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Hey everyone - Happy Thanksgiving to all the American readers out there. I hope everyone is doing well. November and this year are flying by so fast. It's almost 2025.

It's been a fun ride with all the stories I've been able to write for you. Thank you for helping me to bring them all to life. I have a lot of fun story ideas I can't wait to start working on.

Thanks for the Insider feedback on this chapter, I've added a scene or two and expanded some others while tweaking some minor details along the way.

The short story poll will close on Sunday and then I'll see which short story I'll be writing next. As of right now it looks like it'll be one about an undercover wife.

Anyway, I know what you are here for—more Sarah and Lester adventures (and Dan, too, right?). Without further ado, let's get into it.

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“What? How the hell is that possible?” Dan sighed and leaned his head back against the brick wall. He pulled his jacket tighter; the cool breeze ruffled his hair. “I thought your new boss was cleaning house. Why the hell did he hire Lester?”

He heard Sarah’s exhale through the phone, “I…I don’t know. He’s cut me out of any important decisions. I didn’t even know he was considering something like this. His email does say that Lester is only the interim head of IT so who knows what that means. I don’t know how that’ll work with Lester being in Chicago or if he’s moving here….”

The idea of Dan being trapped in Chicago while Lester was running around living in Middleton made his stomach churn. If Lester did that, what would happen to their agreement about the apartment and rent? Dan was potentially looking down the barrel of a bleak future. He knew he’d figure something out but still didn’t love the idea of so much of his life in upheaval.

If things really turned sour, Dan would really need to look for a new apartment and land a new job that paid way better than his current one. He didn’t feel confident in either option. Rentals seemed to have skyrocketed and he still wasn’t getting called back for interviews as much as he’d hoped. At least he had income from his side-consulting business. If he could bolster that part a bit more, his options would increase. Landing a new job seemed out of reach at the moment. He wasn’t hearing anything back from the application he had put out. Maybe he could convince Walt to bring his salary back to where it was, especially now that they were taking some new clients from Jesse’s company.

“I don’t like it. It doesn’t seem like something Lester would be interested in. Why would he want to move and work there? I assume he’s doing well for himself based on what he charged your hospital to get rid of their hacking issue. That should at least float him for a while. Plus he is covering my rent right now. He must be doing okay.” Dan peered at the building across the street. It was a beautiful tall steel structure with large panes of glass that stretched towards the sky. He’d only been in the building a handful of times but still felt the power of its presence. His eyes watched the front doors as people came and went.

“I doubt the hospital pays more than he’d make doing whatever it is he does now,” Sarah said, “It’s not like he has a passion for healthcare. I’m not sure what Richard said to him to get him to sign on.”

“It might not be anything that Richard said. Who knows, maybe Lester angled himself into it. When he was leaving Chicago he made it sound like he was being fired or promoted. Maybe he made a case for himself that went over well.” Dan said.

“Well, it probably won’t impact me too much,” Sarah sighed. “It’s not like I’m being invited to the bigwig meetings anymore.”

“I wouldn’t be so sure,” the wheels in Dan’s head spinning. “I don’t think Lester is just going to forget about you.”

“Oh I’m aware,” Sarah said, “I’m pretty unforgettable.”

“That you are,” Dan squinted as he thought he recognized someone exiting the building but relaxed when he realized he was wrong. “I don’t like that Lester is going to be around you more often. He’s going to try something.”

“I can handle Lester. Enough about this stupid hospital,” Sarah said, “What about you? Things still quiet over there? No more Lincoln Group?”

The muscles in Dan’s shoulders tightened at the mention of the slimy company. “No, nothing yet. I’m still waiting for the other shoe to drop but we haven’t heard from them. Not since Jesse’s company got hacked. Actually, some of their clients have lost faith in them and have come over to us.”

“That’s great,” Sarah said.

“We’ll see. It’s not like it‘s a ton of business. It sucks for them that they got hacked but Walt’s happy. It seems like everyone’s getting hacked nowadays.” Dan said. As he spoke, something itched at the edge of his mind. He couldn’t quite place what it was.

“Yeah, it seems like someone new is getting hacked every day. Maybe I should quit and start a company with Lester and make us rich,” Sarah laughed.

“Don’t even joke about that.” Dan shivered at the thought, “It’s bad enough he’ll be in Middleton more often.” With you.

“Are you worried about me and Lester being so close?” Sarah said sultrily, “Worried what might happen?”

“After what you told me happened in the car while you were at work? Yeah. Obviously,” Dan said.

“I tried texting you, but you didn’t answer in time,” Sarah said innocently.

“The next time,” Dan got up off the wall as the person he was waiting for emerged from the building across the street. “You’ll have to wait for me.”

“Yes, Dad, God!” Sarah laughed at her husband.

