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Vgoldtime

Looks very interesting watched.

N U

Time to avert a traaaaagedy.

Draconius

Oh this strikes me hard. I guess Jinyue has an ability to take the ability of the dead.

Snuckytoes

It looks like he probably died in the original timeline and she somehow got his powers from him and then went on a revenge murder spree. I wonder if he died because some organization kidnapped him for experiments to try and steal his powers?

Silver flare

Cool this one feels alot more organic than that first draft. So two future paragons with incredible potential have been found before it hits the fan. Guess she absorbed his power when he died and spent the next few decades mastering it. Miss returnee is really on the ball! This one looks fun! Hope to see more!

Doleful

This is intriguing so far. It kind of reminds me of that one novel based around a Demon Lord of Sloth that just has the story move around him. It's just the first chapter so I'm sure things will be different, but I'm getting good vibes from this.

Ghost

Not gonna lie, I do enjoy the silliness a lot more than the original idea. I like when the world is going to hell and the characters decide to put on sunglasses and do a silly dance just for the heck of it anyway.

bryan bussing

This version definitely starts with a more interesting premise.

aj0413

Yandere get! Ahh I do love a romcom with real stakes~~~

Valerian

Some shadow organization definitely captured them both in the original timeline and did some horrible experiment that got Kanata killed and his powers transferred to her.

Macha

Pretty good.

Wing101r

both likely got experimented that ended th wJin getting kanatas power or Jinyue was actually a power copier/thief who wasnt interested in switching to other powers

Luis Z

MOOOORRRREEE

Aceraptor

I really like this. Would love to see more. I'm guessing either a rogue part of the church/government was involved in trying to exploit the pair and killed Kanata in the process or Kanata saved Jinyue somehow transferring his life force/ability to her to save her life while on the run. Could also be some other shadowy organization but if the group that caused the tragedy was part of the government/church then it would explain Jinyue's roaring rampage of revenge against the world. I look forward to Yue realizing what had happened and becoming hellbent on eliminating the rogue organization to prevent a similar tragedy from playing out.

NotteBoy97

Hmm good chapter but idk I liked the other Returner idea more personally. The MC being a lazy type isn't that appealing to me and I liked being the childhood friend of the Returner instead of a 'villainess'. The way the MC could see how his childhood friend changed and didn't change from her future experiences was very interesting and won't happen her since Yue is a stranger to him. But oh well this story is good too so can't complain too much

Danerol

Reminds me that short manga where girl become a bioterorist when her boyfriend died and when he hear this story from time traveler he went right to altar with her

Jackson Waddle

It also makes me wonder if her being antagonistic to humanity was due to a cover up, as if some secret organization killed Kanata in the timeline and she rampaged to destroy them, then if the truth didn't get revealed to the public then it would make her look crazy.

Roughstar333

Reminds me of Tanaka-kun. Let's get some naps now

Krisjanis Jansons

Or enemy that apeared afterwards targeted two individuals with potenntional to cause most problems in future and enshured they are their vanguard.

Zarik0

Yue is 116 years old no? And experienced so much, so Its a bit dissapointing that she start spouting and seeing and measuring/judging things with simplistic flawed one sided basic superficial "Evil" concept that she put on things/people here in her though as first reaction/view, very one dimensional simplistic and shallow take and view used on things to me for a mature 116 years old person who experienced so much

Danerol

Well, her greatest achievement is that she died last. Not that she was strongest or smartest.