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Hey folks, quickly dropping the edited and finalized version of Neighborhood Encounters Chapter 3. Overall I am enjoying this one quite a bit and looking forward to seeing more of Clara.

Quick aside, look for the final edit of Toxic 24 by the end of the week.

Cheers, here it is:

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Clara’s Nike running shoes hit the asphalt with quick loping strides. She wiped the sweat from her forehead and checked her watch. She maintained her target pace as she jogged through the forested area near her new home.

A couple of weeks ago, she and her husband, Adam, had taken a stroll for the first time through this route. Since then, it had become part of Clara’s regular cardio routine. Aerobic exercise was one of the pillars on which Clara built her workout regime. Coupled with regular weight training, she was able to easily maintain her tight and toned body, which she knew Adam quite enjoyed. She didn’t just do it for her husband. It was mostly for her. Discipline, hard work, and reaching and achieving goals were important to Clara and that bled through into all aspects of her life.

As she ran her shoulder length platinum blonde hair bobbed with her, tied back into a ponytail. She never encountered anyone else in the forest during her morning runs. The trail didn’t seem to get a lot of traffic which suited Clara just fine. This way she didn’t have to worry about her running outfit attracting any unwanted attention.

It wasn’t skimpy by San Francisco standards, but her new area was a little more conservative than she would’ve liked. Her long, toned legs were on full display, topped with just a pair of black and white polyester shorts that stopped at her upper thigh. These were paired with a modest black sports bra with thick straps. It didn’t put her ample cleavage on display, but there was a sexy cross-section of thin straps running between the cups and the rest of her exposed chest. She knew it would still look good without being too attention-grabbing.

Clara passed the trail leading off to the subdivision, staying on the loop that would bring her back to her house. Pop songs danced in her ears, a curated playlist of songs with specific beats per minute that matched her desired running tempo.

Normally, running would put her into a meditative trance, but today, her mind kept gravitating towards work. There was a lot to do at her new startup at the University campus. Not only were there many more meetings and administrative activities than she had expected to deal with, but new hurdles were also becoming apparent. Firstly, she hadn’t realized that the school lacked connections with the local farming community. Clara would have to forge these herself, as partnering with farmers was crucial to the success of her project. She needed the data points to expand things nationally and hopefully relocate out of this area when the time came. The second was the difficulty in filling out her staff. Most local applicants were not qualified in the things she was looking for.

Clara pushed these thoughts out of her mind as the trail opened up, and she rounded a corner. The trailer park portion of her run was her least favorite part of the whole loop. Thankfully, it was short. She’d figure out her work problems like always, making a list of actions and knocking them off one at a time.

A beat-up pickup truck in front of one of the trailers caught her eye. She’d seen it a few times parked in Burt’s driveway. She stared in its direction for a few seconds before she realized there was someone sitting on the trailer’s porch, partially obscured by the shadow of its awning. Clara had seen this man before, staring at her from Burt’s driveway.

He was either a friend or a relative of Burt’s. Either way, he didn’t look like the sort of person Clara would want to spend any time around. Other than the faded jeans, the man wasn’t wearing anything. No shoes, no shirt, just exposed, weathered skin. His torso looked oddly proportioned. He had a gut but was otherwise physically filled out enough that he must be a laborer. If Clara had to guess, maybe a roofer. There was patchy stubble on his face, but Clara’s heart skipped a beat when she noticed the intense gaze in her direction. Clara turned back to the path in front of her and picked up her pace, eager to get through this section of trail and back into the forest.

Twenty minutes later, Clara slowed her pace as she arrived at her driveway. With hands on her hips, she took deep breaths and checked her watch to ensure she was under her target time. Movement out of the corner of her eyes caught her attention. She assumed it was Adam. She turned to smile at him but instead saw their large neighbor trudge across their lawn. His eyes focused on her.

“Morning, darlin',” Burt said with a smile that didn’t quite reach his eyes. His rough-looking face seemed to hide a permanent scowl. Clara took a moment to assess the man. He was wearing a pair of denim overalls and was shirtless underneath. Clara assumed he, like the other man she’d seen, was otherwise naked as it seemed to fit his personality.

His hands and forearms were blackened by what she assumed was motor oil. The hair on his wide barrel chest was poking out from behind the straps of the coveralls, which were stretched around his torso by his impressive gut. She winced internally at the lack of care on display in the sun-damaged skin of his arms and shoulders.

“It’s ‘Clara,’” she corrected, maintaining her politeness. Her Swedish parents had instilled impeccable manners in her from a young age, especially when it came to neighbors. Clara briefly reconsidered these lessons since Burt was quite unlike any neighbor she’s ever had.

“Yeah, I get it,” Burt chuckled, his eyes blatantly running up and down, taking in her body, “Just bein' friendly, that’s all.”

“Well, I appreciate that,” Clara said, meeting his eyes, “I would prefer ‘Clara’ in the future, that’s all.”

“Sure thing,” Burt smirked. Clara watched him break eye contact and lower his gaze to her chest. She wished then that she had worn one of her spandex tops that covered her exposed cleavage, even though she hated the feeling of running in them.

“Do you need something, Burt?” Clara asked.

A smile teased at the corner of his lips at her question, but she wasn’t sure why. He broke his gaze from her chest and looked over at their Tesla parked in the driveway, “Was wonderin' if you wouldn't mind if I took a peek at your car sometime?”

“I’m not sure…why would you want to look at our car?’ Clara asked.

“Never looked under the hood of one of these before,” Burt scratched the stubble on his face, transferring some motor oil to it. The black streak of oil stood out among the brown and gray stubble and his handlebar mustache. Burt was close enough that Clara could see how greasy and unkempt his shoulder-length hair was. “I work on cars and small engines, you know. Always been curious to see what’s so special about it.”

“I’d rather just have the Tesla service guys poke around in my car,” Clara said diplomatically. These electric vehicles aren’t the same as gas-powered ones.”

Burt stepped closer to Clara, holding his hands out in front of him, palms up for Clara to look at. They didn’t look soft. She could see old scars where callouses had healed over. “I know how to be gentle,” Burt whispered, “I know exactly how to use my hands.”

The subtext wasn’t lost on Clara, “Still, I’d prefer to keep just to let the qualified dealer under the hood.”

“I won’t push ya,” Burt held his hands up defensively and took a step back, “I like knowin' what makes a motor like yours tick.” His eyes lingered on Clara, “Bet it's interestin', but it can’t hold a candle to a diesel engine like my truck. All that environmental stuff is just for sellin' to the tree huggers.”

“It’s not ‘crap’ Burt. Some of us care about our vehicle’s emissions and our carbon footprint. That truck of yours is like a mini coal factory. All that CO2 just goes up into the air and will stay there for thousands of years, raising the temperature of our planet.” Clara had subtly begun to shake her head when speaking, rejecting everything the man was telling her.

She’d been down this road before with many people. Working in clean tech and trying to clean up other people’s mistakes, she would often butt up against ignorant people who didn’t realize the damage they were causing. That’s one of the reasons Clara started her company: to try to make a global impact despite people like Burt continuing to destroy the planet.

"Yeah," Burt chuckled, "that’s what they call rollin' coal when it spits out that black smoke. You can’t get 'em like that off the lot."

“So you did that on purpose?” Clara crossed her arms, “It’s disgusting.”

"Whatever you say, Miss Snowflake. Now that you’re outta your little California bubble, you might be in for a surprise about how things are in the real world," Burt said.

“My worldview is fine, thank you,” Clara said, “It’s probably more expansive than what you’ve experienced.”

"You sure love throwin' around them big words," Burt chuckled. "Probably makes ya feel all smart and fancy."

“It’s just how I talk Burt,” Clara said, “There’s no ult-, no other motive.”

"Sure, sure. Maybe. I just know y'all university folks like to use them big words to make high school dropouts like me feel dumb. It ain't polite."

“That’s not what I’m doing, not at all,” Clara stood her ground.

“You sure 'bout that? Looks like I’m makin' you sweat a bit.”

“I just ran seven kilometers in the sun. It has nothing to do with you.”

“Maybe," Burt said, scratching his chin thoughtfully. "I am known for makin' the fairer sex a bit hot under the collar, though.”

"Speakin' of that," Burt cut in before Clara could reply, "you could always jump in that pool of yours to cool off. I sure miss bein' able just to wander over and dive in whenever I wanted. You think one of these days your hubby might let me take a dip?"

Clara’s brain rattled around trying to catalog and develop a response for each of Burt’s comments. In the end she responded to the last one, “Maybe sometime.”

“Alright, sunshine, I hear ya. I’ll ask the man of the house next time I lay eyes on him,” Burt shrugged his shoulders.

Anger flared up in Clara, and for a moment, she was at a loss for words. She was Adam’s equal, and she didn’t need him to speak for her. “That isn’t - that’s not what I meant. I’m fully capable of making that decision myself. Thank you, Burt.”

“Aw, hey, I didn’t mean no harm by it. Just calm down, alright? You gotta remember, I ain't used to women like you. Round here, I’m used to talkin' man to man, y’know?” Burt threw up his hands in defense.

“Then why’d you come on over and talk with me right now?” Clara looked Burt over, judging his body language. She didn’t buy his bullshit for a second.

Burt slowly lowered his hands. An amused smile spread across his face like he just met a worthy oppontent, “Just bein' neighborly, that's all.”

Clara glared at the man, nearly out of breath from the adrenaline of the anger and the run. She knew reasoning or trying to debate Burt was pointless. He was just one of those stubborn individuals who were stuck in their ways, adamant about being an anchor that pulled the rest of society down and stalled any progress.

“I’m going to head inside,” Clara gestured to her house. I need to go see what Adam’s up to and clean myself up.” She gave Burt a polite wave and turned to head inside.

“See ya soon,” Burt tucked his thumbs into his overalls and watched her ass sway back and forth as she left.

 

***

Adam sat at his desk, scrolling through LinkedIn job ads for their new area. So far, there wasn’t much that interested him or that would be a fit for his experience. He closed his eyes and let out a long breath. When he opened them, he looked around the state of his makeshift office. There were still boxes and other mess in the room and on the desk. It would take awhile before he got everything sorted out and it felt like home.

His gaze drifted out the window to the small cul-de-sac in front of their new home. Clara was running up the path towards the house. As she neared the driveway, Adam stood up from reading to go downstairs and meet her with a cold glass of water.

He froze in place as he saw their hefty neighbor, Burt, saunter across the lawn in the direction of his loving wife. Adam couldn’t quite make out what they were saying, but he put enough together from their body language.

The conversation seemed friendly at first but then grew contentious then outright angry. Clara crossed her arms in front of her closing off her body language while Burt’s seemed to take on a mocking posture. At one point he even stepped in close to whisper something to her conspiratorially.

Adam wasn’t born yesterday, he saw the way that their gruff neighbor was eyeing Clara. His wife looked incredibly sexy in her running outfit and he could see the sheen of sweat over her body from here. Burt on the other hand looked like he had just crawled out from under the engine of his gas guzzling truck. His body was draped in denim overalls and Adam doubted anything else.

The idea of his hot and sweaty wife being so close to a man so much older than her, naked except for the old faded denim material…..

Adam felt his dick growing hard in his sweatpants as he watched the exchange outside. Playing up each of Burt’s leering gazes as statements of intent. This man was the diametric opposite of him and his wife. The mere idea that she would do something physical with him caused Adam’s breathing to increase.

Clara gestured toward their house. As she took her eyes off their neighbor, Adam watched the older man adjust his cock through his clothes. As quickly as he did it, his hands were back at his sides, Clara seemingly none the wiser.

His wife headed back towards the house, but Adam’s eyes were on his neighbor, who stayed in place. The only thing that moved was his eyes as they tracked Clara’s ass all the way to the door. Then they shifted, looking up, locking eyes with himself. Burt smirked, and Adam stepped back from the window, unsure how to respond.

Did Burt somehow know what he was thinking about? Or was his smirk due to something he said to Clara? Adam moved into the room's doorway, away from Burt’s vantage point. Clara was downstairs in the kitchen. Adam’s head was trying to process everything he had just seen and how he felt about it.

All he knew was that he couldn’t go downstairs to greet his wife until his hard dick softened and wasn’t so apparent.

***

Burt was pleased with himself. He had managed to push a few of the ice queen’s buttons while openly leering at her exceptional body. She had to know what he thought of her. More importantly, Burt had caught her husband watching the exchange passively from the window.

Originally, he had hoped just to rile the wife up enough that she would complain to her husband. Reiterating everything that Burt had said, including the innuendo. The fact that little hubby had seen the exchange was an even better result. Hopefully, his mind would start connecting the dots, and he’d look at ol’ Burt the same way he did whoever that Trent guy was. A possible suitor for his wife in their fucked up fantasy – a part Burt was eager to play and exploit.

Burt sat in his hunting chair in the shadows of his closet. Just like when he went into the bush with his friends to take down a stag, he was sipping on beer. Lots of folks didn’t like the waiting around part of hunting, but not Burt. Something about setting up and waiting for your prey to cross your path, not knowing what was about to happen to them until it was too late. Burt enjoyed that. Enjoyed being the one to pull the trigger.

That’s just how he felt now. He peered out the open closet door at the window. He could see right down into his neighbor’s window from this angle. It was only a matter of time before Clara took a shower after her run.

Just like a deer cluelessly wandering into the kill box, Clara stepped into her bedroom and started removing her layers. Burt leaned forward as the young woman peeled off her sports bra. Her beautiful tits fell out fully on display for him. Burt didn’t take his eyes off her as he felt around on the ground for his hunting scope. He held it up to one eye as he closed the other and watched Clara through it. The same scope he’d felled countless animals with.

“That’s it,” Burt whispered, “Get all naked, girl.”

Her tits looked amazing. Supple, firm, and ready to be fucked. He could just imagine running his thick cock up and down between them. A wicked smile spread onto his face as Clara lowered her running shorts and then her panties as she walked towards the ensuite bathroom.

“Look at the ass on her,” Burt whispered, staring at Clara’s naked bubble, “Casper was right. They don’t make ‘em like that ‘round here.”

Clara moved into the bathroom and started the shower. Burt watched from the reflection in the mirror as she stepped into the glass enclosure and started shampooing her hair. With shallow breaths, he watched her move on to soaping her breasts with her loofah. One hand on his cock, gently stroking it as he watched this liberal beauty clean herself.

Suddenly, Burt’s view was cut off. He pulled his eye back from the scope and looked with both his eyes. Clara’s husband had pulled one curtain over the window, blocking Burt’s perfect view.

“Fucker,” Burt muttered. Adam stood at the window for several seconds, staring in Burt’s direction. Burt knew the guy couldn’t see him. That meant that he was at least thinking about Burt watching his naked wife. Seems like the snare was set.

Adam finally closed the other curtain, fully blocking Burt’s view of the room. The older man chuckled and downed the last bit of beer from his can before crushing it on the doorframe.

***

Adam’s eyes were stinging, so he ran his palms over them. He knew they were bloodshot without even looking in the mirror. It was late. They had eaten dinner hours ago. Clara was downstairs somewhere catching up on her work emails while Adam sat in the office, formatting his resume for a couple of potentially interesting in-state positions. There was a job opening he’d heard about through his network at the Michigan Department of Energy. It wasn’t exactly what he was looking for, but it could open some local doors.

It was pitch black outside. There weren’t any street lamps in the cul de sac, and Adam could almost make out stars in the sky. He was getting ready to call it a night when he heard Clara’s soft footsteps in the hall.

“Almost done?” Clara smiled as she appeared in the doorway. Adam felt his dick stir at the sight of his wife. Even just wearing her casual lounge clothes, she looked breathtaking, like a sex goddess. Tight black sweatpants clung to her curvy hips and her heart-shaped ass. A gray low-cut tank with impossibly thin straps was tucked into her sweatpants, pulling the material tight over her ample chest. The bare skin of the crest of her cleavage promised a night full of debauchery. Clara caught him gazing at her and shot him a wry smile.

“Because I’m ready for someone to take me to bed,” Clara flashed him her bedroom eyes, “You better hurry up, or I just might find someone else to take your place.”

Adam could never read her face when she flirted with him like this. In his mind, he knew she was just playing with him and teasing him with his fantasy. But the coy corners of her lips implied something more. It could just be him seeing things that weren’t there, reading into things that he wanted. But he could swear there was something else there, just below the surface.

Clara moved out of his view, her fingers trailing along the door until they, too, disappeared. Adam sat for just a second, wondering if he could push Clara further with his fantasy. How far could he push her until she told him no? He wasn’t sure where her line was. There was never a line in their bedroom talk, but reality would be different. He took a deep breath and followed his wife to her bedroom.

The first thing he noticed when he walked into the bedroom was the blackness outside their windows. Clara’s habit of never closing their curtains still persisted even though they had moved across the country. It hadn’t been so bad in San Francisco with their bedroom window facing a brick wall, but here it was within the eyesight of their neighbor.

