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From the very beginning, the Paths Yip of Yore and his Chosen walked were flawed. The flaw wasn’t extreme, and it wasn’t something that made it necessarily a bad Path, but it was a flaw nonetheless. One there truly didn’t appear to be any workaround for.

Their Paths both fundamentally revolved around lies. It was to make themselves appear as something they truly weren’t, gaining recognition and faith from others based on the false truth they represented. In many ways, Ell’Hakan’s Path was more complete than Yip of Yore, as the actual truth behind Ell’Hakan’s grand lie was far less well-known, and his Bloodline made convincing others of his truths far easier.

However, no matter how many people Ell’Hakan or Yip of Yore convinced of a lie, there would always be at least one person who knew the truth. One person who weakened the entire foundation of their Paths, as their Records of knowing reality couldn’t help but influence their skills. This person was naturally the one in the center of everything and the spreader of the lie:

Themselves.

Yip of Yore knew when he was lying. So did Ell’Hakan. They knew they were spinning tales to try and gain power, and in some ways, how couldn’t they? They were the Origins of their own stories, after all.

That was why someone like the Malefic Viper looked down on Yip of Yore’s Path despite recognizing it was powerful. In his eyes, it truly was just an inferior version of something Valdemar did accidentally.

Valdemar also gained power from legends and stories about him as they helped amplify his Records and, thus, even his entire faction. The difference was that these legends weren’t born from lies or grossly overexaggerated truths; they were merely tales of the War God’s actual accomplishments. He was just a showman by nature, and his innate disposition easily gave birth to new legends, certainly helped along by Gudrun actively promoting Valdemar’s feats.

This wasn’t something Ell’Hakan or Yip of Yore could accomplish. Not as long as they themselves knew, deep down, that the fundamental truth of their power was based on a lie. Yip of Yore had tried to fix this, tried to forget aspects of the lie to make them more truthful in his own mind, pushed it to the back of his memories, and even had a Transcendent that helped him take Records, making his claims closer to being “truth,” but in the end, he still knew it was all a lie.

It seemed like an impossible flaw to address until now.

On that day, Ell’Hakan overcame the weakness of their Paths... but at what cost? He had genuinely wished to be the Celestial Child in his final moments, and his Bloodline had made his intense desire become the truth... not by actually turning him into the Celestial Child of legends, but by genuinely making him believe he was.

 It was all a delusion... a lie so powerful he even fully believed it himself.

Jake... didn’t know Ell’Hakan wasn’t the “real” Celestial Child.

And now, neither did Ell’Hakan, and there was power in such a pure belief as now the only contradiction to Ell’Hakan’s truth were the Records of the system. Records the Usurper was now claiming as his own, mixing them with Yip of Yore’s Legacy, as something entirely new was formed, creating the grand illusion that was Ell’Hakan’s vision of what the Celestial Child of legend once was.

What and who he now was.

--

Jake had only activated Touch of the Malefic Viper for two seconds when he felt the change. Ell’Hakan was already dying; Jake could obviously feel that, and he hadn’t believed that the few seconds it would take for him to fully pass would mean anything. In fact, he’d believed that using Touch would be the fastest way to fully end Ell’Hakan as he corroded away the remaining vital energy of the Usurper. His opponent was already only hanging on through sheer Willpower alone and was as good as dead, which was why Jake hadn’t seen what happened next coming at all.

His intuition did warn him a moment beforehand, and Jake instantly tried to move forward to just stab Eternal Hunger through Ell’Hakan’s skull with the hope that he could speed things up, but he only got a single step before he stopped... was stopped.

The moonlight from above intensified as two concentrated shafts of light hit Jake, immobilizing him entirely as if his soul had been bound by ethereal chains. Right as he was snared, he saw Ell’Hakan raise a hand toward the sky as he spoke.

“Mothers... I’m here.”

Ell’Hakan began to slowly float off the ground as two shafts of moonlight also hit him and lifted him up. Jake quickly broke free from his restraints and moved to attack Ell’Hakan, but a shockwave of energy sent him sliding back, making Jake frown. Even if Ell’Hakan was clearly out of vital energy, he still had mana to work with. Jake was just surprised he could mobilize it in his current state... assuming it was Ell’Hakan mobilizing it.

Because the entire vibe the Usurper gave off had changed.

There was a feeling of aloofness in the air, and the mana was more powerful than before, with new concepts mixed in Ell’Hakan hadn’t used before. The fact he’d used the moonlight was also clearly different, but it shouldn’t come as a surprise considering the former Chosen’s moniker of the Celestial Child.

To be clear, despite the vibe around Ell’Hakan changing as if he’d become an entirely different person, it was clearly still Ell’Hakan. His soul was the same, and his mana signature was the same... but something had clearly charged inside of him.

Gotta finish him off before something else unexpected happens, Jake told himself as he pulled out his bow again. The weapon only had a few dozen seconds to rest since his last use, but much of the destructive energy that still lingered in its body was gone now, giving Jake confidence it would hold up.

Taking aim, Jake quickly charged an Arcane Powershot toward the floating Ell’Hakan. As the arrow was in flight, Ell’Hakan finally reacted with his one eye opening wide in an instant as his body exploded with mana once more.

He flung his own body upwards, carried by the moonlight to dodge the arrow. Jake responded by shooting another, only to be met with multiple barriers blocking him. Not to be deterred, Jake shot several more arrows as he made them curve around the many barriers. While the nahoom tried to block them all, he failed as several struck his already battered body, exploding on impact and worsening his wounds that were already looking pretty damn lethal.

Yet, despite the damage, Ell’Hakan kept floating upwards, and Jake got an even more odd feeling than before. Not quite one of danger, but his intuition still warned him, making Jake take preemptive action. He didn’t know if the guy planned on escaping or whatnot... but there was no way Jake was gonna let that happen.

Before he’d arrived on Ell’Hakan’s planet, Arnold had stopped by Valhal’s planet. He’d brought with him a few things, one of which Jake had been saving, unsure if he had to use it. Jake had held back on it for a few reasons... all of which should become clear upon reading the description of said item.

