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Burkes

Hell yeah right as i refreshed the page

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Misa

Tftc

Beemoss

Tftc

Arrogant Savant

Lol Villy coming in with mystical god stuff the sea serpent finds ridiculous but is an every day thing for Jake.

Simon

ww tftc

AfroMocha

Hahaha tftc but what kinda ending was that lmfao zog the god of cliffs and hangers

tigerfishie

Tyftc! Once again I’m up all night for homework… only it’s my senior capstone project that I need to do well on or I can’t graduate next year. It’s due in 4.5 hours 😣

Episode 19

Good character development Tyftc

David Vieira

Ty for chapter, a bit empty of plot tho but I guess its setting up for tomorrow cliffhanger :D

Schneeente

If that cute little orange snek didn't earn itself at least a minor blessing I'll eat my hat! Blessing, blessing, blessing!!!

Jaydan Man

This is an excellent story plot at this point in the story. As Jake gets stronger and stronger finding ways to keep him as a small fish in a big pont occasionally is great. His having new experiences where he can't power his way through and his weakness at politics can shine through is excellent. While the numbers going up is why I'm here, seeing him have challenges is the point of it all. Great writing. Having Villy save the day this time in hopes next time he learns his Villy. Damn lesson. Chefs kiss. Tftc

Posiden 300

Fucking chapter teas

djthomp

I'm really curious to see exactly what Villy got up to in sending the big snake to rescue Jake. The way it phrased that last part doesn't really sound like it's something as simple as a blessing.

Staudi

Tyftc!

Michael

did Villy send him a dream?

Vega

I do wonder what Jake could have done differently in this adventure to not end up with a bad outcome, barring following Villy’s suggestion to kill and ditch at the Boundary? Exploring a world filled with A-grades who out of touch with the multiverse was always going to end up dicey. I’m really happy with the character growth Jake has had though. Also, I’ve said this before, but this snake sounds so cool!

Rob Lyon

I don't think you blessed him I think he's going to let Jake do that I think he gave him a vision or something like that that's why he thinks it's kind of nonsensical. Whatever happened was so strange even the sea serpent is an entirely sure what to believe. He just knows he met something way stronger than him

Noah Mclelland

Yea it was good, but kind of repeating and explaining stuff we already know. I feel every chapter that isnt at the crux of an arc has a lot of inner dialogue or other ways to fill the chapter that isnt really needed. In saying that its good because it paces the story so its not all action, it gives a baseline for zog to really build a climax when the arc really peaks.

Xander

TFTC :) Suggested edits: "Jake was *genuinely* unsure if the Great Sea Serpent was genuinely asking Jake" repetition. Suggest changing the first to "honestly" "surprised if most high-tier *A-grade* could" should be "A-grades" "considered talents*, either, but* the Venusians" This is a clunky run on sentence. I suggest ditching the highlighted part to end one sentence after *talents* and start the next at "The" "But ** reality was that Jake would" missing word "the" "his movements ** caught the attention of the massive serpent that had swallowed him *instantly*," Move the "instantly" to before "caught" because you want to imply the attention was caught instantly not that the swallowing was instant. "the monster’s *attention* on him." repetition from earlier in the sentence. "awareness" or "consideration" perhaps. "shouldn’t *reveal too much*, if anything at all." repetitive phrasing. perhaps "be too revealing" or just clip out the bit between "reveal" and "anything"

Zach138

It was because the Great Serpent wasn't invited in the first place.

Josie

If he did, I hope he made the dream utterly ridiculous as a way to make fun of Jake for being dumb. and that's why the Serpent woke up angry lol

brjenness

I halfway expected Jake to come out of meditation in a temple to villy and him surrounded by worshipping snakes.

kandiana

Tftc "and hopefully my anger can help alleviate your justified caution." - should be answer, not anger?

Rahsheem Reid

Hmmm this snake might get a few shots of Jake juice to hit S grade.

zran

me sugestion could had been...., leave the minor world and return when he's A grader, he arrogantly believed they could treat him as equal or at the very least as a person, but they did seen him as something inferior to that, as something what could help them to expand their territories, to create a individual at a higer grade, the only way to even the scales in such situation is match their power if not surpass it, so they could take him seriusly, but he was a recently b grader, so they see it as they could push him as they whanted.. especially seen how the nestmother tried to control him with her mental magic, so yeah, he heavily believed his status could keep him safe, but he downplayed the ignorance of the locals heavily

Daniel Brian

I was fully expecting his first words to be "I greet the Chosen of the Malefic Viper."

Michael mann

I get the vibe that Big Ol’ Snek has based his path around Ambushing. So likely heavy stealth skills, perception forward and using his words as traps too. Jake will likely get along really well with them! The line about “perceiving me even though I did not wish it” makes me think there’s a good amount of spacial magic alongside the concepts of being perceived. Jake could take inspiration to improve unseen hunter even further!

