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Andrew Tobin

You know, the more I hear about this Dinnaman character the more I suspect he’s secretly cool. Pics or it didn’t happen.

BoonePharm

You should pick up Dungeon Crawler Carl if you haven't read it yet. It's a great series.

Robert Smart

Super interesting chapters. Ty. They did spark a thought though. The hardware that prime runs on is a dungeon core and a lot of the other techs smarts are built off demon cores. So why aren’t the demons who’ve had this base for much longer technologically light years ahead of us earthlings? Are we just some kind of experiment in a Petri dish to them?

Rook

Interesting. I assume it’s about what they can bring to earth? Or maybe they don’t think the same way about tech and society?

james williams

Noticed Fabi wasn't in the tax free contract, maybe it will final be enough of an incentive for her to join the team!!!

pratticus maximus

Thank you! I keep expecting a huge anvil to fall. Looking forward to seeing what Barry has been up to.

Scott

Really enjoyed these chapters, and looking forward to the dungeon runs. Maybe as much as Upgrade. Question for the more diligent readers not having a senior moment: What book/chapter did the skill stone creation happen? Assuming part of the Daedalus build?

Louis l

The problem with outsourcing all the thinking/creativity to AI is that the characters lose agency and start to feel superfluous. Honestly I feel the same with using AI in my own work.

Michael Murphy

Looking forward to the dungeon runs (I want to see the reactions of Sal's friends to his auctioneer parents, especially ones like Barry and Blauthned, or the girl who eats cores to get stronger). And Divinity is always fun to have around the Argentos, and I could definitely see Vanessa and Sophia having hilarious chemistry. Also looking forward to what Athena says for the parents.

Zac Crow

Mondays are the best and the worst!!! Im always left wanting more. Im so excited when I start reading the new chapters then I get to the end and my stomach sinks. Another week fuck.

Zac Crow

By the way... I feel a little robbed. What the fuck happened with villa. Sal said he would hire her and her team. She said he couldn't afford it then petro announced the guilds income but we never got back to villa or the offer he made to hire them full time.

nin10do

I saved all 24 chapters to read and wow I was hooked I loved the politic manoeuvres in the board room and the last few chapters of Sophia included in the story more and a full planned outpouring of Brian mind of planning of the future of the harbour - I think the other districts will be very jealous lol

nin10do

I can see it happening eventually but they are at quest academy at present and Brian will probably bring them in several times before that