[Void Sphere (Unique)] – Can temporarily trap the user and another individual in a Void Sphere Dimension. Both targets must be C-grade or below. Activation time is dependent on the abilities of the user and the selected target. This Void Sphere is incomplete, causing the Void Sphere Dimension to not be wholly stable and giving it a severely limited duration.

First of all, yes, Arnold had succeeded in making a Void Sphere. Somewhat. Compared to the real thing, this one sucked ass with a lot of drawbacks, with Arnold not even knowing how long it would last or how long it would take to activate.

However, a Void Sphere was still a Void Sphere, and as Ell’Hakan floated into the air, Jake took out the item which just looked like a black tennis ball of glass. Focusing on the item and Ell’Hakan above, he felt his mana drain from his body as the item got infused.

Right then, Ell’Hakan also stopped floating upwards as he rose to stand upright. More and more barriers kept appearing, the Usurper burning through whatever mana he had left at a rapid pace, seemingly not caring about the cost at all.

“To find myself in such a state... how embarrassing,” the voice of Ell’Hakan echoed, but his tone was different. “Mothers, please banish the memories of seeing me like this from your eternal memories, and I swear I shall wash away the stain on my name.”

Jake kept activating the Void Sphere as Ell’Hakan barely regarded him but instead looked toward the sky and the moons. “Firstly, allow me to address the pathetic state of this body of mine... with help, if you will... from all of you.”

The final words echoed weirdly, and Jake felt something odd pass over him. A certain kind of emotion was triggered, not from the figure floating above but from the environment itself. However, before he could fully identify the cause, the Void Sphere abruptly activated as a black beam shot toward Ell’Hakan faster than any C-grade could possibly react.

As it hit him, a shockwave erupted from both Ell’Hakan and Jake as the Void Sphere exploded upon activation. The two of them were banished to their own Void Sphere Dimension in an instant, isolated from the rest of the world and the planet.

This sudden change clearly affected Ell’Hakan, making him frown. Everything appeared the same, with even the powerful moonlight remaining. Truthfully, the only thing Ell’Hakan had been separated from was all the other natives on the planet... which appeared to be why the former Chosen frowned.

“Void sorcery?” he spoke, looking down at Jake. “A valiant attempt... but the connection between myself and my subjects is not so easily severed. You shall not deny my fellow nahoom the privilege of showing their loyalty.”

Jake finally understood what the odd emotional compulsion he felt from the environment was after he said this. Ell’Hakan was using the Planetary Pylon to send out an order of sorts and compelled all the natives to do... something. Jake didn’t understand what exactly it was, but he would soon come to learn it.

Because, after only a few seconds, Jake saw the first few strings of energy gather around Ell’Hakan. It was faith energy, but this time, it felt different. Way different. After the first few strings, the faith energy began multiplying to an extreme level as Jake was forced to take a step back, his eyes opening wide at the sight.

Did he seriously...?

--

Back in the capital city of Ell’Hakan’s homeworld, the nahoom were gathered around the palace, all in prayer as they knew their planet faced the largest crisis they had ever encountered. One that made the Prima Guardian be nothing but a faint memory.

However, as with the Prima Guardian, they wholeheartedly believed in the victory of their god... the victory of the Celestial Child. But they also knew that the opponent he faced was special. He was the incarnation of an evil god, a being of pure death and destruction that sought to snuff out the light of the stars and bring about the end of everything.

Only the Celestial Child could stop such a monster... and as they were all in prayer, they heard the call. Their god needed help. Their help.

The priest leading them in prayer smiled gleefully as he opened his arms wide and stood up as he spoke: “Rejoice! The Celestial Child has opened the Gates of Celestial Ascension!”

A few figures were impatient and couldn’t wait even a moment after hearing the call as they slumped over right then and there. The priest was envious of their instantaneous devotion, but he knew his job was to guide them all. The only ones who were unlucky were the children too young or those who needed to continue serving on this plane... fotunately for him, he remained one of the lucky ones.

“Now let us go! Join me as we take to the stars!”

With these words, he watched everyone in the grand plaza, save for those who were forced to stay, slump over as their souls left their bodies, and the priest could only smile, satisfied as he joined them, willingly extinguishing his own soul and ending his life.

All for a greater purpose. All for the Celestial Child.

--

William, back on Earth, was carefully monitoring his ritual for any major events happening in the galaxy. Primarily, he was looking for any significant movements of forces by reading the massive karmic web to see if anything big was happening.

However, just then, he felt it. When he’d gone to Ell’Hakan’s planet way back then, he’d placed a few hidden magic circles to monitor the planet from afar. Ones that would only be triggered if certain conditions were met... and just now, nearly every single one of them activated at once. William was shocked as he hurried to check what the hell was going on.

The karmic web he observed shuddered as he focused on the planet in question, trying to read the waves of karma from there... but all he saw were strings breaking apart and dispersing. He had a serious look on his face as all the remnant energy from these broken karmic connections were gathering in one place, all their will, hope, and faith included.

He kept watching with bated breath as the strings just kept breaking... a thousand, ten thousand, a hundred thousand... million... ten million... a hundred million... it simply kept going as a massive karmic maelstrom gathered on the planet where he knew Lord Thayne and the Usurper battled.

I’ll need to report this, he said as he quickly got up and headed out of his small formation room. Miranda would, without a doubt, want to know as soon as possible that in just a few seconds, the majority of the entire nahoom population had suddenly ended their own lives, filled with devotion as they did so.

--

Jake watched as a cyclone of pure energy revolved around Ell’Hakan, the powers of absolute faith manifesting as Jake realized what was going on. He’d made his subjects do the ultimate act of faith and committed what was realistically ritualistic suicide, all with the intent of their lives turning into nothing but a small string of faith energy.

He had no way to reasonably estimate how many people had ended their lives, but it was certainly an extreme number. What’s more, Jake watched as more than ninety-nine percent of all this faith energy merely dispersed into nothingness as Ell’Hakan had no way to properly absorb or use it, his abilities as a C-grade simply not adequate... but with so much of it, his utter lack of efficiency didn’t matter.

