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As the sun set, a lot of things happened at once. Jake found himself trapped as the pillar of pure sun energy descended upon him, with seemingly no time to get away... so he made a gamble. Right before the sunbeam hit, his body split in two as a shadowy version of Jake shot out of the area the sunbeam was in, unaffected by the remnant energy left by the fire chains.

It was an often forgotten feature as Jake didn’t use it often, but the Origin of Eternal Shadow still had roots in Shadow Vault, retaining the ability to vault out of danger as per the description:

“Upon activation of Eternal Shadow of the Primal Hunter, this skill allows both the Eternal Shadow and the Primal Hunter to embrace the shadows momentarily, vaulting in any chosen direction.”

This allowed the Eternal Shadow to escape just as Jake was hit by the Sundown beam... and he was hit hard. Jake’s scales nearly immediately exploded as they were overcharged with energy, and the skin below burnt away in an instant, with Jake feeling as if his entire body was beginning to disintegrate.

As his form was wholly consumed by the beam, and not even a second from when he knew Moment of the Primal Hunter would forcibly activate – even if he tried to stop it from doing so as he was currently - Ell’Hakan’s gaze was finally no longer on him due to the immense brightness.

Jake acted instantly and activated Eternal Shadow again as he switched places with his other half, the clone instantly getting destroyed as Jake appeared outside where the beam hit. Despite replacing his reality with the one of Eternal Shadow’s, remnant sun energy still lingered in Jake’s soul as he felt hot throughout, but he couldn’t give it much thought as he focused on rapidly ascending upwards as he initiated his stealth skill.

This was something Jake had theorized long ago and now finally put into practice, though not exactly as he had imagined. Jake’s stealth skill was extremely powerful, but it relied on this opponent not knowing where Jake was when he activated it. Needless to say, that made it pretty challenging to use in the middle of combat... but what if he had a way to make his opponents lose track of him? Perhaps even make his opponent assume he was “someone” else?

That’s what Jake had considered... replacing himself with his clone to then gain distance and enter stealth before his opponent noticed the real him. It was still hard to pull off, but Ell’Hakan had given Jake the perfect opportunity.

Even as Jake rapidly used One Step to get height, thus exiting the emotion-detection range of Ell’Hakan, the nahoom still hadn’t noticed Jake as the sunbeam lasted a lot longer than Jake had thought it would. Also, even if Jake had dodged it and was now getting height, he was still affected by the immense heat it gave off, but the sunlight was impressively focused in the beam, meaning Ell’Hakan had a lot more control than Jake would expect, considering the sheer scale and power of the attack.

If he’d taken the beam head-on, Jake genuinely couldn’t ensure his own survival, even if he tried to use barriers and whatnot. Only with Moment or Eternal Shadow did Jake have a good method of escape, and Jake could only admire the fact that Ell’Hakan could unleash such a skill.

He had clearly earned the title as one of the most powerful people of their generation... but Jake was determined to prove himself the strongest once and for all.

As the Sundown beam slowly faded away, Jake’s stealth skill finally activated, and he disappeared entirely. Yet he kept going up for a little while longer until he felt like it was good enough. Once there, he turned his attention toward the nahoom below who was looking into the massive hole created by the beam.

Jake felt it then... this was his chance. Without a moment’s hesitation, Jake pulled out his special Eternal Hunger arrow and nocked it before taking aim at the Usurper below. Arcane Powershot started charging as Jake kept breathing heavily despite the pain, the heat having caused quite a lot of internal damage.

Ell’Hakan was unaware. He simply kept watching out for Jake, who he likely assumed to be down in the burning hole. Jake honestly didn’t know why but assumed that, but perhaps some of the curse energy still lingered down there for a while longer, giving off Jake’s aura.

The nahoom even consumed a potion, recovering slightly for the next round of the fight. One could say a lot of things about Ell’Hakan, but he certainly hadn’t underestimated Jake. Even after such an attack, he moved forward with the conclusion Jake was still going to continue being a massive threat he had to stay prepared for.

However, no preparation could prepare him for Jake doing something Ell’Hakan didn’t even know Jake was capable of.

Soon enough, Jake felt the strain on his body as the Arcane Powershot couldn’t be charged more. Even so, he pushed it just a little further as his shoulders began burning from the destructive arcane energy, and the bow he’d upgraded way back just before Nevermore looked like it couldn’t handle much more.

It was time.

Go.

Jake let go of the string as the Eternal Hunger arrow exploded downwards, hidden by his stealth skill. Ell’Hakan was none the wiser as he still stood there expecting Jake to be below and not above.

Only when it was too late did Ell’Hakan react. The nahoom moved his head to the side at the very last moment, avoiding getting struck on top of his head as he tried to tilt his body. Right as he began moving, Jake used Primal Gaze, but it didn’t even look like Ell’Hakan noticed as Eternal Hunger’s curse energy flooded the area right before it hit him.

The arrow struck him in his collarbone and didn’t stop there as the large spear-like construct continued all the way through. As it passed through Ell’Hakan, immense amounts of curse energy invaded the nahoom’s body, not to speak of the extremely potent poison also mixed in, amplified by the curse.

Jake watched as the arrow kept flying even after hitting and passing through Ell’Hakan, all the runes and magic covering the mythical weapon gone as it flew out of the Usurper around his thigh area. In its wake, it left all the energy Jake had inscribed upon the weapon, making the physical arrow exiting nothing but Eternal Hunger in the form of a spear-like arrow.

Right as it was free of Ell’Hakan, the entire mythical weapon instantly disappeared rather than crash into the ground, reappearing far up in the sky above, held in Jake’s hand. His shoulders were spent from firing the arrow as he stared at Ell’Hakan, almost expecting a notification.

The Usurper floated in the air for a moment before he began to fall down toward the ground, and as he’d moved to avoid Jake shooting him from within the hole, he ended up landing beside the new major geographical landmark he’d just created.

Jake considered for a moment shooting another arrow toward the fallen nahoom, but his bow looked quite a bit worse for wear, so he decided to give it a break as he floated down. While descending, Jake also took the Eternal Hunger spear and held it in front of him as he grasped the arrow’s tip and body. With a good twist and yank, he broke off the speartip and a small part of the handle, holding it as the weapon began to slowly morph into a katar as he allowed the rest of the former arrow’s body to disperse and reenter his soul.

He soon approached the ground, and as he did, Jake felt himself being observed from somewhere. He looked toward where someone was looking but found nothing. Frowning, Jake tried to identify the source of what observed him, but as this observer didn’t appear to hold any malice, Jake decided to not let himself be distracted as he landed only ten meters from where Ell’Hakan was lying on the ground.

Walking over with steady steps, Jake heard the gurgling and struggling breaths and saw the utterly destroyed body on the ground. The arrow had removed more than a third of Ell’Hakan’s entire body mass in one go and, due to its travel path, even blown one of his arms and legs off at the shoulder and thigh, respectively.

All of this wasn’t to mention the curse energy pulsating from his body and the smell of rot from the Heartrot poison infecting every part of him that remained. Looking down at him, Jake sighed as he lifted his hand and prepared to use Touch of the Malefic Viper to finish him off.

A very small pang of regret to see the fight end like this snuck into his mind, but Jake quickly shook it off. While he had enjoyed a good fight, he knew this could only have one conclusion. With the sun gone and under the light of the twin moons, Jake’s hand began to glow dark green with the intent to end their ill-fated relationship once and for all.

--

Pain mixed with extreme hunger dominated every inch of Ell’Hakan’s mind as he didn’t even register himself falling and landing hard on the rocky ground below. He was only vaguely aware that he had been hit with an extremely powerful attack, and the logical part of his brain knew he had to do something.

As the seconds passed, Ell’Hakan slowly controlled his emotions one by one, gaining lucidity with every passing second as he desperately struggled. Despite all his efforts, getting rid of the hunger was simply too difficult as it tied into too many other emotions, and the pain was needed as a reminder of what was happening to him... but he did make them slightly more manageable, finally allowing him to understand his own situation.

His body was utterly wrecked, and he could barely move. Curse and poison were coursing through his body, tearing him apart in body and soul. Things... weren’t good.

The remnants of the potion he’d consumed just before getting hit were one of the only things keeping him even halfway stable, but he knew that at any point, he could be pushed over the edge. Even if left alone, his chances of surviving were slim, but if he got lucky, then maybe...

That’s when he felt the hunter land not far away. He felt the human’s emotions as he walked closer, a slight hint of killing intent making it evident what he was there to do. Ell’Hakan struggled as he screamed at his body to move, but all he could do was try to breathe and stabilize.

He simply refused to let it end like this... to see everything end like this. Ell’Hakan had done all the preparations he could, never once slacked off or allowed himself to be satisfied. In fact, he’d used his Bloodline on himself all the time. It was one of the reasons he’d even become as strong as he had.

Emotions such as doubt, boredom, fear, apprehension... all of them were things that made one slow down or stop progressing. Ell’Hakan had carefully controlled all these. No matter how hard he had to work on something he never allowed himself to get bored or discouraged, but instead actively amplified all the positive emotions he felt while doing it to keep himself motivated and engaged. He had done this for so many years, even before the system. He’d trained with his spear back then till his hands were bloody but soldiered through everything... and yet...

I can’t.

He had too many that believed in him, too much faith. Gritting his teeth, Ell’Hakan’s mind calmed for a moment as he gathered everything he could. He felt the faith of every native of his planet enter him, the trust in his victory from all who had chosen his side in the conflict spread throughout the galaxy. They all believed he would win, so who was he to doubt?

As he struggled, his emotions overflowed and coalesced as a notification appeared before his eyes.

Skill Upgraded:  [Legend of the Celestial Child (Legendary)] --> [Myth of the Celestial Child (Mythical)]

Instantly, Ell’Hakan felt an influx of energy from all around him as his boosting skill reached an even higher level. This energy fed his body, but... it simply wasn’t enough. It was like pouring oil on an already extinguished candle, and all it ended up doing was prolonging how long he would last. Perhaps it would allow him to now survive if left alone, but the hunter would not leave him be.

Ell’Hakan felt his last hope slipping away with every second he couldn’t even move a finger on his remaining arm. The hunter was observing him as he lay there, and as Ell’Hakan read his emotions for what may be the final time, he was surprised to find a hint of regret in there. He tried to amplify this emotion, tried to make the hunter decide not to finish him off... but how foolish was it to try and make a hunter go against his own instinct?

