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NicN

Tftc

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Shop JPL

Yay

Phallusar

Whiplash again. Thank you for the chapter!

Kyle Davis

Bro you need to sleep in 😭. You’re sick. Take a nap

S Lorino

Tyftc

Patrick Sullivan

Thanks for the chapter perfect fot waiting to be seen at the hospital !

SeaSmoke

Wow another early chapter, has zogarth evolved into a peak human?

jjjm

Hey so you've been posting these last two days at 11.30pm my time. I should be sleeping but now I'm staying up to read this chapter. hope you're happy zog

Joseph Jenkins

Digging the early chapters. I get them before I sleep rather than in the middle of my downtime

Misa

Tftc

Peter Ripplinger

Hell yeah late night chapter for the win

Flynn

Who needs sleep when you have chapters, thanks zog

Arrogant Savant

I imagine that Jake can still escape but he'd definitely have to "overclock" his wings

Mike

I thought I should check patron before bed. Looks like it was worth it. A perfect end to the night thank you zog. Though not sure how I will function in the morning as my joy comes from my morning caffeine and primal hunter chapter.

Ben Cox

This new release schedule it perfect, wake up and immediately there is a sweet Primal Hunter chapter to start the day with.

Fdrugc

Tftc

tigerfishie

The more we see of the frogs the more I like them, I’m definitely curious about them, though reading a bunch of classical science fiction books for class and then popping online for the latest chapter has been somewhat jarring these past few days 😭TYFTC!

Nathan Holliday

Of course he just evolved to B-grade and is meeting an A-grade!

Sol

So Jake juice and tadpoles? And how many levels do you get for upgrading a species to enlightened? Can already tell this gonna be special either in an epic history changing way or a window licking dumb shit gonna happen that he can't escape sort of way 😂😂 either way villy gonna be laughing

Michael

this new arc looks promising! excited to see where it goes

Fylbrom

Poor Jake. He's gonna have to figure out how to turn down the advances of an A grade frog-queen without letting in on the reason being that his actual GF is a god, something they dont have any understanding of. Our guy might be screwed... and not in the fun way 😅

Sean McClain

Jake cant catch a break. Newly evolved and already outclassed

Fylbrom

Yooo i didn't even think of that, but it would be crazy if he did. Jake exits the Minor world just to leave the rest of the multiverse gobsmacked when they hear the news. Lmao

Biggy smalls

Just how big is this place to support A grades? At least as big as a solar system. Probably a full sized Galaxy.

Sloth

I’m pretty sure A-grade is strong enough to be the leader of multiple galaxies in the greater multiverse. This hidden world is probably at least the size of a galaxy cluster I think, though probably larger

Schneeente

Of course A grade. Really nice world building and I am curious to explore this new world!!

DeAndrea H

I love this arc. The lore and world building are fantastic. It feels like we’re seeing a different side of Jake. Usually, his curiosity is anchored in his drive to progress but here it feels like he’s curious for curiosity’s sake. I love the Venusians being too powerful for him to fight and being unaware of the concept of a “Chosen” so they’re not overly deferential beyond him being a guest. Jake has never really had to focus on being tactful and diplomatic. It’s a new and different kind of challenge! It does make me think of all the theories that the Seat of the Exalted Prima will be more of a political challenge and this is preparing Jake for that so it doesn’t feel unrealistic that he can politic intentionally. Can’t wait to see where this goes!

NovaZero

Keep in mind, each village is headed by an Oracle.

Xander

TFTC :) Suggested edits: "and far ** smaller tent-like structures." i think you missed the word "more" here. "The otherwise toxic *air* seemed to carry an *air* of" repetition. Change the first to "atmosphere" or the second to "buzz" to avoid this. "The village was also *decisively* inhuman." should be "decidedly" " “The Oracle ** atop the Life Pool" from the context of the next statements you missed the word "dwells" here "Venusian down below was one of the *think* variants, " should be "thin"

Icewolf

I like this new schedule. Let’s me read the new chapter during lunch.

Tomer Yud

awesome chapter! I really want to keep reading

Staudi

Tyftc

Phoenixdrop

Well then things are getting interesting welp Jake get politicking and also might be a good time to learn the finer differences between monster races and a true enlightened race because these frogs are absolutely sitting on that line and I absolutely want to see Jake give them the final push they need to get there

Beemoss

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Mitha

The A-grade should be called Darth Binks (or something close to it).