This cyclone of faith kept swirling as some of it was absorbed by Ell’Hakan, and some of it went into the skies, empowering the moons. The severed limbs of his opponent were replaced with appendages of pure energy, and even the missing parts of his body were merely filled in with energy to replace what had been lost.

Ell’Hakan’s entire body was glowing and burning with power as he stared down at Jake. “I apologize for the wait, would-be destroyer of my world.”

Jake returned his gaze, and he had just one question as he also infused his voice with power. “What exactly happened to you?”

The nahoom took only a moment before sighing. “I merely remembered who I truly was.”

“Who are you then, if not Ell’Hakan?” Jake questioned.

“Ell’Hakan... the name of the former slave allowed to be the vessel of I, the Celestial Child. An honorable role, to be allowed to inhabit my reincarnation, and one he shall be recognized for,” the nahoom spoke.

Jake just stared at the nahoom as the faith energy kept coming and entering his broken and battered body. Most of the poison was getting rapidly eliminated, and the curse energy dispersed, but Jake still couldn’t help but sigh and shake his head.

He’s lost his fucking mind.

“There is sadness in my heart for what comes next, but you must die for the transgressions you committed against my world. You may struggle, but it will only prolong the inevitable,” the clearly mentally broken Ell’Hakan said.

It appeared that, in his grand delusion, the nahoom couldn’t see it, but Jake most certainly could. Ell’Hakan gave off an even more powerful aura than before now, his body literally glowing with power... and while he was a little better off than before his sudden change, it wasn’t by much, and one thing was more clear than anything:

There was no fucking way his body or soul could handle what was currently happening to it.

The Celestial Child raised a hand, the moonlight behind him intensifying as Jake bent his knees, ready to move at a moment’s notice. He faintly heard the sound of his own heart beating with excitement as he felt his senses intensify, a hint of happiness flashing through his mind. A part of him was happy that the Usurper hadn’t simply died so easily... oh, but to be absolutely clear, Ell’Hakan or the Celestial Child or whatever the fuck he wanted to call himself now was going to die.

Jake’s danger sense warned him just then as he moved to dodge, all his senses in a state of hyperfocus as his Bloodline responded, the auras of the Celestial Child and Primal Hunter clashing in a battle for supremacy that would decide not just the fate of the planet but the entire Milky Way Galaxy.

Comments

Jeremy M

Woohoo!!

NatHimz

Wasn’t showing up at first I was getting nervous

Lizy Flore

Thanks for the chap!

Hoid

I know me too! I was like did a miss a holiday break announcement??

BumAssBumAss

Thanks for the chapter

Fatkage

TFTC

Clint

Tftc

Connor

Thanks for the chapter

Ritsu

A lot of people called it. A last ditch effort by the Bloodline to survive even if the body can't actually take it, like what happened with Jake in the tutorial.

dragonslaver

100% this fight is gonna spill over to Monday.

Christopher Robin Sævre

Is it just me or did orange shit uppgrade to orange little less shit

Esch

So... We did get a Planetary Sacrifice Ritual. Just not the one we expected.

Valhazstromoz

Celestial child? More like celestial wall mount

Justin Maher-Smith

Bruh! Favourite chapter since the nevermore leaderboard ceremony. Zog you absolute genius!!! Cheers for the chapter mate.

Profile Name

Thanks for the chapter!

Den

Will Jake become a godslayer for a technicality?

Dalton Dawes

"Next time on Dragon Ball"

NatHimz

With his track record that would be on pace with how things workout for him.

Jason

Big cliffhanger.. must be Friday! ;). Tftc!

Cory Sauls

Phase 2 begins! TFTC!

Arrogant Savant

He's not quite a sympathetic villain but I do feel pity at the level of cruelty El' Hakan displayed to himself and his people.

Quinn

Damn

Stevean Bozek

Grand delusion indeed. Even if Ell'Hakkan wins the fight he's dead, his body and soul unable to withstand his own hubris. A fitting end for such a twisted guy.

Jayson Legott

Thanks for chapter! Kinda of glad that it didn’t end last chapter! EH has been an antagonist for quite awhile and it seemed like Jake hasn’t had to really push himself yet in the fight. Yeah he’s had to use his arrow and boosting skill but he wasn’t really pushed to his limit. Looking forward to how this ends! Unrelated note first the sword saint and now EH (can never remember how to spell his name), if word gets out people may be lining up to fight him in hopes of creating a transcendent skill 😂

khielira

Well damn this is going to be fun. I'm glad this fight is going to be more interesting than Villy and Yip's.

Stevean Bozek

At least Jake's bloodlines final ditch attempt to survive had an actual chance because deep down Jake knew if he won the fight the system would pull him out of the tutorial thanks to his ridiculous intuition and instincts.

John Looney

I think it’s closer to Jake’s final fight to valdimar in the challenge dungeon

NickDeck

TFTC!!

Stevean Bozek

Nah, he's going to die I'm sure of it. Though speaking of false gods I do wonder about the child of desolation and where that weirdo went. It'll probably show up later to get put down for good

William WIlson

So if I understand right this was a boosting skill that allowed Ell’Hakan to harvest the faith or his faithful and also burn his own soul up. Basically what Jake did to the Fallen King but jakes soul was far more powerful. Jake only need to outlast this boosting skill

Salguod

Zogarth please have mercy and end this battle. I want to go back to catching up like once a month.

Phillip Hazlett

I think he will fully die when the bargain for the planetary pylon goes through because then he doesn't get the massive home field advantage

Namorat

Still not the biggest fan of the idea, but it will probably make Jake use his super power, which is cool ^^

Andromeda Adams

Oh dang! You can do this, Jake! Wonder if Jake will have to use Jake juice to win? Tyftc!

Stevean Bozek

Yeah even if he somehow becomes a false god the real Hakkan will be dead and the planet will be up for grabs by Jake's bargain and some lowly C grade false god against Villys influence? Nah, the planet will be toast. RIP to the entire Nahoom race

Ender419

Thank you for this wonderful chapter!! Looking forward to the conclusion of how this battle ends now with this unexpected development.

Noctis Uchiha

I think it will be more of a demigod situation but still would be a great achievement for C rank

christian grant

The Primal Hunter!!!!!! This fight just keeps getting better

angel

Peak

angel

Tyftc

Justin Moen

Thanks for the chapter!