That’s when Ell’Hakan felt an emotion he had expected even less... and the one he loathed the most:

Pity.

The hunter pitied him as he activated what Ell’Hakan knew to be Touch of the Malefic Viper, making all the poison in his body go on a rampage, quickly quelling whatever newfound power his boosting skill was giving him.

As death approached, memories flooded back into Ell’Hakan’s mind as he let go of all the control he had over his own psyche. He remembered growing up on the streets after his parents abandoned him. Remembered as he tried to survive the long, cold nights and harsh, scorching days, barely scraping by day to day.

The memories just kept entering his mind in an uncontrollable flood as his life flashed before his eyes. His escape from the streets had not been a lucky one, but quite the opposite. He’d been captured by the guards after trying to steal water and was punished with enslavement and to join the slave army as the small kingdom required soldiers.

His days on the battlefield were a daze, but Ell’Hakan realized he was good at it. He always had good control of his own emotions, which allowed him to do better on the battlefield than most, and along with his naturally gifted physique and talent for battle, he excelled. Even so, he was close to death so many times as he grew up in the army from someone who barely qualified as a man to an adult... and as he grew, so did his Bloodline.

Ell’Hakan soon came to learn that it wasn’t just his own emotions he could affect. He started out small, making the army cook give him an extra meal here and there, had the blacksmith ensure Ell’Hakan’s weapon was always the best taken care of, and even made his captain give him more leeway than any of the other slaves.

Gradually, he got more ambitious. From the captain to the commander to the general, he began to influence the military from within. He spread half-truths and lies that were to his advantage, easily convincing others of anything he wanted to as he kept pushing the limits. Emotions and memories were so tightly tied that as long as he could make anyone believe something was possible, he could make them believe it was the truth.

Eventually, Ell’Hakan became a hero of the army – made himself a hero - his title of slave quickly forgotten as all who knew were either killed or made to believe he had never been a slave in the first place. He was praised by all and brought to the capital of the kingdom, who at the time ruled the city they even called the capital now. There, he was met with nobles and royalty, beings that he had once thought were unapproachable beings, but now they were like clay in his hands for him to manipulate as he so desired. The people who’d looked down on him like vermin were now seeing him as if he was truly worthy of being with them, which only gave him more ambition... ambition to go all the way.

The religion of not just the kingdom but every faction on the planet was to worship the sun and the moons. This religion was a remnant from a very long time ago when his planet had been united as one. During this time, the planet was flourishing with plenty of life and greenery everywhere, grand meadows expanding as far as the eye could see, with lakes and rivers everywhere.

But one day, it all crumbled. It was called a punishment from the sun and stars, but later, Ell’Hakan learned it was the result of a massive supervolcano erupting, causing changes to the atmosphere and the entire planet.

Back during this time of flourishment, when the world was united, it had been done by someone who was viewed as a living god. A being no one could question, as he was the son of the celestials itself... a man called the Celestial Child.

Ell’Hakan had grown up hearing about the Celestial Child of Legend as it was sung about in taverns and in the army many told old stories about him. Perhaps it was hubris or rightful confidence, but Ell’Hakan truly chose the most extreme path forward as in front of the king and queen himself, he proclaimed himself not just the second coming, but the Celestial Child reborn.

It took a lot of effort but little time before he managed to convince just one of the priests... and with one on board, the doubt spread, was turned into a sliver of belief, which he then instantly grasped onto with a vice grip and amplified.

All of this culminated in his lie becoming truth. He was proclaimed the Celestial Child, unified all the kingdoms and clans using the legends of old, and formed the new empire that ruled his planet for many years before the system even arrived.

The initiation was simply another chance for him to continue his ambitions, giving him not just a singular planet but an entire multiverse to make his own. However... as he was on death’s door, he finally realized how foolish he had been. How arrogant.

He had played the role of the Celestial Child so long that he’d forgotten he wasn’t truly the legendary figure of myths. He was just Ell’Hakan, a pathetic slave from the streets who’d gotten lucky getting a powerful Bloodline.

His position wasn’t earned; his powers nothing but a grand lie.

Right as the last vestiges of life left him, he couldn’t help but think what the real Celestial Child could have accomplished if he had been born during the time of the system. Surely, he would have done better than some like Ell’Hakan...

If only it had been real... if only he’d been the real Celestial Child, the real son of the moon and stars... if he could only truly become him...

All emotions began to fade from Ell’Hakan’s mind as only this one thought and desire remained, and as it did, his mind collapsed as his Bloodline went into overdrive. Ell’Hakan faded, his ego washed away by a singular desire...

*ERROR*

Due to your Bloodline, the skill [Myth of the Celestial Child (Mythical]) is evolving.

And from the nothingness, the mind of another being emerged. Lies became truth, as what was once a legend and an act became reality.

*ERROR*

Skill downgraded- Syngery Detected-

*ERROR*

Skill Upgra- ERROR – Skill Down – Skill Lost – ERROR

...

Synergy Detected

Skill gained: [Absolute Delusion: Reincarnation of the Celestial Child (Unique)]

Despite seemingly having no path of survival, the ruined corpse of the one once known as Ell’Hakan opened a single eye as he stared at the moonlit skies above and spoke in a clear voice as he lifted his otherwise immovable arm and reached upwards.

“Mothers... I’m here.”

And as he called to his parents, they heard his plea.

Comments

Tommy

TFTC!

TyranT-Rex

Can't wait till this ark gets released on audible

Connor

Thanks for the chapter

Lizy Flore

Thanks for the chap

Gary Kamikawa

Congrats on book 11 going well. You know we’re all riveted to the story. Another great chapter.

BumAssBumAss

Thanks for the chapter

One Pump Chump

Now he's become entirely delusional, just like his fallen patron.

João Gabriel

TFTC! But fuck, that's some bullshit right there

Hayden Leech

Uh oh. HES DOING A JAKE!

Lexae

Nooo, the mf isn't dead yet...

Callumcleverley

Thanks for the chapter will the next arc be justice for Tom though?

Alexander C Hyde

It took a lot of effort but little time before he managed to convince just one of the priests... and with one on board, the doubt spread got amplified, and was turned into a sliver of belief, which he then instantly grasped onto with a (vise)vice grip and amplified.

Asher Mack

If Jake doesn’t tear this glorified expired grapefruit’s McNuts off I may have to try and do it myself

Valhazstromoz

OMG "your not the main character just die already!!"

Captain Nuclear

This is some plot armour level shenanigans...

Alexander C Hyde

He had played the role of the Celestial Child (for so long) that he’d forgotten he wasn’t truly the legendary figure of myths.

Kris Piskorski

amazing chapter, truly a proper antagonist for the story

Arrogant Savant

It's like he's deluding himself to thinking he's the Nahoom equivalent of Jesus.

Zizawah

Oh no! Poor Jake now has to contend with a false god? But at least the planet is now his? It says skill upgrade so EH isn’t quite dead yet. So glad it’s Tuesday! The planetary sacrifice should have kicked in by now assuming it registered enough time has passed! Thanks so much for another nail biting chapter. Will definitely be getting the new book!

Den

Like a half cooked peperonata he keeps resurfacing

Apollo Greed

Absolute delusion is wild lol

Michael

Did this orange fuck become a false god?

Biggy smalls

Can the bargain disrupt Cheetos attempt at resurrection? I hope so.

eatingpitza314

And that is why you should kill confirm as soon as possible and not just let them have there awakening.

trufflezz

So I am to believe Jake just stands there and does nothing besides activate malefic touch instead of I don't know take his head off? It's clear this whole skill upgrade happen probably quickly but quick enough that Jake doesn't notice and he somehow can't finish him off before anything else happens? I mean I guess it's another life lesson for him to finish your target off once you can.

Damien Kingsly

TFTC. I’m just hoping that this is a last stand sort of situation, and that E’H actually dies in this fight. I really want to see other things in the multiverse, and while Cheeto boy is a well written character, he has been around from early on and has taken the spotlight from others.

Burkes

Oh for FU- nah watch jake and the new orange man become bros

Sayjinlord

So is Ell'Hakan dead? And is the Celestial Child a new being? Will Jake still get a Kill Notification? Find out on the next chapter of The Primal Hunter.

Samuel Nelson

Damn, got me again! 😂

Hotep Saxis

He had played the role of the Celestial Child (so long) that he’d forgotten he wasn’t truly…

T

WTF

Fervent Fiend

The only good thing that can come from this anime flashback nonsense is Jake potentially getting system recognition for killing multiple people, even if they’re in the same body. A solid kill against El Hakan, and another against… whatever this new thing is. This tulpa of the celestial child, a vanity curse spirit or something.

Momongama

False God? Transcendent? Unique being? Tftc

Grant Anderson

Love the art on the book Z!

Phallusar

And the other shoe drops. I'm thinking of Valhal explicitly making sure the Runemaiden never met Ell'Hakan not because she was a strategic asset to be protected but because they didn't want to give away that she was a hard counter to the foundation of his power that strongly resembled that of a False God. And now he's a False God in truth, where everyone's advice, including Villy, has been "let the Runemaiden take care of this."

Mohammed Sheekh

Uhh why didn't he just dice him up with his sword?

TyranT-Rex

Ok yall, don't hate me for this, but as it got to the end i actually wanted EH to stick around, and what if Jake and This Cestial Child can actually become friends. If EH's personality was completely rewritten it might be possible. And I think that the guy who picked up the kings claw filled with desolation is the one observing right now.

Lizy Flore

I believe he used touch for safety reason… because EH isn’t dead yet and remains extremely powerful. Also, don’t forget the whole EH pov only took a few seconds in that scene.

Tommy

Absolute delusion… I’m getting Child of Desolation vibes from this. Just what the fuck is EH’s broken bloodline capable of?? Seems to me he actually was the descendant of the original celestial child and had the bloodline. Which is now amplified by the system… has the original Celestial Child’s soul been floating around waiting to reincarnate or something? Edit: no wait it’s absolute delusion. My bad no CG soul it’s actually EH but completely buying into his own story. So he’s drunk the koolaid he made himself! Plus as @David says he is bloodline patriarch, so old celestial child couldn’t have had the bloodline

Lawrence

Congrats on book 11!