Clara flashed him a conspiratorial smile as she pulled her tight tank top off, revealing the black lacy bra underneath. She probably didn’t even realize the window was still open. Clara wasn’t a prude, but she definitely wouldn’t want a guy like that looking at her….

The idea of Burt’s eyes feasting on Clara’s naked flesh made his cock throb. It was time to gamble and see how far Clara would play along.

“Disappointed I came so fast?” Adam said, “Now you don’t have to find someone else to fulfill my husbandly duties.”

Clara flashed him a sexy smile and bent over at the waist, lowering her sweatpants. Her fantastic ass was slowly exposed, clad only in black lace panties. “Well, I didn’t have anyone else on hand,” Clara said as her naked legs came into view, “Trent is across the country. I would have had to resort to a stranger.”

Adam felt his heart beating in his chest at the mention of his old workplace rival. He hated the guy, but he had served as great fodder for his fantasies with Clara. She loved playing into it, knowing how much the guy got under her husband’s skin.

“I’m sure you could have your pick of any man you wanted,” Adam said, looking her up and down, “No one would say no to you. But maybe it doesn’t have to be a complete stranger.”

“Oh?” Clara stood up, letting her sweatpants drop the rest of the way to the ground. She raised an eyebrow and looked at him. It wasn’t lost on Adam that she was now in her bra and panties in front of an open window. If Burt just happened to look out, he would get an eyeful.

“Is there someone specific you have in mind?” Clara asked, “Finally someone to replace Trent with?”

“I think so,” Adam almost whispered, walking over to his wife. He didn’t like the idea of their neighbor seeing him but couldn't resist placing his hands on the smooth skin of Clara’s arms and shoulders.

“Tell me who,” Clara bit her lip and turned her body, pressing her bubble butt into Adam’s crotch. Adam sucked in a breath as she pushed into him, the front of her body now exposed to the window. “You’re already hard for me,” Clara moaned softly, “Who is it you want me to play with?”

Adam smiled and felt his breathing quicken. He didn’t want to say it, afraid that voicing it would elicit a negative reaction from Clara. He knew she didn’t care for their neighbor, especially after her run-in with him in the driveway a few days ago. He kissed the side of her neck and whispered in her ear, “Open your eyes, look out the window.”

“Mmmhmmm,” Clara softly moaned as Adam’s lips grazed the sensitive areas of her neck, “What am I looking for?”

“Who do you think could be watching us right now?” Adam whispered, afraid that somehow their neighbor might hear. Afraid that if he said it too loudly, his wife would clue into what he was saying. “Whose house is next to ours? Who can’t keep their eyes off of you?”

“You don’t mean,” Clara took a sharp intake of breath and Adam felt her hips move slightly back against him. Her body shuddered under his touch. She crossed her arms over her chest, seemingly realizing how exposed she actually was to their neighbor.

“I do,” Adam licked her earlobe, “I’ve seen the way he looks at you. I know what he’s been thinking about. Who knows, he could be watching you right now.”

“Uhhhh,” Clara moaned as Adam held her by the hips, grinding his dick into her backside. “I, I didn’t think you’d pick him. He’s not really my type. He’s such a rural asshole.”

“I know,” Adam whispered, “That’s what makes it so hot. I think we should take things to the next level.”

“What do you mean?” Clara’s voice was nervous. Adam could see it in her body language, suddenly Clara felt very exposed and vulnerable.

“I think you need to take a late night dip in the pool,” Adam said, “Put on a show for Mr. Burt.”

Clara shivered in his arms, “Do you really want me to do that?”

“I do,” Adam whispered, his fingertips grazing the goosebumps on her skin.

“That guy makes my skin crawl. He’s such a neanderthal. I can’t believe you want me to do this for him.” Clara said sharply.

“Not for him,” Adam breathed into her ear. “For us. For me. It would be so sexy watching you out there knowing someone like that was watching.”

“It’s just–he’s just gross, Adam. He is like the epitome of the type of person that I’m dedicating my life to work against. Just the thought of him seeing me this way…”

“It’s just a swim in the pool. I’m sure at some point he’ll catch us in there and like what he sees. This is more for us anyway. Screw him. He’ll have to sit by and watch as your career takes off and you clean up the planet around him.”

Clara’s shoulders relaxed a bit but she was still tense. She didn’t say anything for a few seconds as she seemed to be mulling things over in her head. Finally, she let out a long, loud sigh.

“I can’t find my white bikini top,” Clara said quietly. The pitch black out the window felt like it could conceal anything.

“Well…” Adam said, “You could always go out topless.”

“I don’t know if I’m ready for that,” Clara whispered.

“Then maybe the bikini you wore in Cabo?” Adam said.

Clara shook her head slightly, “I know which one. Close the curtains and go downstairs. I’ll do it. For you.”

Adam had never felt his cock this hard before. He wanted to ask ‘really?’ but didn’t want to tempt fate. He quickly closed the curtains and hurried downstairs as Clara went into the closet, looking for her swimsuit.

Adam stood in the kitchen watching the dark backyard. He couldn’t believe Clara was actually going to do this. Ever since he had revealed his fantasy to his wife, it had always stayed in the bedroom. Always just that, a fantasy. Tonight, they were dipping their toes past the line, outside of their comfort zone. He couldn’t believe Clara was actually going to go through with this.

He heard her footsteps on the stairs coming down. Soon, she was on the same floor as he was. She was heading to the back door of the mud room instead of the one in the kitchen. His cock throbbed, hearing the door open and shut. He loathed the overcast weather, barely making out his wife’s slender silhouette as she moved towards the pool. He could see Clara slowly stepping down onto the steps of the pool, but he wanted to see more. Wanted to ensure Burt might actually see Clara.

He quickly formed an idea and jogged to the mud room. He peered out the window at his wife, making sure he hadn’t missed anything. He could just see her head above the water. Adam opened the closet containing some of the outdoor equipment and flipped a switch.

The lights embedded in the sides of the pool came on, illuminating Clara from below. She looked incredible in the pool. He was a little disappointed she had opted for her light blue one-piece swimsuit, but he still couldn’t believe she was actually doing this for him. Adam looked out the side window at Burt’s house. Adam could swear he saw movement on the deck off the back of Burt’s house. Burt might actually be up there watching.

***

Clara’s heart skipped a beat, and her eyes went wide as the pool lights came on. She thought she might get away with just floating in the dark, but it seemed like Adam had other ideas. He wanted to make sure that their neighbor saw her.

She wasn’t sure how she felt about all of this. Her husband putting her on display for another man and deciding on his own to light the way. Eyes roaming across her body with the only intent behind them being sexual….

She couldn’t deny that she felt herself getting turned on by the purely hedonistic idea. And it was her pool - her neighbor could simply watch and sweat in the heat.

Adam pushed her into this, but she couldn’t back down. She had never backed down from a challenge before. But this time felt different. The conversation from earlier with Burt still irked her. Thinking she was just some doe-eyed midwestern wife who bowed down to her husband. But wasn’t that what she was doing by coming out here? Doing what Adam wanted?

No, that wasn’t it. She had made this decision. She was doing this for her as much as she was for Adam. Making her husband’s fantasies come true while rubbing her caveman of a neighbor's face in it that this was her pool, and she called the shots.

It was really the idea of doing this for Adam that turned her on. Making part of his fantasy become a reality, being the sexual object of his fantasies. That was the part that turned her on, the heart of it. It definitely wasn’t the idea of their neanderthal neighbor watching them. Clara had begun to loathe the man. He made her skin crawl. She couldn’t possibly find the idea of him watching her to be arousing. Burt was her antithesis in almost every single way. He stood for everything she’d railed so hard against her entire life. Conservative values and the status quo would hold society back and drive the world into a climate disaster. And he wasn’t her type at all. She had never found herself attracted to guys like Burt. Adam was her ideal man. Their values aligned.

She could help be feel a little pissed at Adam for putting her in this position, for choosing someone like Burt to be her new fantasy lover of his. Neither of them could stand people like their neighbor. Just what the hell was her husband thinking?

For the first time, she noticed how shallow her breathing had gotten. Her breasts, half submerged, rose and fell right at the water line. She cast a quick glance back at the house, knowing Adam had to have moved into the mudroom to turn the pool lights on.

Clara couldn’t help herself. She chanced a look at Burt’s house to see if he was watching her. She didn’t want to be too overt and quickly shifted her gaze. Unfortunately, she hadn’t seen him in her quick, covert look. He could still be there, at a window, staring at her for all she knew.

***

Burt sat perched in the darkness of his deck, unmoving except for the slow stroke of his cock. Like any good hunter, he didn’t want his prey to know how close he was. Not until he was ready to strike.

When the pool lights came on, Burt got a wonderful view of Clara in the pool. Innocently moving around, pretending she was just going to a late swim. But those pool lights were controlled from inside the house. Burt knew the switch was in the mudroom. The faint glow from the pool lights illuminated the back of his neighbors house enough for him to see movement in the mudroom window.

The husband, Adam, was there which meant two things. The first, he was letting his wife swim alone and he wanted her to be seen. Sure, maybe he was just being nice and turning the lights on for her but Burt doubted it. Clara looked nervous and stiff as a board in the pool. The second was that Adam was at the side window which didn’t have a view of the pool. He was looking for Burt, hoping to see him watching his wife.

Burt smiled in the darkness. It appeared his little ruse had worked faster than he’d expected. Burt cast his attention back to the pool as his hefty cock sat in his hand.

***

Clara swam for another ten minutes before she couldn’t take it anymore. The idea of eyes watching her, lusting after her, was too much for her to handle. Her nipples pushed through the fabric of her swimsuit. It was probably because the water was cold, not because this whole scenario was getting to her.

As cold as the water felt, Clara’s face still felt warm and flush. She swam over to the steps and began stepping out. Every drip of water that ran down her body made her extremely aware of just how on display her body was and how little clothing she wore.

She wasn’t sure if Burt was watching her, but she knew for sure that Adam was. She tried covertly glancing at Burt’s house but didn’t see him. She had forgotten to grab a towel in her haste to get out here and fulfill Adam’s fantasy.

Just the thought of an old school man like Burt leering at her, undercutting her accomplishments, reducing her down to just something physical to be lusted after….she hadn’t felt like this before. She knew she shouldn’t. It was demeaning to women and against everything she stood for.

She let out a short breath, steadying herself as she tried to calmly walk back towards the mudroom door. With each step she was keenly aware her wet body, clad in the tight swimsuit was on display for anyone to see.

Clara made it to the door and quickly stepped inside. Adam’s hands were on her before the door even shut. His dry clothes pressed up against her wet body, pressing his hard dick into her.

“Let’s go upstairs,” Clara said, “I need you too.”

“Ugh yeah,” Adam turned away and disappeared into the darkness of the house.

Clara felt through the cupboards of the mudroom until she found some dry towels. She didn’t want to get water all over the hardwood floor of the house. She peeled off her tight swimsuit and let it drop to the tile floor of the mudroom and quickly dried herself off. The towel dropped alongside her bathing suit.

For the first time, Clara walked through her house naked. She was now keenly aware of all the open windows. She doubted anyone could see in without lights on but a thrill nonetheless ran through her body with each step.

Adam was waiting for her in the bedroom, “God, you were so fucking hot out there.” His hands were behind his head, and he was lying naked on the bed. Clara crawled up to meet him, her lips pressing into his.

“Do you think our neighbor saw the show?” Clara asked in a husky whisper.

“I think so,” Adam said, “I don’t know for sure, but I think he was up on his deck. Did you see him?”

“No, I was too nervous to look for too long. I didn’t see anything.”

“If he was watching…” Adam whispered, “What do you think he was doing?”

“Oh, I’m sure he had his hands full,” Clara giggled.

“You’re probably the sexiest woman he has ever seen,” Adam said, “For sure, he was beating off to you.”

“You make it sound so dirty, Adam,” Clara’s hand ran down Adam’s body until she found his rock-hard cock. She gently stroked it. “God, I want you baby.”

“Not as much as Burt probably wants you right now,” Adam grabbed a handful of her ass, his tongue snaking out to dance over her neck. “What do you think he was thinking?”

“The same thing all men think about, sex,” Clara closed her eyes, reveling in Adam’s lips and tongue on her throat.

“Sex with you,” Adam corrected, “Stroking himself, thinking about what it would be like to get you in his bed.”

“Uhmmhmmm, is that what you want? Your faithful wife to crawl into that backward asshole’s bed?” Clara teased, squeezing his cock as she stroked it.

“I, uh, I don’t know,” Adam breathed, “Tonight was already way more than I ever expected.”

“Me too baby,” Clara said, rolling onto her back, pulling Adam on top of her. She held firmly onto his shaft and guided it towards her soaking-wet opening.

Adam began to push his cock into her. Clara moaned and opened her legs wider to accept her husband. She drew in a sharp breath as the head of his cock pushed past her lips, followed by the top of his shaft. Clara was concentrating on the feeling of her husband’s cock, all thoughts of their gross neighbor drifting out of her mind.

Until Adam asked, “What do you think it would be like for Burt to fuck you?”

Images of Burt flashed into her head. His motor oil-stained hands grabbing onto her hips. She’d never thought of their neighbor like that, but now her mind was racing along the trajectory her husband had set it on. What would it be like? He was taller than her – taller than Adam. What would that be like? His body was wide, and his stomach large. Could she wrap her legs around him? What would his calloused hands feel like on her skin? On her breasts? There was dormant muscle under that layer of fat – more than Adam had on his swimmer’s frame. What would that be like against her? She pictured herself bent over in his garage as Burt roughly took her from behind, the muscles driving him into her.

“What do you think fucking Burt would be like?” Adam whispered again.

“I don’t know,” Clara said, guilty at the images flashing in her mind. How itchy the whiskers on his face would feel against her neck. Greasy strands of his hair running through her fingers. Clara’s hips thrust off the bed, pulling the entire length of Adam’s cock into her. She needed it badly.

“Oh fuck Adam,” Clara moaned, “Just fuck me. I need you so, so bad, baby. Just don’t stop fucking me.”

Adam grunted and dropped his weight down onto Clara. She tried to push out the flashes of their asshole neighbor from her head, but her mind continued to race. How big was his cock? What would it feel like?

***

The next few days were extremely busy for Clara at work. Setting up a new company in the University of Michigan’s Grand Rapids campus took a lot more effort than she’d expected. She was becoming irritated with all the bureaucratic hoops she had to jump through at the school to get the smallest things done. She didn’t enjoy all the politicking and diplomatic ass-kissing she had to do with university staff. She’d started to wonder if it had been a mistake coming here. She just wished everyone would get out of her way and let her get to work.

But no one else was willing to fund her start up, so for now she had to at least deal with it. The long, unpredictable hours had meant less time for she and Adam. He was understanding but she knew she had to make things up to him this weekend. She knew she needed a release herself. Even though her mind was focused on her work, her body still had its own needs. Needs that were becominging increasingly necessary to satisfy.

The opposite was true for Adam. Without a job to keep him busy, all he had to occupy his time was sending out resumes and setting things up in their house. That and grow more and more obsessive with the latest developments of their shared fantasy. Dipping a toe across the line and potentially putting his wife on display for another man had become quite intoxicating.

The craziness of Clara’s schedule seemed to only fuel his fucked up imagination. Their lack of intimacy was replaced with Adam’s thoughts constantly wandering back to Clara in the pool and all the what-ifs and might-have-beens that went along with them. The thoughts were always there in the back of his mind.

Trivial things like seeing Burt working in his garage or the brief moments where Clara would walk between the car and the house only added fuel to his perverse thoughts. Clara’s habitual forgetting to close the curtains in the house proved a source of extremely erotic distraction for him.

Now that Friday was finally here, Clara had promised that they would spend some quality time together. Even hinting at making things up to him for turning to work for so long. He knew this likely meant a nice, slow, sensual blow job but what he really wanted was to watch her in the pool again.

She arrived home late, like every night that week. Adam made dinner reservations at a local restaurant and after a quicker shower, Clara was dressed to impress and ready to go. The drive to the restaurant and the meal were uneventful. Mostly filled with conversation between them with one catching the other up on each of their days. Clara had significantly more to contribute to the conversation with Adam resisting discussing how circularly obsessive he had become with his fantasy.

While Clara talked, Adam was eager to keep her wine topped up. He hoped to relax his wife in case he was brave enough to suggest another dip in the pool, hoping it would make her brave, too.

“What do you want to do after dinner?” Adam said coyly, “I wonder if there is a good movie theater around here somewhere.”

“I’m not in the mood for a movie,” Clara stared at him over the rim of her wine glass. She took a long, appreciative sip and said, “There is one thing I want tonight.” She quickly ran her tongue over the inside of one of her cheeks and gave Adam her bedroom eyes. They disappeared quickly as the waiter brought out their entrees.

Adam could tell how horny Clara was, hoping she might be horny enough to go along with his plan.

By the time they were done with dinner, they were both enjoying the familiar buzz from their drinks.