Darshar Griffonmane

Cheeto with the uno reverse on planetary sacrifice! I imagine that what a bunch of readers have said and that he is basically some form of a false god right now and might stay that way cause faith energy is weird. Now we get to see if Jake is pushed to the far extreme of his abilities as he's been pushed fairly hard in this fight but no Moment has popped yet. fantastic chapter!

Crjourdan

This is kinda dumb not gonna lie. Blue balling is with him literally a second away from dying just for this to happen. It makes sense but still irritating. This better end with his death lol.

Max

Nice chapter! Feels Like a build up / round 2 of Unique Lifeform vs Primal Hunter Mode Jake from the Tutorial. Hopefully WE can get an Eclipse replay with the real moon this time !!

Arieh Sochaczevski

Thanks for the chapter. I can’t decide which will be better: will the coming few chapters be an epic battle that will push Jake to new highs, or will all this just be a fancy way for E”H to die in a minute and make me laugh so hard?

Jordan joyce

I feel like Friday is gonna suck for the cliff that will no doubt come haha

Jordan Mazza

No this is different. Against the Fallen King Jake just burned every last thing he had to win, all his resources, everything. For Ellhakan he is being burned from too much energy entering his body and soul from the outside, in the form of faith energy.

Jana

„you must die for the transgressions you committed against my world.“ Did he really just say that after he voluntold his whole population to suicide? I guess that’s the level of delulu needed for the system itself to tell you, your delulu.

Mark

normally I don't throw my 2 cents in. But I feel this second phase of the fight is unnecessary, the hype and the preparation of the hunger arow and the execution was perfect if you would've left it there it would've been satisfying. this just feels like you're dragging it out, it doesn't seem there's a real reason for For this transformation.

Noctis Uchiha

So far we had not seen anything regarding the legacy of Yip of Yore. Even after Jake kept calling him the Usurper. So yeah it kinda had show up somehow, even if part of me agrees with you

Mat

If the Holy Church is watching this one they will be salivating. Does the bargain still have value given the planetary ritual by CC? Looks like Villy will just get a husk of a planet

T

He is the celestial child not a Nahoom what matters a few dead people

Beemoss

Tftc

Jaydan Man

A planet with a bunch of people dead people still has value I think. Probably has good records too

Jaydan Man

Jake hasn't used a bunch of trump cards imo. It did feel a bit too easy.

T

Kinda Jake wants to sacrifice the world itself to villy. cheto just made them sacrifices to himself quite the different amount of power

Mark

That's the point of preparation zogarth set it up for a instant kill That's the reason why I talked about the hype.

Lillie30

He will die in a minute, but for a C-Grade, a minute is enough time to slaughter an entire planet of D-Grades. With how much power orange fuck is gonna have from the faith energy, he has about the destructive power of an early B-Grade, up until he dies from having that much power flowing through him.

Seiryus

I like it this way. It shows that all the preparation was not wasted, as he ended up beating the other guy handily, but we will still get a tougher phase two that will force Jake to use Moment and maybe even the juiced up bloodline.

Mat

Phase 2 is necessary. The fight up to now did not even measure up to fight Jake and his Nevermore team had with Minaga. That was a level 275 Minaga while Jake is currently 295 and EH 303.

Cody Robinson

Okay I won't lie i was ready for EH to just die until that last line. I honestly didn't think EH would be able to push jake to the point we could see some cool bloodline fuckery. Now im wondering if Jake's bloodline may somehow unlock further thru battle or maybe something related to defeating EH bloodline will allow jake to further his own?

ThyThusThou

Nah, that would have been way to easy. What would be the point of the entire arc if he just ended with a fight that simply. The King of the forest fight had more to it then 'dodge, stealth, arrow' back in the tutorial arc so...

Cole Kerns

I’m inclined to agree with you. I’m not sure if he’s using this second part as a way to have Jake’s bloodline improve/able to use more of it at C-grade or something of the sort but the build up for the arrow was sick, the execution was great…. Now it seems the build up had no impact.

doctordirt

This shit is hard and the transformation is pretty cool you must admit

joel southard

Nice thank you for the chapter

Numbzy

Vilas has stated a few times that he cares about talented people, not dead pieces of rock.

Wraithy

Oh yes, the 11th hour phase 2.

Harry Ganino

For real thought EH was going to launch a spirit bomb

ReyWargen

To już się robi zbędnie przeciąganie walki, walka bogów była 3 razy krótsza a tutaj to trwa i trwa... Co najgorsze właśnie zniszczono najlepszy jej element, czyli rytuał poświęcenia planety, co on teraz poświęci Viperowi? Pustą skorupę i trochę dzieci? Na tą chwilę z epickiej walki zapowiada się kompletne rozczarowanie :(

brjenness

that evil orange jerk just stole our planetary sacrifice . truly evil.

Noah

Happy to see a phase 2 on EH.

Daniel Golding

Not the Planetary Sacrifice Ritual that I was counting on!

brjenness

let us take a moment to reflect on the skill that Jake has yet to use this fight

Gavin Wayne Pitcher

good catharsis to know that lies have a cost. XD

Kris Piskorski

why is a lot of people convinced EH will actually die here? He's the main antagonist since almost the beggining and I feel he will continue being one for the rest of the grades culminating in some grand battle close to the end. Otherwise if he dies here whats there really to do, jake will have no real enemies and no challenges ahead

Razeel Nightfall

Cheeto stains are difficult to clean without leaving residue behind.

Benjamin Mages

I'm not sure why you think this has anything to do with resurrection. The thing that used to be EH did not die and come back, his true soul didn't go anywhere. Heck William died harder than EH did, and Eversmile was able to bring him back.

Klown Keidra

Because a story this long, doesn't really need a single over arching enemy. The arcs of their stories should end, and allow others to start up. He has larger challenges ahead, with plot lines already planted for when he gets stronger, The conflict between The Automa and Ectomorphs, Him butting heads with the Holy Church, The whole Seat of the Exalted Prima World Wonder thing.