Ramadasa Butler

I wonder if Jake could find a teacher to help progress his Profession. What new materials could he trade for to make new potions maybe even Villy has never seen. He might also be able to get new items i.e. Chestplate, cloak, etc or upgrade his soul bound items - necklace?

Elephin

I'm guessing that time passes much faster inside of this world compared to outside, which is why the integration clearly did not happen recently here despite the fact that it surely did not have access to the System before the integration. This was also hinted at when Jake remarked on how quickly Villy responded last chapter. The faster time is probably the trait thing that Villy mentioned earlier.

Bob Fight

So there’s a A grade just chilling in the system I am almost scared to ask if there’s anything going on with are sun is it suddenly a unique life form

Suzanne Pearson

Makes me wonder if that ancestral village frogs originated in the Amazon. If they were full beasts then, they wouldn’t remember their origins…. Then with the time dilation, they got a head start, but as they are in the pocket dimension (perhaps a unintentional consequence of the system creating the world wonder) they didn’t do the prima event like the rest of the 93rd universe….. and maybe are considered a part of the world wonder….

djthomp

I'm loving these frogs, they're just really neat. Natural C grades it seems, with plenty of strong ones past that. I wonder if the Ancestral Village has an S-grade?

Jeroen Turkstra

Tyftc Loving this arc so far. Curious how the A grade will handle Jake.

Corvid

My working theory is that the minor world just has a bonkers level of time dilation. Minor world created post system, but time just goes by insanely fast there compared to the outside world.

Cory S.

Descriptions of the frogs make them seem to be based on the Dart frog. Also I am curious if time flows differently on this world than outside it? Like time moves much faster there than outside of it which might explain how their world according to the shaman is 200,000+ years old. When Jake leaves it will be time for him to go to the exalted prima event or something else will happen and Jake is in a life or death situation when all of a sudden a prompt appears telling him it’s time to go and to accept a teleport out to the event.

Eden

Had a feeling, but wowsers lol. Not even 20 chapters into b grade and jakes gotta deal with a a grade, well not in a fighting sense but you know, disnt get to flex dominating b grade yet.

zran

jake is someone who does not benefit much for having soneone teach him, besides, who can teach him anything regarding the unique side of his profesion?, if anything, he is on a position to teach others now as a B grader

Vega

I’m really looking forward to this exploration arc after this chapter. It will be interesting to see how Jake will handle this now that he can’t rely on his two mainstays of 1. combat prowess and 2. Chosen/Harbringer status. How exciting!

Josie

Looks like Jake needs to give Myriad Tongues skill a software update, it's not translating words correctly

Josie

Unless of course this IS a village for the scaling of frogs. Their scale of a metropolis gonna be scary

Drexnaw

yup Jake is def going to that poison ocean and getting in over his head i can feel it

ABTelford

An A grade. Woohoo! And Jake is on his own and has to act cautiously instead of being able to bluster his way through everything? Awesome! It’s been so long this’ll be great!

VirtSecurity

I can just imagine Jake asking if he can lick the back of some of these frogs.

Sushi

How does Jake always manage to get himself into interesting situations days before system events?

nathan

Villy I’ve come to bargain

Bjarne Hansen

Are you sure? Maybe I'm dumb, but I think that the first sage, told Jake, that he needed to bring Venus back into the real world .... Venus and Earth, joined.

Joken

He can project the Vipers aura. That would get the A grade to shiver.

Rewdan

Poor Jake, how is he going to handle this A Grade? He’s going to have to be on his absolute best behaviour?

Raymond Whitehead

Mmm, I doubt blowing up this planet will go well. Always the next one to consider

RedFaux

For all we know time passes faster in this Minor World. 100 years in here, an hour outside

Rewdan

Will Jake give out a blessing or ask Villy to bless an A grade?

ThatGuy

Good thing he has his wings for a quick oh shit get me out of here 😂

DeAndrea H

And finding out that it’s part taboo or part of their mating practices like with Scarlet.

James Hibbs-Kinsler

With this kind of cliffhanger I thought it was Friday 😂 but im pleasantly surprised we still have 1 more chapter for the week.