“What do you say to another drink before we head upstairs?” Clara asked, closing their front door behind them.

“I’m game,” Adam said as they moved to the kitchen. He grabbed a beer from the fridge while Clara poured herself a generous glass of red wine. Adam turned on some soft music, and they both swayed to it while enjoying their drinks and staring hard at one another across the kitchen island.

Adam finished his beer, and Clara eagerly downed the last sip of her wine. “Let’s go upstairs. I’m so horny,” she said, “Go get in the shower. I want to give you your treat.”

“Yes, ma’am,” Adam smiled as Clara took his hand and led him up the stairs. He knew Clara liked him nice and clean before she blew him. A very easy hurdle to getting head. The liquid courage surged through him, readying him to make his request. It was just the small, sober part of his brain that kept his mouth shut up until this point.

Clara let go of his hand and moved into their bedroom. Adam followed, noticing that Clara must have pulled the curtains shut earlier during her shower.

“Go shower,” Clara said, “I’m just going to change into something a little more…..appropriate.”

Adam sat on the bed as Clara disappeared into their walk-in closet. Memories of all of his wife’s lustful lingerie filling his mind. He spoke before his mind fully comprehended his words, “What are you changing into? Can I make a request?”

Clara’s beautiful face and naked shoulders appeared from behind the door frame. She narrowed her eyes playfully at him, “Request? What did you have in mind?”

“I was thinking….” Adam hesitated, “The red bikini you wore in Cabo. The one all the boys seemed to like.”

Clara eyed him suspiciously for a moment before she disappeared back behind the door. A minute later, Clara emerged from the closet, running one hand up the door frame. She was clad in just a little red bikini, it was the same color Pamela Anderson had worn on Baywatch. It wasn’t skimpy but it hugged Clara’s body, showing off the curves of her breasts and ass in an incredible way. Adam loved this one because it was such an uncharacteristic outfit for her to wear.

“I hate this bathing suit,” Clara said, “I can’t believe I let you talk me into buying it.”

“You look amazing,” Adam said, “Worth every penny. The guys in Cabo seemed to like it if I recall.”

“That’s exactly why I don’t like it,” Clara walked towards him, “Those guys didn’t see me. They just saw my body. Like I was an object to possess, this isn’t who I am.”

“That’s what makes it so hot,” Adam groaned, watching his wife’s body approach.

Clara stepped between his knees and turned around, giving Adam a view of her fantastic ass. The straps of the bikini hung limply at her sides, “Tie me up?”

Adam’s hands were shaking as he grabbed the thin red straps and tied them together. Clara turned back to her husband and looked down at his crotch. “Take your pants off, big boy, and lay back.”

“I was thinking….” Adam felt his heart beating out of his chest. His dick was already pressing hard against his pants, and his breathing was shallow. “Maybe you should go for a quick dip in the pool first.”

Clara raised an eyebrow at him and drew her head back, “Really? That’s what you want right now?”

“Yes,” Adam breathed, nodding.

“Right before you’re about to get a blowjob. You want me to walk away and take an evening swim in the pool?” Clara asked, “You want me to tease our old neighbor again?”

“Fuck. Yes,” Adam groaned at the lack of resistance in her voice.

Clara was happy to play into Adam’s fantasy, especially if it added to the blowjob he’d be getting afterward. She decided to toy with him a little bit, “I don’t know Adam. What if he sees me? What should I do?”

“I don’t know…” Adam tried to control his breathing. “Keep swimming for a bit.”

“That might give him the wrong impression. What if he comes by while I’m out there? What should I do?”

“Keep swimming. Or you could come inside. Or…..”

“Or?”

“I don’t know.”

“I think you do,” Clara crossed her arms, staring down at her husband. “I know exactly what you’re thinking about right now. And I don’t think you could actually handle something like that.”

“Maybe. I don’t know,” Adam said, “But you wouldn’t actually ever do anything either.”

Adam stared at her, like he was challenging her to prove him wrong. “Don’t be so sure,” Clara said, stepping back from him and moving towards the door. She didn’t like people underestimating her and hated being told what she would or wouldn’t do. “If it came down to it, I think you’d be the one to put a stop to things before I ever did.”

Adam just sat there slack-jawed at her comment, his eyes glued to her swaying ass in the tight red triangle of her bikini bottoms. Clara paused in the doorway, looking back at him.

“Last chance to stop me and get your blowjob,” She said, “Or I’ll go out there and who knows what will happen.”

Adam didn’t say anything. Clara narrowed her eyes at him, “Fine. I’ll go for a little swim. But just remember, I’m only giving one blowjob tonight.”

“You wouldn’t,” Adam croaked.

“I guess we’ll both just see,” Clara turned on unsteady legs. She quickly caught her balance and disappeared from sight.

Adam sat there stunned, not having anticipated the direction their conversation would go. The playful bedroom talk had turned into some kind of challenge. Guilt panged through his gut and a dawning realization crept over him. Clara did not back down from challenges. Ever. She saw them as obstacles to be overcome. And Adam had just challenged his wife.

When the sounds of her bare footsteps came from downstairs, Adam couldn’t contain himself and leaped out of the room and across the hallway to the back room of the house. This one had a view of the pool.

He stared down into the dark backyard as the pool lights came on, illuminating the bottom of the pool. The sound of the backdoor opening and shutting made his heart jump and his dick throb. He watched with bated breath as Clara proudly strode out to the pool, another glass of wine in her hand. Her Cabo red bikini on display to the darkened woods behind the house they shared. As she descended the steps of the pool, she glanced up at him, making direct eye contact. She was giving him a chance to back out of the challenge. She’d come back inside and blow him.

But Adam made no move and then it was final. She would swim and put herself on display again. Then she’d come in and give him a blowjob that would probably only last seconds based on how hard his dick was now feeling.

Adam looked up at Burt’s house. His deck looked empty and all the lights were off. The old man could very well be in there, staring out from one of the windows but Adam wouldn’t be able to tell. The only reason Clara knew where Adam was because he was backlit by their bedroom lamp across the hall.

Adam’s eyes stayed glued to his wife’s form as she lightly bobbed up and down in the pool, her platinum blonde hair pulled back into a ponytail. She had been out there for several minutes now. Swimming around, seemingly unaware of her surroundings. She had to have been out there for around the same amount of time as she had been the previous night, which meant that every second that ticked by was one second closer to him laying back and having his wife worship his cock with her agile tongue.

Something moved in the dark. Adam tore his eyes away from his wife and looked into Burt’s backyard. A shadow was moving. At first, Adam thought it might have been a raccoon or some other wildlife, but as it got closer to the property line, Adam’s breath caught in his throat. That’s the shape of a man.

His eyes darted back to Clara in the pool, blissfully unaware of whoever was closing in on her. Adam could hear his heart beating in his ears, and his chest felt heavy. If Clara didn’t get out of the pool soon, something would happen. He should go downstairs to the mudroom just in case, so he could be close by to run to his wife’s aid. But he stayed planted at the bedroom window, watching with horrified fascination about what could potentially occur.

The shadow stepped right up to the property line, giving Adam a better glimpse of him. Squinting, Adam recognized the man. It was Burt, their older, grumpy neighbor who had dominated his thoughts lately.

It’s happening. Just as Adam had fantasized about, his loving wife and their crude neighbor were set on a collision course by him. Guilt sunk into his stomach momentarily before it was drowned out by the intense arousal he felt. His breath caught in his throat as Burt stepped out of the shadows and into the faint area of light exposed by the pool’s underwater lights. He was dressed only in his dirty overalls, his long greasy hair falling to his bare sun-bleached shoulders.

He kept walking towards the pool and then spoke. Adam couldn’t hear what he said but Clara’s head whipped around, shocked at his sudden presence.

***

“Now a good time for that swim?” a gravelly voice called out behind her.

Clara almost spilled her wine at the unexpected interruption to her late night dip in the pool. At first she thought it was Adam but as her brain processed the voice she felt a shiver of panic run through her body. There was no way that was Adam’s voice. Her head snapped around and there at the edge of the pool was her unrefined neighbor, Burt. He wore his customary dirty overalls and nothing else, staring down at Clara with hungry eyes.

“Ummmmm, I, uhhhh. Burt! I didn’t expect….” Clara’s voice trailed off as Burt didn’t wait for a reply. He undid the buckles, holding the overall straps in place and letting them fall down his back. He pushed the denim material down, exposing more and more of his naked tanned skin.

Clara felt her eyes bulge as he lowered the overalls past his waist, exposing the naked skin of his hips and ass to her. Just like she had suspected, Burt went commando under them.

Burt’s skin looked weathered and worn, just as sun damaged as his face and shoulders. Burt’s beer belly was a clear indicator of his layers of fat but there was a strength to his body under all that. Small scars adorned parts of his chest and there were a few tattoos but the ink looked faded.

He stepped completely out of his overalls and stepped onto the pool’s steps, fully turning the front of his body to Clara.

Clara’s breath caught in her throat, and she immediately diverted her eyes to face the back of her house. Seared into her mind was the brief image of Burt’s imposing cock swaying between his legs. It was attached to a pair of hefty balls, all covered in a thick and wild jungle of dark pubic hair. She preferred Adam’s shaved-down area, which he kept nice and clean for her. Burt probably hadn’t trimmed his bush, gray public hair in months, if ever.

She heard the water take him in but didn’t want to look back and acknowledge her neighbor until his dick was fully submerged beneath the water. She caught the shadowy outline of Adam up in one of the back bedrooms, hoping he might come down and intervene.

But this is exactly what he wanted. She still didn’t think Adam could actually handle his fantasy progressing this far this quickly. At some point, he would come down and interject. Until then, she was happy to call his bluff. He was always the one whose will bent in the end.

“Mhm, the water’s nice and warm,” Burt said from behind her, “Been waiting to come in. Figured I’d wait until one of you was already taking a swim. Thanks for the invite. Hope it’s not a bad time.”

“Actually,” Clara said, turning towards Burt. She again hadn’t realized how close he’d gotten. She subconsciously pedaled back, “I was thinking about getting out for the night.”

“Ah, I don’t wanna swim here alone, if you don’t mind. It’s not my pool. That’d be weird. Just stay here for a couple of minutes, and then we’ll both get out.” Burt said, “Though I just realized I didn’t bring a towel.”

“I’m sure you’ll air dry,” Clara said, focusing on her wine as she took another sip of it. “It’s not humid.”

“You have a beautiful house,” Burt said as he nonchalantly moved towards her. Clara continued to back up until her ass pressed against the wall of the pool. Burt slowed his approach and kept talking.

“Where’s Adam?” Burt asked, looking around the pool as if he didn’t know exactly where the man was.

“I don’t know. Inside, I think.” Clara said, taking another large sip of her wine. She tried desperately not to look down, through the water, at Burt’s cock, made to seem larger by the warping effect of the water and illuminated from underneath by the pool lights. She didn’t find him attractive at all but the taboo nature of the situation was pulling her to look. She knew she shouldn’t, which made it all the more alluring.

“He comin’ out for a swim too?” Burt said, stretching his hands above his head as he took another step closer. Droplets of water ran down his tanned, sun-spotted skin, intermingling with the graying hair on his chest.

“I don’t know,” Clara said, half turning to glance back up at the window where she’d last seen Adam.

“Well, his loss,” Burt said softly, “I guess you’re all mine tonight.”

“Excuse me?” Clara shot him a cold look.

“Your company,” Burt corrected. “I guess I am lucky enough to be the one with your company tonight.”

“I don’t think you particularly enjoy my company, Burt,” Clara said, “We don’t have much to talk about, and you and I have very different thoughts on a whole lot of subjects.”

“Such as?”

“Climate change, for one,” Clara said. “Which I’m sure means we have completely different political ideals and a host of other things. We probably don’t have much in common.”

“Well, you’ll just have to try some new local hobbies now that you live here,” Burt chuckled. “Maybe I’ll take you muddin’.”

“Mudding?” Clara asked.

“Yeah. That’s what my truck’s built for. We strap in along with a bunch of other trucks and drive through the mud in the bush after a good rainfall. See if we can get through it without needing to get towed out.”

“I don’t think that’s really my thing,” Clara hid a polite smile behind her wine glass.

“Well, then there’s the barbecue after,” Burt’s eyes lit up. “Loads of ribs, sausages, and other meats slathered in sauce. It’s a good time.”

“We’re vegetarians, Burt,” Clara said, “I’m sure it’s fun, but it’s not really our thing.”

“I get it,” Burt said, “It’s okay, you’re young.”

Clara’s nostrils flared at his comment. She had worked too long and too hard to achieve what she had. She hated when people reduced her entire being into simple categories of being a woman or being too young or a dozen other labels that older men, in particular, were fond of foisting on her, “Excuse me?”

Burt held up his hands defensively, “I didn’t mean nothing by it. Just that you’re young. Young folks have lots of naive ideals about how they’re going to save the world and this and that. When you get to my age, you realize it’s all a bunch of bullshit and that corporations and other global interests have been leading you around by the nose, making you care about made-up things just to rile you up and manipulate you.”

“That’s not at all how it is, how I am,” Clara felt the anger boiling in her stomach. “You don’t even realize the echo chamber of idiotic talking points you probably live in. These are real issues that need real solutions, or there will be real consequences.”

“I’m so tired of this dismissive attitude from your entire generation,” Clara downed the last of her wine and turned to the side of the pool to place it alongside the edge, “You look at things that are important to us and —”

Clara’s argument slipped out of her mind, and horror spread onto her face as she felt the thin bikini straps on her back loosen and fell limp. Then there was a tug, and her red bikini top slipped off over her arms.

Clara’s hands immediately shot to her chest, covering her ample breasts as she turned back to Burt, who was backing away. Her red bikini top was clutched in his hands.

“Burt,” Clara hissed, “Give me back my top.” She felt mortified at being suddenly topless in front of her neighbor. This man she hardly knew. And what she did know she didn’t like.

“Here,” he said, holding the top out for her to take. She moved off the wall to grab it, and he floated back. She quickly took steps to close the distance between them and reached out for the top with one hand while the other covered both of her breasts. Burt yanked the top away from her and swam to the side of her. She turned in the pool, watching Burt as he grinned at her.

“Don’t worry,” Burt chided, “You haven’t got anything I haven’t seen before.”

Clara continued to turn in the pool, watching as he circled her, just like a shark. She backed away from him, pushing her further into the pool. Her foot slipped for a second, and she almost let go of her breasts. The ground started slopping towards the deep end of the pool.

“I’m the one who should get to decide that,” Clara said.

“Yeah, yeah,” Burt said dismissively, “I know how you young women all are. No fun. All talkin’ about your rights, blah, blah, blah. This is just some playin’ between friends. It ain’t a big deal.”

Clara decided it was time to stop indulging this jackass. She stopped turning to watch him and rolled her eyes, “We aren’t friends Burt.”

Burt continued to circle her. She didn’t want him to get the best of her and didn’t want to give him the satisfaction of an angry reaction. Clara knew that’s exactly what people like Burt wanted. They got off on upsetting other people. He circled around out of the corner of her vision. Clara kept her gaze forward, “We’re barely acquaintances at this point. I think it’s time to call it a night here.”

“Well, by all means, go on, get out of the pool, and let me get a good look at ya.” Burt chuckled behind her, “I’m just being neighborly, that’s all.”

Clara scoffed, holding her crossed arms tighter over her chest. She felt the water break behind her, and Burt’s gruff voice was closer than she had realized.

“I think of it like sharing sugar. If a neighbor runs out you share yours with them,” Burt was right behind her. She turned her head to look at him but froze as she felt his cock press up against the curve of her bubble butt. She drew in a sharp breath at how hard it felt and how much of it there was. Her mouth dropped open in shock.

“Adam, he likes to share, doesn’t he?” Burt whispered in her ear. He tossed her bikini top across the pool. It landed with a wet splat on the concrete. A million thoughts raced through Clara’s head, but nothing in her experience had prepared her for how to diffuse a situation like this. Adam would surely come out soon, finally realizing just how far this was going. He wouldn’t want her to actually go through with this would she?

Her mouth opened to speak as Burt’s large arm reached around and latched onto one of hers. She gripped her breasts tighter as Burt pulled one arm free. She held onto her naked breasts tighter with her other arm as he firmly pulled her other arm behind her. With his hand on the back of hers, he guided her soft manicured hand down until it made contact with his fully erect cock.

“Hey!” Clara angrily pulled away from her boorish neighbor, looking directly at him, his spell seemingly broken. Burt could see the anger in her eyes as she continued, “You can’t just put my hand on your, your thing! That’s, that’s…” Filled with indignance, she spun around to yell at the large arrogant yokel in her pool, but she’d immediately become distracted by a few things.

First, she noticed Burt’s attention was completely on her bare and heaving chest, covered only by her forearm. Her anger had made her forget herself, her breasts bulging out over her arm in her boisterous expression. She watched as her neighbor blinked once and then a second time, seeming to process what was in front of him. Second, glancing down, she saw Burts growing cock. It was now twice the size it had been when she’d last seen it, and it appeared to be getting larger still. Just as she was beginning to tell herself that it was the water making Burt seem so long and broad, part of its head broke the surface. Clara’s eyes widened at the confirmation of his even more considerable size.

