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Dave

Tftc

Beemoss

Tftc

Misa

Tftc

Arrogant Savant

That's nice of the system, weighing Jake's strength against the natives determining whether they can leave. This helps in prevent both subjugation of the natives giving too much of an advantage and the "key to leave" from being coerced.

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Stormy

Tftc

BlackRazaras

Thanks for the chapter!

Tomer Yud

:OOOOO I want to read the next chapter!!!

Loststar7

Thanks for the chapter. Edit suggestions The Shaman did step up and help a little by using some of his weird shaman -making- (magic) on them, I’ll let you all know if -you- (I) start to feel anything different, and you all do the same.”

Eden

I like this method. Needing someone syeonger to bring prople out. Also means he can tell thrm that as soon as hes steonger than them or someone is they can lrave, instead of a vague system timeline

Frosgods

Good idea from requirements for leaving, also it makes sure there won't be too many strong migrants as I can't see Jake patiently transiting every volunteer

Auryn Baruch

I love all you guys who are the first to read! And tftc!

Matthew Monroe

Soo many ?s with that last sentence lol... gotta fidget and tweak until tomorrow....

Michael Fannon

Forerunner title huh? Pretty neat that it happened this late into the integration.

Michael Fannon

A little off topic, but how long has it been since the 93rd universe was integrated? Like 15 to 20 years? Adam was my go to for measurement, but he hasn't been scene since the moon adventures. And with all the time dilation...

Danny

Awww man realy thats such a short chap :( but progress is progress ^^

Xander

TFTC :) Suggested edits: "some of his weird shaman *making* on them," This should be "magic", right? " the highest-level Lord answered in a voice that Jake couldn’t tell whether was male or female." Firstly I don't really think that it matters that Jake can't tell the gender of the spider, does it? So you could just ditch everything after "answered". Secondly, if you keep this, it is badly worded as written but I can't make a simple suggestion for a rewrite. Maybe "We shall, " the androgenous Spider Lord replied" though, again, the gender of the spider is irrelevant. " I’ll let you all know if *you* start to feel anything different, and you all do the same.” Should be "I" "less likely the longer their group of eleven*, with Jake at the helm,* flew." this is just a small nit pick but this is unnecessary. We know Jakes at the helm it doesnt need reiterating.

Fdrugc

Tftc

Rewdan

Thanks Zogarth, this is brilliant.

Rewdan

I wonder how many levels Jake is going to get from all this.

Ed Soto

Tftc

brjenness

I didn't know whether the speaker received the title or he was referring to Jake's title.

brjenness

Will be interesting to see who scarlet can bring out. Is she still stronger than Jake? Is she the strongest in the galaxy?

brjenness

Will Jake feel a tug if someone else brings someone out or will that other person be the measuring cup ?

Episode 19

it seems like we got some new forces popping into the 93rd Universe tyftc

Vega

Dang it, I want more! Now I’ve got to wait for tomorrow… Thanks for the chapter!

David Vieira

Funny that there as been lots of talk about giving blessings just for him to leave without giving any

Hornbach

I would guess closer to 50. He spent more than a decade in the pantheon of life i think.

Michael

Ok now why? Will they go back or go to earth? With most strong B grades gone for the admin trials they might be the strongest figures on earth now after Jake? Will Jake go back to bring more? I feel he still have to give the big snake a blessing and make some kind of more solid deal with everyone to join the order or something!

Josie

Oh look. We have an entire minor world now motivated to help Jake level as fast as possible. Time to hunt! 😃

Robinn57

Yay! Frog friends and spider Bros. Unleash them all!

brjenness

Maybe zog will get overly excited about how interesting this arc has become and crank out another chapter? Who needs sleep, or exercise, or food? I do find it wild that Zog still writes without a backlog. I suppose he probably does more than a single chapter some days, but I guarantee he has a calendar or storyboard or some kind of planning tool with all the really mean cliffhangers highlighted like a normal person would highlight their birthday or a holiday or start of a vacation.