Lizy Flore

Master of cliffhangers, truly. Though I suspected that he had moons-related powers, as per his legend. He is an annoying cockroach like that.

Michael Ferguson

Delusion. The best path for a villain.

jobe matula

cmon... ur telling me this nahoom punk is still alive ? wth

Martinus Chrisjan

Feels like an asspull tbh. I'll wait to see how things pan out though 😅

Gary Kamikawa

Well I sure hope Celestial Child (EH 2.0) turns out to be less of an arrogant manipulative douche we all want stomped into the ground. And that it takes a long while for him to grow up so we don’t have to worry about him for a long while. Banking on EH still being counted as dead. So Jake gets his credit and can complete the bargain, because who doesn’t love a good bargain?

Lucky Luke

Absolute Delusion 😂

OnEyeDevil

Skill gained: absolute delusion it's funny as hell but I can't wait to read how that fucker finally dies and we get the interaction from Jake and villy

Stevean Bozek

The system actually named his skill absolute delusion lmao.

Skarpi

EH is messing with your emotions!! He made you forget all the horrible stuff he's done.

Tommy

I think we are seeing a power-up which makes Jake realise he gotta go full scorched earth on the whole star system. Cue some moon destroying shots, potentially attempting to blow up the sun! Could be fun 💥❤️

Mohammed Sheekh

Can't fault zogarth for this, he clearly wanted cheeto man alive until the world wonder arc that's gonna happen when jake hits B grade, as long as you recognise that then it's easy to ignore the plot armor lol

Exodus Uno

He doesn't have a sword, a katar is completely different from a sword and isn't a slicing weapon, it's pretty much only good for piercing which at that point touch of the malefic viper would just be better with all the crazy poison going on in el Hakans body

Tommy

The kind of life lesson that he should’ve fucking learned by now!

Stevean Bozek

Jake would absolutely stand there and let it happen, he's done this kind of idiotic thing before. He was just regretting the fight ending that way, and odds are good our orange idiot will still be in a bad way even if he pulls back from the brink of death. He can't completely subvert balance even with a transcendent skill, if that's what this unique skill is. Jake still has the upper hand for the moment.

Mohammed Sheekh

Ok cool so why didn't he just pierce his head then lol, I understand cheeto man is still needed for the next arc but just had to point that out lol

Hayden Leech

This feels like a Sword Saint type Trancendence. Hmmmmm.

Lizy Flore

So who wanna bet with me that the silent observer is the elven guy ?

BenjiVoid

He deluded himself too. So he's now giving himself faith energy

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Xarow

Feels like he suppressed part of himself for so long he has created a split personality. He needs to die this bloodline needs to not exist.

Gman

He didn't get a reincarnation. He just got a skill upgraded. Ironic that even the system called it a delusion lol. I hope he pushes Jake more. So that he can get skill upgrade or 2 but I really want eh to die. I'm done with this arc. Too long. I want to explore rest of the multiverse. I want new bad guys.

Gwiddion

To be able to hide himself from Jake's insane perception while boosted would require sth amazing. I think it's more likely some gods or Jacob using an artifact to hide himself.

Aldrin

Celestial cockroach... But I'm looking forward to the next part of this fight. Jake didn't seem to be pushed to hard. So let's see just how deep Jake's going to dig to pull out the Win.

pelle

I do think this is what the augur spoke off, before the fight, i belive he gotten a skill that the holy maden just dont like

Björn Hermans

AS ALLWAYS tftc! but.... this is getting tedious ;P are you EH yourself?? playing with MY emotions like that?? :P just let the cheeto die allready and PLEASE let his stupid bloodline never show again.. im so done whith him ^^ i want to see the reunion with villy finaly and the whole rest of the multiverse. tldr; no more cheetos for me!

Tejas Jay

Ughh, I really was very happy with this end. I hope this fight doesn't continue for too long.

christian grant

Yooooooo this is insanity!!!!! I’m hype 🔥🤯

Hotep Saxis

So are they still enemies if Identify shows a new name and this is a new being? What will happen with the Divine Bargain? Jake influences the path of everyone he comes in contact with, even his enemies jeez. I do like that system bloodline fuckery is not Jake exclusive.

Namorat

I liked the beginning and middle, not so much the end :D but curious what will happen next :)

Gavin Smith

I believe that this will push Jake into using the absolute supremacy skill he used against Valdemar in the CoC. He’s already being pushed close to his limits and with EH/CC being revived by the moons. It will cause his bloodline to go into overdrive like against Valdemar/Fallen King.

Hayden Leech

Was that a trancendence?

Clint

Bloodlines, amiright? Jake, Jake, Jake. This is why we triple tap. One to the heart. Two to the head. Then burn it with fire.

Kyler

I mean the planet hasnt been gifted to Villy yet, a false god competing with a real one ought to be interesting

Seamus Harley

Someone from the holy church ready to spirit away the body for the bloodline?

Frank Allen

Well fuck dulu seems to be the sulu

Hunter Ferris

Ooohhhh here we go! Cheeto gets a second chance over whelms Jake. Jake uses Jake juice to kill him!! Have a feeling someone will intifeer and break it up just as Jake is about to kill him.

Beemoss

Tftc

Despair

Lets go !

Hotep Saxis

To be fair using Touch with a body full of poison usually turns said body into goo.

Darshar Griffonmane

I think this is either a transcendent power activating/forming, or he is becoming one of those false gods due to the amount of faith energy he is still receiving. Or this is some remnant of Yips path mixing with his in a new way and helping him impose his will upon reality. We should have the conclusion one hopes tomorrow! Off to snag book 11 for a quick re-read. tyftc!

Mohamed Elshazly

That was such a great chapter, thanks a lot.

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter

Jaydan Man

So if he shoves delulu EH into a Volcano is that an instant win because of the original story?

Allan

Despite seemingly having no path of survival, the ruined corpse of the one once known as Ell’Hakan opened a single eye as he stared at the moonlight skies above and spoke in a clear voice as he lifted his otherwise immovable arm and reached upwards. Moonlight->Moonlit?

Nexas Aurelias

I agree I just hope whoever makes the mistake of stepping in the hunters way next will be just as bad as elhakan

JB

This actually makes a ton of sense

Kaizen Androck

I am familiar with system fuckery, but now, after 5 cliffings, I am subjected to Syngery.

David

Hopefully from this Jake learns the lesson talk to us from the movie zombieland! Double tap!!

Dave

TFTC

HardcoreLace756

If having an incredible amount of deadly poison shot through your entire body with an arrow purposefully made to kill you and you alone, while also draining all of your resources into the abyss, and then all of that getting boosted into the high heavens doesn't kill you then getting stabbed a couple of times won't kill you either.

Ty Cooper

Just fucking die already. I am so tired of cheeto and everything he has done.

David

Eternal hunger is a shape-changing weapon. He could easily have changed it from a guitar to a sword or an ax or whatever he wanted to cut him up into tiny little pieces

Greg

As Jake approached El he felt the gaze upon him and as he glared back at the moon, he knew, he knew El'haken truly is the Celestial Child, and he knew what he needed to do. Using touch of the malefic viper he began to clear El'haken of the poison ravishing his body, he needed to save the Celestial Child. **Thump**

NovaZero

Slayer of False Fables lesssgoooo

Tommy

Yeah corrected myself. Will add it to the edit!

Colton

Wow that's pretty good. Gas light the world and yourself into a story, sprinkle in stealing a gods power of making stories up. I bet even the gods of the moon or sun would just shrug and say good enough

RJ

I hate cockroach villains with a passion!

David

We still have the ritual we're waiting to finish. If it leads to the destruction of his planet, all that Faith energy that he receives will disappear. Plus, if his delusion is based upon being a celestial child, if he allows the planet to be destroyed that would be a giant crack in that delusion. I also like the idea that Jake destroys the moon and or somehow the sun. That would entirely destroy the entire myth that he has created about himself

Victor Desantiago

This is interesting. this is a perfect example of how bloodlines are outside the system. The question is who has the more OP bloodline. … And I’m still dying to find out about the bargain.

Mateo Lopez

I KNEW IT! We have yet to see his Twin Moon Aspect!! What do we think? Will El’ Cheater pull out some Ice magic he hasn’t shown yet?

Gafgarion

eh not a fan of characters just leapfrogging in power with no effort. So what EH can just perform a ritual and believe really hard, announce that this isn't even his final form and gets massive no strings power boosts out of the blue with no down side? Yips power isn't storytelling it's deus ex machina in skill form. really hope this fight doesn't get handwaved away and we get an actual conclusion from this.

MarineDebris

That's what I thought was getting ready to happen when Jake used Touch. It's probably the elf guy that's watching, holding the piece of the false god/fallen king. But man, I really just want this orange about to be gone already.

InfernoDroid

Celestial child is reborn, instantly gets a blade to the brain

Fatkage

TFTC

Bobmarley Bob

i wouldn't personally mind if the holy church revived him with a leaf of yggdrasil or whoever it is. but giving him this new skill randomly is a bit weird as a first impression. lets see though what the authors intentions are

Gafgarion

wished the eternal hunger arrow had more of an effect on the story for how it was hyped. right now all it did was make a temporary exit wound. curse and poison seems moot now that EH can evolve on a whim and ignore it all.

Higher002

The final blow has to be the planet blowing up... I just hope the church doesn't interfere by porting him away

Noir

If the orange bastard survives, we riot.

John Looney

So we get to see another bloodline so op it makes a transcendent ability in to a skill if eron gets one too they seem to be in relation to death defying so his might also be busted

Spencer Miller

The Legend of the Celestial Child skill either came from Yip’s blessing or the Usurping. It’s too Yip-like for anything else. The most similar thing we’ve seen, with the Errors and all, was when Bestial Survival Instincts upgraded to Moment of the Primal Hunter. In that circumstance, there was a skill that did something that the bloodline already did better, which effectively gave the bloodline itself a skill slot to use as it pleased. We know that, for example, Scales of the Malefic Viper started as a simple, passive defensive skill. Imagine that Jake, given that basic skill, would have done it better, doing the whole ERROR thing. I think that’s what this is. A more basic version of the Legend/Myth skill was based on the more fundamental concept of Delusion. Turns out that that EH’s bloodline is really good at Delusion, like Jake’s is at Instinct. The result? The bloodline first downgraded the skill (if it can upgrade it, why not downgrade?) to the version with a concept it dominated, then gained a free Delusion-themed skill slot. This implies some stuff about Concept-tiers, though. In particular, whatever Concept was at the core of Yip’s faith-using kit was Delusion at a lower tier.