The third thing, aside from the light, pleasant buzz of the wine she’d drank that prevented her from finishing her thought, was Burt’s hand on hers.

“I’m real sorry,” the brute had gently taken her hand and was lifting it out of the water, appearing as if he was going to kiss it, perhaps as some chivalrous form of apology. To Clara’s increasing surprise, she’d allowed her hand to be taken, but halfway to his face, Burt dropped her arm, and her hand fell into the pool, glancing off his rock-solid erection. She watched all of this happen as if it were occurring in slow motion. Her imposing neighbor watched her eyes with no discernable expression on his face and just waited there with her hand upon his cock.

Clara pulled her hand back, but Burt quickly grabbed it again and this time, in a less showy manner, pulled her hand back onto the shaft of his cock. The smooth skin of his cockhead felt warmer and more firm in her palm now. And Burt was breathing a little faster than he had been.

“Oops,” he said, without urgency, making it clear that he knew she was now touching his cock of her own volition. She stood there, unsure of what to do next. She didn’t want to make any sudden move and concede the point to her neighbor.

“What do you think is going on up there?” Burt nodded up to the window as circled around her again, his cock pulling free from her limp hand. “You think he’d still be up there if he didn’t want us to have some fun?” Clara turned around to see her husband, pulling her hand back.

Burt took the opportunity to come up behind her again. He repeated his earlier move, slowly moving his hand atop hers, then gently bringing it behind her and placing it on his hard pole. He smiled as he felt her grab him and begin lightly stroke him under the water.

Clara felt warm. Maybe from the heated water or how horny she had been all dinner. The fire she had been building inside of herself for her husband to take advantage of. But it wasn’t her husband’s cock pressing into the palm of her hand. Burt closed his fingers around hers, making her grip his cock. He thrust himself into her fist as he stroked himself with her hand.

***

Adam stood shellshocked, unable to believe what he was seeing. Down in the pool below him, his neighbor was naked, and his wife was standing there topless. His wife’s hand was behind her, and the way her arm was moving, he was sure that Burt was making her stroke him.

His ugly neighbor lowered his mouth and whispered something in his wife’s ear before his lips descended onto her neck. Adam’s body lurched as he watched. Clara’s neck was extremely sensitive and one of his favorite targets during foreplay. Now, his bulky bearded neighbor was kissing her gently. Burt and Clara were turning in the water. Adam thought he saw her close her eyes, but now they were facing away from him, and all he could see was the broad naked back and ass of his neighbor.

Maybe he should stop this. But in his heart, he knew that there was no way that he could move from this spot. This was a moment he had been dreaming about for years. Had been having nightmares about it for even longer. But he’d never expected this. It had always been his work rival Trent that he’d pictured getting intimate with Clara, but now, in many ways, Burt was an ideal candidate. He seemed to be the kind of person that his wife loathed and spent her career rallying against. And now she was here in his arms.

Wait…. Both of Burt’s hands were on Clara’s shoulders, stroking them as he kissed her neck. But her arm was still moving behind her. She was stroking him on her own…

***

“Mmmhmmmmm,” Clara moaned as the scruff of Burt’s face tickled her neck. His lips and tongue danced along her bare skin, sending shivers up her spine. His cock was in her hand. Embarrassment spread over her face in a creeping red blush at the involuntary moan escaping her lips, but she couldn’t help herself.

Thoughts and arguments seemed to slip from her mind. She was still mad at Burt and his words, but they seemed like a secondary concern. She tightened her grip on Burt’s large cock and ran her hand up and down its considerable length. She couldn’t believe how much of it there was. Her hand paused partway down where she was used to Adam’s cock stopping, but Burt’s kept going. Her fingers barely touched as they wrapped around it.

She groaned as Burt’s tongue touched a sensitive area on her neck near her clavicle. Hearing her groan, his tongue swirled around that area, making her squirm beneath his hands. Both of his hands held her shoulders in place, gently rubbing them. Clara’s eyes were closed, and she put her head back onto Burt, loving the sensation. She knew she should get out of the pool and put a stop to this. Logically it made sense, but logic was locked in the trunk of the car, and her horny brain was in the driver’s seat. Adam would surely come out and stop this. She could enjoy it a bit until he arrived.

Clara’s eyes snapped open, looking up at the dark night sky. She looked down and saw both of Burt’s large hairy hands on both of her shoulders. That meant…. She wiggled her arm around and didn’t find anyone holding it any longer. She had been stroking Burt’s big cock all on her own.

One of Burt’s hands left her shoulder and went over her hand again, making her stroke him up and down. He held it in place as he circled around until he was in front of her. Burt stared at her with lust-filled eyes. Clara’s eyes danced over his features. Nothing appealed to her. Most of him repulsed her, but those hungry eyes made her knees weak.

His eyes flicked down to her breasts and her arm shielding them. Burt stood in front of her, a full head taller, as he released his grip on her wrist. Clara found herself still intently stroking him, unable to take her hands off of his heated shaft. Burt reached out and gently grabbed her other arm. Fighting some resistance, he slowly peeled it back off her breasts.

Clara shuddered as she stood topless and exposed before her unkempt neighbor. Allowing his eyes to roam over her nakedness and drink her form in. She felt the pull of the tension between them. It was palpable, like nothing she had ever experienced before. This abrasive, mannerless brute was the exact archetype that she loathed about the opposite sex, yet she found herself wanting to succumb to his whims.

“Those are perfect,” Burt muttered, his eyes still roaming over her large breasts as they floated freely in the water.

“True natural beauties just like God made ya, no plastic at all,” Burt muttered.

Clara felt pride creep into her conciousness at his words. She prided herself on her body. Clara didn’t judge women who decided to get plastic surgery, it just wasn’t for her. All that plastic leeching into one’s body couldn’t be good and ethically she couldn’t support it. To hear a man like Burt agree with her….

“We shouldn’t….” Clara finally got her throat to make words, “I should….get out…Adam…”

“Adam’s fine,” Burt whispered, backing up and pulling Clara with him. “He’s at the window watching.”

Clara began to turn her head to look up at where she had last seen her husband, but Burt stopped her, hand on her chin.

“I think he likes what he’s seeing,” Burt said, “Just like the other night. When you swam out here just to tease me,” Burt said.

“It’s not like that,” Clara whispered.

“It’s exactly like that. You picked out the bathing suit you wanted me to see you in. Put yourself on display for me. Now you got what else you wanted. My cock,” Burt said.

“This isn’t what was supposed to happen,” Clara said.

“You haven’t thought about what it would be like?” Burt challenged, “With me?”

Clara stayed silent, and Burt chuckled.

“That’s good right there, keep stroking Ol’ Burt,” Burt pulled her back to the steps, holding her body close to his as Clara continued to stroke his cock, “You smell fucking good.”

“So what was supposed to happen, huh?” Burt said, “You come out here and swim around?”

“No,” Clara said quietly, “I was supposed to be inside with my husband.”

“How’d you get out here,” Burt asked as she walked backward a couple of steps before sitting down. His ass was parked on the top step, completely out of the water. Clara stood on the bottom step, her hand still stroking his cock. His large gut jutted out towards her.

“Adam wanted me to,” Clara said, “As foreplay.”

“So you’re out here in the water as bait? Looks like you, mmh, you caught a big fish. Ya’ll talk about what to do if I happened to come over?” Burt asked.

“Not seriously,” Clara said, “I don’t think so.”

“Tell me,” Burt commanded.

Clara looked up at Burt’s ugly face into his eyes, “Adam wanted me to come out here instead of ……” Clara trailed off, not wanting to tell Burt about her private sex life with her husband. “I told him if he made me come out here, I didn’t know what was going to happen.” I told him I was only going to be giving one blowjob tonight.Clara gulped at the thought.

“Well then,” An ugly grin spread across Burt’s face as he reached up and pushed down on Clara’s shoulder. She knelt down on the pool steps, coming face to face with Burt’s cock, “Let’s not disappoint. I got an idea. Ol’ Burt here will do the planning for the both of ya.”

His fingers ran up her shoulders until they reached the base of Clara’s neck. He pulled her forward until her face was pressed right up against his cock. Then he let her go and leaned back on his elbows, watching her.

Clara slowly stroked Burt’s cock with her hand. She looked over her shoulder at Adam’s silhouette in the window. When he didn’t move, she remembered his challenge that she wouldn’t go through with it.

She turned back to Burt’s ugly cock. “You really have no idea how lucky you are tonight,” She moved forward, trying to ignore the body it was attached to. She closed her eyes and knelt forward until she felt his large cock head pressing against her pretty little lips. Clara parted her lips, and Burt’s cock head began disappearing into her mouth.

Clara’s lips stretched wider than they’d ever needed to when she had done this with Adam. Her mind still raced about what exactly was happening. Wondering if Adam was still watching, worried about what he would really think now that she’d actually done it. She still expected to hear the mudroom door swing open and her knight in shining armor to come running to her rescue.

It helped thinking like that. Clara didn’t want to admit how much this situation was turning her on. It wasn’t just that it was part of Adam’s fantasy. It was more than that. She hadn’t experienced this before, letting herself go in a situation like….Clara pushed the thoughts down, not wanting to confront them.

She closed her eyes tightly and steeled her resolve as her lips spread open further, Burt’s rough, ugly cock filling her mouth. His cock slid over her tongue. It tasted so unlike Adam’s. She hated the taste. Whenever she blew Adam, she insisted he shower first, washing away his sweat and other tastes he had accumulated that day. And now Burt’s unwashed cock was in her mouth, tasting of sweat and chlorine from the pool water and a low-level earthiness underneath the other flavors.

But Clara couldn’t help but marvel at how thick Burt was in her hands and how full her mouth was. Burt was so hard she could feel the blood running through the veins surrounding his cock as it pulsated in her hands. Doing this outside where anyone could catch them. And his cock being attached to someone like Burt. She knew it wasn’t right. Knew what she was doing was disgusting. But for some reason, she felt herself growing wet between her legs, and it wasn’t just the pool water.

“Mmmhmmmm,” Clara felt mortified, unintentionally moaning lustily around Burt’s cock. She couldn’t fit the whole thing in her mouth. She started to slowly bob her head up and down while gripping his broad shaft tightly with her hand, stroking him. She still couldn’t believe she was out here kneeling in front of their asshole neighbor.

“That’s it,” Burt grunted, his hand resting on the top of Clara’s platinum blonde hair, “Suck on my hairy cock.”

Earlier that day, the idea of Burt putting his greasy hands on the back of her head would have made her skin crawl. It still felt offensive that he was touching her, but she couldn’t reconcile that with the fact that his cock was in her mouth. It still just felt plain wrong, no matter how readily her body was responding to all of this.

Just pretend it’s Adam. Clara tightened her grip on Burt’s cock and squeezed her eyes shut tightly, imagining her loving husband before her.

“Mhmmhmmm,” Clara moaned again, clamping her thighs tightly together under the pool’s water.

“You have no idea how much I’ve wanted to do this,” Burt groaned, his fingers splayed out, nestling into Clara’s hair. “Every time you talk that climate bullshit, this is all I think about. Shutting you up with my cock in your mouth.”

“Mhmmmmm,” Clara felt her face heat up as she blushed. Her stomach twisted in anger, but she didn’t understand why the pace of her blowjob had picked up. It was like her mouth had suddenly decided it wanted to get this bastard off as fast as possible. That was probably it. The sooner he got off, the sooner she could go back inside to her husband unless he came out and ended things first. Where was he? She wanted to look up at the window, but Burt’s hand kept her firmly in place.

Burt’s other calloused hand reached under Clara and roughly grabbed a handful of her swaying breasts. He wasn’t gentle with her like Adam was, instead he roughly mauled them, groping and grabbing them, pinching her nipples harshly, and mashing the two mounds together. Clara’s nipples ached, desperate for more of Burt’s manhandling. She thrust her breasts downwards into his urgent hands. His rough treatment of her caused more muted, wanting moans to escape her lips.

It was becoming almost impossible for Clara to picture Adam seated before her. Burt’s grunt and his rough hands were so unlike her husband. She adjusted her grip.

“I’m really glad you two moved in,” Burt chided, “This is going to be fun.’

Lists of retorts filled her mind, ready to verbally lash out at Burt but all of them were silenced by an overwhelming need to keep tasting and stroking his cock.

“Open your eyes,” Burt commanded, “Look at me.”

Clara’s eyes opened. Her beautiful, piercing blue iris’ stared up at Burt’s ugly face. She stared up at him as her mouth kept running up and down his shaft, closely followed by her gliding hand.

“Damn, you’re sexy,” Burt said, “And you look damn good with a cock in your mouth. Bet you’ll look even sexier when I slide it up into that tight little pussy of yours.”

Clara stared up at him, that thought never even having occurred to her. She couldn’t fathom taking Burt’s cock inside of her…down there. Aside from it just being way too big, that was a line she wasn’t prepared to cross.

Clara took her mouth off Burt’s cock, “That’s not going to happen. This is a one-time thing for Adam to see.”

Burt pushed down on her head, trying to get her to return to his cock but she turned her head to the side. His cock brushed against her cheek and then her ear as Burt continued to push her down to his balls.

“Lick ’em,” Burt said. Clara’s tongue tentatively reached out. Her nose flared as her tongue was met with the wet, matted gray pubic hair beneath his shaft. Burt pushed her head down further until her slurping tongue found the bumpy skin of his nutsack. She groaned as she swirled it around his balls, lashing against each of them while damp, wiry pubic hair clung to her tongue. It was disgusting, but what worried her more was how enamored she seemed to be with it. Her hand was furiously stroking his shaft while she tongued his nuts.

Clara was lapping at his ballsack, Burt grinning like a kid on Christmas, staring down at her, “Fucking A.”

Clara did one last lick around Burt’s oversized balls before licking up his shaft. She moved up to the head of his cock, ready to take him in her mouth again. But Burt stopped her.

“This won’t be a one-time thing,” Burt said.

“Yes it will,” Clara fired back, “I’m never going to let you within five feet of me after tonight. And you’re never going to fuck me. So sit back, shut up, and enjoy this because it won’t be happening again. Ever.”

Burt just chuckled, “I don’t think so. You know your husband. He’s not going to be able to get this out of his head. He’s going to want to see it again, and he’s definitely going to want to see more.”

His comment struck a nerve. Clara knew how Adam was with their fantasy, always pushing for her to say new things or invent new scenarios in the stories or roleplays. Burt might just be right, she couldn’t be sure and she couldn’t let him be sure either.

“You don’t know that. You don’t know us,” Clara said.”

“What I do know - don’t stop stroking,” Burt said. Clara had slowed her strokes on his cock as she began talking. She gripped him tightly and resumed her insistent cresses, her lips just off the tip of his cock. “Is that he hasn’t come out here to put a stop to things yet? Which means he likes what he sees. And I know about men like him. Cucks. They’ll never get enough. He’s going to be begging to see me fuck you right when you walk in that door.”

Clara’s eyes shot up to the window. Adam wasn’t there anymore. Maybe he was running down the stairs now to interrupt them. Seconds ticked by and her husband didn’t emerge from their home. She knew that he wasn’t coming out but was finally able to admit it to herself.

“It doesn’t matter,” Clara told Burt and herself, “I’ll never do it. You’ll never have me.” She shook her head at him while still stroking the massive cock before her.

“You probably never thought you’d be sucking my cock either, but here we are,” Burt chuckled. “After tonight, you won’t be able to stop thinking about it. Wondering what it would be like to do more. Sooner or later, you’ll want it. Then, one day, you’ll accept that you do. .”

“You don’t know me at all,” Clara said.

“It doesn’t matter.” Burt shook his head, “You’re a woman. It’s just nature. It’s your proper place to be open spread eagle for an alpha male.”

Clara rolled her eyes, “Please. You live in a house that’s falling apart and don’t have a job. There’s nothing alpha about you.”

“You sure about that,” Burt sneered and raised an eyebrow. He thrust his hips up and grabbed the back of her head. His cock pushed her lips open and drove into the back of her mouth. Clara gagged for a second, holding onto his shaft. Burt grabbed her hair in his hand, pulled her head up his shaft, and then forced it back down. His other hand rested on the back of her head, doing the same thing.

“Mhmmhmhmhmmm,” Clara moaned at the rough treatment.

Burt laughed under his breath, “This is your place now. With my cock inside you. Your bitch of a husband inside. Got it. Hmmm?”

“Mmmhmmmm-hmmmmm,” Clara moaned in agreement, not fully thinking about it.

When Burt was satisfied that Clara was bobbing her head up and down on her own, he let go of her head and leaned back on his elbows, watching the sexy young liberal wife lovingly bathe his cock with her tongue. He pried his eyes off her platinum-blonde hair and looked over at the house. He couldn’t see Adam but knew he was there somewhere, watching. He grinned at the house, trying to stare the husband down. Make him uncomfortable. From what he read online, asserting his dominance would only further twist the man’s fetish against him.