Nate Slusher

Geesh I want that orange dude dead and the next nemesis in the story to appear for Jake to battle with! Great chapter

Cnewton84

Once Jake reaches B grade, he will still have 650 levels (3 grades) until godhood. And then more growth after that. 93 universes with trillions of planets, factions, and people. There will always be other enemies to fight and goals to reach. EH was a great enemy and learning experience for Jake, but he needs to defeat him to take control of the Milky Way and for the story to move to its next arc.

AetherBoye

I have 2 new theories, completely unrelated to this chapter. I think there's 2 outcomes to the First Sage saga 1. Jake uses his funky juice to recreate and restore the sage to his full glory Or 2. The First Sage is the originator of the origin juice, and he is also the original titular Primal Hunter

Reno

Jake, go through another few months of misery for the sake of awesomeness. You can do it. Thump!

brjenness

I think the first. sage is the developer that created the hit vr game The System.

RJ

This dude needs to die, cockroach villains are a series end.

Andy Swearingen

I wonder if we'll see a full bloodline activation, like when Jake faced Valdimar in the Colosseum of mortals? Only thing I'm worried about there is Jake had like 30 years of Jake juice stored up at that time and he used some in the demon ritual if I remember correctly so he might not have enough to use it "safely". Anyway TFTC

brjenness

give it a moment it will come to you. also the was not as much arcane Tom foolery as I think is possible. not to mention the bloodline.

CSE1234

Good thing there's a phase two. He hasn't had to push himself yet. (Hasn't used moment of the primal hunter, hasn't been forced to spam eternal shadow to survive or land attacks, basically was beating el hakaan with one katar, I don't think he has used the internal arcane explosion thing, and other things I'm forgetting.) If you think it's dragging remember minaga, sword saint, fallen king, valdemar, and random boss monsters have had Jake in more trouble.

Jacob Feliciano

Just then jakes bloodline was so offended that It could be compared to the orange man's that jake blacked out having once again woke up standing above a puddle of person.

Keith Douglas

Those sacrificed souls could still be included in the final reckoning of Jake and Villys' ritual. EH used the planetary pylon as a conduit for his happy clappy reaping. The planetary pylon that the Malefic Bro's Ritual is currently wrapped around. All those souls + and bloodline would be a tasty present for the newly awakened Snake God.

MarineDebris

What do you mean he's been the main antagonist since almost the beginning? Ell'Hakaan didn't show up until book 7, so there's always gonna be plenty for Jake to do, just like in the first six books. The orange asshole needs to die, period.

kinglemur

Oh God this chapter has me wanting Jake to unleash his bloodline in a controlled manner and destroy ell’hakan

Joshua Kitchen

Who knows, that was 30 years of regular-human-Jake. Maybe whatever his Jake Juice is has a greater rate of regeneration the more powerful he is like most other resources?

liquid_helix

Ready for the nahoom to be dead….

shawn B

The next antagonist has been chosen with whomever is helping(?) the child of desolation

Kris Piskorski

Damn, then it seems like a lot of people will be pissed when Jacob saves the guy in the last second

IFL

I suppose if you mean chronologically based on in story years (including the fifty in nevermore) he's been the main antagonist since almost the start. Otherwise, he first showed up sometime after Jake got from the Mallific Order to help Carmen track down her family... Book 7 or 8 I think. Either way, it seems long enough. It's a big multiverse with a potentially infinite number of stronger and better opponents than EH... Who surely have reasonable odds of being less annoying.

kingofshibainu

He wasn't even introduced until book 7. That's maybe half the series at this point so he can die. Also pretty clearly this chapter he's basically burning through his life and his planets life in a delusional second phase of self destruction.

Kyler

Didn’t his juice get restored by something in the trials? Could have sworn something topped off the tank

Z

So the hunter doesn't swiftly kill his prey but waits? Disappointing "and then..." moment. A DBZ style tune in for the next episode.

Kuniku778

Jake didn't lose a body part yet, fight hasn't even begun.

Henscratch

Excellent word smithing…quality almost sounds like the most dreaded Friday-level cliff …um.. Did the pseudo-whatever God child of desolation thing just get a power up? Maybe one-time since most of the source is gone, but still. He might come back to deliver the remaining population from…something equally delusional

Sacchito22

I'm getting some flashbacks to the exalted prima, it kept copying high teir skill after skill till it's soul couldn't keep up and it died by soul popping.

Sacchito22

Also, who's to say the watcher isn't the desolate king, who can take up the mantle of antagonist?

Steven Tuttle

zog. dont live in america so he dont celabrate thanksgiving its strickly a american holaday so thats pretty awsome

Azazel

…Is it weird that I’m kinda starting to like the idea of William being an ally?

Azazel

“ROUND TWO….. FIGHT!!”

Erik Bekke

Did hake forget he had a mark with a shitton of built up energy from their fight??? Couldn't he have detonated it?

Ben

I wonder how this would work if he does escape to the HM. He would inspire faith in himself not the HM, so he would be stealing followers on whatever planet he’s on. Almost seems he would be on their hitlist if they weren’t going to try and get a variant of his bloodline

Ben

Or maybe he can use it to convert the faithful to someone like HM and just hasn’t yet

Björn Hermans

tftc i love your stuff! but that guy needs to be dead tomorrow this is getting tedious... and a bit unreasonable. he was dead as dead can be but then selfrevives stronger than before? that... is not realy compelling and sets a bad pressedent for the future in my opinion

Rewdan

Thanks Zogarth I’m loving this final fight sequence

SilverSentry

🤣 wild. He's gonna write what he wants. We all know that at this point. Twists and turns are good for the overall story, or it gets predictable, right?

SilverSentry

I think their relationship might end up somewhat similar to what the primordials have going on

Hayden Leech

So this was more of a bloodline giving a crazy skill like “moment of the primal hunter” than a genuine trancendence?