Rewdan

OMD thanks Zogarth I can’t wait to hear Baldree read this 👏👏👏

John Looney

Does this mean moment of the primal hunter will also get a unique rarity at some point

Spencer Miller

I commented a more detailed reasoning for it elsewhere, but I have an idea why. Concepts come in tiers, where higher versions usually come with new effects (e.g. the ambitious -> avaricious -> horizon-chasing Concepts). This whole deals suggests that whatever Concept Yip used to work with faith… was an upgraded version of the Concept of Delusion. Ouch.

Johannes Sauer

Dann it Jake. Please carry a spare bow and actually use it if you need a spare. You are a hunter. Not an executioner

ItWasIDIO!!

Hmmm... as stated true villains(lower case this time) don't go down easily

Spencer Miller

I think that it’s because it relies on the a Concept of Delusion, which EH’s bloodline is already perfect at manipulating. Also implies that Yip’s faith skills used an upgraded version of Delusion.

Harbby

Ugh

Kerry Henson

EH is worse than a cockroach. Just die!

Vincent H

I have a feeling it was Jacob or someone from the church. They have a lot of interest in keeping EH alive and now that he’s transcended, no chance that they let Jake kill him.

Ben

Are we about to have a night/moon phase?

Aaditya Ravindran

So you mean to say Ell'Hakkan and the Desolate Child of Loss are now one being?

Sailesh Kumar Kumar

I think Jacob is watching nearby as they fight. I thought the fight was over but no problem still burn his orange ass as he is proud to be under sun

kinglemur

Fuck, is this another desolate child of loss situation

Ender419

Fucking great chapter!! Now the real questions that are plaguing my mind about to make me bade jump off this cliff without a bungie or parachute…. (1) Besides el focusing on this one single thought, did Jake add a little Jake juice to eternal thus allowing him to upgrade his skill? (2) Who the heck was watching on, the sun & moon or the person who released the desolate child, the true celestial child or the Auger? (3) WTF was Jake doing while this was happening? (4) Finally what will be the outcome of this evolution with the Jake & this unknown entity present as I can see someone kill snatching the usurper?

Dick Ramsey

I hope we finish Goku vs Rimuru before Christmas.

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Ty Cooper

Now Zog, if you make him just go through all these upgrades as he dies and still rots away in a pile of goop, just slower. I will probably fall out of my chair laughing hysterically on how you got me this morning.

Devillelouch

So Bloodline vs Bloodline and the Sacrifice Ritual activating. Who could be looking? It cant be Villy or he would recognize it. I dont think it is the Holy Mother, so Fallen King? So probably the system or the celestial child. The only other option is either the next antagonist/First Sage shenanigans/random primordial that all seem unlikely.

Klown Keidra

So is this where the ultimate cross over happens, The True Celestial Child, Bi De, come to the multiverse. Jokes aside, I wonder how this will play out. The Celestial Child backstory makes him sound a bit more benevolent, so the twisted delusion will be interesting.

ForgotPants

Umm...wot. How many lives does this vodka-less screwdriver have?! Bonkers. Sun and Moon vs Jake gonna be lit.

mitchell kaiser

By the way Zogarth I was dying laughing at the recap for book 11. Thanks for the laughs

Endern

That Faith energy would have nowhere to go... except someone is watching the fight, probably the same person who took that Desolate Claw. I think they will use the Faith energy to "revive" the Desolate Child. What an amalgamation that would be containing Records of a False God, a Unique Being and even a Bloodline (well not an actual Bloodline, just Records related to it, but who knows, Zog may just throw EH into the pot entirely).

Jordan Rogers

I’m not saying it isn’t cool, but it does seem like a sufficient end to a well developed villain already. Feels like a a false god set up more than a possible redemption arc

Trugath

Is the real celestial child watching.

shawn B

When will this damn fight end, and EH be done for good.

Victory Holcomb

The person watching has to be Eversmile, right?

Jamison Schneider

Probably, but it seems like Agent Orange rushed/forced his which is why the system was ping pinging between it being an upgrade or downgrade, power at the cost of all sanity and rational, it's powerup through psychotic break

Christian Sullivan

Can't just die like a dog, you have to eat all the chickens too huh?

IFL

I am really confused about what in particular element of his bloodline ability could force a reincarnation skill. I get the manipulating of emotions to the point of delusion part, but without it's basis being deeply rooted in survival and related instincts (like Jake's is), what aspect of that turns wishing upon a star (or twin moons) into reincarnation? I'm not sure if it's interplay with his usurped legacy, but even with countless other gods and mortals believing in him, Yappy's path didn't allow for reincarnation or survival based on faith energy. Also, unsure if any synergy from this would be affected by his giving in to hopelessness. Openly acknowledging all his achievements as being based on a lie and wishing to actually be a special boy doesn't seem to fit that path. Look forward to finding out, but in the meantime, any interesting theories?

TheWorld

Idk, the first upgrade already felt a bit too much, but then another? I just feel like flashback power ups are always the easy way out for authors, but I believe in you and that you wont drag it out too much

Allan

I feel like it was because cheeto's bloodline couldn't push the skill rarity to something beyond mythical so it ended up being a unique rarity which is technically below mythical.

Numbzy

Did we read the same chapter? The entire ego of El'Hakan is basically dead. He had to abandon all sense of self to get that power up. Combined with his bloodline it give a very appropriate power for him as well. It's not like the ability to doesn't fit him perfectly.

Grey Grick

Doesn't that make another unique liform he has to kill?

David

It would have to be the I think you're right about the desolate child part at least. It would have to be the desolate child wouldn't it? I mean it couldn't be Mr smiles, the universe is still closed even to the weakest of avatars correct?

Endern

So as I interpreted this scene is that Ell'Hakan's ego died leaving behind a blank canvas of a mind, a desire and a Bloodline that was explicitly stated in this chapter can influence memories too. Add to this the Mythical skill as a foundation and System shenanigans, in this case the synergy, and these aspects gave birth to a new ego, an Absolute Delusion, because there is nothing left of EH only CC.

Adam McCarter

Could be Jacob watching and he may have seen this fate from EH before the fight. Maybe he wanted to witness a truly rare event of the multiverse and I could see him trying to broker peace between Jake and someone who isn’t EH anymore.

Clint

I don’t think it’s really a reincarnation skill. It’s a delusion that he really is the reincarnation of the first Celestial Child, the lie he’s told for so long. I *think* it’s just an even stronger boosting skill plus a new personality. As to why his Bloodline was activated, it’s not survival but his emotions, I think. He was used to manipulating his own emotions for power and this is just the extreme of that, combined with the way faith and will and belief give real power in this universe.

David

I don't think it can be Mr smiles. The universe is still closed to the gods of other universe, even their weakest avatars, isn't it?

Evernap

Oh shiii

Evernap

He literally swallowed a god based on turning stories to reality a handful of chapters ago

Endern

Universe is still closed to everyone except the original natives and Vesperia.

Lynderyn

Was this the outcome of the experiment Smiley was/is running, the creation of a unique life form?

Mrburns93

Yappys path allowed for delusion to become reality elhakans blood line allowed one to truly believe. The two mixed and now we have what ever abomination zog is about to create.

John Looney

Unique isn’t a sign of strength or rarity but a moniker of origin beyond recapturing like Jake’s mask went from legendary to unique not because its effects got better but because how its was tied to the true soul of the fk like I bet there are divine quality skills that say unique instead

Lynderyn

Nah, OF will be the target of Jake’s evolution quest later, maybe to become S rank.

Steven Crowe

Why is it always the slow walk up while someone is on their last legs giving them a chance to recover? It's stupid every time

CaptainFlowers

If Cheeto doesn't die and ANOTHER person gets yoinked away by a god imma flip lol

GrimeyPu

My hope is cheeto boy pushes Jake to pull out his own bullshit, like vs Valdemar. It would only be fair.

InsaneHyde

The "Absolute Delusion" is what I'm having issue with. How is it even a Delusion if his last thought was doubting it? It's one thing to go to your death with your delusions but doubt undermines the idea of Delusion

John Looney

Kinda my guess it’s the same kinda thing as moment being a transcendence in principle but to much tied to the bloodline for the system to label it like that because that would reward the bloodline to much so it’s just a skill upgrade

InsaneHyde

delusion is a false fixed belief that is not amenable to change in light of conflicting evidence.

Brian

First time ever commenting, and I know Zog doesn’t really care what we think…but this strikes me as BS. There are other outcomes that could have resulted in him not dying that would have made sense…but at Grade C this guy just can’t be killed cause…he’s delusional? We’ll see how it plays out but for the first time in over a thousand chapters I’m really unsatisfied with the direction this is going.

Will Murry

I disagree I think it makes perfect sense with a combination of his and Yip's paths combined

John Looney

Like his reincarnation comes with the delusion and he’s a different person now because of it maybe less of a manipulative fuck lmao or just a straight frenzied beast

Gwiddion

I disagree he just never went all out and had to face dying. Also him minfucking himself to get stronger is definitely sth I can imagine.

Mrburns93

Man I was looking forward to this chapter because I was hoping for some sweet bloodline shenanigans. Looks like I got some blood line shenanigans after all

Psyck0

It probably our sly little elf who is the "one" who is ploting with his god most likely

jord

A lesson Jake will hopefully learn from this debacle.

Jacob Feliciano

Jake: what the absolute fuck is he doing now. Villy: he's beginning to believe

Gafgarion

I just don't see the potential loss of self as a negative for EH. He's getting what he's always wanted, his lifelong dream of actually becoming the Celestial Child. in fact, ill say that if EH is truly "gone" now, then he won. He completed his goal. went from slave to ruler to false-god and at the last min, his wildest desire becomes reality and becomes the CC. So what now? If EH is gone-gone, does Jake continue his fight with this new being that isn't EH or will CC be antagonistic due to EH influence or should I just shut up and wait for tomorrow? /shrug

Undeadviewer

What the other guy said + the fact he now has an abundance of records and is fighting for his life vs one of if not the strongest person in their galaxy/universe. I’m really not surprised he’s getting some insane skill level ups

kingofshibainu

Transcendence? No, bloodline shenanigans with yip of yore legacy. Another false God probably. Now. Who is going around collecting false Gods in the Milky Way? The next villain? This would tie in nicely with the desolate child stuff. Still think Jake wins but it's going to be harder.

