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Hey Everyone,

Sorry for the later in the day post. Wasn't happy with the direction and decided to rewrite them, and happier now for it.

My birthday was on the 20th, and it was a great day with the family. My sister made me a massive cake, and I ended up overdosing on buttercream frosting. I have no regrets.

Bought myself a home gym to live longer, but was dismayed to find out that just purchasing it didn't result in an immediate weightloss or six pack. Might have to return it. :)

Hope you all had a wonderful weekend, and that you enjoy the chapters. Let me know what you think.

Brian

Comments

Batman nova

Happy birthday

Alteron

Love the chapters, I like the new flavour of abilities, and happy birthday.

Vash119

I liked the new ability showcase and the potential havoc Sal learning of this ability will cause

BoonePharm

Probably better to post this on Discord, but I'm not there so... Just ran across an ad on RR for a book called Myth//OS where humanity is living in "Bastion, the last hope of civilization". Maybe a little too much inspiration from QA?

BrianJNordon

Looks to be pretty distinctive, with just a few coincidences. If the main character was Hal and he was a Crafter, then we'd probably have some issues. :)

Dawn Zeleznik

Sorry for double posting, I forgot to thank you for getting Oswald’s daughter Khloe and Enigma in there. I’ve been waiting for that to come together.

Jake Conway

Edgar Allan crow and Charlie horse 😂😂

Joseph Kozachek

Great set of chapters again. A few thoughts on chapter 36. Sal says visiting the Darwin cruises wasn’t on his to do list….bbut seemto remember he was supposed to visit the cruises as one oh his tower rewards so it kinda was on his to do list. That and his mother is running high level dungeons and he didn’t jump to make sure she had good gear seemed a little off. Thanks for the consideration. Oh and if Daedalus can make custom Legendary stuff in 20 minutes wouldn’t he run his guild through it especially those going into a portal run? But love this progression and the latest outing

Booleans

I really enjoy Sal and friends getting back out into the field.

nin10do

Audible release tommorrow

C

Soooo. Anyone else popping in here cause it's Monday?

Dirtdawg

I was kind of wondering about Divinity's reference to the "guild meeting being over" and Sal "could throw some stuff her way if we hadn't missed Sal and Robert negotiating Herboth of her contract/scholarship.

Brett 'Swantz' Swanson

Ch. 38, page 3, top: "a bit of process" should be "progress." I thought that I'd commented last week but I couldn't find it!

Christopher Harris

OK I feel a little dumb with stuff around Divinity at this point. So the last book ended on her entering Athena when she was stressed out about her ability. And ascension happened, not sure what that meant, maybe an auto advance in grades? Then nothing. I might have missed more description at the end of the chapter but I don't think so. Felt like an end of book cliff hanger. Then we don't see her for 10+ chapters in the new book and there's some coy references to sparring and a new ability? We're now 40 chapters in and I still have no idea what the resolution was with her. Can someone let me know if I missed something? And if so how it was delivered? I've just recently joined the patreon and have been blitzing so likely I missed something.

Envious

I've been rereading the series after finishing the most recent audiobook. And had the same thoughts as you. Unclear where Divinity stands, if she's in his guild, if she's on board with joining his guild once the HB/scholarship stuff is resolved or if she's still planning to do her own thing for a couple years before maybe joining.

Atredie

re chapter 38: Not clear who is making Diva's bodysuit (probably not Petro or Quest). Do we ever learn its stats, other than Adaptive? I'm assuming it's Legendary, unknown if it is Evolutionary. And do we ever learn what she makes with Arsenal? Thought it would be explained later, like when we see her using it in front of Sal later in the book, but all we learn is the name (Absolute Acquisition, ch 81). Do Sofia, Mica, and Nova get similar suits someday? Even Seth's ensemble is described in more detail than hers.