“Hey, I gotta go. We’ll talk more about this later, okay? I love you.” Dan moved off the wall and hurried across the street.

“I love you too,” Sarah said and then hung up.

The cardboard bankers box sat at the man’s feet as he stared down at his phone. Dan quickly closed the distance between them.

“Jesse,” Dan said, marching up to his former protégé.

“Fuck,” Jesse said, almost dropping his phone, “Dan, what the hell are you doing here?”

Dan looked down at the box at Jesse’s feet, “Got let go?”

“Yeah,” Jesse looked crestfallen. They laid a bunch of us off. The hack caused us to lose a lot of business, and apparently, I’m not worth keeping around.”

Dan tried to look sympathetic, but he internally knew that Jesse would be the first on his list to let go due to his sheer lack of competence.

“Why are you here?” Jesse snapped.

“I want to know what you’re doing with Lester.” Dan demanded, “What have you told him? How are you two working together?”

Jesse’s eyes widened in shock, “I don’t know what you mean, who’s Lester?”

“Don’t bullshit me Jesse. I already know you know who Lester is, remember? I know you didn’t just show up at that club. And Lester seemed to know an awful lot about what happened in Minnesota,” Dan said.

With the mention of Minnesota, Jesse’s face regained its composure. “You mean how your wife fucked another guy?” He said loudly, drawing the eyes of people around them.

Dan cringed at so many people hearing his outburst. Jesse glanced down at his phone.

“My ride’s here,” Jesse said as he bent down and picked up his banker box as a car pulled up to the curb. Before Dan could say anything, Jesse got into the back of the car, and it took off.

Dan looked around and saw a few people looking in his direction. He felt his face grow red and quickly walked away. He didn’t want to be around all these people who’d heard what Jesse’d said. Who knew, maybe he would work here one day and these people would recognize him from this little scene.

His confrontation with Jesse hadn’t gone the way he’d hoped. He’d come in too hot and put Jesse on his backfoot, making him lash out. A subtler approach would have been better in hindsight. Still, Jesse looked like a deer in the headlights when he mentioned Lester and the two of them being in communication with one another. He just knew something was going on there. Dan opened the public transit app on his phone and looked at the schedule. The bus he needed to catch would be arrving soon. Dan hurried his pace to get to the bus stop in time.

He couldn’t stop running through things in his head as he waited for it. Why would Lester and Jesse even know each other? There was no way they ran in the same circles unless Jesse was a D&D nerd, too. Did Jesse know that Dan had been behind him getting fired in the first place? He couldn’t imagine him holding a grudge like that, given he’d gotten an even better job. But Dan, knowing himself, would still be holding that grudge. Or was Lester fucking with him somehow? Maybe using Jesse to dig up dirt on him. Maybe Lester had let it slip that he was taking Sarah to that club, which is why Jesse showed up.

Dan’s bus pulled up to the stop just as he got there. Dan swiped his pass and he got in. There was something to this. His brain felt so close to solving it, but he just couldn’t quite get there. Music from another passenger and the smell of stale cigarettes seemed to pull him out of his contemplation. The bus started to drive, and Dan’s thoughts shifted.

He wished he was home with Sarah right now. He hated being so far away. The homesickness was even worse now that he knew Lester would be spending more time in Middelton. That still didn’t sit at all right with him. He didn’t like Lester being anywhere near his home and his family.

Images of the last time he caught Lester in his bedroom with Sarah flooded into his brain. The way she’d moaned and the dirty things she’d said. He shifted uncomfortably on the leather seats of the car. He already had half an erection just thinking back to that memory.

With Lester in town, there was no way he wouldn’t try something at their home again. He knew he could trust Sarah but lately, he didn’t like how much of a hold Lester seemed to have on her. He was blown away when she told him about her tryst with Lester in the car and how they had sex again at her workplace. She never would have done that before, not even with him.

Maybe it was all the stress she was under, letting things slip to justify her actions. But Lester always seemed to push her beyond what her husband understood to be her limits. Dan took out his phone and opened his internet browser.

There was no way Lester wouldn’t try something at his house. Dan typed in home security and started looking through a series of security cameras. Most were obvious and bulky, but he wanted to see what discrete options were out there. He didn’t love the idea of a big security camera in his home bedroom.

He spent the rest of the ride looking at different security cameras and stumbled onto a pinhole camera and a variety of them that mimicked real devices like picture frames, power outlets, and even smoke detectors. He planned on buying a couple and putting them around his house the next time he was home. They looked really impressive; you could hardly even notice the cameras embedded into them. They looked just like the ones around his apartment.

There was no way Lester would ever know. He’d get them shipped to his office. Even looking at these, he felt icky as it signaled that he didn’t fully trust Sarah. At least, that’s how she would see it. But he had to do this for his peace of mind. He couldn’t protect her if he didn’t know what was going on.