“Ahhhh,” Burt groaned, leaning back as far as he could. He felt his balls begin to tingle from Clara’s expert cocksucking abilities. He wasn’t going to warn her he was about to cum. Women liked to be surprised, after all.

Clara could feel how hard Burt was in her mouth and hand. His breathing was getting quicker, and his thrusts up into her mouth were more desperate. She knew he was going to cum soon and she was torn about what to do about it. She didn’t want to give him the satisfaction or permission to cum in her mouth. She didn’t want to taste him and let him have that over her.

When she felt him tense, she pulled her mouth back off of him, wanting his cum to spurt into the air and fall into the pool. She continued to stroke his cock to get him off. But she misjudged her timing. She pulled off too soon.

Burt pushed himself up until he was standing over her. His hands were on the back of her head, pulling her face towards his cock. She let go of his cock and turned her head to the side. Burt gripped his cock in his hand and stroked his shaft quickly, his other hand holding the back of Clara’s head.

“Take it,” Burt grunted.

Without warning, a large rope of cum blasted Clara in the face. She clamped her mouth and eyes closed as more and more cum painted her face. Clara felt his hot, sticky substance running down her cheeks, dripping onto her heavy breasts. More, hot cum blasted out of his cock, landing across her closed eyes. Her nose was completely covered with it, and so were her lips. Burt showed no mercy or care as ropes of cum covered her forehead and silken hair.

Burt sneered down at the liberal woman on her knees in front of him, her face obscured by his illicit seed. It matched her platinum blonde hair and white skin. There was some sort of symbolism in that that Burt couldn’t quite put his finger on.

“Ughhhh yeah,” Burt said, releasing his hold on Clara as he stepped back and admired his masterpiece. He sat back down at the edge of the pool and looked at all of his cum splattered on her face, running down her cheeks and dripping down onto those big tits of hers.

Clara turned back towards the pool and sank underneath the water. She ran her hands over her face and breasts, trying to wipe off all of Burt’s gross cum. She couldn’t believe what had just happened, pissed at herself for letting things escalate this far. She had never let Adam cum on her face before. It was humiliating and degrading, and she was ashamed of herself for momentarily enjoying the feeling of the warm spunk on her skin. For the way it….she pushed the thoughts of her head. She was even more pissed at herself for even coming out to the pool in the first place.

She finished cleaning herself as best she could and got out of the pool, passing by an amused Burt.

“Asshole,” she said under her breath as she grabbed her red bikini top and stalked into the house. Burt stayed there for several minutes, amazed at how easily things had happened. Then he felt an itch in his throat and got up out of the pool. He grabbed his overalls and trudged naked back to his house for another beer.

***

Adam wanted to jump Clara the second she walked through the mudroom door. He had never seen anything nearly as erotic as what had just happened and he still couldn’t believe it had been his wife that had done it. His normally straight-laced wife had sucked their revolting neighbor's cock in their pool. She had actually put not just her hands but her entire mouth on another man. It was everything he had fantasized about. He was still reeling, not believing what he’d witnessed was real.

And with someone like Burt, too. That guy was a piece of shit that was everything his wife hated and railed against, both professionally and personally. Yet somehow, it had still happened. Adam felt guilty at pushing her to swim, not really expecting Burt to make such a bold move. He just wished he’d recorded it somehow so he could relive it. Judging by the look on Clara’s face, she wasn’t likely open to repeating it any time soon.

The door slammed shut behind her, and Clara looked upset, “Fucking prick.”

She marched past Adam, not even realizing he was standing there. He hurried after her.

“Are you okay?” Adam asked as they ascended the stairwell, “I didn’t think Burt would actually try anything.”

“He came all over my face like I was some cheap whore,” Clara huffed, “I feel disgusting. I need to take a shower and get all of him off of me.”

All of him off of me…  Adam thought, repeating Clara’s words in his mind. His cock ached as he walked up the stairs behind her. Her red bikini bottoms tight around her supple ass. Burt had cum on Clara’s face. He knew she would hate that. She always told him how demeaning it was when men did that to women, which is why he had never done it with his wife. But now their new older neighbor had performed this sexual power move with his wife before he’d ever had the chance to.

He still couldn’t believe it had been Burt that had unlocked this new level of their fantasy. Someone like his old coworker Trent, sure, he would have made more sense. Adam and Trent were at least around the same age and generally had similar values, although Trent had turned out to be a scheming asshole. But Burt was Adam’s complete opposite in almost every single way.

Adam had never felt this horny before. He couldn’t wait to get Clara upstairs and into bed. His eyes stayed glued to Clara’s toned body as she stripped out of her bikini bottoms in their master bathroom and started the shower.

She turned to look at him, pausing as she looked him over. Adam felt like a guilty child about to be reprimanded. Clara sighed, “I want to shower and go to bed Adam.”

Clara guided him begrudgingly to the door of the bathroom. She closed it gently when he stepped back into the bedroom. She did tell him earlier that she would only be giving one blowjob that night.

It didn’t take Adam long to cum. He was already rock hard, and his cock was throbbing by the time he started touching himself. With the images of his wife and Burt fresh in his mind, he quickly stroked himself to completion.

Clara was still in the shower when he was done. He laid in bed, waiting for her to come out but sleep took him first.

***

Clara hated herself for allowing a brute like Burt to use her like that. To do that to me.

She washed her hair with more shampoo than normal. Then scrubbed her face clean with a cleanser. Used a bar of soap and body wash to clean her body. She needed to feel clean after what had happened, trying to erase every single one of Burt’s little sperms off her body.

Just the idea of his sperm potentially touching her skin and running down her body. Over her breasts, down her stomach, and further down made her shudder. She couldn’t believe that the asshole just did that to her without even asking, and the way he manhandled her and roughly touched her breasts and pushed down on her head. The way he stole her bikini top and taunted her with it.

She seethed, just thinking about the demeaning comments the man had made. The way he looked at her. The fire of desire that blazed in his eyes and the attitude that he would get what he wanted from her.

“Mhmm,” Clara softly moaned, realizing that her hand had found her slit as she leaned against the shower wall. She opened her eyes in horror. The shower’s glass wall was completely fogged up and it had been some time since she had washed herself.

How long have I been standing here thinking about what just happened? Clara leaned back against the wall, closed her eyes, and let her hands explore her body. She had been horny all day and needed relief. It wasn’t fair that Burt and Adam both got theirs.

As her delicate, manicured fingers explored herself, Clara kept trying to focus on her husband. Thinking thoughts about him. But somehow, Burt always seemed to intrude and force his way into her steamy reverie.

Clara bit her lip and hung her head in shame as she brought herself off to a replay of that night’s events.

Comments

Earl0849

Not what I expected. Way to easy for Bert. Do not see her giving it up that easy just to please husband. You have presented her as strong independent woman. Don't think Bert could turn her into his slut that quickly and with such ease. Also wonder where Bert gets his money and if its outside the law how will she fit in.

Mark Albright

This story is moving faster. Next time, Burt fucks her, then gets her to forget her liberal views, then denounce them just so she can get more cock.

Sask306

This is the best story Don! Bring on Chapter 4 ASAP ☆

Chris

👍🏻

Royston smith

No changes, apart from cosmetic, between alpha and final. So why 26 days gap between them? Also agree with Earl she gave in far too easily. Doesn’t sit with what we know of her character. Her husband is also just a weak fool who doesn’t deserve her. Bert too one dimensional, unlike Lester. Hard to engage with the characters tbh. However, I will reserve judgement and see how it develops. 6/10 for me.

MV

Agree to an extent. The thing with TA is that you felt involved from the start, lots going on in every chapter, getting to know the characters, etc, etc. NE is more like a Bob Ross painting, imo. Largely blank canvas, gradually build up more and more detail and action as the painting goes on. I'm hoping that's how it's going to go, with Clara kept *very* busy pleasing the locals, the farmers in the area, and who knows who else. I wonder if Clara gives in a little too easily because that's a sign of what's to come? Setting the stage for how submissive she might be? Adam is frankly a waste of space. I'm not sure what fates are going to befall him down the line. I like the idea of Don developing other stories away from TA, I think he may develop another long story as well as this one, but if I was Don, I'd think very carefully about finishing TA altogether. There's nothing as good as it on Lit, and there's nothing as good as it in the hotwife stories you pay for on Kindle (and trust me, I've bought a LOT of them through the years).

Royston smith

Totally agree on your last point , MV. There is nothing as good as TA and like you I have read a few. Therein lies the problem imo, TA is so good other stories seem to pale in comparison. NE may improve as you say, but if I were a betting man I would wager it wont measure up to TA. I just don’t think the plot setup or the characters are interesting enough.

MV

I agree with that. I don't view it as 'competition' with TA, just a different story with a different feel. I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing. At least on the surface, it's more the kind of hotwife story I'd *normally* go for, but Roxy has said a couple of times that this story will be darker than TA, so I think we have to try not to come to conclusions too soon. We've only really had her neighbour to go on so far. Think about the money men she's going to have to please, the farmers she's going to have to persuade, and all those horny guys in the trailer park who will want go sample her delights. So yes, a different feel from TA, but still a story that I want to discover more of. If it's true that Don will have another long story that he's cooking, maybe that one will be more like TA (but different)? I wouldn't mind seeing Don take a break after this phase of TA ends, but I'd like him to return to it in some form once his other stories are up and running. In my mind, TA builds to a crescendo, the couple have split over Sarah's lies, etc, but Marcus catches up with Lester and he goes to jail. Sarah comes to her senses, and realises just what damage she's caused. She goes back to Dan, which won't be a pain-free process for either of them. Maybe this phase of TA ends there, with 'To be continued...'? Don focuses on NE and other stories for a while, but then picks up the story on TA? I could see that playing out in my mind. Maybe Sarah has moved to a new job for a fresh start. She's now admin for the police dept. A World full of 'hardened' males and the intimidating criminals they deal with. What could possibly go wrong for Dan?😂

Mark Albright

So Don clearly has a formula or pattern that he is following. Good-looking, but weak, husband, strong, independant, sexy wife, and physically unappealing antagonist with a big dick. The couple, especially the wife, considers themselves above the antagonist. But the wife ends up liking the big dick so much that she forgets about everything else. Good, intriguing formula. The problem for Don is that he has done such a good job with TA his other stories seem like pale imitators. I have a few ideas on how to change things up, but I'll wait to see what everybody has to say.

Royston smith

Whichever way you dress it up either its quality or it isn’t. I don’t get your point about competition. Sure, it’s a different story with a different feel, but either its good or it isn’t, either the plots believable or it isn’t, either you engage with the characters or you don’t. Mark has a good point about Don’s formula., but its how that formula is used and adapted that matters and the original idea/situation in which the protagonists are placed.

Royston smith

Sorry, the above post was meant for MV and MA.

Jorge1717

Not bad ! In chapter 4 she really needs to feel disgusted about the blowjob as really bad drunk mistake….

Jorge1717

I think chapter 4 should focus on a really reluctant negotiation with an older more disgusting farmer for her start up project and then a new encounter with Burt …✨😈😈

Earl0849

I cannot see Bert just walking over and getting in this woman's pool. She is too strong for that. She probably would have called cops. So, like you will wait and see where we go from here. Also wonder about Bert's wife.

FU

Great beginning to what should be many more great chapters. She was half drunk and her husband had challenged her, Burt knew what buttons to push, because he had overheard them. He had watched them the other night when she took her first swim for his benefit. So for her to be so easily turned, is not that far of a stretch and people that view themselves as Strong and dominant in their world sometimes are attracted to the humiliation of someone that is beneath them, yet dominates them. I can’t wait to read how he takes her in front of her husband in the marital bed without her permission. There are so many journeys he can take her on because I think he makes his living outside of the law and has friends in those areas that he will share her with for a price. I also think he will help her with her business, my bet is by introducing her to both legitimate and illegitimate farmers, and she might even have to trade her GOODS to get the business.

MV

Good post. I don't think there's any doubt about your last point.

InfamousFerret57

The first two chapters seemed like a nice slow burn, then this chapter felt almost forced and clunky in how Clara sort of just falls into giving her neighbor a BJ. Adam is way too eager to push her from fantasy talk into sex with someone they barely know, and Burt was way to aggressive for the first seduction. All that being said there is potential for her to slow things down with the way she reacted and progress differently...but right now none of these characters are very likable...Adam is a dumbass along the lines of Harry in Detestable Liasons, Clara is already a slut with no self-control or morals to overcome...her liberal agenda doesn't mean much to her and neither does her husband apparently since she says she's doing it for him, but afterwards doesn't even talk to him about it and leaves him to jerk off while she showers (something maybe to expect in a much later chapter, but not after her first experience with another man)...no real corruption of her morals, because she appears to be all talk. Burt is a redneck POS peeping Tom who apparently doesn't even have to overcome any real challenges or do any planning to get what he wants because Adam is going to tell his wife to have sex with him right out of the gate and apparently she's just going to do it. I like the premise of this story, but I don't like the characters or their progression so far...so I find myself feeling indifferent to this story at present.

Sigma

This story has so many more possibilities given Clara's very strongly held beliefs as compared to Sarah. In this divided society we now live in, sometimes those with the strongest belief system are the easiest to compromise because the 'other side' is so much worse, so bad, so wrong that's its really taboo. And taboo is what gets the engine running. Plus she's working in a University environment which is rife with politics, funding issues, etc. Lots of potential politicking with blackmail opportunities to keep funding going, programs going, etc from both administration, donors, government contracts and contractors. Not to mention the farmers. I can see a version of "salesman meets farmer's daughter" type of story where Clara meets farmer's son, or, perhaps lacking enough farmers for her research and needs to turn on the charm? The trailer park, well, trailer park trash is always a hot part of any story when it comes to upper-class highly-educated beauties. Where does Adam fit into this? He's much more of a cuck than Dan in TA, and actually willing to plan compromising situations for his wife, whether she knows it or not. So whether he schemes with the trailer park trash, a funding source for her start-up, a sponsor, an administrator, there's plenty of ways this story can go on and on. And, as a side-thought, what if Dan and Sarah were to move away from Middleton to the outskirts of Grand Rapids?

Sigma

Perhaps we're too tied up in the Silververse to be able to look at NE as a completely separate and unrelated story. In TA we came to know Dan and Sarah quite well for several chapters before anything really began to develop with Lester, especially the intercourse. And even then, the way that happened was somewhat by accident due to Jesse's meddling. So we came to see even more of Dan and Sarah's close relationship as they navigated Jesse's fraud while dealing with how Lester had Sarah. In NE, we have very little background and character development - and that's ok. Plenty of good fiction gets into the action quickly and the character development is interspersed throughout the chapters. Because we all like Don Silver for how he has been writing TA, DL, and TC we're assuming he'll do the same with NE - when he doesn't have to. But readers have to adjust as well. Now lets say he developed NE as he did TA? Then some would complain he's too stuck on the same format and formula.

Mark Albright

I don't think Don wants to get into politics, but if he did, once Burt gets Clara hooked on his big cock, he could start making her say things she doesn't believe. He could make her wear a red MAGA hat if she wants to get fucked. Then he takes her to introduce her to the farmers, and she wears the red hat to try to fit in. He tells her just to agree with him when they talk to the farmers, and she starts saying outrageous (for her) redneck things. It excites her to say these things and really gets into playing her new character, a snowflake who has seen the light. Before long, the distinction between the real Clara and the pretend Clara starts to blur. She finds herself agreeing with Burt more and more. She sees her hubby as a weak liberal and Burt as a real man. Just saying, could make it a different story than TA.

Pete

Love the story Don, the thought of a liberal woman getting dominated by the gruff, unkept neighbour is exactly what we needed. Liberal women are an interesting bunch, their dominating nature makes them perfect to cuck their soft hubbies

LH_reads

Excellent.

Rjh200m

A political bent to sex talk. Instead of Burt making Clara say that she likes his cock better than Adam’s, he makes her say that climate change is all nonsense! Or that she wants Burt to power fuck her in his rolling coal pick-up!