Undeadviewer

He’s doubting it but his bloodline is going into overdrive. Kinda like what Jake’s bloodline did when stormild did that contract and it fought back without Jake seriously meaning it too(as far as I remember).

IFL

That's a large part of what confused me given his open acknowledgement of the lie. Id also thought off the improved boosting skill aspect, but what had been the boosting skill was lost and then replaced with a new skill, though I have no idea whether or to what extent elements of the original have been retained by it. Also figured that a higher level boosting skill should just mean pushing further before it starts causing damage rather than healing existing damage.

brjenness

two options: 1. Jake notices something weird is happening and kills hi. 2. Jake waits to see what is happening. celestial ends up being cool dude. they join order. his fanatics become Jake's storm troopers. those 2 I'm ok with. 2 options i don't like. celestial drives Jake off planet. or a long drawn out fight ensues that Jake eventually wins.

Hussein Zenki

so his whole path just changed, either a transcendence or a bloodline further awakening, he truly believes he’s the celestial child now and basically is

Bent Sommer

I really don't get why his emotion based bloodline leads to a "system error"/evolution. It would be fitting for YoY's path but that wouldnt force the system to crash!

Mantiqore

This isn't really a deus ex machina, but boy does it feel like one

Rahsheem Reid

I can’t believe Jake didn’t double tap him from distance before getting close. A second thought tho if he is bound to the planet/moons in some way Villy could end up getting El in the bargain.

Darryl Williams

I think the person watching is the holy church, waiting to snatch the corpse of EH so that they can revive him later. Second guess would be that false god. Either way, I’m excited to see a battle between powerful bloodlines, though I am ready for this fight to end.

Matt Spratte

Sorry i bet cheeto was gonna die for sure this chapter, so now i gotta fork over 100 bucks

Allan

Surely, he would have done better than some like Ell’Hakan... some -> someone

InsaneHyde

Says Unique Skill.I think something becoming a Unique lifeforms on death's doorstep is underwhelming the specialness of a Unique lifeform

Daniel is ŁØNE

Can't say I like this at all, feels like a way to forcefully keep him in the story. You can't expect me to believe that at C-grade, Not S, A or B, at fucking C-grade he was able to prevent his death simply because he was ultra-delusional at his moment of death, like what? It would be one thing if this was stated as part of his bloodline prior so we had a precedent, but nah this is literally an out of the blue dues ex machina that had absolutely no precedent, hell even Yip of Yore couldn't believe himself to victory or survival against Villy, so it makes no sense that Cheeto can do this nonsense even if he usurped Yips path. And isn't jake planning to destroy the planet anyway, so what was the point of this, if this catastrophic bloodline somehow survives this situation I am honestly gonna be kinda pissed, I've been waiting for this ill fated relationship to come to an end for so long since I never really care much for Cheeto as an enemy and you are telling me that there is a chance he is gonna overstay his welcome even more. His bloodline is pretty much a karmic plague, only way I don't get annoyed by this is if this reincarnation has a totally different bloodline without all Cheeto's bullshit and no memories to fuel a possible rematch because I honestly don't care much for some re-hashed version of Cheeto neither as an enemy or ally.

Allan

The skill evolved from his boosting skill, so maybe it’s something like SS’s transcendent? The skill name is absolute delusion, it’s basically cheeto becoming so engrossed in his lie that he genuinely believes he’s the reincarnation of the celestial child, so his strength probably depends on people’s perception of the legend, which is high as fuck. But due to it’s unique rarity, maybe the change is permanent, and not just a temporary boost that he can activate?

Gustavo Claude

In this case, it's because Jake isn't satisfied with the fight. It's coherent. But I think it'll be a short revival. The world sacrifice still going on. It's the main star of this fight.

Yeslek Nnamhctits

If he lives. I fucking called it. Also please, God, not a last minute win a la YOY and altius

Daniel is ŁØNE

And even that god could not believe his way to survival at the end, there is nothing that makes this make sense, bro was a C-grade, he already had his fucking daft as hell krmic plague bloodline, a random upgrade at deaths door that makes him some reincarnating child of prophecy feels like something that should be so out of reach from a C-grade that isn't a unique lifeform that It is hard for this not to feel contrived.

Micah Molina

WTF!!! Lmao, I guess the Milky Way is filled with delusional people. Welp, I'm super curious how this turns out with how it said "the mind of another emerges". I wonder if this Celestial Child will have EH's memories?

Cnewton84

Honestly was going to be disappointed if the arrow one shot EH, and then the Naruto villain backstory played and I knew Zog was cooking something interesting up. Hope Jake gets credit for “killing” EH as his original ego is gone, and he can claim the planet for the bargain. At that point, killing CC or not doesn’t matter until B grade for the world wonder and Jake can get into better things in the meantime (equipment!)

VenL.C.

God Dammmmmit!

Thaynian

There’s always a downside but did you really think it would be easy to defeat a false God? He’s a divine being in the eyes of his people we’ve seen with the desolate child how faith energy and delusions can create such a being.

Liliumsaccatum97

...it was then that Jake fell on him, stabbing and hacking with both his Katar and eternal hunger, making minced meat of what was left of el'hakan. He then left only a bloody pile of rotten orange slob behind and flew back home to play with silphy. End

Gustavo Claude

I think he'll continue to be EH. The new part of his story is that he is the son of the sun and moons. I read that changes like something similar to The moment of Primal Hunter. The apex of his bloodline power. Overwriting the reality, similar to YoY powers, feeding of them. But I think that choice should be deliberated, rewriting his story as a ultimate weapon, not while he is fainting. The feeling of doubt of the readers would be more blend to most, because he is already desilusional, he has the YoY powers and dominates his bloodline for centuries.

AfroMocha

The minute they started playing his backstory and he mentioned the moons I was like it’s not over. He’s only used the sun

Pheo

I mean Jake still has his Valdemar moment and the planetary core offering cooking so he will get his fair share of fight back power ups.

AfroMocha

The system.cannot control bloodlines. As minaga complained about endlessly. And Cheetos power is very weird. if you can dilute an entire world and into believing he’s the celestial child then why couldn’t he use his bloodline to do that to himself. It tracks in the system error is because I don’t think his bloodline is supposed to work against himself. He’s supposed to be immune to its effects.

AfroMocha

Would be pretty fucked up is Jacob set everything in motion knowing Cheetos would get a power up like this as it's beneficial to the church.

Dan Redmond

Eh needs to die already. Jake has bigger things to do, his friends back on Primordial 4, the seat, and definitely Artemis!

Robert Warner

Going to guess the mysterious onlooker is the king of peepers, Eversmile. My bet on who collected the child of desolation too. Some experiment with false gods? Cheetos evolution makes some sense, he has essentially brainwashed himself. The system has recognized that, but it's interesting to not that the system did not necessarily upgrade the skill. I believe it's been mentioned that unique does not mean overpowered. The system upgraded and downgraded the skill , could be more lateral than anything else.

Abhishek

Good. Let the real battle begin!!

SinCinnamon

Well, he is the Usurper of Yip of Yore. And his bloodline is top of the line too. If Jake’s can do some funky shenanigans, El’Hakan’s can too.

SinCinnamon

Don’t ever bet against another cliffhanger. This is Zogarth! The Master of all Cliffs! His path is based on cliffs! His skills all tied in those!

Corey Shelikoff

In the same way they we don’t know all that Jake’s Bloodline can do, we don’t know all that Cheeto’s can do. Jake has done tons of BS things but we love it because it’s fun and great. It’s not unexpected that the 2nd most powerful of their generation, someone recognized as a supreme genius as well, can pull off something similar. Bloodlines ARE cheats. It’s been mentioned multiple times, and they’re outside the control of the system. I am excited for Cheeto to finally die, but for him to have some BS revival is entirely true to the storyline and his own bloodline. It makes sense to me

brjenness

hilarious if we find out cc's bloodline is the same as eh and cc story was bs too

Deathcula

Seems like the way to go. Like all the other gods have paved the path

Solyom

If there is one thing I absolutely despise in any and all stories, is when someone, be it the hero or villain, survives something which they absolutely should not. When it's an antagonist, who has outlived their usefulness to the the story, doubly so. This seems like it fulfills both criteria. He was the BBEG in the C Grade, now it's time to build up a new villain. E.g.: I, the ridiculously poweful being, that killed the Fallen King. This feels too much like the author liked this character too much to kill off. To paraphrase William Faulkner: "Kill your darlings." We already got hundreds of chapters of El'Hakan, please do not turn the story into a shitty anime clone, where every defetaed villain joins the band as a new ally. Please.

Alex

I think the onlooker is Jacob; the 93rd Universe is still quarantined from the wider multiverse, particularly for the Gods. I’m not going to say it’s impossible that Eversmile found a way around the restriction because it’s fucking Eversmile, but I think the quarantine on the new universe is one of those things the System has a zero tolerance policy on, so I think it’s highly unlikely that even a Primordial could circumvent it.

Lizy Flore

Volume 11 resume is absolutely hilarious! I kept laughing-choking throughout 🤣🤣🤣

PinkAmber

Seriously? I just want EH to die, if he manages to live then I’m out

doctordirt

You should pack up then you clearly don't like the series enough to be paying 10 dollars

John Durrett

Might be more of a primal origins thing where from the Ashes of El, the true myth child of destiny will come into being. Not El reborn but the myth itself given life

IFL

So, if Jake is standing around with his hand on the face of a passed out EH, does that make him the Celestial Child molester

TKOva

It's a skill/transcendence. He sacrificed A LOT. And I think he is dying. But this is his power up.

TKOva

Jake is heavily weakened, so it's either today or tomorrow that EH gets defeated. And he's writing a crazier fight. Because we've only seen Jake go full Primal VS Valdemar

Quyan640

This reminds me of EsGod from Legendary Mechanic

TKOva

Especially with Yip being delusional and stealing people's records/stories.

