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Srsli

Just letting everyone know there have been some slight changes to the last few paragraphs of chapter 166 as mentioned yesterday, in particular with the meeting, making it slightly less abrupt, and a tiny bit more personal after business :)

Hammy

TFTC.

Caiban

Thx for the chapter ^^ While i enjoy the traveling aspect of the story and the whole "Look we found new overpowered friends that like food" aspect of it i honestly also enjoy this slice of life world building in the city ^^ It just shows more of the world through politics and stuff. So imo it can go on for a while and its ok if they font go back on trail in "a few weeks". But ofc on the other side i cant wait to explore the world more and read about fantastical sites and meeting other races and such ^^

Srsli

yeah its important to remember this is still tagged as a SOL too so there will be some points where the group, just chills (during winter :P ) but I felt like it would be natural for Trevor to want to find out when he can run away from politics though, so it serves the purpose of telling the reader adventure is coming back, but it'll be a little while, at the same time, Trevor realises he has a couple weeks of politics to survive before he can escape.

Metafy

Thank you for the chapter!

Robert

I really like Archie, and I hope Trevor makes him some speedy candy drops and high defense jerky. Something Archie could keep hidden on himself, but use in case of emergency when protecting House Ashmoon.

Robert

Specifically, because the party will be leaving soon.

D.

I came for the 20ish chapters, but the cat fan service made me stay.