Josie

pretty sure this is the most description we've ever been given about a place. usually everything is so vaguely described it feels like "that location? it's there. and that guy? he uhh.. has eyes." I'm not complaining, as there's many authors who do the opposite and try to paint too much of a picture. this chapter felt like a nice balance between the two

Numbzy

I'm kind of hoping so. That would be fun a way to twist the mini-arc.

beeve

Is there a head oracle at the ancestral village that’s even stronger?

brjenness

I agree. give me an idea and my mind will fill in the rest. don't need every boring detail described. this chapter was fine

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Nathaniel France

I realy hope the frogs don't end up turning hostile. That said, it would be super cool if Jake returns from this with a “yo so I just added an entire minor world worth of unknown people to the Order, look at me such a good Chosen who totally meant to do that.”

Tamathon

Why do I think he’s going into the ocean to stop the disaster waves?

Daniel

Not before A-grade, there may be an S-grade on Venus.

Daniel

Villy slayed a lot of A-grades in B-grade, but yeah he is outclassed. I have a feeling he will do event and come back later maybe after Nevermore.

D

What if the administrator and exalted prima was all about shepherding minor worlds and lost worlds into the 93rd universe. Like make the 93rd universe a collection point for lost peoples in the previous universes

Joshua Kitchen

I’m Guessing the ocean is the exit to the minor world, and if it wasn’t for the system event he would be stuck for awhile.

brjenness

and the frogs breed so quickly that they become a plague after jake unleashes them on the universes

brjenness

lol...dotf is going on a month long break in February. zog obviously takes pleasure in torturing us, but for normal authors, I would think a lot might consider dropping the RR/patreon side after seven books or so. but then again, it keeps them writing some...who knows how rarely some authors would write if the weren't at least trying to post 3 times a week.

brjenness

he's testing to see if he wants to switch to two chapters a day. I still say he should start a twitch channel for us to fight over what is going to happen as he types.

brjenness

worse for me. I no longer have an excuse to be late to work. sorry, boss. zog dropped a big one.

brjenness

if there are snakes, I assume they will recognize jake's aura.

Josie

Oh knowledgeable and slightly mad one, what is dotf?

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Daniel Hamilton

Some new poison ☠️ for Villy, be a nice present 🎁

Jimbo

*RIBBIT* RIBBIT RIBBIT!

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter!

Daniel Hamilton

Curious, if you get something special for introducing the system to a New World and helping them integrate

Josie

Are these bipedal frogs? It's described as a walk to the center of the village but in my head, which may lack imagination, I see hoppers and Jake striding to keep up

ZanSanCho

Tftc Zog!

Corey S

Yep Villy was right when he mentioned not pissing off any A grades haha

Corey S

With them saying it has been a few hundred thousand years, I’m thinking there is a massive time dilation here. Therefore Jake should hopefully get to spend a long time here working on himself and when he gets pulled out for the system event, he will be a lot more powerful

DefinitelyNotMinaga

It is not a universe so it cant be integrated in such a way. Unsure if all minor worlds have laws that the rest share as well but Yalsten was sealed off into its own pocket world after being part of the multiverse beforehand. One must assume not all pocket worlds share the same backstory or link to the multiverse. Interesting possibility though, helping integrate a minor world would definitely have some sort of reward... maybe a title?

Clint

Hard to say. Yalsten had eons of backstory, but the indications were that it was created in our era. Whether that history is “real” or fake is sort of a philosophical question, but the System clearly doesn’t need to use something as crude as time dilation to get it done.

Episode 19

Tyftc Zog, get well

Matthew Monroe

I admit...not being a bunch of mushroom huts is disappointing...only for the fact it would irk/traumatize Jake and provide more joke material for villy

JW Saxby

Tftc 🍻

Asterrahl

Interesting, Jake is in actual danger here, potentially. Not just because it's a closed off minor world, but simply for being in the 93rd universe. And not in a curated environment like a dungeon or a hunting ground or a event overseen by seniors etc. There has been much of that, since he's part of a top faction of the multiverse, but it's very nice to have some good old solo adventure as well. I reckon he has ways to teleport away or call for rescue still, but that's normal. It's good also that everything and everyone there is real, too, and not generated as a learning aid for the little kiddies. If he went on a slaughter, he'd be killing real people, real monsters, real mushrooms, etc.

Chloe

Tea! Time for tea. Maybe some Primal Origin energy into the Lake of tadpole eggs. That would win friends. Tyftc