Bladewing

Zog mentioned in the discord the majority of Jake's damage so far was because of poison and curse damage meaning the Mark didn't actually have all that much built up

Björn Hermans

ofc he writes what he wants! i hope so and i like it a lot xD cant help my feelings about that cheeto tho^^ he was too good at making me hate him it seems.. haha

Alex

Trying to distinguish whether Ell'hakan's new skill is Transcendent or not is kind of a matter of semantics in my opinion. Transcendence is a term that's used to describe powers that exist outside of the System - when characters talk about Transcendence they're usually referring to Transcendent skills, but Bloodlines are also a type of Transcendent power. I believe it's fair to say that what's happening to Ell'hakan is a form of Transcendence, since it relies on the Transcendent powers of his Bloodline. His new Skill is (Unique) rather than (Transcendent) rarity, but I think it's important to remember a conversation that Villy and Jake had a long time ago after the Treasure Hunt: After Jake experiences the Sword Saint's Transcendence, Villy explains to Jake what Transcendent skills are, and he says they're basically the other side of the coin to Bloodlines; Bloodlines are something you're born with, whereas Transcendent skills are something you claim. One of the quirks of how Transcendent skills and Bloodlines interact with each other is that the System doesn't allow Bloodline holders to use their Bloodline to give themselves Transcendent skills, since it's effectively 'cheating'. This is why [Moment of the Primal Hunter] isn't a Transcendent skill, even though it really should be. For a Bloodline holder to create a (Transcendent) rarity skill they have to do so without relying on their Bloodline - this is often nigh impossible, since the Bloodline is so fundamental to the existence of the person who has it. I think Ell'hakan's new delusion skill has a (Unique) rarity instead of a (Transcendent) rarity purely for the reason that it was created by his Bloodline - it really should be a Transcendent skill, but because the System doesn't allow Bloodlines to create (Transcendent) rarity skills it's (Unique) instead.

IFL

Jacob did say that the holy church would be the only loser is if EH fought. Might have meant that, even if he did survive, EH's bloodline would no longer be of any benefit to the church. A couple possibilities in that regard could be because the bloodline itself was effected in some way in triggering the 'Delusion' or because EH's overridden ego would prevent any possible collaboration. Or, more simply, because of causing extreme and irreversible soul damage to himself (who knows, maybe whatever he's done is akin to chemical neutering ... good luck passing on your bloodline there mate :)). In any case, the church won't lift a finger to help unless they stand to extract an even greater benefit in return.

Michael Ferguson

As I am a slave to the order I would say Valdimar is obviously the true antagonist. With his death the Malefic One would sweep through the other primordials. It is quite vexing that Jake is tainted by being human when he could have been a dragon kin.

Ty Cooper

Ok so El Cheeto destroyed himself in his delusion so he is dead and a temporarily soul fueled celestial child myth but is burning so many souls he is killing himself like a holy mother ritual? Is this just a feast for Eternal Hunger? Also was it William watching the fight that Jake felt?

Thaynian

The title change is very telling. Might be getting the best chapters of the series coming up. I just can’t see how people think this is dragging out. This fight has been brewing for years and you want it done in a week? Hell no, leave no stone unturned and bury the Celestial Cheeto once and for all.

brjenness

at some point we'll get a big baddie set up over several books to give the gang a nearly impossible fight. they will spend weeks coming up with an insane plan. but because Jake recently had a power up he did not fully understand. he one shots the boss and scratches his head. my bad. this may occur a couple times. them they'll face the one that walks out of the explosion unscathed and gives them the toughest fight of their lives.

Michael Ferguson

So the harbinger of prime evil organs is a skill Jake didn't take. But Jake would never help an enemy power up just to get a good fight, right? I'm a bit more excited by this. Even if I fell asleep waiting for the chapter. Praise Zogarth!

Gwiddion

For them its the waiting thats the problem and the seemingly slow progressing of the fight. Was the same with the minaga fight during the best arc ever.

Jeremiah Lambert

No it wasn't William. As he sensed the watcher toward the early middle fight. William observed right at the second stage end fight. No my guess is someone else. Who? Idk. Someone better than any nahoom. Definitely an off worlder because the nahooms b4 couldn't detect jake..so yeah.

Gwiddion

It depends how the william experiment will conclude. I can see Eversmile doing some fucked up things to him.

Michael Ferguson

I think round one was the underground bit, a draw. Round two was on the surface, Jake killed Ell'Hakan. We just started round one of the Celestial Child fight. Maybe these chapters will get retitled when they are published.

joshua herndon

Growth doesnt just come from nothing if you want jakes bloodline to power up or for him to possibly get a transcendent skill he has to be pushed! tyftc and i am pumped to see how jakes going to grow from this

Jack

The next chapter is gonna have an author note telling the people complaining to fuck off I can feel it

Michael Ferguson

He is a back stabber. Of course you want to turn your back to William. That is how you know he wants Jake dead. If he wants my trust, he needs to fuck off to train. Then come back and ask Jake politely for a sparring match. If he can't give a good fight then he will never be trusted.

Thaynian

I think that’s just the nature of getting chapters day by day. Once this hits its book and audio format it’s going to play out differently.

Michael Ferguson

Shirley the great master is pleased with our suffering. The mark of a magnificent story is that it makes you feel things.

Kevin Watson

id like to think this is a bit of confirmation to my longer comment yesterday. i’m increasingly happy that Ell’Hakan can back up his second best status, although we don’t have a good track record for geniuses without a patron burning their soul for extra power, i actually think the only time this happened was with the fallen king, and… i also like to hear Jake’s heartbeat is picking up, perhaps things can get more primal soon

Nathaniel Ownbey

Could we be seeing the creation of a unique lifeform?

Niko Tainui

I'm glad the fight hasn't ended yet.

Dao of Fried Foods

It has a pylon. Those are somewhat rare and valuable, as they only come from the system and almost always only come during the integration. Pylons/planetary cores are high grade ingredients in various things, if nothing else. I'm sure a master of transmutation has some use for such a thing.

Michael Ferguson

Facts are only the most accurate model of the world around us. We can only guess biased on the evidence of our feeble perspectives. I'm willing to change my opinion if you stop asking me to provide evidence. It's on you to provide proof. You're wrong about true souls. Look it up.