Rjh200m

I think Clara needs to kick her husband in the ass, deny him sex, make weekend trips back to San Francisco to fuck Trent, and have Burt fuck her in her bedroom while Adam goes on job interviews. Adam is a real weak, sniveling character. Like others I found it a little hard to believe that she gave in to Burt so easily, but she seemed to do it because of the dare or challenge from Adam. I sense that she will really resent how weak Adam is and may turn out to be very dominant toward him as the story unfolds. A clue is how aggressive she was with Adam when he pretended to be Trent. Before this sex scene, Clara was genuinely upset at what Trent did to Adam at work and was concerned as to whether Adam really wanted to give up his job to allow Clara to pursue her dream. But during the sex play, Clara said to “Trent”…..”fuck me like you fucked my husband at work” Pretty mean!

ralph

I think these commenters need to read up on what makes a cuck do and act the way they do to enjoy this story

Darrow

This may be an odd thing, but generally, I don't find that women lose all sexual restraint and forget themselves when they've got a cock in their mouth. For a lot of women, it's just not that arousing. Contrary to Deep Throat, the clitoris is not actually in the back of the mouth, that's the uvula, and it's not a sex organ. Nor is the psychological effect overwhelming. If you want to make a woman melt, go for the clitoris every time, stroke the labia, apply gentle pressure on the vulva. That will get you sex-trance, or in that vicinity, where a woman will choose to enjoy or go along with things. Some women have hyper-sensitive nipples that can get them there. Blow jobs? Not quite. Some women get off on them psychologically, but very few find it a profound psychosexual experience. Having said all that, interesting direction this has taken. Burt is far smarter than he lets on, seems to read up on things, he's a sharp judge of character and timing, and he's a knowing predator. He understands Adam and Adam's fetish very very well, and is very coldly manipulating it. Clara he doesn't understand nearly as well, in part because he's contemptuous of her. But that contempt gets in the way of his claiming her. He's got assets he can play and lines of attack to seduce her willingly, but he seems ineffective, and he is relying on Adam's psychological issues to put her in his path. Burt is absolutely right, the further it goes, the further Adam will want it to go. Adam will eventually pressure his wife, covertly and then openly to fuck Burt. He'll put her in front of Burt in sexual situations, and he'll push Clara into it. Hell, in this chapter we've watched him literally plot and conspire, pushing Clara in, setting her up, turning on the lights, hiding and watching. Clara was uncomfortable with the situation from the start, Adam put her out there, and when Burt goes into the pool, he leaves her hanging every step of the way. That Clara eventually goes with it doesn't mean she's particularly happy with it, and of course, it ends up with a massive degradation humiliation for her. Clara's not unaware of Adam's fetish, she's aware of the thing with Trent, the bedroom talk and private play. She's accepted it as a fun little spice. But this is taking it much much further than she ever wanted to go. The situation is very different from Dan and Sarah. Sarah was always a temptress, she loved teasing Dan and stoking his fetish. Sarah was always kind of in the lead, and willingly bold. Here it's the opposite, Clara's aware and accepting of the fetish, but she's not really into it. Here it's Adam taking the lead, pushing and driving it, and Clara almost reluctantly putting up with it. I think she might find herself shocked at some of the things Burt said about how far Adam will push her, and that he won't be satisfied with this single encounter. I think the trajectory here will be different. I think Adam is going to steadily push and lot to push Clara at Burt, and get her fucked by Burt, as many times as he can. He'll find excuses to dress her sexily for Burt, have Burt over, have her over at Burt, put her in compromising positions, or just nakedly push her to do it. And I think Clara will go along with it, she'll even fuck Burt. But I don't think she's going to fall for him. At best it'll be just 'sport fucking' - a good lay, but man he's awful to be around. The key dynamic will be Clara's growing anger, resentment and estrangement from Adam. How do you love someone who turns you into a whore? Who jerks off about getting you humiliated and fucked by redneck assholes. Adam's fetish is going to come at the price of Clara's self respect, her dignity, her idealism and self worth. She's going to start to resent Adam, and then hate him. Eventually, she'll fuck rednecks right in front of him while he jerks off, hating herself, but hating him more. Letting some inbred hillbilly into her pussy as a way of expressing contempt for Adam, and intention to humiliate him. I think the end of the trajectory will see Clara cutting off Adam altogether - she'll fuck anyone but him, and will use her sex and sexuality to degrade and humiliate him. He may end up in a permanent cock cage. At the very least, she'll be permanently nasty about his size, duration and performance. The relationship, if it continues will probably end up Mistress / slave. There's very little or no chance that Adam will come out on top, where he sufficiently degrades and shatters his wife, that she ends up as a submissive sex toy that he passes around. I think she's got too much fire and presence for that. There is a chance that Burt breaks her though, pulls her away from Adam, shatters her confidence and self worth, and turns her into a trailer park whore, where Adam remains married and keeps her stable even as she ends up as Adam's toy, or more likely the community pump. Burt is definitely toxic towards her. There's no human feelings, no engagement. He sees her as prey, nothing more, and he has absolutely no respect for her intelligence, her ideals or principles. More like outright contempt. He sees himself as an alpha male and is interested in conquering her. That conquest will likely involve stripping her down, tearing away her self worth, mocking her ideals and principles, and lowering her. He's offended that he thinks she sees herself as better than him, he won't be satisfied until he's torn away every bit of pride or self regard she has. What better way to do that and break her down than share her. And because he's not really interested in her, except as a prize to take, and a pedestal to destroy, I suspect over time he may lose interest and just make her a community asset. The Dark thing is that this lines up so well with the darker more unsavoury side of Adam's fetish that he might well be a willing co-conspirator and collaborator with Burt for the journey. Maybe at some mid-point for a ways. Or maybe regretfully, all the way to the end. His fetish is going to keep evolving and getting darker, especially if Burt plays him. I think he'd have regrets and reluctance, but he'd get over that... at least for a while. I think the Adam at the end of Clara's journey is going to be a very different creature than he was at the beginning. Hell, 's already a lot darker with Clara than Dan was with Sarah. Dan's cuck fetish makes him passive, he goes along with it, watching as Sarah develops. Adam on the other hand, is actively pushing Clara, he's scheming and plotting, picking out wardrobe, setting the scene, pushing her into locations, lighting up, setting the stage. It wouldn't take much to turn Adam into a willing accomplice, perhaps not much more than Burt having the right conversation with Adam at the right time. Of course, if Burt really really wanted to do a number on Clara's life, he'd strip away all the material and accouterments of her life - her shiny Tesla would go, he'd get her fired from her job, maybe see about making her unemployable elsewhere, poison her old life. He might make porn videos of her and make sure they end up in places that will result in doors shutting. Hell, he doesn't have to make them, Adam would make them, convince her to go along with them, and then Burt would arrange for them to go where they'd do the most damage to her life... while leaving the fingers pointing at Adam. In the end, Clara could end up broke, unemployed and unemployable, her career beyond repair, drowning in debt, facing bankruptcy and homelessness, maybe with a useless and estranged Adam twittering about, with no options and no future and the only pleasure being a complete asshole's big cock. It might end up waiting tables and turning tricks in some backwoods honkey tonk, kneeling for blow jobs and resigned despairingly to the fact that all her education and ideals have come to nothing, that no one cares about what comes out of her mouth only about their cocks going into it, that this is all she's good for, this is her life, and the only chance of pleasure will be to give up and submit. I admit, I can get pretty dark. And it's possible. In the final scene, we see Clara's got a taste for her own degradation. That could take her dark places. But I like to see her as more self possessed and a fighter, struggling to navigate her own lusts, her love for an unworthy husband, and hold onto her true best self. The most likely outcome for Clara at this point, and the best outcome for her, is that she eventually comes to hate Adam and leaves him, tires of Burt being an asshole despite the great sex, and just walks out - hooks up with Trent and lives happily ever after.

Darrow

I think she will be. She was upset, and I think that the aftermath for her will be messed up. Sexy and exciting, she'll have an undeniable visceral erotic charge. But she'll also feel really conflicted in all sorts of ways. Of course, in trying to come to terms, it will happen again.

Darrow

I think that Clara genuinely has a submissive streak, that's in her. But I also think that she's used to and comfortable with Adam's fetish, and that's a vulnerability. I don't think she's into it as he is. But she loves him, and she's okay with him being into it. So even though she's not into it, she's not as repelled as she would be. There's a subliminal acceptance. This encounter was something that her husband very deliberately set up as foreplay, pushed her into it, and then carefully stood back. She was well aware of where he was putting her. She was already aroused and looking forward to sex. She was already drunk. She was basically sort of on a threshold to tip over if it all lined up the right way.

Rjh200m

Great analysis Darrow, you mention many possible avenues that can make the story interesting. Agree that the premise is completely different from TA. And that Clara will submit to Burt’s advances, but she will take out her anger on her husband Adam. One area that is somewhat contradictory is that Clara got very angry when Talking with Burt in the driveway before the pool blowjob scene when he said “I’ll have to ask the man of the house”. She was upset and thought to herself that she was the equal of Adam in every sense. And we know that she takes a very proactive approach to her work and Adam followed her so she can start her business. But she immediately gives into Adam’s sexual urges? And takes it to a level that she was very uncomfortable with? Seems like a very quick loss of control on her part. We will see how this develops.

Rjh200m

In the TA story, Dan and Sarah were in it together at the beginning and the initial sex scenes with Lester had Dan present. And at the beginning, Dan was very protective of Sarah. In this story Adam sets Clara up, and pushes her into the second pool scene with Burt without having any idea what kind of person he is. And the best that Adam can do is hide in the house and watch what happens without acknowledging his presence, or going out to the pool? And what was he upset about? That he did not record it.

Darrow

She gives in quickly yes. There's some history here. I think she's been inoculated, or maybe the better word is acclimated. It's in him, she knows it's there and she's accepted it but it doesn't or hasn't run away with him, so she kind of tolerates and goes along with it. It was sort of incorporated into their life with the Trent thing. I imagine she kind of went along with it, but is glad to be without the complication. He's aware of her acceptance, but also aware of her lack of enthusiasm, so he generally keeps it on the down low, and kind of engages in a mixture of begging, flirting and scheming to feed it. You can see by her "Only giving one blow job tonight" remark that she's used to teasing him. And she complies in the pool because she knows how much it means to him... and also, he schemes to manipulate her. But it's very clear that all things being equal, she'd just prefer to skip all the bullshit and be one on one with him. She's not really into his game, she's doing it because she knows it makes him hard. At least that's my read on it. Where she gives in to Bart, that is a little surprising. I think maybe a number of things are going on - she's a bit drunk - not intoxicated but inhibitions are loosened, and she had some residual horniness worked up - definitely not for Bart, but there was an underlying arousal. I think there was also an awareness that her husband was there watching and wanting it to happen, and that leads to complicated emotions: Some level of comfort with it happening, knowing he's there and there's safety if anything goes wrong. Some level of willingness or arousal to perform for him. Some level of resentment and co-option to punish him by going through it. Honestly, though, I found her just going into the blow job a little implausible. Most women don't go into a sex trance from touching a cock, or having one in their mouth. Clara's feelings on going through should have been a lot more complicated and nuanced than just a sex trance sneaking up on her. Or maybe more work to establish that she had a slight oral fetish fixation... some allusions that she sucked a lot of cocks in the past, liked to tease her husband by miming oral... some internal monologue where she can't help noticing crotches or thinking what it would be like. Basically, establish the sort of woman who would go for that. One thing with women - a blow job doesn't necessarily turn a crank, but some women really like the convenience and power of it. It's a minimal investment of time and energy, satisfies and dispenses with men, etc. They see it as a means of erotic control, of engagement and pro-active participation, rather than hapless submission. But that's not where Clara went in this case. She went with hapless submission. Honestly, the more effective seduction would have been fondling her, arousing and fingering or stroking her to the point where she just goes with it, surrenders to her feelings and allows him to make him jerk her off, and he keeps her prolonged on the edge of orgasm as possible, before allowing her to cum - reinforcing dominance and control. He might even deny her orgasm, claiming she hasn't earned it. Then she'd be hungry. The most persuasive part is that afterwards, in the shower, dealing with the emotional fallout, she's hungry. She's been in a highly charged sexual situation, but not allowed completion. That's powerful stuff.

Darrow

One of the interesting things about Bart is that the story explicitly notes he has read up on what makes a cuck do and act the way they do. Bart alludes to it a few times.... When he's staring into the dark trying to make eye contact while Clara is blowing him, thinking that he's read this messes them up and twists their pathology further. Also, when he tells Clara it won't be the end and Adam will keep pushing, and eventually want him to fuck Clara. It's almost Meta - Bart has read up on cucks and cuck-fetish, and he's using that knowledge against Adam and Clara.

Darrow

I hope it doesn't get too deep into politics, I don't need Qanon Trump bullshit in my sex stories. I don't want Clara turning into Loren Boebert or Marjorie Taylor Green. I could stand to see Clara's idealism and commitment degraded to the point where she says 'fuck it' and just stops believing and being committed, accepting that the world is going to hell and everyone is useless. But the loss of idealism is compelling. Inverting idealism and turning her into a brain damaged neo-nazi is not compelling.

FU

The only thing you could have done was have C come out to find hubby out cold, then she says “I need to get mine”, walking naked back out to the pool…….

Mark Albright

Yeah, I agree that's too far. But I think turning her back on her beliefs just to get Burt's cock would make it more compelling. And him making her submit physically and verbally would be hot.

Darrow

Yeah, I think Burt's going to want to shred her idealism.

Curiouser69

Corruption of a strong woman is a real turn on...it will be real hot if Clara surrends to Burt not only physically but ideologicaly too. Slowly she will eat non veg ,do hunting with him and will purchase a truck from him... slowly she will become a sadist and corrupt person

Mark Albright

Starts smoking, drinking beer, makes fun of her husband because he doesn't act like Burt, calls him a pussy.

Rjh200m

She ditches the sustainability business and becomes partners with Burt and Casper in their moonshine business!

DrJensen

I like the new chapter of this story -it is a much simpler storyline without all the questionable tech and corporate details, and Burt is no evil genius. The BJ does feel on the verge of being forced, a handjob had been better somehow, but the lead-up to the BJ -that Clara will only give one BJ that evening is nicely done. I look forward to seeing where this leads. If she maintains her opinions and maybe gets Burt to change a bit it will, in my opinion, be better.

Royston smith

Listen, each to their own. This may become a decent story sometime down the line. Who knows. But, you know, you have to be engaged with the characters. I just cant engage with Adam (or David as Darrow has renamed him). Someone who conspires to have their Wife fucked by another man in such a fashion needs to be severely reprimanded with little John’s staff in my opinion. I just cannot warm to him. Dan, on the other hand is conflicted and so is Mark in TC (in fact he never was a cuck). That seems far more realistic to me. Burt (or Bart as Darrow calls him) is just a boor. Perhaps a cunning one, but still an uninteresting boor. Give me Lester’s master planning any day. And Clara, well she is so far up her own arse I cannot warm to her. Give me the delectable Sarah any day. However, since you are all so into the story I am going to do my best to like it. Honest!!

Darrow

Oops I'd better fix that. Adam is such a mild character I can't keep his name straight. Burt or Bart? I'm obviously struggling. EDIT: Went back and fixed it! Thanks, Dude, for setting me right. Actually, for me, one of the interesting things here is Adam's betrayal of his wife, and how far that will go. Dan is conflicted. Adam is selfish and enthusiastic. I don't think he has any regrets. Putting his wife in a borderline rape situation and watching her suck another man's cock seems to be in a "clear win" category for him, even to the point of celebratory masturbation, despite Clara being upset. If I was Clara, I'd have big problems with Adam, no question. I think if she clearly understood what he was doing and how he was thinking it would be divorce time. But here she is, in a marriage she's trying to make work, with someone she actually does love, and she's become tolerant of his little thing, not realizing its metastasizing. And true enough, Burt is hard to like. When we're inside his head, he's creepy. He's actually more appealing when we see him through Clara's eyes, and he's still creepy, but in different ways. I dunno. These are just the opening chapters, and this is the first genuinely transgressive scene where Clara and Adam compromise themselves in different ways. TA started slow, DT was basically a one off that escalated, TC was icky. I'll give it few more chapters. Adam and Burt may be genuinely loathesome, but if they're loathesome in a way that's fun to watch, I'm in. Characters don't have to be likable, they have to be interesting. Hating them, and being compelled to read them, is almost as good as liking them. Lester is perhaps the best case for that. He's a creepy monster. But he's such a compelling creepy monster, that despite his lack of redeeming features, there's a Team Lester.

Darrow

Ideals and idealism are often battered by the cruelties of reality. As I said, it's not interesting to see her turn into a redneck. But it would be interesting to see her lose faith. What happens when she finds herself in a world where no one cares about her ideals, that her best efforts fail or are mocked, where her beliefs in humanity and decency turn out to b misplaced.

Mark Albright

Just to be clear. I don't like it so far. I just think it has possibilities. The main difference in this and TA so far is Don didn't develop the characters enough before the mandatory blow job happened. And in so doing we don't really care about the characters enough. But he could still resurrect the story and make into something worth reading, while not on the level of TA. Just my view. Don't give up on it yet.

Sigma

"Burt is no evil genius" is well-said. In fact, that's what makes this a refreshing story as compared to all of Lester's machinations.

Rjh200m

Very good point Darrow, she is going from San Francisco to rural America, vastly different places and beliefs, Clara will be shocked by the different perspectives from a professional/work perspective but also from an “up close and personal” perspective in her interactions with Burt and presumably others. This could be an interesting aspect of the story as you say.

