction of the author chossing, oh well not for all people, and im not ready to pay 10 buck for 4 chapter per month with what was attracting me into the story in the first place "dead" or atleast getting a big blow like that All my wish for the future

Greiü

I feel like you just want to read about a robot mc doing everything perfect

Jason Hornbuckle

the authorities misunderstanding everything is pretty funny

2,4,6-Trinitrotoluene

I am having a hard time suspending my disbelief about how GAR/Magic Government operates. If all it takes to corrupt a healing affinity (or spatial) is just a minimal exposure to mundane topics outside of the magical school. That alone can lead you forbidden magic, so how does GAR contain that? Late bloomers aside we see that GAR agents eschew the mundane world to a degree and look down on it. But they still use phones, drive cars, use computers, the internet, and so on. All they would seemingly have to do to put two and two together about forbidden applications of magic is have just a very little amount of imagination and catch a few hours of various television shows. The story surmises that nobody really steps outside due to fear of GAR or something, and yeah sure okay. But we aren't talking about necromancy and stuff its just trying applications of vis based on personal experimentation. But absolutely nobody seems to do that outside of the MC to the point that its unheard of? Just seems off.

Beeees!

Literally none of them are educated in anything aside from magic. And they actively detest anything mundane, I think it’s plausible for healing with how rare and uneducated these people are

Unkown Novelist

Why doesn't MC go to some deserted island in the pacific? There are a bunch of unmapped islands for use, and with careful planning, he could stock up on goods and essentials while he practices and figures out space magic.

Unkown Novelist

I stand corrected, all land is satellite mapped, but there are a bunch of uninhabited islands and areas all over the world.

Anonymous

That would be cool, but I would worry on the amount of time that it would take away from the MC. The chapters are rare enough as is, ya know? That said, it would be a good world building point.

Hellmo

Thanks for the chapter! Secret organization... lol

Michael Kovalik

Did they imply that it's normally difficult/impossible to sense deep within one's own body? And that's why they only checked the outer parts of his body for a homebond? Who the hell are Callum's parents, I'm on the edge of my seat for this, really!

Michael Kovalik

"Maybe mundanes, but not people." Absolutely chilling.

Vincent Archer

They just did, yes. Normally, a mage seem to require to touch (or almost touch) a focus to charge it, which is why they only checked with surface tools. Now, we don't know if spatial mages can do that internal sense as well, but the fact that BSE, keeper of forbidden knowledge, didn't seem to know that argues against it, so it's another Callum Anomaly Point.

bobby2dreki

I love how I didn't consider that possibility, and now it just makes so much sense that in two weeks I will think I always thought that. Magic of the brain

Adam Panshin

The dragon-man from the very first chapter. The agents are spinning theories that Callum being there wasn't a coincidence. And there's not entirely wrong, in that the attack itself was weird. Magical society assassins bringing guns to a fight? There's definitely a story there, and one we may learn eventually.

Jason Hu

I'm just surprised he didn't just say he got the idea for healing attacks from a manga or anime.

Tim Deral

Awesome !

Erik

For some reason, it surprised him that she want ahead without any introduction->For some reason, it surprised him that she WENT ahead without any introduction

cheagekin

Absolute joy to read

Alberti

When does the next chapter come out?

KnightRider007

Oooh, good point, yes! Except this is more one-sided. Callum can conceptually understand the mages, but Tanya honestly doesn’t “get” the other side.

BJ

Bwahahaha!

TwistedToaster

I realize this is late but very basic biology knowledge is considered forbidden? Are mages never allowed to use bandages? The author should have gone with something different for this. I'd think any half competent magic user would seek to understand basic science so their magic would be more effective. "Some of the so-called restricted magic was not particularly difficult to figure out, provided the mage in question educated themselves in mundane topics. Though few mages did, and mixing with mundanes wasn’t exactly encouraged." Including basic science in mundane knowledge seems a bit silly. I can understand pop culture/celeb news falling under this but even magic needs to interact with the world and science is understanding how the world works. They clearly use technology created by mundanes so where is the line here? Putting all that aside, I found myself still in disbelief that "You shall not use healing magic offensively" isn't part of their commandments or laws. The fact she trained it while being utterly ignorant of any issues learning it seems beyond belief considering she's part of a mage family.

Kalel

These are good points, though I think they've been addressed to at least some degree in the story. It sounds like this society has been around since the 16th century, and most of those in power haven't really adapted to the modern world. This is further exposed by how puzzled they are about the way Callum uses space magic, something that wouldn't confuse them so much if they had a basic grounding in physics. Remember, we've been repeatedly told (and shown) how much contempt they have for non-magic humans. Science is not just anathema, it's beneath their contempt. That said, I do agree it's a bit silly, but from the point of view of their leadership (who can live centuries and potentially predate the Industrial Revolution) I can understand a reluctance to embrace modern knowledge. Knowing that, it's likely not having a rule forbidding healing magic is because - 1) most mages don't have the basic medical knowledge to understand it's possible, and 2) they don't want to give anyone ideas. Few things encourage people to attempt something like forbidding it.