AetherBoye

The facts are that true souls are not linked to the bloodline inherently, they're linked to the body and to the records of the individual. If they were solely soul-based, they wouldn't be able to be passed on, so they have to either be based in the body or based in the individual's records, since those both get passed to a child. Now, Villy claimed the records of the first sage on his death, as the first sage requested, and later recieved the first sage's bloodline. He also says the bloodline cost less from the system than he had anticipated. Everything in this paragraph is explicitly stated in book 8. The only logical reason the bloodline would cost less than anticipated is because of the records he had already absorbed. With these points of data, we can draw the conclusion that bloodlines are based in your records. To seperate the records from the true soul effectively, one must die or give them up willingly. This isn't explicitly stated, but it's shown by souls being nearly inviolable by outside forces, and further evidenced by the existence of the usurper ritual. Records are clearly released upon true soul dissolution, hence why usurping exists, and why villy could claim the First Sage's records on his death. Now, my final point on the true soul / bloodline relationship is from earlier on. Simulation Jake clearly has a very similar soul to Real Jake, but also clearly different, because of his likewise different life prior to the system. It's said that the 2 true souls are different but close enough that Jake's integration of sim-jake into his soul is possible, and even then sim-jake is still a clearly seperate entity. Yet, despite them being clearly different and having different true souls, they both have the same bloodline. If bloodlines relied directly on what is in the deepest depths of your soul, and not your records, their bloodlines should be, if not completely different, at least not completely the same. It's also shown that you can lose records, without it hurting your soul, as shown when Jake uses his origin energy (with the 1 exception of when he created a god out of a skill. The god in his soul is what damaged it, not the record loss). All this together proves that records are seperate from the true soul, and bloodlines are based in records, therefore bloodlines are not linked to the truesoul

Michael Ferguson

A perfectly responsible interpretation if you ignore the stated facts about true souls.

AetherBoye

Tell me a single fact that is explicitly stated about true souls that contradicts what I said

Michael Ferguson

Jake and shadow Jake can't exist in the same universe because they have the same true soul.

AetherBoye

A fair argument, and on that point I will concede. On all the other points, however, the theory remains sound. I'd even go so far as to argue that this is better evidence FOR my theory than against, since villy and the sage have different truesouls and yet the same bloodline. If it were an item giving villy this ability, like Jake's mask, I'd agree with you, but it's an integrated part of villy. The bloodline is his, and it is as much a part of him as his stat numbers

AetherBoye

It's also clear that the records alone aren't enough to express the bloodline, as shown by villy not immediately gaining it after absorbing the sage's records. Some piece was missing, which the system fixed when he requested the bloodline from that system event reward

Michael Ferguson

The Shroud of the Viper actually lets Jake to change his true souls identification signature. I like to think Villy used Shroud to identify as the sage and just asked the system for his soul back. It was probably more complicated and expensive than that.

AetherBoye

The shroud is a clearly external power though, it doesn't actually change the truesoul, just what the expression of the truesoul looks like to observers. If a sufficiently powerful person can see through the shroud, as it's implied is possible, the system itself should be able to do so on any being god or not. It's much more likely that villy just did very well in a system event, which gave him the points needed to claim the bloodline. Until the relationship between bloodline and true soul is more clearly expanded upon it's impossible to know for sure, but based off what we know now it's much more likely that the 2 are not integrally linked

Michael Ferguson

Bloodlines are not for sail, I would guess. More likely Villy had the necessary requirements to atane the sage's true soul. Like the records from killing him, the ability to change his true souls signature, and the ability to store memory information. Villy was pretty clear about bloodlines being who you are, they exist in the true soul. And yet he ataned one. From the system, shore. But that means Villy is in part, the first sage. The sage's true souls is alive in Villy.

William WIlson

I guess your right his body and soul is to weak to hold the power he just absorbed

William WIlson

No, this is basically a boosting skill which is overloading Ell’Hakan’s body and soul.

AetherBoye

I just don't think that is even remotely true. The first sage is dead and his true soul gone, he is only survived by his records within Villy, exactly as he wanted. His bloodline being later obtained by Villy didn't change that, and it's explicitly stated that only the system can "give" a bloodline to a person who doesn't already have one

Michael Ferguson

There really isn't enough evidence. But that's what I think and I am of the opinion that it fits the facts the best.

AetherBoye

We shall find out when it is written. I expect to be viciously called out for being wrong in the comments if your case is proven just as I shall do to you in the case that mine is proven

Bob Fight

Could be someone finally got a skill to watch Jake’s past and he’s noticing it

MilkTheShark

Why do we call him cheeto? Is it just because he's orange?

Lynderyn

Or potential transformation into a false god like ‘I’

Kevin Watson

Something else i believe i saw some people say on earlier chapters, if EH exclusively used his bloodline on himself and had a different patron there’s a good chance he and Jake could’ve been good friends or at least more friendly rivals. I’d also consider myself the president of the William Redemption club, and I hope a lot of our closer side characters make it to godhood during the length of the novel, Will included

Lynderyn

Can’t wait to see how moment and shadow pair up. I can see a shadow deflecting an attack left while Jake dodges right while moment is active resulting in real Jake getting an almost lethal glancing blow when moment ends.

Darthnarciss

I hoped it was going to be a False God transformation, but I believe False gods are inherently stable and this abomination isnt.

Darthnarciss

Remember though, Jake got moment instead of a transcendant skill, when his bloodline got pissed and reached further than "allowed" causing the system to throw errors, just like now with EH. This new skill isnt even that powerful, from what we've seen, he's just tapping more directly and personally into the faith energy he's been using this whole fight. Heck, even the mass sacrifice from his people isnt due to this, as they'd have done it no matter what if asked. Really, all were seeing is self hypnosis, coupled with energy projections in the form of artifical limbs, and possibly an increased Willpower (due to the self hypnosis). Dude's still actively dieing. This is the last gasp of his Bloodline railing against the darkness.

Baged

I think Jake called him that once, and it just stuck, I guess.

Cory Sauls

Zog did his job then. He effectively created a character to hate and gives us reasons to hate him and want him dead without telling us to hate him. Sign of a great writer. It only feels tedious b/c we are reading it 1 chapter/day instead of one continuous flow.