Sigma

Again, too many readers are emotionally stuck in TA when they criticize NE. Whether Adam or Dan is into hotwifing, cuckholding, or role-playing, in any case the wife is involved in both stories. Adam is conspiring with Clara anymore than Dan and Sarah are talking about safe words, videoing requirements, what to do if Lester attempts this or that. Clara is all in on the role-playing. Now, while she didn't expect Burt to jump into the pool neither did Sarah expect Lester to pull out his cock with S&D were getting off on being watched while making out on the sofa.

Sigma

Another difference between TA and NE is that Burt is a true Alpha who intuitively reads people, knows what to do, and how to do it. Walking into that pool was the right move at the right time. Lester is not as obvious, has to slink around a little, use technology, plan and scheme. Yeah, he's really good at it, but in the past he had to drug his victims while Burt probably didn't have to. Is Lester an alpha? Probably, but there are different styles between Lester and Burt. Burt is gross on a different level from Lester, just as Burt is technically obtuse on a different level than Lester. The difference in TA and NE is fantastic, refreshing to read, and has an entirely different set of arcs that story can go in.

Charlie_Chuckles

The audience didn’t even have a chance to develop an emotional attachment before Clara was forced to give Burt a blow job. This story seems to be more of a quick jerk than a long format Don indicated. I

Royston smith

Yes RJ is right. That would be far more realistic and something that a reader might accept, rather than the total corruption of the red maga hat. Good point Mr D.

TD40

Love where this is going

J Lewis

There’s a saying everyone is a liberal until they get punched in the face but maybe for Clara until she gets fucked by a massive conservative cock. I’m having problems of an outdoor pool in Michigan…gives me the shivers. A hot tub would be better.

Earl0849

I read this again and the trailer court has now come up twice. So wondering how it may tie in. Drugs moonshine does Bert get Clair hooked? Seems like something is going to go down at trailer court to compromise Clair and increase her desire for cock.

Mark Albright

I was just kidding about the MAGA hat. I wouldn't read the story if it went in that direction.

Display Name Here

This chapter is good, but suffers from chapter 2 not really progressing anything. Thus everything here feels rushed to fit into the five chapter format for your shorts.

Jay Muney

Even though I agree that the BJ seemed to happen without enough reluctance or a fight that Clara put up against her uncouth slimy neighbor…the actual submission and having his illicit seed sprayed all over her face…was TOTALLY HOT! I hope in the next chapter that Adam begs Clara to give in and go swimming again, but this time Burt screws the shit out of her, her mind and body are blown especially after Burt ejaculates inside of her… Clara quickly realizes the taboo sex with Burt is so unrelenting that she has to have it more often. But Burt withholds it from her until she relents and agrees to be shared with his friends or business associates…in order to get ahead in someway. Clara attempts to keep her sanity and proud ideals, but she can’t live without Burt’s huge cock and will (reluctantly) agree to whatever Burt says in order to get what she needs…all the while realizing that even though she loves Adam, sex with her ‘Daddy’ Burt is so much better, that Burt inviting his friends over to Clara and Adam’s pool for a Clara sex party…while Adam hides and records it. I hope Clara expresses more reluctance but eventual submission in her desire for the massive cock nextdoor.

Sigma

These are great ideas for the story. I would hope it would take at least two chapters for some of these to develop but the story does appear to be moving faster than TA. The idea of Clara "reluctantly" agreeing is intriguing and hot! Seemingly with far left ideals (I'm not judging here so don't flame me) and dedicated to certain goals, she may come to realize that compromise is actually good in moving things forward - both in the sexual satisfaction from Burt et al that she doesn't get from Adam, and, in her new company's need for growth and funding.

Darrow

I don't know if it will happen next episode. Don tends to drag things out. But yeah, sometime soon, Burt is going to fuck the shit out of her. And sometime later, she'll like it and accept it. But I think I'll enjoy seeing her compromise, as her principles and ideals, and ultimately her marriage is torn away, and as Adam steadily betrays her as he feeds his fetish. I really do think that Adam and Burt will directly work together to get Clara fucked. Adam practically set her up and served her on a platter. He knows he's a cuck and he's full on into it, Burt knows he's a cuck and is intent on taking advantage of it. The only one who isn't onboard with Burt fucking Clara is Clara herself. It makes sense that Adam and Burt would openly talk about what they both want and ow to make it happen. And for Clara it would be a huge betrayal of her and her marriage by Adam. Adam will want to conceal his role, Burt won't give a shit but it will give him leverage on Adam and a tool against Clara, and I'd expect him to used it. Burt isn't an Alpha male, he's just a low rent sleazy predator, a bit smarter than the usual run. He has only contempt for Clara and Adam, and isn't interested in anything more than using them. I suspect that will ultimately mean turning Adam into his Renfield. Honestly, I will be extremely disappointed if there isn't a scene somewhere along the lines where Burt amuses himself by persuading or intimidating Adam to eat bugs. As for Clara, I think her resistance, such as it is, will amuse Burt. He's not like Lester, who really gets off on conquest. But he might enjoy a little fight in his catch once he's hooked them - the fact that the blow job took pace in or at the pool says it all - Clara is a fish, his cock is the hook, and he's got her on his string. She can struggle, he'll enjoy that, she might even break away. But he's confident of landing her. I think for Burt, the real prize is Clara's idealism and self worth, her illusions or beliefs about herself and the world. Burt is openly contemptuous, and I think he'll want to break that. He wants to teach Clara what he thinks her proper place in the world should be, and have her resign herself to it. Not enjoy it, not embrace it, but accept that this is her life now and there isn't anything else for her. Worst possible outcome for Laura? A new life, living in a broken down mobile home in some white trash trailer park, sleeping days and working afternoons and nights as a waitress in a redneck bar serving drinks and smiling and flirting for tips, while occasionally turning tricks at the local motel. Adam, still nominally her husband, but utterly useless and following Burt around like a puppy/sidekick, trapping her in a loveless sexless marriage used only to keep her down. At the very best - she ends up as an unwilling business partner and sex toy for Burt, stuck and unable to escape, as she facilitates his business, and puts up with Adam. Hopefully, she escapes before it gets there.

Pascal

Best chapter of all stories in several months. I hope we don't have to wait 5 months to see chapter 4

Darrow

Something I just realized about the aftermath of the encounter. Clara and Adam are split apart. Afterwards, Adam is making excuses and apologies, but they both know he was into it. And Clara is having none of it, she pushes him away and showers. Adam can't wait, he simply masturbates while she's in the shower, and then goes to sleep. Seriously, what the fuck, guy? He really needed to be there for him, and to work his way through the emotional fallout. But he just jerked off and passed out. Wow. Be still Clara's beating heart. At the same time, or close to it, that Adam masturbates, Clara masturbates in the shower, separately, to the same experience, reliving it as well. So basically, the outcome of the experience is that they went to separate corners and jerked off solitary. Wow, that's evidence of a gigantic wedge in the relationship. Digging a bit deeper, they're both schizophrenic about the experience, in completely opposite ways. Adam feels bad about putting her in that situation, but despite that, he did absolutely nothing to stop it, enjoyed it thoroughly, and his only real regret is that he didn't record it for later enjoyment. He massively got off on her taking a facial, which he describes as a "power move" and finds incredibly erotic, even knowing how she feels about it. He wants to fuck her, but easily accepts being turned down, and seems to prefer jerking off. Clara on the other hand, acted to please her husband, allowed herself to be seduced, submitted and then found herself profoundly humiliated and degraded, in a way that cost her shame and self respect, but left her aroused to the point she needed to masturbate and relive some of the experience. She was embarrassed and aroused and resentful, including resentment of her husband whose 'sympathy' and 'concern' is clearly false. So basically, they kind of started off on this emotional sexual journey at the pool where they were on the same page, it then went a lot further than either expected or intended, and they were both extremely aroused, but instead of any togetherness, they had this emotional/sexual split away from each other, divided, focussing on Burt, and then afterwards, the split opened up further sexually in terms of separate simultaneous masturbation, unaware of each other, and with very different feelings. I would expect huge emotional fallout for each, and wonder how they'll deal with it. What they need to do is communicate, have sex, and make it a thing between them. After all, she's always known about his Cuck fantasy and has even catered to it, they could make it work. What I suspect they'll do is shut it out and not talk about it. Adam will be super-horny, super-aroused and eager for it to happen again, but he'll shut his mouth, and he won't really grapple with her feelings. Clara will be erotically awakened, receptive and curious, though unwilling to admit or deal with it, while also ashamed and angry with herself and with Adam. Without either of them admitting it, the split in the relationship will grow. Particularly with Burt driving a wedge in deeper and deeper. If they have an unacknowledged split, sexually, emotionally and in communication terms, Burt will definitely take advantage. He's clearly good at reading people and reading their weakness. As I've said, my bet is he'll approach Adam and enlist him. Burt's already said it out loud - Adam is or will become obsessed with Burt fucking Clara. What better way for Burt, or Adam, to make that happen, by teaming up. Adam's a fountain of information on everything about Clara, and he's horny enough to give up all her personal and professional secrets. He can maneuver her into casual encounters, put her in Burt's path, set up random and not so random encounters, work on getting her ready, he can let Burt know where she will be and what she will be doing. He can even let Burt in on her business activities or efforts, sabotage them so that she needs Burt, etc. Adam could, for example, disable their car, or borrow it on a day when Clara desperately needs to go see prospective clients, so that she has no choice but to ask Burt for a ride. Adam will reach a point where he'll do anything to make his fantasy happen, even potentially to the point of getting Clara drunk or drugged. He'll only think about consequences much later. Burt's approach to Clara will be much different. He definitely won't let her know that he and Adam are working together, that would put her on her guard. But in the pool, he was already building distrust with her for Adam, talking about how Adam was watching and letting things happen, and would insist on going further. He'll build mistrust and resentment for her husband. He won't be respectful or conciliatory, instead, he'll push raw sexuality and masculinity. He's determined that she's not equipped to deal with a really aggressive man who pushes boundaries, everyone she's been with has respected boundaries, so she's never had to assert herself that way and doesn't know how. I think he was surprised by how easily she caved, but now that he knows he can push, he'll do it. If she pushes back, he'll accept it, but he won't apologize and won't retreat. But even that will be a trap for her. If he allows her to assert herself, it will give her false confidence, but leave her feeling that whatever he does that she doesn't push back is accepted. And inevitably, he'll carefully brush past her limits. One important thing he's found about her is her submissive streak, even to the point of accepting (although rebelling against) shocking degradation. It's clear that she doesn't understand or really have a grasp of it, and he'll use it against her carefully. He might even apologize for the facial, but if he does, guarantee that there will be more facials in her future and he'll train her to like them. Because she's not in touch with her own contradictions, and he can see them clearly, he'll exploit them against her, even using them verbally to confuse or muddy her thoughts, so that she'll consent and submit. At no point will he respect her, although I suspect he won't be too obvious or open in his contempt for her, or at least, he won't be until it's too late for her. At the same time, on some levels she'll dislike and even despise him, which he'll know and not care a whit about. What he'll care about is turning her into his addicted, submissive sex slave and private (perhaps public) whore, and he'll succeed. It'll be a role she accepts, unhappily or resentfully, but she'll accept it. He'll likely infiltrate or subvert or compromise her business venture. I think it would amuse and be a source of satisfaction for him, and humiliation for her, if he were to somehow take it away from her, and reduce her to an employee on her own start up. Going from budding CEO to receptionist/assistant will be powerful. As to Adam, he'll be 1000% in on her degradation, humiliation, addiction and subordination. We just saw how he reacted to the facial. For him it's all 'exciting super-charged erotic power moves.' He's always been insecure, he loves the humiliation of being a cuck. But Clara's been the dominant one in the relationship, and I think he wants her submissive and subordinated - if he doesn't do it to her, he'll get off vicariously on Burt doing it. And he'll play both sides, helping Burt, while at the same time coaxing and encouraging Clara to accept the role being prepared for her.

Darrow

A few final thoughts. Both relating to Clara right at the end. One is her reflection that both Adam and Burt got what they wanted and got off, and she got left out. Again, regarding her and Adam, it's the wedge. Mentally, she's placed Adam on Burt's side, not on hers, both of them using her. I think that's an unconscious foreshadowing. It's significant that she finds Burt blocking out Adam in her shower fantasy. A couple of reasons - Burt is freshest and most emotionally intense and troubling, but also there's resentment and distaste for Adam - she's pissed at him on some level, and you don't fantasize about your partner when they've upset you. The other really interesting thing is her sense of shame when masturbating. Connecting sexual arousal with shame and embarrassment, tying it to negative emotions, is very significant and powerful. It can build up and evolve into things. As humans, we are often taught to be ashamed of sex. In particular, women are often taught and raised like this - sex is shameful, showing your body is shameful, pleasure is demeaning and degrading. We respond to this often by linking shame and arousal, we are both horny and ashamed of it, and by linking sex and transgression - doing dirty deeds, whether its exhibitionism, semi-public or public acts, bdsm, seeking out bad boys, etc. Sometimes, shame, if linking the right way, gets tied up with arousal, you see this in masochism and masochistic fantasies. It can be dangerous, if you end up linking shame and arousal, as Clara is doing. They can become the same, sexual humiliation, degradation, being dominated and used by a man she dislikes, becomes an arousing drug. Clara may develop an emotional/sexual vulnerability that Burt can use to control and manipulate her, use her and enslave her.

Rjh200m

Great analysis Darrow! I would only add that inevitably we will compare this story with TA, including Clara and Sarah. Clearly both value their professional activities/independence and we have seen how Lester is breaking down this aspect of Sarah. It seems that Burt will do the same with Clara. But clearly Sarah has embraced the sex much more than Clara has at this point. And for all of their challenges, Sarah and Dan have a much more open, transparent sexual relationship than Adam and Clara have at this point. But I do like Dan a lot more than Adam. I see Adam as weak and sneaky at this point.

Rjh200m

I agree on what Burt will do with Clara, and I know that Adam is weak and will encourage it, but I don’t see him purposely letting Sarah get hooked on alcohol and drugs….seems way too big of a leap at this point.

FU

Remember they knew he was watching and she had put on a show for him the night before. Also Bert was accidentally privy to their game of pretend cockolding of her husband. She went down and swam both times to shut her husband up, Bert caught the husband perving both times and knew he was going to watch everything from his hiding place to see his wife getting used. I think next time after much angst on her part, she goes down and after some back and forth with Bert, she sucks him off again, he in turn eats and fingers her to orgasm she try’s not to scream, but Bert tells her to let it out so little cuckie boy can hear. He then leads her into the house and fucks her like he wants to hurt her, cums deep inside her, before she can react he pulls out wipes his cock in her ass crack, slaps her so hard it rattles her teeth and leaves her spread Eagle over the top of the couch before she even knows he is gone.

Darrow

I think that Adam is very good at not thinking ahead and not appreciating the consequences of his actions. I think he'd be okay with getting Clara drunk or drugging her, not appreciating or ignoring what it would to their relationship if and when she realized it. Even then, I think she'd not really appreciate or understand the first few times, he'd have to be doing it consistently or at least regularly. It's a high level of betrayal. On his side of the coin, once he does it a couple of times, and it works, he'll get lazy or acclimated and start to do it willingly and regularly. He'll also put himself in a position to be blackmailed by Burt. His fantasy or kink will lead him into compromising things, with no thinking through, and Burt will sooner or later, jerk the chain. Adam's the sort who will fall in line when Burt does. Honestly, Adam is worse than Courtney's husband. He's also bone stupid and easily fooled. But Adam.... As to whether or what risk Clara has of drug or alcohol addiction. That varies, but it takes some pretty heavy constant drinking to become an alcoholic. It's a gradual process leading to physical dependency, but it doesn't happen overnight. I've heard estimates of three years. But it could be as short as several months. As for drug addiction, varies by the drug, the personality of the person, etc. But I'd ballbark even with deliberate, probably for most things, at least a few months or more to create dependency and personality disintegration. If Burt acquires the sort of control and access to Clara to addict her... well, he'll have long since broken her in and broken her spirit way before that.

Cat Kuskie

I agree with Darrow. That path for the story is really amazing. Breaking the smart, confident, and professionally successful woman into a reluctant bimbo will be truly awesome!

Earl0849

Clara is a successful woman. Having said that without the benefit of Alcohol I do not see the BJ taking place. I feel that Burt must have more to offer her other then a big cock to achieve his goal. This is why I mention Alcohol and Drugs. Something has to happen for him to drag her down to his level. She has to be to strong to allow Bert to past her around to his friends if she is of sound mine. Not only must she sink to his level she must sink lower. Many ways to go with this story.

Rjh200m

Maybe Burt blackmails Clara? Maybe his nephew Casper recorded the pool scene? And Burt uses it to coerce Clara?