Being in Chicago, he felt like there was a huge fog between him and Middleton, obscuring his view. Anything could happen.

***

The imperial march blared out from the center console of Lester’s SUV. Lester rolled his eyes, unwrapped the hamburger, and took a bite. Sauce dripped out onto his cheeks, but it didn’t bother Lester. He reveled in the taste.

His phone started ringing again. Lester’s face contorted with anger at being distracted from his foot. He took a large swig of his soda and answered the phone.

“What?” He said bluntly. He took another bite of the burger.

“Dan knows,” Jesse sounded out of breath, “He knows.”

“What does he know?” Lester chuckled and shook his head. “There’s nothing to know after you blew me off for that limp dick in Minnesota. How’d that work out for you?”

“He just came up to me at work. He talked about me being at that club with you guys and you knowing all about what was going on in Minnesota. He knows about us,” Jesse said.

“There’s no ‘us,’” Lester scoffed. If Jesse thought he was a co-conspirator, he was sorely mistaken. At most, he was a useful idiot that Lester strung along, “So you happened to be at a nightclub, so what? There’s no proof or anything else. You didn’t tell him anything, did you?”

“No…No, I didn’t,” Jesse stammered, “My Uber came and I left. You must have messed up somewhere because he said you knew all about Minnesota and Byron.”

Lester stayed silent for a few seconds. He didn’t remember revealing his hand, but Dan tried to accuse him of talking with Jesse before he left for Middelton. Perhaps he had let something slip. Dan was throwing darts blindly in the dark. He didn’t know what he was aiming for, but he could still hit the target.

“Just keep your mouth shut and don’t talk to Dan,” Lester said, “I’ll be in touch.”

“Hey, what are -”

Lester hung up the phone and finished his burger. The gears turned in his head. He had hoped Dan would be pacified after seeing his wife become his wanton slut, but it seemed like he wanted to keep being a thorn in his side.

Dan reminded Lester a bit of Lizzie’s boyfriend, Issac, who always put his nose in places it didn’t belong. It was probably only a matter of time before Dan did something stupid that jeopardized Lester’s plans. The snare had been set around Dan for a long time now. It was time to tighten the rope. Sooner or later, Lester’s machinations would be revealed.

He would rather do it on his own terms instead of Dan exposing him.

Jesse’s calling had amused Lester. Now that his relationship with the Lincoln Group was severed it seemed like all the little man’s false bravado had wilted. He was like a leaf in the wind;, whichever way Lester blew, Jesse would be pushed along in that direction. Other than his tenuous connection to Dan, Jesse didn’t have much value. But another lackey like his guild-mate Ned could always be useful.

Lester threw all the trash from his lunch into the backseat of his SUV, grabbed the small pill bottle from the center console, and then got out of the car. He strolled down the sidewalk, keeping an eye over his shoulder to nosy neighbors. Lester chuckled as he looked at all the houses adorning the perfect street. All these fucking rubes think they got it all with their little houses and white picket fences. They don’t know what life is really like. How dangerous the world really is.

He slowed his pace as he approached the Williams’ house. Dan was in Chicago, and Sarah would still be at work. Their daughters would still be at school, and the house would be empty.

Satisfied that he wasn’t being watched, he walked up to the front door. He fished out his keys from his pocket and quickly found the copy of Sarah’s key he had made weeks earlier. Lester grinned as he slid it into the keyhole.

He couldn’t turn it. His nostrils flared as he gripped the key tighter, trying to turn it. It didn’t budge. With a huff, he looked over his shoulder again for any neighbors. The street was quiet. Most people were still probably at work.

Lester shuffled around to the back of the Williams’ house and tried to open the backdoor with his key. This lock didn’t budge either.

“Mother fucker,” Lester mumbled under his breath and kicked the door hard. He left the house and waddled back to his car. Fucking Dan. That mother fucker really needed to be put in his place. It couldn’t happen soon enough.

His key had worked the last time when he interrupted Sarah in her bath. She must have said something to Dan, and that fucker changed the locks. Lester slammed the car door shut as he got behind the steering wheel. His phone chimed softly in his pocket.

Another work email. This hospital was incessant. All these stupid fucking internal emails about bullshit that didn’t matter. These people really had nothing better to do than just email each other all day. With a snarl, Lester opened his phone and looked over the hospital emails.

He stopped on one that made him raise an eyebrow. Then, a wicked grin crept onto his face. It looks like an opportunity to get past the Williams’ locked doors just presented itself.

The universe truly was on his side.

***

“Hello? Earth to Dan?” Sarah said.