Maleko

Editing comment: "I'll let you all know if you start to feel anything different..." -> "if I start"

Dan

Surely Jake will get a level or two minimum for introducing two new races to the multiverse? Assuming they are actually "new," of course

Noah Mclelland

I wonder about the restrictions, will it go away after a condition is met, say when the universe has an A grade, S grade, or when it fully opens up? Will it always be the case where they need someone stronger than themselves to get let out?

Sylphie

Ree!

Kaladin

So will they report right back or hang out in the multiverse for a while? How does Jake plan on moving them between worlds as I believe his return plan was to teleport with the token as Arnold catapulted him to Venus

djthomp

So Jake or someone who entered from outside has to bring people out and they can only go if the system judges the balance of power being favorable to the outside party. Since the initial test case subjects all just became Forerunners of the New World that makes me wonder if they could bring people out now in turn. Speaking of them being Forerunners, what else came with that title back originally? Just Myriad Tongues? Now we just need some snake buddies too, maybe some other races as well if there's any sensible candidates for it.

djthomp

Even if he doesn't get any levels it's got to be some impressive records to help fuel his future growth.

McMuffin

Same exact thoughts regarding forerunner title and bringing people out themselves.

Gracie

tftc

Almer Reyhan

The hell. Is the chapter shorter than usual? 😭

zran

me assumption is just he will tell them to chose individuals to act as a diplomats and as time passes they will send people to help those who whant to explore the multiverse, since no way in hell jake gonna let hundreds of individuals out by himself tho he willl definitelly tell the leaders of both factions what the ones he took with him where able to cross over and how that functions

CocoaBleu

Am I the only one who thought of Silas??? 😂 TFTC

zran

just give him time, likely he will end giving some, if not to the frogs, the snake people he will meet later

brjenness

Lillian is going to be left to deal with a bunch of creepy crawlers from venus.

Cyranosaurus

I need more chapters😅 Great story thank you!!!!

KevB

Lol. I knew the system was going to announce who the galaxy's owner is. TFTC!

Lynderyn

I didn’t see that coming

zran

likely jake will return to give them the good news, tell them to bring individuals to act like diplomats and then once he let them out... send them to the order to give them a crash course about the multiverse, since they are very ignorant about many matters about the multiverse, and they definitelly need the knowledge

zran

and tomorrow it will definitelly hang us on the cliff

Colin

Welcome to the new universe! Would you like some Jake juice?

BumAssBumAss

Interesting, that makes these people denizens of the 93rd universe. They could participate in events with Jake as well.

Jason Hardman

Guessing that would depend on how compatible with their path it was. Guessing Jake is more likely to get levels from introducing the Malefic Viper to the scalefolk, and potentially all the toxins he's taking in with his pallete, as that aligns with his profession. It might give him some bonuses as an Administrator, and will probably have influence on what classes/professions he's offered. Although, there's so much more he'll end up doing before then, that I think this is likely to be swamped out with other deeds he'll do more often.

ABTelford

Forerunner of the New World…holy cow I have a feeling this is a hint at something huge! Like the whole multiverse is gonna change soon or something! 😀. Or I’m reading too much into it 😉. And now, will they proceed out to explore? Or will they turn right back around and tell their factions? Or both - split up? 🤔

McMuffin

Cliff/twist, now that Jake brought them out and they became denizens, they are not able to get back through the boundary

Jason Hardman

Interesting that it's judged on relative power. It might be a shock to the natives how powerful Jake is judged to be at his relatively new B grade level, compared to their native elites. There's some issues that Jake may or may not consider, or even care about. First, they can use the comparison to fine tune a true understanding of Jake's power level, although I doubt that is a big issue. The main problem is that the judgement is against Jake’s power level, which is freakishly strong compared to the rest of the universe. Anyone he brings out could go on a rampage with nobody strong enough to stop them, other than Jake. That being said, there's likely other limits and factors to consider, and anyone from the minor world would have to be a moron to try something like that.

Christophe H.

To short! I want the story. And thanks for the chapter!

Ra

Well, it's not like the Venusians and Arachnecs know about the power requirement. It's purely based on Jake's intuition, and he sure isn't going to reveal that.

Terence Myers

Actually I dont think it says. At least they didnt tell Jake that it says yet.