John Durrett

To be fair I think most of us happily bought into Jake as a C grade creating a True Royal Queen into being using his blood line. I can handle a celestial child actually being born so long as it’s a good guy and not El’s bloodline

Ben

Double XP? Can Bertram just be farmed for xp?

Phoenixdrop

You know I’m seeing people say they want EH to die here but honestly I’m pretty sure he just did at the least his ego just died he isn’t even the same person anymore so who the hell knows what’s about to happen for all we know this guy could end up becoming friends with Jake

Blake Allen Thompson

Come on man, William 2.0?? "it wasn't REALLY me who did all that shit. I have a new brain now and "I" would never do something like that, let's be friends so you don't lose access to my unique power set in the future :)" Nah, no thanks I want cheeto man dead and a formation searching for his bloodlines reintroduction so jake can shoot an arrow from a few dimensions over next time it pops up. I'm tired of this "I brainwashed everyone into thinking I'm the good guy" story.

TimeDrawsNigh

Based on the sequence of events, he did die. It looks like his Bloodline, in a last act of defiance created a Unique Lifeform (new Truesoul and everything).

TKOva

Well Unique beings are creature of legend like the Celestial Child, Minaga, King of the Forest, their name are their titles. So I could see it. But at the same time the Celestial Child is gonna fuck Jake up. But he'll finally find the push he needs.

EmmericH.

I hope Zog is cooking something great, because I'm really bored with Hellakan, I appreciate that not just Jake who is op and has some Deus ex machina up his sleeves, but I truly hope it's not just going to be " And Hellakan fled with newfound strength and resolve" and still having him in the background to be a pain in the ass for longer in the story, just my opinion

Renn

I mean, he may have just gotten an ego death. But he’s probably still gonna die. This is just a way to drag out fight

TKOva

YoY himself said he deluded himself with envy to create his transcendence. Each transcendence and power is due to records and requires sacrifice. And they've been talking about resurrection based on faith for a LONG time. And I want a REAL fight. Not this weak fight we've seen. Where survival is a hairs breadth of difference. And now Jake is fighting someone who diametrically opposes his views. A true enemy. Someone who he truly hates. Someone Jake views as an actual rival and that wasn't the fight he wanted. It was anti climactic af. And Zog knows. I feel at the end of the week, our Cliff is going to be Jake turning on his bloodline fully.

Myke IsHere

hmm just in time for Villy's POV on the Pylon bargain to eat a new Reincarnation skill from a Wanna-be False God?

Zizawah

That’s why planetary sacrifice becomes super relevant. No followers, no faith. EH dies. Finito!!!

William WIlson

Personally I think Ell’Hakan created a skill in which he can incarnate another celestial child. By now means will this skill rebirth Ell’Hakan but it would allow him to basically pass his path down to another random person before he dies. Think of the way he explains the celestial child of old and how he took that mantle. Now imagine that happening again with a different person whose born at the time Ell’Hakan’s dies.

Solyom

I stopped reading one of the best novels I've ever read exactly because of a storyline like this. And reading the comments on that novel, I wasn't the only one. Not even close. A smart man learns from others mistakes. The author of the other story definitely had a vision as well. It must have been better than mine, too. But I can recognize the exact mistake that stopped me from continuing what once was my favorite novel.

Solyom

The power up was the skill evolution from legendary to mythical. The second one was bs, imo.

Gafgarion

yaa I keep forgetting about the bargain...we'll see what sort of shenanigans shake out from that.

KenTX325

Read it twice and I still don’t understand. Is EH going to die and get a mythical power up at the same time? At level 303 in a universe populated with gods, S,A,and B grades who can’t do this? While Jake is 10 feet away standing there with his thumb up his ass? After EH has been hit with a huge curse, poison, and physical damage? Will new EH also get his equipment, followers, and control of planets? Will Jake be stuck with a damaged bow till the end of the event? What is going on with the negotiations for the planetary pillion? It’s getting messy.

NoctisMi

So this Celestial Child can't have Elhakans Bloodline, right? Because, like Villy said "You are your Bloodline" connected to the true soul, so elhakan getting replaced by the CC means the bloodline is gone. Hope the comments won't explode tomorrow. People get really riled up here as soon as the CC is going to stay alive🙃

King Nereus

I think it’s all the faith energy at play, mixing with YoY’s legacy and EH bloodline.

TKOva

Nah he's not gonna William. William was a set up for the Malefic Vipers power up. This is completely different and has been set up for a long time.

King Nereus

Villy circumvented it to save Jake before the local galaxy part of the event ended, so clearly it is possible. Now that the rules have relaxed for this galaxy, it’s probably easier for Eversmile to sneak in and take a peak.. I think it’s more likely to be Villy, since he’s part of the divine bargain. We still haven’t seen all of this from his POV yet.

CaptainFlowers

That's a weak ass reason. EH IS being played out far to long. I enjoy the series too but shit I and others can say a character or aspect is weak while still enjoying the end product. Personally I'm tired of the Cheeto. If Zog whisks him away again it'll feel like just plot armor/author's favorite. Or that he doesn't know what to do with him.

Alex

Villy only partially circumvented the quarantine on the 93rd universe through a confluence of circumstances that involved his Chosen overclocking one of his legacy skills while carrying around a drop of his Blood - one could argue he wasn't even acting in the 93rd universe since his actions exclusively effected the Truesoul of his Chosen, who just happened to be in the 93rd universe at the time. Even with all those factors working in his favor, the System STILL slapped him for what he did (recall, while Villy's Transcendent skill doesn't actually cost him anything, he says the System threw a fit and gave him backlash for saving Jake's life during the System Event). Again, I'm not saying it absolutely isn't Eversmile, I just think it's incredibly unlikely since the System doesn't want the Gods to do anything in the 93rd universe yet.

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter! What I’m hoping is that E”H still dies right now, but the celestial bodies that the planetary population have been worshipping for centuries now come into play. E”H absolute delusion rouses 4 false gods and we have a completely new crazy scenario start up that pushes Jake to leap forward, and maybe even drags Villy into it through the ritual.

Corvid

And now, we get to see the power he usurped from Yip finally. "Believe in something so hard that you make it reality" and all that. Makes me wonder if its related to Yips transcendence skill. Plus we still haven't seen the big ole' glass of Jake Juice empowered Moment yet either.

Benjamin Warlick

If Jake was in that situation his whole inner primal hunter thing would have activated. Given that EH’s bloodline is also pretty up there, I was basically expecting something like this to happen.

Corvid

Gotta realize we haven't seen what he stole from Yip yet. Yip, the guy whose whole shtick is believing the crap out of something until it becomes real. Like say, believing that a mythical hero of legend was reborn to fight the big scary dangernoodle gang.

Death56

It seems he used his bloodline on himself to delude himself and so the system turned it into a skill which I assume is on a time limit or transcendent

BumAssBumAss

Don't think it is either. Sword saint stated that the system explicitly stated his "Springtime advent" was transcendent. Time limit is a bit more up on the air, but I don't think there is one. Ell"Halen's ego is gone and replace with a new ego believing himself to be the celestial child through and through. We don't have enough information yet.

Micah Molina

For sure, i was also thinking about the people on Earth and not just the one in the story lol. I guess that's why so many on Team Earth are primed to defeat the odds of achieving divinity lmao.

Chase Songer

Many people dislike the idea of Ell’Hakan surviving as the Celestial Child. Still, I like it and don’t see why so many people are being critical and saying they might stop reading. Still, I guess it is their opinion anyway. Thank you for this fantastic story so far, Zogarth. I love reading it and hope you continue it for a long time. I’ve been having a rough time recently. My Guinea pig has osteosarcoma, and I’m taking classes to become a nurse, so I’m in a little bit of an emotional rut, but reading this every morning always picks me up and makes me feel better, so thank you.

Jayson Legott

Is this a transcendent skill? It seems powerful so it’s cost most be equally at bad. If it’s true reincarnation perhaps he looses some memories?

Fleetpanda

This is awesome. But I’m not a fan of Jake slowing down instead of going for the kill. This slow float to the ground and walk of pity is totally outside what I’d expect from a seasoned fighter. You don’t stop till the fight is OVER. Not mostly over, not seconds from over… he should have zipped in and ripped El to pieces the second his arrow landed. If this lends to a more epic fight with the same outcome then it’s fine, but if El survives bc of this it’s kinda BS Edit to clarify: Idgaf is el lives or dies narratively. But it should make sense. One of the peak fighters of the multiverse shouldn’t be making rookie mistakes like giving an enemy time instead of finishing them off.

Alejandro Piña

I think that the cc is just gonna be a Demi god tied to the planet… which is in the process of being traded.

J W

So since elcheeto is technically dead and no longer the system approved planetary owner does that mean now Jake's claim is recognized?

Devillelouch

Eversmile has never spied on him but I dont know why Villy would not be the broadcaster. Unless Villy and Valdemar are already duking it out.

James Dalton

I have so many emotions.

A. B. Edwards

I honestly wonder the name of El'Hakkan's bloodline. I doubt it is a Primal Series (my name for any Primal bloodline, Jake can't have the only one) Bloodline but it is powerful. And it works with Yip's legacy perfectly. Instead of turning legends others believe in into reality, you delude yourself and turn your delusions into reality. And this brings back that scene of Villy making Sagacity. The Sage said you simply need to put in enough effort and reach proper understanding and the System will do the rest. That El'Hakkan got this skill is no surprise. What I wonder now is who is the original Celestial Child? Granted this is not him but the myth version of him. Just like how King Arthur from history is not the same as the one from myth. This is the idealized version so will he maybe be someone Jake can get along with? That would be a twist if this false Celestial Child ended up friends with Jake.

Jason Beard

I agree. Especialy since at the Core he is a Hunter. Behaving like a Warrior, feeling Pity for his opponent and giving him a chance to turn things around just seems out of Character. ... Well it could be attributet to mindfuckery but from els pov it didnt seem like he used that

anders

I think Jake has to have the only primal bloodline. Otherwise we would have had people doing Kevin shanagins previously, and we have no evidence of that. Jake’s bloodline is ment to be unique.