“Huh?’ Dan’s mind snapped back to the present, putting his thoughts about Jesse and Lester on the back burner. He had tried to figure out how they could know each other. Unfortunately, Jesse wasn’t answering his calls or emails. Part of him reasoned that maybe they didn’t know each other, that it was all just a coincidence, but Dan couldn’t let it go. That look on Jesse’s face had been telling. There was something there that he had to figure out.

“Just lost in thought. Sorry, what were you saying?” Dan asked.

Sarah gave him a flat look from the other side of the elevator and uncrossed her arms. They were riding up to his apartment. “I was just saying how Lester has been letting go of people in the IT department,” Sarah sighed, “People who had been there longer than I have. I don’t know how he will run his department without all these people. But Richard and the board seem quite happy with the lower headcount, and so far, nothing catastrophic has happened.”

“I still don’t get how Lester is able to split his time between here and there,” Dan watched the numbers on the elevator tick up until they reached their floor and the doors opened.

“Apparently, HR negotiated some hybrid deal where he splits his time between here and there. At least for now.” Sarah walked out of the elevator as Dan held the doors for her.

“Has he bothered you at all? I mean, since the car incident,” Dan asked.

“The car incident?” Sarah raised an eyebrow at him as they walked down the hall.

“You know when you fooled around with Lester in our car without my permission?” Dan said.

Sarah looked straight ahead. There might be something there that she wasn’t telling him.

“No. He’s seemed pretty swamped with his work lately. I have barely seen him,” Sarah said.

“You sure? You can tell me, you know. That’s part of the deal here.” Dan said carefully.

“I know, Dan, there isn’t anything. He hasn’t come by my cubicle at all. It’s actually kind of weird. I was expecting he would be all over me every day, but he’s kept his distance.”

Dan furrowed his brow thinking her words over. It didn’t make sense. Lester seemed obsessed with his wife. Why would he just give up? Especially when he had her so close now, “That’s weird.”

“Yeah,” Sarah said. Was it just his mind imagining things, or did she sound slightly disappointed?

“Anyways, what do you want to do this weekend? I thought it would be fun to play tourist. Maybe do a little shopping and get some dinner.” Sarah looked over at him and smiled as they turned the corner, his apartment door coming into view.

“I’d like that. But we do need to save right now. We should try to find something not too expensive to do.” Dan hated being the pragmatic one but things were shaky with both of their jobs at the moment.

“That’s no fun, but you make a good point,” Sarah sighed. A mischievous glint appeared in her eyes as she looked over at him, “Maybe I should get Lester to take me out. That way, I can pick up a few things, and it doesn’t hit our wallet.”

“You’re mean,” Dan scolded her playfully, “Besides, you know Lester will want a different kind of payment.”

“It’s not like I haven’t paid it before,” Sarah bit her lip and gave Dan her best fuck me eyes. “I think in the end, I’ll be the one who comes out on top either way.”

Her meaning wasn’t lost on Dan. She’d get her mindblowing sex and whatever else she gained from the shopping trip. Or she meant she would be the one riding Lester. Sarah’s innuendo had layers that Dan had yet to unravel.

“Besides, it’s been a few weeks since Lester and I have had anything that could be considered a date. I’m sure he’ll want to try something this weekend. We might as well make the most of it.” Sarah said, taking her keys out of her purse as she slid them into the lock of his apartment.

Dan had considered the same thing, but it was strange that they weren’t even in the apartment yet, and Sarah was already planning to ditch him. She was doing it in a flirty, playful way, but he couldn’t help but take her suggestion seriously. His wife didn’t seem nearly as perturbed about their continuing arrangement with Lester as he did. While it was true he did get off on it, Sarah seemed almost eager about this weekend. Was it because Lester had ignored her at work when she had expected him to be all over her?

During an earlier phone call, when he mentioned Lester and Jesse talking on the sly, she thought he was reading too much into things. Dan had bit his tongue since he didn’t have a silver bullet to prove anything. Even though he knew in his gut something was going on, he decided not to confront Lester again or bring it up with Sarah until he had solid proof.

Once he found proof, how would Lester react? He wasn’t sure it would change anything with their status quo but he was obsessed with figuring it out anyway.

The apartment door swung open and Dan’s eyes immediately saw the back of Lester’s fat head over the back of the couch. It turned in their direction and Lester’s beady eyes came into view as he leered at Dan’s wife. Dan’s stomach twisted at the manic stare from the odd man.

“Hey there,” Lester said smugly, his eyes roaming over Sarah’s body as he pushed himself up off the couch. Dan couldn’t help but grimace at Lester’s faded clothes with unknown stains on them. “I was wondering when you would get here.”

Dan closed the door silently behind them.