The lord of chaos

i disagree with your conclusion. A transcendence is a skill so strong it breaks the rules of the system adding the fact that a bloodline can not help you gain a transcendence make El Cheeto's skill clearly not a transcendence. He got it because of his bloodline, he is also not breaking any rules of the system since he has basically made himself think that he actually is the celestial child.

Cory Sauls

Walka między Bogami rozegrała się między dwoma osobami, które, jak odkryliśmy, nie były nawet blisko siebie pod względem mocy. To jest różnica między Bogami a walką Jake'a/EH.

Razeel Nightfall

On 11/19 I made a joke about how this fight could become the December cliffhanger. Oh for fks sake it was a joke!!!

Tommy S

UL's are born UL's from the beginning. Ell'Hakan will probably just blowup. Or you know, become a moon or something...

IFL

I've also seen a lot of comments that I took as expressions of hype for an outcome rather than actually complaining about the rate of progress; you know, kind of like when you just 'have to' know what happens and read the last chapter before returning to your current one (hallmark of good writing - your readers are so engaged and they're always wanting more). The problem there is that, due to being interspersed and read along with some of the ... Ermmm ... less tactful comments, they take on the same apparent tone of complaint or criticism.

TyranT-Rex

Bro you just put an idea into my head. I doubt it's right, but it's interesting. What if it's Jake at S grade using an upgraded path of the heretic chosen to look back at this fight for inspiration.

Hotep Saxis

This sick bastard killed 100 million of his own people. That bloodline has to end, now. Time to get pushed to the limit Jake. Before he dies I still want to hear what Yip of Yore told him, don’t forget Zogarth!

AetherBoye

I agreed he's dead, yes. Whether he stays that way is very much up in the air

Alex

"Strength" isn't really the defining feature of what makes a (Transcendent) skill Transcendent. The thing that makes an ability Transcendent is that it operates outside of the standard paradigms of the System - the System decrees that all abilities must have a cost as a form of equivalent exchange, and for abilities that exist within the paradigm this cost is in resources (mana, stamina, health, etc.) Transcendent abilities break the paradigm by having a non-standard cost, like memories, levels, rare resources, etc. Back in the Nevermore arc, just before the team goes into the challenge dungeons, the Sword Saint says to the Fallen King that he should be wary of using his Unique Skill in the challenge dungeons because the System won't waive the backlash - Jake mentions at this time that a Unique Lifeform's Unique Skill is effectively a System-granted Transcendent ability. Given that the Celestial Child's delusion ability is (Unique) rarity, I think it's fair to say it's akin to the Unique Skill of a Unique Lifeform, which - while not STRICTLY a Transcendent ability, because it is granted by the System - can operate outside the standard paradigms of the System, making it for all intents and purposes Transcendent in nature.

AetherBoye

I think he's just very interested in them as they're quite the curiosity

Benjamin Mages

I think you skipped past the first part of the skill's name. The entire point of that skill... is that it's a lie. There is no reincarnation involved. His true soul is still there, it never died, it never left. He just is lying so hard it's basically become reality. And talking about Eversmile wasn't a shot at Villy, it was saying that this is just him almost but not dying. William actually died and came back, and that's still not the resurrection that Villy is trying to achieve (since their true souls have almost certainly passed on by now).

SqrlyGrly

Just like he wouldn't bring an enemy back from the dead for a good fight... Oh... Wait...

Ty Cooper

Oh Zog has made my most hated character ever writen and I have never wanted a character too die so badly. Every chapter makes my skin crawl. love him for that and has even had me almost scream at Cheeto to die already. But that is just me getting into it like a football game

Sa NPhạm

I NEED MORE...

Michael Ferguson

Mysteries are so compelling. With what he is capable of I'm excited to see how he reacts to curiosity.

Numbzy

I think the major difference between William and El'Hakan is a matter of information. EH knew exactly what he was up against and decided to fight anyways. This isn't the tutorial and knowledge isn't restricted from EH. In fact he's been warned by Jacob right before the fight. This is a dying path of EH. William by contrast was information starved. He had 0 idea what he was up against. His information about Jake came from their extremely short clash earlier in the tutorial while unknowingly being manipulated by Eversmile. EH's patron is dead, he can no longer be manipulated by him and still went into the fight regardless. You can only justify stupidity for so long, eventually your excuses fall short.

Numbzy

Major meh. Vilas doesn't give a fuck about a pylon. He could get 10,000 if he asked for them. People would literally donate them enmass if he made a declaration that he wanted them.

KenTX325

I thought the Minga and demon lord fights were the best. Well the dual with sword saint was also epic. This fight still feels slow, repetitive and it feels like Jake barely did anything to prepare. EH going from almost dead C grade to semi Devine being feels wrong. If it’s a transcendence then does he have to pay a price?

Tudor

Hopefully today's chapter is the last of the fight

Mat

I thought the point of the ritual was the genocide not the planetary core or pylon. Remember his joke about a plague he want Jake to test

IFL

Does dying from soul damage at the end of the fight regardless of its outcome count?

Jordan Rogers

Do we get a chapter today with the holiday?

Shaibene

Everyone chill, it isn't being dragged out, when in novel form you'll be complaining the fight was too short,

Nick Brakhage

Annddd theyre still fighting

Nick Brakhage

This isnt even my final form!

Thaynian

Patiently waiting for the Primal Hunter to arrive

Thaynian

I have a question? Can gods give Faith energy to mortals? Or is it too much for them to bare? Like if a pantheon of Gods fully believed in someone being a reincarnated God would that boost their records so they would reach godhood faster or is it if it were that easy everyone would be doing it?

brjenness

yes, but under a different username so we don't get "I told you so"

Doug

Maybe Vesperia will answer to that question, although I don’t think Faith is really their thing, so maybe not

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter!

Kasey Lindenmayer

Love how zogarth did this! Dude has lost his damn mind! Time for Primal Hunter action!

Chloe

Woo. Get em Jake. Tyftc

Roy

Thanks Zogarth!

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

NerdyFellow

It would probably damage their records to the degree they were unable to ascend to godhood, or perhaps even level up at all anymore

Olof Karlsson

Thanks for the chapter!

Almer Reyhan

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