Lemonsqueezy

I do not believe they have the ability to get back through the toxic barrier before they died without Jake's assistance. They couldn't get far enough before so I would expect the same after.

Lemonsqueezy

I just checked the word count between today's and yesterday's chapter, and this one is actually a little bit longer (by about 100 words, 500 characters).

MarineDebris

Would be cool if Jake could infuse Palate into an alchemical solution that could then be coated onto Arnold's drones, making them able to pass through the boundary.

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

Lemonsqueezy

I checked the word and character count. This chapter is actually longer than yesterdays.

brjenness

dynamic duo i had not thought about. draskil and Sandie. quite funny if they are forced to work together. I think draskil will come to enjoy his role as a pocket monster.

brjenness

I also think the gold dragon princess will hate miranda at first. might be fun to see an overconfident dragon get some mud on her face when she tries attacking a prepared miranda and team. probably need to have someone like ss or jake show up to end the fight before someone gets killed.

Lemonsqueezy

It also means that even if those that he brought out can now bring out others they will never be stronger than Jake unless they manage to level up significantly faster than he can. Even if that does happen, Jake can easily destroy Venus and the portal to the minor would to prevent them from bringing anyone out that could threaten Earth or the 93rd universe.

Lemonsqueezy

With the Shaman (and I am assuming the other people that were brought out) getting the Forerunner title, that that means that this minor world was considered a tutorial for them, or that they are now entering a tutorial of sorts. According to the wiki the title is: [Forerunner of the New World] – Complete the introduction and enter the tutorial as a forerunner of the New World. +3 all stats. Grants the skill: [Endless Tongues of the Myriad Races (Unique)].

djthomp

It makes sense as a few stats to hand tutorial participants to get them started, but at this point that +3 is almost cute.

Lemonsqueezy

That would be interesting. I mean even if they could get back through I doubt they would be able to get all the way back through the toxic layer on their own or without Jake's help.

John Durrett

tyftc. Correction - I’ll let you all know if you start to feel anything different, and you all do the same.” I’ll let you all know if "I" start to feel anything different, and you all do the same.”

brjenness

possibility Arnold is the second human they meet.

John Durrett

Zog cut off the end - it could be New World Wonder. Making this planet a huge attraction across the multiverse

JW Saxby

This is so exciting 👍🏼😁👍🏼 I want more chapters!!!! 😩 Tyftc 🍻

Seen Death

The great thing about this multiverse, is that basically anything is possible with the correct setting I dont think that exact scenerio is very possible, however i could easilly see Arnold being able to make a toxin generator... which turns toxins into energy which is used to power a shield or something Im not entirely sure how useful arnold would be on this world, with such powerful toxins and creatures... there would also be a lot of space taken up by the poison sea Maybe to collect some resources? But the locals also would probably value those resources aswell Plus, this world being a perfect place for jake to adavnce, id like him to monopolize it as much as possible haha This is jakes multiverse afterall, arnold is cool but he already has the moon to himself

SqrlyGrly

I think the golden dragon princess wants Jake to help her build enough of a resistance to suppression to spend time with her dad and that he was on board with that. She won't want to pick a needless fight when she can get a better result working with Miranda and earth than against them

Deborah

So you think Jake would be smart enough to say that Villy's and the system are intentionally keeping the level low to let him grow naturally. That way he could take S-grade order keepers for gate security.

brjenness

at some point zog will reveal that all 115 universes of this system are just part of a larger multiverse's world wonder.

Jeryd Greer

Zog is Sean Oswald aware. Maybe even a reader.

Jacob Hopkins

Well ...the secret's out. Now they know Jake is top dog in his universe, for better or worse.

brjenness

the frozen warrior part after they passed the barrier has my zoggy senses tingling. did the warrior feel how strong they are in comparison to jake? maybe, but i think this warrior already saw him in action. did the warrior receive more info than what they let jake know? maybe something like, "you have entered the milky way galaxy, territory owned by jake the chosen of the malefic viper, second in command of a primordial faction"

ABTelford

I think he froze just from the notification that he had passed beyond the Boundry. That would have been shock enough. I highly doubt the System would include lots of details - it doesn’t do that.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Chloe

Tyftc