“Hey Lester,” Sarah said, resting her suitcase on the wall Dan’s eyes darted back and forth between Lester and his wife, analyzing how they interacted with each other. Lester plodded out from behind the couch. Sarah caught Dan looking at her. She tried to suppress a smirk and shook her head, likely thinking that he was already getting himself worked up over the situation.

“You’re show’s on,” Lester gestured with a thumb behind him at the TV. “Love is Blind, I just started the new season.”

Dan gave Lester a flat stare. There was no way his nerdy ass was into that show. It was one of Sarah’s trash TV guilty pleasures.

“Oh I haven’t had time to start it yet,” Sarah said “How far into it are you?”

“Just started it,” Lester smiled, “I picked up some of that wine you like too. I’ll pour you a glass.”

“You know, that sounds nice,” Sarah stretched her hands over her head, still stiff from the car. Her t-shirt rode up and exposed her midsection. Dan caught Lester’s eyes as they roamed over her exposed skin. “It was a long ride, I could use a little wine.”

“Okay,” Lester cast a glance towards Dan. “I just need my kiss first.”

“Kiss?” Sarah chuckled, eyeing Lester suspiciously, “What do you mean?”

“You just came home. Don’t you normally kiss Dan when you haven’t seen him for a while?” Lester asked. “Get over here and give me some sugar.”

Dan took a step forward and was about to say something to his lecherous roommate. Sarah looked over at him and it was like she could read the tension on his face and taut muscles on his neck. She gave him a mischievous smile and suddenly Dan found himself staring into her bedroom eyes. Dan was powerless to stop her when she looked at him like that.

“Okay,” Sarah breathed, still locking eyes with her husband as she stepped toward Lester. Dan watched in horror as his wife quickly closed the distance to his slobbish roommate. She was still staring into his soul with her lust-filled eyes as Lester’s arms encircled her body. She turned her head at the last moment to look up at Lester’s face before her eyes closed and their lips met.

Dan braced himself for an ugly and hungry kiss but felt even more revolted as the kiss turned out to be far more sensual with a profound tenderness. Seeing his beautiful wife engage with Lester’s ugly features like that made his stomach do a flip. He gripped the handle of Sarah’s suitcase as he watched the two of them slowly kiss each other.

It felt like it went on for an eternity, but eventually, their lips parted, with Sarah biting her bottom lip and staring up at Lester like she wanted more. After a few seconds, a shit-eating grin appeared on Lester’s face, and Sarah came back to reality.

She looked at Dan, and a flustered expression appeared on her face. Like she’d lost herself in that kiss with Lester for a moment, forgetting her husband was even there. Lester seemed to notice, and a big grin appeared on his face as he sauntered off to the kitchen.

“I’ll bring your bag to the bedroom,” Dan said, his hand still gripping the handle of her suitcase tightly as he rolled it down the hallway. When he returned to the living room, Lester was handing Sarah a glass of wine while he took a sip for himself. There wasn’t a third one.

“You know,” Lester said as he gestured for Sarah to sit on the couch, “When you visit Chicago, we should really start carpooling back to Middleton. What’s the point of us both paying for gas and sitting in cars by ourselves? I could sure use the company on that drive.”

Sarah turned towards Dan as she sat down on the couch, “Dan, can I get you something to drink?”

“I’ll get it, don’t worry,” he said with a knowing look as he went to the kitchen to get himself a beer.

“What do you think?” Lester said to Sarah, “Should we carpool back after the weekend?”

“I don’t know Lester, I think its best if we drive seperate. I like the freedom to come and go as I want,” Sarah said.

“Your house is even on the way from my hotel,” Lester said. I could pick you up and drop you off. It's door-to-door service.”

The mention of his house irked Dan. He didn’t realize how sore of a subject it still was for him. “She said ‘no’ Lester, drop it,” Dan said as he dropped down into the chair across from the couch. The chair where he had now sat several times as he watched this brute of a roommate defile his wife.

“Whatever,” Lester grumbled as he gave Dan a flat stare. A creepy smile spread onto his face, “I guess we should focus on tonight anyways. I’ve got a very romantic evening planned.”

“Oh?” Sarah asked, surprised.

“Yeah, Lester,” Dan said, “Who said anything about a date tonight?”

“I did,” Lester looked back at them, “It’s part of the deal. And its been weeks since I’ve taken Sarah out properly. I don’t count trysts at work as dates.”

“Then what the hell would you count them as? It seems like you’re getting exactly what you want,” Dan said.

“Perks,” Lester grinned, “For all my hard work. You know, its not easy supporting myself and you Dan. Being a provider is hard.”

“You piece of –”

“What I think Dan is saying Lester,” Sarah cut her husband off, “Is that some heads up would be nice. Usually when you ask someone on a date, you confirm the time and place before hand.”