Major Casaw

So it's clear the snake isn't bless because jake would sense that. But also villy did something to get the snake there. I'm kinda sad that *something* didn't result in the meditation chamber covered in mushrooms. "I have it on good authority that mushrooms help the chosen recover faster"

Fdrugc

Tftc

John Durrett

Not my normal post but called it. Snake eyes. He was just far to big only one of two eyes could fit in view

brjenness

I'm going to open a fitness center with nothing but those rotating wall climbing things and call it The Temple of Zog to see if anybody figures out why.

brjenness

I wonder if we'll ever get a scene of young villy hanging out in a tree telling a woman, "it certainly looks delicious. If I ate fruit, I'd at least try it. Take a bite of that apple, you know you want to."

brjenness

Akschually.., ummm.., akschually .., dammit, I can't think of a retort. You win. My day is ruined.

Josie

once I understood that reference I laughed irl lol

Dan

Snek boi may be peaved he's not only not the strongest being anymore, but also incredibly far from even being the strongest tubular reptilian. Also saw a comment on a prior chapter about using Jake juice to help the serpent become a special variant, and that would be an amazing way to make up for his rescue

dash w

Thanks for the chappy

Matthew Monroe

Villy giving weird dreams that made big snek stop by and help lol

Ryan Linus

I have a hard time understanding his logic for returning…

joker ledger

I remember jake can only detect blessing within his own rank. This one is peak A grade, maybe near S. No way jake can see if it has a blessing or not

Gracie

tftc 🐍🐍🐍

Sylphie

Ree!

ABTelford

Yay, great chapter! I am liking this snake! And I’m also liking Jake’s reflecting and learning - his arrogance needed tempering and it’s nice to see. 😇. Thanks for a fun read

ChRiAn

So, what are we gonna name Scarlett 2.0?

P A J

Glad to see Jake reflecting on his mistakes. Its clear to me that this sort of thing really isnt his strong suit, and while he isnt overly arrogant he has gotten a bit too used to being in a situation of power.

Alexandre8901

2 weeks ago I was pretty certain we would time skip to Prima Seat event... Now not even sure were getting there before summer time! 😅

Ben Heggem

Did we really need to blue ball the conversation for another chapter so we can go over his fuckups in his head lmao, tftc

CallHimDan

Is it Friday already? King och cliffs

Loststar7

If this is the Thursday teaser I’m mildly terrified of tomorrow’s cliff. Zog you’re an asshole. Thanks for the chapter.

Josh Strange

TL;Dr= Jake FAFO'd in the wrong place and is learning that he still sucks at diplomacy. He went back because Jake is a man of his word. Quite literally, it's part of his Path. He said he'd be back after finding out if he could help anyone leave the boundary. He was also trying to show them that he had no intention of screwing them over. Unfortunately for Jake he has gotten way too used to being treated like a Chosen, and he was in the literal one place in the multiverse where his title meant absolutely nothing to the natives. Yeah, they kinda realized he's definitely stronger than someone of his same level or possibly a genius, but to them he's "just" a B-grade.

Lemonsqueezy

Zog you just confirmed so many of my predictions/assumptions and answered quite a few questions I had. The only few remaining are "What did Villy do? Will/is a blessing involved? What is the plan moving forward?" and finally "what overpowered xp or skill is Jake about to get?"

Josh Strange

Thanks for the chapter Zog! I'm really loving the change of pace. It's been a while since we've seen Jake so thoroughly out of his depth. Can't wait to see how this is gonna impact the System Event, since he's learning diplomacy here. Hopefully that helps him learn to be better and more cautious. I'm pretty sure the Exhaulted Prima Event is definitively more diplomatic as apposed to combative, if the first interaction with it is anything to go off of.

Lemonsqueezy

We did get a lot of things answered in this chapter. We can only hope that tomorrow the rest of what we want to know is told, but I got a bad feeling tomorrow is going to be something completely unrelated to Jake. Like a POV of one of the other characters in the first phase of SoTEP.

Lemonsqueezy

Only Thursday. So we can only hope he releases a chapter tomorrow considering that he said he is really busy with his move.

Lemonsqueezy

We had to have at least something for Jake to test out his new evolution to B-Grade. Quite a bit more involved that I thought it would be that is for sure.

doctordirt

He has to write every chapter with a cliffhanger ending my biggest complaint about the series.

John Kornegay

I say again, I hope we revisit Venus much later to kick the shit out of that horny toad.

Colin

I greet Daniel Brain. 🙇 (Yea, but for real- same. Maybe tomorrow.)

