Home Creators Posts Import Register Favorites Logout

Comments

FanObooks

Of course he makes it right when everything ends

Benedick Avery

Currrrrrrrrrrrse youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Cellinia

Man I really hope he doesn't try to take credit for saving them. They totally did everything themselves and earned it with blood, sweat, and tears. He just stole the spotlight with no work. My opinion of him will be in the gutter if he ends up having a savior complex thinking he has to save/is saving everyone.

Rook

Fun part 3, thanks. Has been an enjoyable climax to the arc. Ready for them to tier up and move out (I can’t see them staying around long term). I’ll admit I’m nervous about the introduction of Gabriel. Can’t see how he doesn’t completely unbalance the story without you immediately killing him or having him leave for some reason. Will be interested to see how you manage it. At the very least I hope he’s not the overprotective type. Or if he is that Mia puts him in his place.

Pholt

Enjoy your break!

Pholt

And don't forget to turn off notifications from your writing platforms if you truly want to switch off from author mode on your break.

Lar

Hey just wanted to tell you how much i enjoyed the chapters sofar. I started on 2 days ago and just caught up. Enjoy your break!

Cypha

Yeah, re-reading this after the break. It was a really nice end of the arc. :)