“Well, I did let you know. Remember last time in the car behind the hospital?” Lester raised his hands innocently in front of himself. “I told you I was taking you out. Let me guess you forgot about it when –”

“That’s it,” Sarah quickly cut him off, “I’m sorry, I think I forgot about it.”

Seeming a bit flustered, Sarah turned towards Dan, “Lester did mention someting about it, I just forgot.”

A sly smile spread across Lester’s face like he knew something that Dan didn’t. Before Dan could dig into it, Lester started talking again. “Besides, I have some plans for tomorrow night, so I was hoping we could do this tonight.”

“Better plans than taking me out?” Sarah said saliciously, giving Lester a look.

“I’d be more than happy to take you out both nights, but I don’t think Dan would let me, even though I’m sure he would enjoy watching,” Lester smirked. “I have everything planned for tonight, including what you’ll wear.”

“Oh really?” Sarah eyed him. “Am I your Barbie doll now?”

“You know exactly what you are,” Lester said.

Sarah shifted uncomfortably in her seat, cast a quick glance towards Dan, and crossed her arms over her chest. “Uh, so what are our plans tonight?”

“Well I have reservations at the Lockwood restaurant at the Palmer House and then I booked us a room for after,” Lester leaned back in his seat.

“Whats the Palmer house?” She shot Dan a glance, “I haven’t heard of it.”

Lester waved a hand dismissively, “It’s just one of the best hotels in town. Old and iconic. And the Lockwood is their restaurant and lounge. It’s nice. You have to dress up. You’re going to love it.”

“That does sound nice,” Sarah said and then looked at Dan, “What about Dan? He has to come too.”

“I booked another reservation for the lounge attached to the restaurant. He can safely observe us and get food from there. If he wants to move to the restaurant, he can.” Lester said.

Dan took out his phone and quickly found the restaurant's website. It didn’t take him long to find the phone number for the Lockwood restaurant. He dialed it, and soon after, a warm female voice answered.

“Hi, I just want to confirm my reservation tonight,” Dan said. It felt good to get ahead of Lester and see if he was really telling the truth. Sarah and Lester watched him from the couch in silence.

“Certainly, sir,” the woman said, “What is your name?”

“Dan, Williams.”

“Just a second.”

After a few moments, the woman spoke again, “I’m sorry, sir. There aren’t any reservations under that name.”

Dan flashed Lester a triumphant smile, having caught Lester lying in front of Sarah. It felt good to show her that his little man couldn’t be trusted.

“It’s under Dekuk,” Lester said, smiling. D, E, K, U, K, Dekuk. Dan Dekuk.”

Dan felt his face grow red, knowing full well that Dekuk sounded an awful lot like DeCuck or Da Cuck. Finally, he spoke into the phone, “Sorry, what about Dan…Dekuk?”

“Oh yes sir here it is, I see your reservation for one tonight. Are you still able to join us at 8pm?”

“Yes. Thank you. I’ll be there,” Dan said through gritted teeth. His moment of triumph had been turned on its head into a moment of embarrassment in front of his wife and the hostess. Dan hung up the phone and tried to keep a calm composure, not wanting Lester to see him squirm.

But Lester’s stupid smirk made it apparent he caused Dan some embarrassment. It was better than discovering the stupid name in person in front of the hostess, though.

Sensing Dan’s embarrassment, Sarah jumped in to change the conversation, “So what was it you wanted me to wear? I still can veto it if it's too slutty.”

“I said we had to dress up nicely,” Lester said. It’s on my bed. Come with me, and I’ll show it to you.”

“She’s a big girl,” Dan said, “She can get dressed herself.”

“Fine,” Lester chuckled. Whatever. It's on my bed. Go take a look, Sarah.”

***

Sarah moved down the hallway towards Lester’s room with a mix of nervousness and excitement. The duelling comments between her husband and Lester were affecting her. As much as she hated to admit it, having the two of them compete against each other around her got her off.

Knowing that she might give herself to Lester later and let him win was an intoxicating thought. Her mind wrestled with whether letting Dan watch or not would be the hotter scenario. Her thoughts drifted back towards the outfit as she opened Lester’s door.

Before her eyes could adjust to the darkness, her sense of smell was assaulted by the body odor in Lester’s room. She couldn’t remember it ever smelling this bad. It was almost like Lester hadn’t left the room in weeks, but she knew that wasn’t true.

As her nose itched, another part of her body seemed to come to life. Maybe it was just the lingering thoughts of Dan and Lester’s encounter in the living room, but she felt more turned on in here than she had in the other room. It was almost like Lester’s scent was acting as an aphrodisiac and turning her on. But that didn’t make any sense, and she quickly dismissed the idea.