Lemonsqueezy

Yeah I saw that too. IMO I do not think it is possible due to the significant difference in power between Jake and this peak A-Grade. His primal origin skill is super overpowered, but I believe it is still limited to what he can do as a B-Grade. Not saying it wouldn't help the Serpent evolve, but that it might only be an insignificant drop in the bucket of what would be required to make it a variant. He had a lot of issues when he did it before for creatures that are his grade.

Lemonsqueezy

It goes back to Jake being able to detect Eversmile at Nevermore even though no one else could, not even other Primordials. Perception is the best stat after all. The ambushing skill of the serpent does make sense because in general snakes are ambush predators. However, I think it would be quite difficult to ambush something when you are the length of an entire planet, but it did say he could shrink down to only a measly 50 meters (sarcasm). So he went from world size to the size of a blue whale or wing span of a Boeing 787.

Lemonsqueezy

I still do not think that Jake could do much to influence the peak A-Grade. The difference in power is just too great. Even if Jake gave everything he had it would pale in comparison to what would be required to help. Grade evolutions are exponential.

Josie

This cave probably has awesome acoustics. I bet the Serpent has a secret for whiling away the hours 🐍🎤🎶

Sayjinlord

Hopefully at peak B grade or early A grade so Jake can get a level or 2 out of it.

Kevin Watson

this is just about how i expected this to go. i wonder what exactly happened that the serpent would fear is “nonsensical,” it has to be something to do with Villy or Jake’s blessing no? tftc

Lemonsqueezy

The best guess I have seen are that Villy sent the snake a dream or vison of what was to come if Jake was killed. The snake wouldn't understand who Villy was, what the multiverse is, or what being a Chosen means. To the snake it would be nonsensical because it just wouldn't fit with what the snake knows or experienced. It would just seem over-the-top to suddenly be given information that said that he isn't even close to being all-powerful, and that even though Jake is a new B-Grade he is one of the most important beings in the multiverse and his death or harm would mean their end and they would not be able to do a damn thing about it.

Lemonsqueezy

I think it is going to be a mixed bag of several elements. All the things that would be required of someone to be the leader of an entire universe/government/kingdom. Logistics, laws, war, diplomacy, punishment and well-being of subordinates.

Alex Lane

I'd like if the scene about Villy getting involved was a misdirect

Adam Taylor

Want, was the gender ever confirmed for great snake? Snek in love is my parlay bet

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

brjenness

it would have been set up differently, but it would be funny if this backfired on villy too and bigsnek thought he could get a higher blessing by killing jake.

brjenness

bigsnek: I've recently been introduced to karaoke. care to join me in a song...don't tell my heart, my achey, breaky..." jaje: villy! what have you done?

Rewdan

Cheers Zogarth I absolutely love what you’re writing

JW Saxby

Excellent 🐍👍🏼 Tftc 🍻

Fylbrom

So Villy did shenanigans with his records in all snakes to 'nudge' the big guy over to the boundary. The big snake complies but obviously questions what exactly that nudge was. When he arrives at the boundary he senses Villy's power in Jake and is prolly just as in the dark as Jake with this whole thing. I imagine Jake will end up blessing the big guy but maybe he turns it down for some reason? The other A Grades were not happy with the idea of being subservient in the multiverse, so maybe its not different for the Snake. Either way, tomorrow's cliff hanger is gonna suck major balls...

Phallusar

I'd say this is running a bit long but Zogarth still sounds salty about people who didn't like how long Nevermore was.

Fylbrom

Also, it would be a great basis for him to give the idea of having one of those du geon floors in Nevermoor be a minor world with the same premise of not knowing about anything higher. We kind of got that with the dragon trying to reach Godhood but its taken to the extreme here in Venus and ended up almost being worst case scenario. It would be interesting to see how minaga/wyrmgod would play off this... exerience.

brjenness

in January, when Sandie meets Bigsnek, they immediately get into a contest to see who can make themselves bigger.

CT

Snake getting a blessing that feels certain. It would be hilarious if the snake asked for a name from Jake and him going "not this shit again" :D

CT

and Sandy bragging about bigsnek not having Tom.

Samuel Jones

Yes, Sylphie, it did in fact get a lot smellier; I'd venture to say it rivals the smelly pot

ZanSanCho

Tftc Zog!

ZanSanCho

Eh, haters gonna hate. I thought evermore was a fine length. Especially considering we skipped a few decades

Peter Smith

No worse. The snake got a quest from villy to earn both a blessing and a gift.

Matthew Thompson

Anyone else kinda wish for a spin off series focusing on the Sword Saint or Carmen???

Alex

Oi zog. Loving this tftc can't wait to see what happens

Chloe

Well you see, I was dreaming and this Snake god said look in on you. Nonsense right? Tyftc