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When You Fell from Heaven — 24 — Blank Spaces (20.8k words) (Patreon)

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2025-06-22 20:57:47
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This took a while. Real life stuff. Also—don’t laugh—this is no longer the penultimate chapter of All the Way. There are still two to go, I suspect.

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Comments

Briar Rae

No laughter, only joy! Okay I guess I laugh when I’m joyful but I’m not specifically joyfully laughing that this story will now be longer. Actually, I tell a lie, I am laughing about that but in a highly complimentary and flattering way for your excellent writing. You should see it there are flourishes and curtsies and spins and for the grand finale I fall down!

JCog

Never been more excited to have to drop the rest of my plans for the day.

Aria Silkiss

I caught up on the series just a few days ago so this was a super welcome surprise! This chapter gives me hope for a good coming out experience with people who have been in my life previous... ans as always there's such a tender and sweet mood in the writing 💞

UltraLuigi

It's funny that I learned about the word antepenultimate yesterday, and now here's an occasion where it's relevant. Also wow that chapter, especially the flashback at the end. Still wondering if we'll get polyamory, or just Willa and Avery as a second couple.

grrl

Honestly, I just expect the “penultimate” chapter to be a bit now. It’s okay, I am here for it.

bonnibella

i love when trans women show their femininity power level for the first time to someone

Ashley B

I am reminded randomly that I learnt the word Penultimate from the Monty Python sketch about the Penultimate Supper 😂

Jade Diaz

Wonderful chapter! Excited for my girls to conquer Homecoming.

Talzin

Lovely chapter and every bit of emotional as expected. Will also say, as a reader cannot be sad to hear there are still two more to go in All the Way.

baked

Yay :) Excellent work on the bomb defusal,, and if only Avery and Max had known before 🥺😴

baked
>>178060660

A the tired face was meant to be a sad face 😓😓

Wren Roberts

I’ve never heard “plug in a seatbelt” before. Eris bless, that feeling of no way about anything romantic . . . I remember that. Ouch. Lovely as always! I’m so glad they brought Avery on board. One problem solved, many more to go.

Zenmadster

This part of Avery coming to Cali definitely deserves to be its own chapter, no matter how much I want more *right now*.

Zenmadster
>>178066700

Waiting to see who she actually ends up staying with, though. But maybe I'm only *hoping* that's significant ^^;

Sparifankerl

Thanks for the chapter, it was great!

Anamorphose

OH MY GOD. Alyson, this story does weird glowy things to my guts and I love it. Even working in the reference to heavy petting signs in swimming pools. LOVE IT!

SingularCurve

Ive had days like that myself. Being a girl/woman is just right. When others dont get it at first, its like a bomb going off. Eventually they see it. Its one of the reasons I dont see people from my past. Great chapter. Love for all the things. I still think Zima is a shitty drink and a Bartles and James wine cooler is so much better than zima ever was. Part of that is that zima had the aftertaste of a malt beverage or a shitty american beer. Im so glad that zima doesnt exist anymore.

Yaara Saveelan

Absolutely love that aves and max were fully in lesbians and dating in ny. Good for them. Toxic willavery jealousy ship is my dream but i expect something more positive from you as always

Mabel Zanders

this was a difficult chapter to read the first time through. it was very visceral in a too realistic way, but what saved it, and avery as a character, for me, was realizing that about halfway through, her discomfort came less from a place of "max doesn't live up to what i wanted" and more from "i failed to see the real max despite how close we were." she's just projecting, and while a lot of her reaction is uncomfortable, recognizing that it's just her own guilt bubbling up and seeing her and max cry with each other while connecting fully, and authentically for maybe the first time, allowed it to be very moving in the end. great writing as always alyson, you have a really special touch for nuanced interpersonal conversations like this.

Rhiannon Swanson

oh i’m so excited for homecoming

Mara Weaver

This chapter was a bit of stress relief honestly after the last one! It was tense but cathartic and I'm happy that Ave is now mostly on board.

Kiva Maginn

Oh this is absolutely lovely. Though here in our little poly family we're pulling for a, um, very specific outcome. 😅

Gab

Really highlights just how bad Avery is doing mentally, even before struggling with all this new information, that she thought showing up as a surprise as "the gay friend" and expecting room and board from Max's parents was a good idea, given the whole thing with Clay. I have the impression she didn't even have the spoons to remember there could be a problem there. Also, Taylor and Wilma carefully threading the needle of "I will bite you if you misgender Max but I'll leave you room to learn and do better because we don't want to chase away someone so important to her if we can help it" was so nice. Says so much about how deeply and earnestly Max's friends have her back <3