Her eyes finally adjusted to the dim light of Lester’s room as she wadded through the mess on the floor. If she didn’t know better, she wouldn’t think there was a hardwood floor in the room at all, with the entire surface covered in dirty clothes or other discarded items. She finally made her way to the bed and found the clothing that Lester had left for her. She ran her hands over the soft fabric.

There were three items on the bed: a flowing dress, a pair of panties, and a silk blindfold. Sarah involuntarily shuddered as she ran her hand over the last item. Clearly, Lester had something in mind for tonight that he had excluded from his earlier explanation of the night in front of her husband. Sarah debated whether or not to go back out and ask about the blindfold in front of Dan. In the end, she decided the night would be more exciting for both of them if she didn’t.

Instead she turned to the black lacy panties as she looked around for a matching bra. But she couldn’t find one. Only when she looked closer at dress did she realize why the bra was missing.

A bra wouldn’t go with the top of the dress. The way the cut was, the torso of the dress split in two to cover each breast with a plunging neckline that went down past her sternum. The split went up behind where her neck would be, where it was connected with a gold clasp. The sides of her torso and her back would be completely exposed, along with her bare arms, showing off ample amounts of skin. The rest of the dress billowed down and flowed freely, looking like it would end around her calves of ankles, except for a wide slit on the left leg that ran up high on her thigh before tapering off, exposing a slight amount of the side of her hip.

Sarah would need to be very careful in the dress. Moving in the wrong direction and she might just expose her panty-clad crotch or ass. The dress was a combination of elegance and raw sex. Whoever wore it would be someone confident in their body and open to showing it off while wanting to maintain a semblance of class. Sarah was surprised that Lester had picked something like this for her. The material felt expensive and luxurious, and the cut was sophisticated.

Based on how Lester carried himself, she didn’t think he had such a discerning eye. Perhaps he had some help picking it out. Sarah held the dress up on top of her body, wanting to see how it would fall on her. The material felt great on her skin, and she couldn’t wait to put it on.

Without hesitation, Sarah rested the dress on the bed and quickly stripped out of her clothes and bra before putting it on. Even though she hadn’t done her hair yet, Sarah couldn’t help but feel excited by the new dress. It had been a long time since she had splurged on something that made her feel this way. She couldn’t help but feel like Julia Roberts in pretty woman, being showered in gifts and taken care of.

It was an odd feeling that she didn’t quite know how to categorize in her mind. The only clear thing to her was that she attributed the feeling towards Lester. Despite his numerous flaws and abrasive attitude, she couldn’t help but feel a certain fondness for him. And there was a physical longing that she couldn’t deny either.

She shook her head and twirled in place, letting the silhouette of the dress spin around her. Sarah’s suspicions about the long slit in the dress potentially exposing her ass confirmed as she quickly moved around. She’d have to be exceptionally careful even when sitting at the restaurant.

The idea of a room full of eyes on her body heated her up. Sarah knew it was inevitable tonight. Her heart rate picked up as she thought about all the men openly staring at her or casting covert glances. Her anticipation about tonight was steadily rising.

A bemused smile appeared on her face as she realized how worked up she was getting over the events of that evening. Here she was, alone in Lester’s room, getting worked up over her thoughts. Neither Dan nor Lester would realize it. But perhaps Lester would. He had chosen the dress to show her off, and he knew that being exposed riled her up. Would he have known that she would begin fantasizing about the night ahead? Lester was smart, but he wasn’t a psychic. Still, she couldn’t help but feel that her reaction to the dress was exactly what Lester wanted.

Sarah grabbed her clothes and the black lace panties and returned to the living room to show off her dress.

Dan sat there with his mouth hanging open, “Jesus, Sarah.”

Lester looked pleased with himself at the wide grin on Sarah’s face. It was almost like she was playing right into his hands.

“You like it? It’s not too much?” Sarah asked her husband. Dan couldn’t take his eyes off of her. He clearly was thinking impure thoughts as his eyes scanned over her body.

“It’s perfect. You look like a bombshell,” Dan said. “You’re going to attract a lot of attention tonight.”

Sarah felt herself heat up some more at her husband’s comment. Her husband’s face scrunched up, “I don’t think I have anything that can match with that outfit. I’m going to be underdressed.”

“I picked up an outfit for you too,” Lester said, “Want to see it?”

“No, I’m good,” Dan shot Lester a glance, “Thanks, though.”

“You sure?” Lester said, “I grabbed it at a thrift shop. It seems up your alley. It screams, ‘I’ve given up.’”

“Play nice, boys,” Sarah interjected, “I want to enjoy my night. Constant bickering doesn’t make good company. If you keep it up, I won’t be going home with either of you.”

Dan groaned silently, but Lester shot her a sharp look of defiance. Both men were like putty in her hands. She had learned how to expertly get to Dan over their years together. Lester was still a bit of an enigma, but she’d figured out enough to know how to push some of his buttons. Threatening to take away something he felt was a forgone conclusion seemed to spur him to action.