Mitchell Calhoun

Honestly this is kinda bullshit. It doesn’t fit Jake’s character at all for him to take his time killing El. He’s a hunter, he goes for the kill until he has it. I would have rather it have ended with him dying in regret. This feels like it came out of nowhere, didn’t it basically accomplish what Villy spent eras trying to do?

anders

Mabye the reason he didn’t do that is his instincts told him it would be fine to take it slow. Jake listenes to his instincts. If We’ve already seen that cheatos bloodline is outside of Jake’s contro.

anders

I don’t think he’s getting replaced I think he’s just fully becoming his bloodline.

anders

I kinda agree. He was cool for a while and I think right now the ending is going in a fine direction but I hope he dies for good soon.

BumAssBumAss

I disagree. Just because ell'hakan's ego is gone doesn't mean that his bloodline is gone. Bloodlines are rooted in the true soul as you stated, but true souls don't do anything except hold your records. It does nothing and everything at the same time.

NoctisMi

But I think it would be the same when Jake had his talk with the Malefic Dragonkin version of himself. That version was still jake but diverged from his true self so he lost his bloodline. I think elhakan is far worse there since he himself is gone so the bloodline should be gone too

Mat

I think it more like a transcendent ability of his bloodline

TyranT-Rex

I think it's probably at the level of a transcendence. If his bloodline didn't have anything to do with it it likely would have been a transcendence.

Mat

From the little we have, I still think it a transcendent ability of his bloodline. This does not make him a transcendent like SS.

BumAssBumAss

There's a theme of children right now. The celestial child and the previous desolate child. The creator of the desolate child could be on ell'hakan's planet.

Azazel

I think Cheetoh is truly dead and this “believed into existence Celestial Child” is going to be some kind of Bound God. There’s even a small chance this new CC isn’t a total douche-canoe and an even smaller… (Tiny. Minuscule. Infinitesimal.) chance he/it becomes some kind of ally

Azazel

I may not be crazy about this development but gotta give credit where it’s due that was a twist I did not see coming

Mat

With Jacob waiting to resurrect EH/CC even if he dies 🥺

Mat

Jake does not have a lot of friends but a delusional guy leading a cult?

Benjamin Mages

That's assuming what comes out the other side is still El'Hakkan. I'm willing to bet actual money that it isn't. Turning someone who just is in the process of dying into another type of creature is probably extremely possible, much more so than reviving someone whose true soul is gone.

Mitchell Calhoun

Yeah after reading through all the comments I’m less on board with my original comment. More thinking it’s a unique life form formed from El’Hakkan’s feelings on who the Celestial Child was.

Unlisted Pokémon Hudson

He’s dead for sure. This is actually the celestial child now. But seriously this is so cringe he just becomes delulu and gets possessed?

Benjamin Mages

We've already been told that the thing that killed the Fallen King is critically weak to what Carmen has become. If it's a major threat, it'll just be contrived when we've already been told exactly how to counter it.

Hunter

Definetly a huge twist. I wonder if he created a false god like the desolate child? Because the son and moon aren’t actual gods.

Death56

I'm imagining something similar to what Jake did against valdimir

Jayson Legott

It’s of the unique rarity the only other time we’ve seen unique is in bloodlines. I don’t think we’ve actually seen a system notification about transcendent skills yet so maybe transcendent skills are actually just unique.

TyranT-Rex

My guess is the mysterious person that collected the desolate child

Akumo

Does anyone else think that EH turns into a god powered by the belief of the population of the planet, the ritual to destroy the planet kills the planet/the believers/ends the faith power and then Jake gets to have the god killer record for a sweet power up? Maybe with the bonus reward for sacrificing a planet being used to "let" him kill the god?

Greg Lambert

I wouldn't mind Jake and him ending up friends. My vote is either they become the 'bestest' friends and go attack the church, or he has a final death and be done with him. I would enjoy having them take on the church and put Jacob to the test.

Michael Fannon

What!? How!? Why!? I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS!!!

Azazel

Yeah a False God holds more water than a Bound God since it came from Faith/Belief I think you’re right

Greg Lambert

Also, when book 11 hit my list today, I read the prologue before leaving for work. And I remember a few months ago how mad Zogarth was at us for people complaining about the length of Nevermore. He did a good job toning down the anger and just poked more fun at readers and himself. I appreciate how he was more tongue-in-cheek about it. He was a Jake -- 'you've messed with my people' mad. Thanks for not yelling at us all over again.

Sean

Imagine having a transcendence built on delusion, Zogarth shocked me with this one

kingofshibainu

That's actually brilliant. If Elkie is did and something else takes his place tied to the planet, we get another lost wandering false God who might be sacrificed with the planet

Lizy Flore

I tend to agree with Edwards on that. I don’t think the Primal Bloodline is unique to Jake. Is Jake the first to have one ? Sure. Is he the Patriarch of the Primal *Hunter* bloodline ? Also sure. But, remember, at his C-Grade evolution ? They’re were ten paths, all equal, all leading to the « pinnacle ». The « Hunter » was only one out of ten. And with Jake being some king of evolved race of human, I doubt he’d be the only one. (One of my theories is that we’ll see more appear throughout the era, or in the following eras maybe.) I think he is only the first precedent, personally. Also, imagine what a Primal Creator could do ? Primal Ruler ? Primal Slayer ? (Yes I checked book nine) those would be insanely badass to read about, don’t you think ?

Ryan Linus

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

Kevin Watson

Ell’Hakan is starting to remind me of a character from “Hardcore Leveling Warrior,” whose abilities were tied to him lying to others, himself, and reality, and the lies being believed causing him to gain real power

Mat

Jake win? A transcendent ability amplifying home-world advantage, Jake will need a lot of Jake juice to escape this one.

Kevin Watson

if i remember correctly Jake has had like three skills get forcibly evolved due to his bloodline, and they didn’t count as transcendental skills, it’s pure bloodline fuckery. we’ve also seen proof that massive amounts of faith can accumulate into real divine effects, and this planet has been worshiping their celestial bodies literally forever. Perhaps Ell’hakan’s desperation and delusion combined with his bloodline allowed him to manipulate the emotions and memories of the pseudo god sun and moon AND himself making it so all of them truly see each other as family?

Kevin Watson

has jake used much magic in this fight? i also don’t exactly remember what was going on with the desolation energy inside of him, anyhow i do think he could really use a midfight buff now, no matter how this celestial child shit goes down it’s not good, and jake is already starting to get tired and his bow is weary

Tsunami

Did...did this story just turn into a Shounen Manga? Plot Armor enacted. Power of the Cockroach initiated. You're only missing the power of friendship ingredient in order to go full Gundam.

Mat

Now moving to the “The Primal Hunter vs Celestial Child” phase

Irakli Jishkariani

Haaaah, this would have been proper ending. Guess it's going to be dragged till Monday at least 🙄😒

Michael Ferguson

So the mask can still summon the king right? Did the Fallen King come to watch the fight? Or is some god watching who wants to ressirect Ell'Hakan? I want Villy to charge a premium for this corpse. This is still a system event, so probably not a god. I would like to know what the system event is right now. All the prema's are dead right?

Ryan Ulrich

This was interesting, overall the fight seemed a little, idk, less intense than some of Jake’s other bouts? Still good overall, and I’m interested to see where this ending goes.

TyranT-Rex

I don't think it's forced. At least not any more forced than what Jake did against Valdemar in the colosseum. No one could have predicted that Jake's bloodline would/could do something like that. EH manipulating himself to give himself a split personality recognized by the world is not as farfetched.

bennett emerson

And he shall henceforth be known as the Celestial Cockroach !

TyranT-Rex

I think it's whoever went and picked up the desolate child/fallen king after that fight.

Richard Rader

All the primos in the Milky Way galaxy are dead, we’re waiting for the rest of the 93rd Universe to catch up.

Landon Tucker

Very strange for Jake to not immediately go for the kill. Not very apex predator of him.

Michael Ferguson

Hmm, ok. Do they all suck, or is someone out there waiting to see how Jake resolves this.

TyranT-Rex

If your talking about the guy that collected the remains of the fallen king and desolate child then I'm on your side.

Harbby

The Fallen King is presumably dead after fighting the False God. But he may be sleeping/recovering inside the mask.

Quyan640

Reminds me of Fang Yuan’s brother from Reverend Insanity

Salguod

"And as he called to his parents, they heard his plea." And they responded with "New phone, who dis?"

Salguod

For real though, the fight is over, zogarth is just messing with us. He's not coming back from missing a third of his body with Jake standing right over him ready for the kill. Not to mention the new skill is literally called 'delusion'

hachetnif

Jake screwed up.I knew he should've destroyed Everything, including the soul.

Daniel is ŁØNE

I mean You can't really say his bloodline was really up there alongside Jakes, It was definitely a pinnacle bloodline for sure but Jakes bloodline is far greater as unlike Cheeto it is not growing with him, it is actually constantly in a sealed state and he releases more of the barriers as he increases in grade. I think it is outright mentioned that despite them being C-grade now Cheeto's bloodline reached the peak of it's capabilities already and the potency and strength of it's effect has long since capped out otherwise his range of influence on Jake would likely have been enough to make this battle much shorter than it is.

Daniel is ŁØNE

Jake hates the bloodline nearly as much as he hates Cheeto himself, I just don't believe he would allow this bloodline to propagate itself in any form even if Cheeto's ego is gone. Regardless of the situation Cheeto or Celestial Child or whatever bullshit he wants to call himself is still a walking karmic plague and has already turned a planet into flesh puppets that worship his name, I can't imagine the incarnation would be any better even if it isn't inherently malicious.

Exaiter

Observer, system? Hmmmmmm

Exaiter

Ngl ill be mad as hell, just finish that yellow cunt. Thanks for chap, good shit

IFL

Interesting take, I like that the discussion is both showing how many different overall interpretations and nuances within similar ones are coming from it.

BumAssBumAss

Maybeso, but that situation is also vastly different than what is happening to ell'hakan. I do see the possibility that ell'hakan loses his bloodline, but its also too early to tell. We know so little about what's going on and the fact this is outside the system doesn't help.

Biggy smalls

I agree. EH was a great villain. But at this point it feels like plot armor is the only thing keeping EH alive. How can Jake be considered the Primal Hunter, the first ever High Human, and keep losing this fight? Why was Jake feeling pity over EH and slow rolling his hunt? I hope the bargain destroys the Celestial Child’s planet, his people of faith, thereby destroying CC/EH for good. That be a great twist death by Zog.

