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Comments

Geovanni Otero

Those voices are right, the shinobi system must be broken down and replaced with a better one

Andres

Danm man that was something else, I know I’m late to the party but wow if that was not some hardcore psychological horror that poor Tsunade was put through 10/10 that was amazing, though I seriously hope you don’t start to write horror I really don’t need the nightmares but considering your writing it’s would be worth it, keep up the good work man 👍🏽

Andres

Another thing I know that you may not be able to answer this but if you could that’ll be awesome. Who on Kami bless earth could possibly be a threat to Naruto in battle, because the Kages or the Sanin would not last long in a one on one fight and Akatsuki only Pain and maybe Obito if Naruto doesn’t have a hard counter for Kamui, and that’s a maybe, besides a full power Hashirama, Madara and Toneri (with Tenseigan) I don’t think anyone with the exception of Kaguya that can beat him if he uses Kurama’s full power besides his own, unless you are bringing the heavy guns some decades earlier like Kara (specifically Kashin Koji and Jigen) Urashiki, Kinshiki, Momoshiki and Ishiki I don’t see any. I’m not asking for spoilers I’m just want to know who could theoretically be a deadly threat to Naruto in a fight, if it is not too much to ask 🥹🥹😁

Drinor

I'm really happy to read this chapter. As for the Horror that will happen again, this Story will show the Horror of War and how bleak life in the Naruto verse can be, which includes more Horror in the future.

Drinor

Naruto is strong, but there will be threats to him. Personally, I believe there are other ways to make the stakes real without the need to introduce an overpowered character. Naruto is affected by what is happening, and it will impact his mind and body. I won't do spoilers, but Naruto's Perfect World will not come without sacrifices from both Naruto and the world he is trying to change.

Nikolai Ilushko

Ironically the system is about to collapse in Boruto TBV. Naruto is right to an extent that the Shinobi system is rotten from the core. But I'm sure what his actual plan is. OneLife plan sounds a like Human Instrumentality Project from NGE but maybe I'm wrong here.