Earl0849

I agree on all your points on addiction. However I still don't see how Bert is going to break her without some kind of intervention. I'm seeing her stress levels building with her work project delays and she comes off like a proud strong professional woman. She got in trouble because of alcohol and Adam pushed her. I do not see that happening again even though she knows Burt has a large cock. She has to come to some conclusion that Bert can help her in some way with her work and sex with him is the trade off. That or intervention with Adam helping Bert. For Bert to pass her around I still feel alcohol or drugs will come into play. I feel Bert likes to share and Clara will spend some time at the trailer park partying and mudding with Bert and buddies drunk and high. Lot of ways to go with this and look forward to next chapter.

Darrow

I think that will happen - blackmail. But not Caspar recording the pool scene. I think that Burt on a basic level dislikes Clara. He's a mean old country boy, and from my read on him, he operates with a basic contempt for everyone. He's smarter than his peers, and kind of lords it. But someone like Clara, gets in his craw - education, sophistication, liberal views, youth and energy. Tolerable far away, but something to despise, close up. The only thing he likes about Clara is her body, and the chance at having it. But as much as he would enjoy fucking her, I think he'd enjoy fucking her over. It would be a means of getting back at the world. Her consent and or her affection just don't mean that much to him. Not in the way that Lester is intent on Sarah. I think he'd enjoy coercing Clara's acquiescence, he might go out of his way for it. He'd get off on blackmailing or otherwise putting Clara in a position where she has to go through with sex with him and hating him and herself for it. Part of his cruelty would be making sure she enjoyed it. So yeah, I see entrapment in Clara's future. It'll just take a while.

Cat Kuskie

David is Anna's unlucky husband, in the best AVN I've ever seen... "A Perfect Marriage", by Mr. Palmer... as perfectly stunning as Don Silver's stories. Do you know?

Darrow

I think that the key is that Burt will have an ally. I can just imagine Burt going to Adam and saying... "We both want me to fuck your wife, tell me everything about her. Tell me everything I can use to figure out how to fuck her. Tell me about her business, tell me about your marriage, about who she dated, the guy that she used to flirt with. Tell me what she's trying to do with her business start up. Tell me where she's out and where she's going to be. Let's plan on how to set her up..."

Earl0849

I agree, Burt may help Adam fine a job creating a stronger bond. I feel Burt is connected and knows many people. Also my belief that Bert has criminal connections. This is why I keep going back to alcohol & Drugs being part of method to break her down. She can't handle the alcohol and Bert through his bonding with Adam can have more exposure to her and provide the 90 proof. Adam will just sit there as he bends her over the sofa and takes her. This will start her slide to becoming Burt's slut. The drugs could come later as she becomes exposed to more of Burt's red neck friends.

Darrow

What I would do for a next scene, and I hope I don't jinx it.... Clara is in a snit, and still processing the experience and not liking it much (when she's not masturbating). Burt starts talking to Adam, and brings him on board - Burt recognizes that Adam is a submissive cuck, and he wants Burt to nail Clara as much as Burt does. They form an alliance. After that, Clara finds herself inadvertently running into Burt, either on her own, or with Adam, he just seems to often be there when or where they go out - not always, but often enough. Burt is on best or at least better behaviour, and friendly enough to Adam, there's little reference to the blow job (maybe once in a while to make Clara blush), but its clear he wouldn't mind a repeat. Clara decides its not going to happen, but everyone is moving on, so she relaxes. Adam invites Burt over, to Clara's misgiving, but she goes along with it. It's even exciting to play and flirt over it, though she's intent it will never happen. She might even flirt with Burt when he's over, as long as Adam is right there not hiding and watching, so she feels safe. Meanwhile, Burt's provided Adam with a MDMA or ecstasy pill to crush and slip into Clara's wine. Not enough to really drug her or knock her out, but just enough to get her feeling relaxed and friendly. At Burt's visit, Burt has beer with Adam while Clara has wine. Burt is reverting to jerk causing Clara's teeth to grind, but she puts up with it, and finds herself relaxing and even enjoying herself. She flirts with Burt and he openly mentions he wouldn't mind another blow job. Clara says that's not happening. But it's all friendly. Burt notes he didn't even get to kiss her, he missed out. Adam chimes in that she's a great kisser. Clara laughs and decides that's something she's willing to do, but just a quick one. She crawls into Burt's lap for a quick kiss. But it doesn't turn out that way, Burt is a pretty good kisser, and once he's got her, he doesn't let go, ignoring her attempts to pull away. Clara's excited, despite herself, and because it's harmless and Adam isn't stepping in, allows it to continue. She finds herself in a full make out situation with Burt, french kissing, trading spit, she's giggling like a teenager. Burt is surprisingly talented. Also his hands are on her clothes, touching her everywhere, particularly her sensitive boobs and between her legs, then eventually sneaking under her clothes. Burt is hard, underneath her, but he's not pushing her hand onto his cock, so she's aware of it, but ignoring it. It goes on and on, with both men encouraging her, and her clothes increasingly disheveled, until she's very horny. She decides to go for it, to show Adam exactly what she did, so he can have a full, close up view. She ends up going down on Burt, sucking his cock once again, surprised at her own enthusiasm and arousal. Burt invites Adam to play with her pussy while she's sucking his cock. She hears, but Burt keeps her head down so she can't speak. The two men agree without her. Soon Adam is behind her, peeling her jeans down or her pushing her skirt up, and he starts playing with her wet pussy, fingering her, stroking her clit, her lips, her asshole. Clara is super-aroused, this is the hottest thing she's ever experienced. She can't wait for Adam to fuck her from behind. But Adam doesn't. He keeps playing with her, building her arousal. They talk dirty to her, Burt is particularly crude and commanding. Her arousal builds and builds, but each time they deny her orgasm deliberately. Finally, Burt decides he's ready and tells Adam to go for it. Adam redoubles his efforts, teasing her, rapidly masturbating her to ecstasy, and the verge of orgasm. But he doesn't fuck her, although she's practically humping his fingers, she's so distracted and desperate. Burt grabs her hair, lifting her mouth off his cock, and starts ejaculating, and that's when Adam finally sends her over. She's coming hard, gasping for air as Burt shoots all over her face once again, and into her gaping mouth. She's humiliated, but she's also coming so hard after being teased so long, the feelings are like a tidal wave. As the orgasm ends she feels a spatter all over her ass, as Adam finishes coming, not in her, but on her ass. Afterwards, Clara is exhausted and dripping cum from both ends, and overdone, she excuses herself to pull herself together, leaving the men alone. When she finally returns, she brings the night to an end. Although she fears he'll refuse, Burt is amiable about going home. But before he does, he grabs Clara and french kisses her one more time. He says he looks forward to more encounters, to Clara's dismay.

Darrow

Thinking out loud - The next week: After that, Clara's attitude is 'cool it.' She makes it clear to Adam that enough is enough, no more. Adam accepts this - he's got a huge charge and they're having dynamite sex as a result. May there's something she doesn't know - like Adam secretly recorded her blow job. After all, Burt was keeping her head down, making sure shoe didn't look up or even have a chance to speak. Plenty of time for Adam to position a phone somewhere convenient and video it. Burt would know, Adam would know. Clara wouldn't even suspect. Life returns to normal for Clara - work proceeds. Burt is annoying, offensive, but clearly so eager for another encounter, that Clara feels a sense of power. She's fine with men lusting after her, it gives her power and security, and she's in control. She takes Burt less seriously, is less threatened by him, and more willing to flirt with him, even if he is a jerk. This is all part of Burt's plan, getting through her defenses. He still has Adam feeding him information - what she's doing, where she's going to be, what her moods are. Clara doesn't notice - Burt's in his place now, Adam is loving and attentive and sexually dynamite! So everything is right with the world. But if she was noticing, she might have noticed that Adam has a tendency to get her all worked up, but not released, just as she goes out... and that she frequently runs across Burt after Adam's got her panties soaking. Sometimes Adam is with her, and she knows he'd love a repeat, and is hoping, but even with her panties drenched... nope. Still, the idea is in the back of her mind more and more. Or that she or or she and Adam often run across Burt after she's had a glass of wine or two and is feeling relaxed and comfortable. It's easy to flirt, or to think about what's in his trousers. Even if Adam is with her. And yes, in secret in the shower, she sometimes fantasizes about Burt, about taking his load in her face twice, the profound erotic humiliation, of submitting to him, of how easily he seemed to take control of her both times. Sometimes when Adam is fucking her, she thinks about it, although she'd die before she admitted it. But yes, she thinks about it even there, more and more. One day, out for a run or something, after Adam has left her worked up and high and dry, she runs across Burt. He offers her a ride, and she decides to accept. Burt pulls over and wonders what it would be like to kiss her without Adam watching. Clara has wondered too. So when Burt kisses her, she lets it happen. The kiss turns into a full make out session, Clara's wild with excitement, she's already been primed. Burt seems intent on fucking her and he comes very close. But Clara desperately tries to control the situation and opts for another blow job, which is actually what Burt intends. Desperately horny, bent on keeping him out of her pussy, Clara puts all her skill and enthusiasm into it. As he's about to come, she realizes what will satisfy him most, its humiliating and degrading, but also darkly exciting, and she believes it will help her control him and the situation. She takes her third facial, willingly, eagerly, begging for it.. shocking herself that she genuinely wants it. But Burt's not done with her, she's naked and in his power. He plays with her pussy, aggressively using her with his hands, bringing her to the edge of orgasm again and again, with cum dripping down her face, her body naked. Finally he relents, driving her home, leaving her incredibly horny but pleased that she was loyal to her husband and didn't fuck. When she returns home, she cleans herself quickly, hoping that Adam doesn't notice. She goes to him and climbs him like a ladder, needing to fuck and needing to come. But he comes quickly, before she can achieve orgasm, leaving her frustrated. She can't help but lay in bed, thinking about Burt's cock, almost wishing she'd gone all the way. In bed beside her, Adam thinks about Burt's phone call, and his instruction to come as fast as he can, to leave her high, dry and unsatisfied. He's so excited by their partnership, he can barely stand it. As Clara spends the night writhing in bed, tossing and turning, unable to masturbate with him there, unable to sleep, obsessing on her encounters and fantasizing about what could have happened, Adam lays on his side, his back to her, concealing his erection.

Darrow

Clara, in the cold light of day, promises herself it will never happen. This was wrong. This wasn't a cuck game for or with Adam, this was too much like cheating. She's thankful she didn't cross the line. But it was too close. Anyway, her sex life with Adam is great! Apart from ending up with wet panties, love the man, but sometimes his timing is awful and he can't finish her. To her disgust, Burt seems to have taken the wrong idea from their encounter, like he can play with her any time. Even worse, she's constantly accidentally running into Burt. Is it accidental, she wonders, is she unconsciously seeking him out? Worst of all, he's much more aggressive, he doesn't ask, he just kissed her, even orders her to get in the truck with him. And to her disgust with herself, she can't find it in her to resist. Each time, the anticipation and desire grows, her willpower declines. She takes facials, sometimes she swallows, she lets him do whatever he wants... except THAT. She's proud of having that much control at least. And dammit, when she gets home, that's when her stud, Adam, seems to have his worst performances. Over and over, she's high and dry. Adam's hotshot performance is declining. Which makes it even harder to resist Burt. She's starting to hate herself for resenting Adam's performance, and lusting after and submitting to Burt... particularly since Burt's so repulsive in every way. She's cultivating self loathing. And she's feeling guilty. Each tryst with Burt leaves her feeling worse and worse about herself. As she becomes more passive and submissive, she feels guiltier and guiltier. She loves her husband, why does she keep betraying him? She can't tell Adam about it, so she has to keep it a secret, a secret that grows worse every encounter. Each lie compounds, piles up, she's lying to Adam more and more. Each time, she promises herself its the last, and each time she falls faster and harder. Eventually... she doesn't want to think about it. Adam suggests having Burt over for a visit - her blood freezes, she knows what he wants, and an increasingly hungry part of that wants it too... not to please Adam, but for herself. But having Burt over? That's way too risky and dangerous, especially with what she'd been doing out of Adam's sight. Burt's a wild card at the best of times, he has no restraint, he's a creep with no filter. But she goes along, insisting that it won't be a repeat, but knowing it will. Burt arrives, she's nervous as a cat. He's in his obnoxious phase and even with some wine, she can't stand him. Then he seems about to tell Adam about their trysts, about her blow jobs and make out sessions and near infidelity. She can't allow that! She can't allow him to expose her. There's only one way to stop him - she sticks her tongue in his mouth, realizing as she does so that she'll have to go all the way. His hands are all over her body, and and she's starting to melt. Desperately, she tries to fake her way through, but it's way too real. She melts. Once again she ends up on her knees, this time completely naked, sucking desperately, while hoping he won't mouth off. He pulls her up onto him for a kiss. Then she's on her back with him on top of her. His mouth is on hers, silencing any protest, his knee pries her thighs apart and she's shocked at how easily he legs spread, how little strength she has to resist. She looks for Adam, but Burt seizes her chin, drawing her gaze back to him. His cock slides into her... Burt and Adam have planned this, and tonight Burt's going to go all the way... And Clara will let him, because she thinks she's keeping her secret from Adam. At the end of the night, she's allowed to finally cum as Burt spurts inside her unprotected pussy...

Rjh200m

I think Burt may give Clara a whole new perspective on the term “tree hugger”.

Earl0849

Yes I think she will be a well know customer at the trailer court and spend some time on her knees.

Earl0849

Burt & Adam have a shared motivation and objective to turn Clara into a deprived cock hungry slut. Unlike Lester there is no high tech involved here. This will be a straight on red neck attack of her morals and values. Bert will use every tool in his tool box to achieve this. Adam will just be along for the ride and chock his chicken. Bert will turn him on to some of side pussy to keep him out of the way. Clara will become a BBQ queen taking care of Burt's friends. She will visit the trailer part often and be exposed to drugs such as Meth & Crack which could speed up her fall. During this she will try to keep her status at her job and to help to support her new habits. Adam will also fine work but he to will fall under the control of Burt.

KB

Any word on NE 4?

Rjh200m

I think the NE story will be simpler and will happen quicker than the TA story. Burt sees Clara as a stuck up urban liberal who loves the environment and shows obvious distain for his way of life. He will use sex to break her down (degrade her). He definitely will share her with his friends and moonshine business partners, as well as his nephew Casper. Once she is addicted to the sex with him and others, he will use this as leverage to break down her beliefs and her business aspiratuons. He will use Adam as needed, and I think he will quickly turn Clara against Adam. He will convince her that Adam is weak. She will become more critical of Adam and take more opportunities to humiliate him.

Rjh200m

Yep. That’s the impression I get, they won’t be too gentle….Casper is a wildcard and I think he will really take the initiative with Clara given what we know about him and assuming that he does not do everything his uncle tells him to do! I think Clara will like the rougher stuff…..

Rjh200m

All interesting possibilities! But we need DS to offer more insight into the desires and motivations and weaknesses of the characters.

Earl0849

You mean Like a female Walter White in Breaking Bad? I could enjoy that. Would expect her to crave the sex and the Alcohol and drugs. As Burt and friends use her up.

Earl0849

She could end up pushing products over at college to help fund her project and Bert will see to it she develops a taste for shine drugs and lots of cock.

Darrow

I concur with RJH - Clara is definitely going to be passed around. The thing is, while Burt likes her body, he doesn't like her. So he's going to break her down. And whatever Burt doesn't break, his friends and Caspar will break for him.

Rjh200m

Interesting point Earl - there will also be a transformation in her wardrobe, including Burt and others getting her to change from those very fancy running outfits. Also interesting is that in Chapter 23 or 24 of TA, Lester says the better way over the long term to indoctrinate Sarah is pleasure. I don’t think Burt and his friends will see it the same way. It will be more of a difficult transition for Clara.

FU

I think Clara likes it rough and is a true submissive. She will need more and more of Burt manhandling her, but she will still think she’s the one controlling the situation, until she isn’t as Burt lets Casper have a go at her. After that she will submit to whatever Burt has in store for her.

Jay Muney

Any ideas on when NE Chapter 4 would be appearing? I haven’t seen any references or updates so wondering if I missed on. Of course I am loving all the trouble Sarah has gotten herself into but this story is also HOT and I hope some of the excellent theories posted here appear soon on DS’s pages!

Earl0849

I believe Clara will go much lower then Sarah. Bert will turn her into true slut. From respective professional to a addicted tramp.

Timothy Whittaker

I love reading about all the possibilty of where this story could be going. This is really fun reading. I love your stories so much. May the force be with you.

Timothy Whittaker

I would like to see some pictures of the characters in the story. I want to see Burt and Clara so that I can imagine them better in the story.

Earl0849

I have theme song for Bert & Clara." Four by Four by You" sung by Lainey Wilson.

Alfred

Toxic attraction is maybe burning out a bit. This ist an interesting one that hasn't been continued for a while. Any idea when the next part is expected?

Jay Muney

Quicker? Less chapters then, as they definitely haven’t been moving as fast as Don’s other stories ☹️

Earl0849

It appears that we may soon have some kind of idea what Bert & Casper have in store for Clara. Does anyone have any input?