Biggy smalls

Exactly. Jake better kill CC or EH or whatever he calls himself these days. That bloodline has got to go. CC’s not going to undo the damage he did to the Nahoon people. Or stop expanding his faith based following/power base. Hopefully the bargain ends up killing CC.

Biggy smalls

Love this story, but I agree. EH was a great villain. But he’s been the big baddie for like 6 books now. I felt like the EH and Jake battle for supremacy hit its peak at the end of Nevermore. Since then I’ve been waiting for Jake to take EH out and stumble upon his new nemesis somewhere in the multiverse,

Biggy smalls

I hope so. I’m in the camp that believes EH was a great villain to Jake. But hopefully this doesn’t continue into B grade. If EH survives into B grade, Jake is a bad hunter. You can’t let your arch nemesis live for 6+ books.

King Nereus

I think myth given life is the best theory I’ve read so far. 1. EH has died. 2. Jake is going to get a notification of such and some levels to go with it. 3. This new entity is born and they have no issue with one another, and now not everyone on the planet needs to die to keep earth safe, because they didn’t lose their CC.(no revenge plot)

Daniel Hamilton

Well, here’s to hoping he has a evolution of his own and his bloodline evolves

King Nereus

Relax everyone. It clearly says EH is dead and a new entity has been born, right in this very chapter. Is it a little strange? Sure! But Zog likes to keep us guessing and he has succeeded wildly here, nobody could have predicted any of this,

Hotep Saxis

FIX: Surely, he would have done better than some(one) like Ell’Hakan...

Hotep Saxis

Reading this chapter again after some hours, it really is very good. Perfectly in line with what the system allows, given the faith energy, usurping Yip and what we know about how Yip was able to turn envy into power. Supreme Delusion as power makes sense. Similar to how Jake should have died in the tutorial to the King of the Forest. He passed out and his bloodline took over.

King Nereus

Maybe Jake intended for this to happen by using some Jake Juice on him.

Crjourdan

If he lives I am done reading for a couple weeks

Biggy smalls

Jake wasn’t going to die in the tutorial. The King of the Forest was going to let Jake live.

Hotep Saxis

He had just had his soul shattered and was unconscious. Jake had struggled for only a few moments, but it felt like ages. It was as if his head was on fire. When he was finally starting to get a semblance of control back, he was hit by it. A wave that hit him like nothing else before. He felt everything being shredded as it turned dark. He felt his mind break, and he was no longer able to think or act. He felt himself lose consciousness. And then… he did… THUMP! And as his mind faded, that which lay beneath came forth.

kinglemur

You forget though that Villy felt no killing intent and that Villy divined that Jake would’ve survived the tutorial and have a second chance at killing the king.

Hotep Saxis

Yeah, but Jake’s bloodline didn’t know that and neither did Cheetos. It’s consistent is my point.

CaptainFlowers

I've come back and reread and I'm still not satisfied. Why shouldn't this world manipulating asshole be straight up executed? For a superior B-grade plot? I'm tired of this asshole and his whole ass plotline, even with the WONDERFUL usurper plot. At this point we've stewed too long on him. I feel he's a C-Grade villain. If we have to deal with his emotional fuckery till A or S or beyond dude idk if I or ANYONE could deal with it. It's interesting ... but its run its course. And I love Zog, but can we do another grade or three of the same shit?

William WIlson

I can see the consistency you speak of however there are definitely differences. For an example when Jake did this we didn't get a new skill nor did we get the message switching between upgrading and downgrading. Makes me think that while Ell’Hakan’s Bloodline tried something similar to Jake's Bloodline it wasn't actually ssuccessful

William WIlson

I'm not so sure about sleeping, but the Fallen King will return after Jake does some ritual with some of that villy help. Maybe we get the Primal Fallen King.

Kuniku778

Expected plot twist, was expected. Jakes not in six different pieces, pulling out a solution from his ass, and the bad guy has to have several second winds defeating the purpose of the word second; absolutely.

Numbzy

99% sure that EH already has power of friendship.

SqrlyGrly

How long was it really? It was a few minutes to read but it might have only been seconds from the arrow hitting him that Jake got down there and used Touch. They have whole telepathic conversations in a second. They can think quick.

Derek

I've read a batch of comments and just wanted to toss a little love your way. I really enjoyed how you ended things with the Villy/Yip fight. Yip finding out what every other Primordial/Old God or Goddess, or whatever, who's been around since before Villy went on a rampage and into seclusion took for granted; namely, you're fucked...and not by a little. I'm enjoying the Jake/Ell'Hakan fight so much for the opposite take. Yeah, I think the emotionally abusive fucktard isn't a great villain, except he kinda is. Emotional abuse, especially the manipulative, subtle kind, is fucking awful. So I'm glad Jake didn't just curb-stomp his ass, but is having to work for this victory, and also making Ell-shitbag suffer some more.

David W. Baijense

Lol he gets a new title with something like: "Sacrificed a god to a Primordial"

KenTX325

Yes, but Eversmile could enter the forced socialization that occurred after Nevermore. Maybe he has a skill.

Azayrian105

Guys I know there is frustration and tension going on here but we are sounding a whole lot like Nevermore right now. Just trust Zog. He has been doing good this whole time and he hasn’t let me down and I know you all have enjoyed it. So let’s take a deep breath and see where it all goes.

Herbwick

This reminds me of dragonball z. He is just hanging out waiting for the enemie's "final form" so he can have the most rewarding fight. To be clear I am here for it and tftc!!

Naotani

My guess is, Cheeto turns into a unique life form (Celestial Child) tied to the myth of the planet, Jake tries to kill them, but can't kill them courtesy of his weakened state. Then, seconds before the CC can kill him, the divine bargain is finished and weakens the unique life form to a degree that Jake is barely able to kill them.

Anthony Smith

Definitely Jacob watching. He's got news for Jake after the fight. The holy church were the true schemers.

Anthony Smith

Gets possessed? Actually it makes a lot of sense. His bloodlines lets him mind fuck who he wants. Why couldn't he mind fuck himself to delete the ego of El Hakan and put in place the celestial child.

Amir McSwain

Look y’all can be mad but I hope EH or CC gets a power boost and lives to fight another day after this because I lost interest with him but after this I can be persuaded to be hooked for another 100+ chapters

Exodus Uno

It's similar as to when Jake picked bestial instinct in the tutorial and his bloodline forcefully upgraded it into Moment of the primal hunter. Or possibly similar to what jakes bloodline did in the valdemar fight

Cory wilson

Well I hope your wrong this is getting dumb and old kill him already I haven’t even read the last few chapters just waiting for it to end

Cory wilson

Jake can suffer and struggle through the fight and still finish it in a chapter or two so we could get back to enjoying the multiverse

Lizy Flore

Talking about elf World Leader Kindroth, head of a weird religion that says their lighty god invented the system. Also, I think he collected the remnants of Fallen King/ Desolate Child. So yeah, I’m talking about him. I don’t really see him as the next antagonist, but if I’m reading things right, then he might be. Plus I don’t see Jacob observe Jake. He’s never done that before, I don’t see why he would. Plus 93th is still closed, so I don’t see how gods could meddle ?

Allan

Skill Upgraded: [Legend of the Celestial Child (Legendary] --> [Myth of the Celestial Child (Mythical -> Skill Upgraded: [Legend of the Celestial Child (Legendary)] --> [Myth of the Celestial Child (Mythical)]

Jake Johnson

Then as Zogarth would say “Fuck off” he doesn’t need you on his patreon and he’s not gonna let you influence the story. He’s telling it the way he wants to tell it and if you don’t like it then just fuck off

Profile Name

I can’t be certain but fairly shure Bertram is classified as a “guardian” and technically never dies since his soul is bound to Jacob and therfore never provides XP. While EH/CC has some sort of true resurrection skill witch might give dubble XP on dubbel kill

brjenness

When u sit down on the toilet in the morning and open patreon, does anyone else sing,"it's the priimalll hunnnterrr." And do a couple bars of the keyboard solo...duh, duh, dunt, ta, duh

TyranT-Rex

The skill upgrade is more like when Jake's bloodline upgraded beastial survival instincts to moment of the primal hunter. Just that there were more synergies there with his bloodline, than EH, and myth of the celestial child.

doctordirt

Took the words right out of my mouth this shit is getting old to many complainers around here

doctordirt

I think that all the people saying that should just go ahead and stop reading I don't feel like seeing them bitch more about nonexistent problems.

Charles

Thanks Zog for the chapter. All these people complaining like they know how the book ends. Take a chill pill and enjoy the ride.

Ty Cooper

Nope but sounds like you have an interesting towel tradition

brjenness

I still think there is a chance they Don't want the bloodline...loyalty to cheetoh instead of church

KenTX325

He’s definitely not equivalent to the great bad guys such as Darth Vader, Voldemort, and Salron. At this point, I would prefer to see the first sage give Jake some impossible task. Something to fire him up and motivate him to improve like he was when he was in D grade.

Shaibene

What happens if Jake uses origins skill on El Hakan

SilverSentry

Jacob doesn't even fully trust the church. I have a feeling that will come to a head and he'll have to fully commit or he'll leave.

SilverSentry

I get what you're saying, but fuck... why did you say it like that? 🤣🤣

SilverSentry

Right? I appreciate it. If it was just straight forward death it would be upsetting. Jake will fucking love this shit. This is why the story is so good. Unexpected twists and turns are good and keep the audience on their toes.

Ansordia

I do "it'S PRIMAAAAAAAAAL TIMEEEEEE!" when i see that the clock is just after release

JJB4345_80_815

Yes, thank you for the chappy Zogarth! Although, I am glad that I waited days before reading this chapter, because having to wait 24 hours for the next chapter would have been tortuous. Also, Ell'Hakan finding a way to slip away from death is the epitome of teasing your readers. Jake better get a Transcendent Skill or something else utterly awesome out of this BS...

ABTelford

Holy crap it’s not over yet?!!! And - system, wtf are you doing?!?

Chloe

Awe man. Come on Jake. Get em. Tyftc

Roy

ty4c

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

kiwi

On another note, ain't no way bro gaslit himself into coming back from the dead.

Trumangolorian

That is exactly what happened. He manifested his own delusion into reality. Insane way to continue the fight.

Trumangolorian

Tyftc what an incredible come back. Taking the term delulu to a whole other level.