“We’ll see about that,” Lester muttered. He shifted his gaze towards Dan, “So you approve of the dress?”

“I’m speechless. Yeah, you look incredible, baby,” Dan said, not taking his eyes off her.

“I figured you’d like it. Every man in the restaurant is going to be eye-fucking your wife all night. That’s kind of your thing.” Lester chortled as he got up off the couch.

“Lester. I said play nice,” Sarah warned.

“Fine. Whatever. That just means you and me are gonna play nasty later on.” Lester grunted.

Sarah rolled her eyes, “I know it’s early, but I need to get ready. I didn’t know we’d be going to such a high-end restaurant. But please don’t murder each other while I’m in the bathroom.”

“I’m going back to my room anyway,” Lester said, moving toward the hallway. Dan still couldn’t keep his eyes off Sarah. Lester ambled past Sarah but pivoted at the last second, spinning around.

WHACK

Lester’s hand slapped Sarah so hard on the ass that she stumbled. Lester’s fat paw roughly squeezed one of her ass cheeks as he grunted to himself. Sarah threw an angry glance over her shoulder only to be met with a hungry gaze from Lester.

“You’re mine,” Lester mouthed before letting go of her ass and heading towards his room. Sarah quickly composed herself and gave Dan an exasperated smile.

“I’m gonna go get ready,” Sarah sultrily walked over to her husband, bending over at the hips to kiss him. Dan got an eyeful of Sarah’s chest before her lips met his. She broke their kiss and whispered in his ear, “Do you want me to be bad or good tonight?”

She could see the turmoil on her husband’s face, and she knew she had him.

“Bad,” the word escaped as a whisper from her tired spouse. Sarah could barely hear Dan’s response, but a smile spread on her face.

“If that’s what my husband wants, that’s what he’ll get,” Sarah turned around and walked towards the bathroom. Her mind drifted to the blindfold that Lester had put on the bed next to her dress and panties. She had no idea what Lester intended, but her body was quite eager to find out.

***

Dan’s eyes stayed glued to Sarah’s ass as she left the room. His heart felt like it was going to jump out of his chest. His mouth was dry, and his breaths were shallow. It seemed like, once again, his night had been railroaded, and he was on a collision course with his fantasy.

He knew that things could go wrong – that he would be paralyzed with arousal. He knew that if he really wanted to, he could resist this and shut it down. But he needed to see more.

He could always stop things later if things got out of control. For now, he would go to dinner and see what had happened.

Alone in the living room, Dan got up and headed to the kitchen to pour himself a drink. He needed to calm his frayed nerves.

***

“One last thing,” Lester said as the trio were heading out the door of the apartment. “Leave your wedding ring here tonight.”

“Why would I do that?” Dan asked. He looked Lester over, trying to size him up. He couldn’t help but laugh inwardly at Lester’s outdated and ill-fitting suit.

“I meant Sarah. You can do whatever you want,” Lester shrugged, “But tonight Sarah isn’t your wife. She’s my date. We can’t have the waiters thinking a married woman is cheating on her husband can we?”

Dan leveled a flat gaze at his obscene roommate.

“It’s fine,” Sarah said sultrily as she put a hand on Dan’s chest to calm him down. She lowered her voice so that only he would hear, “I guess it won’t be my husband making me bad tonight.”

She bit her lip and slid her rings off her finger. “I’ll go tuck them in my suitcase,” she said in her normal voice.

Sarah left, leaving Dan and Lester awkwardly loitering by the door. When she returned Lester put out his arm for her to grab. With one final look at her husband, Sarah linked arms with his roommate and stepped out the door and headed towards the elevator, Dan following behind.

As the trio emerged onto the parking lot, Lester said, “We’ll meet you there.”

Sarah gave him an encouraging smile as she walked away with Lester to his SUV. Dan felt a pit in his stomach, watching Sarah get into Lester’s car. But he couldn’t just stand around gawking. Dan hurried to Sarah’s car and got into the driver’s seat. He wanted to stay close to Lester as they drove to the hotel in case he tried to pull a fast one on him.

Thankfully, it seemed that Lester wouldn’t play any games this time. Dan trailed the SUV through Chicago until they pulled up to the valet parking at the front of the hotel. Dan reluctantly handed his keys over to the valet, hurrying to catch up with Lester and Sarah, who had already disappeared through the rotating doors of the hotel.

Dan stepped through the doors into the lobby and was awestruck by how elegant and regal the hotel was. Several large columns flanked the walls, stretching up to the large murals intricately painted on the ceiling. The lobby was huge, with people lounging around and professional-looking staff waiting patiently behind a massive wooden desk. It was like a grand European hotel from a movie.

Dan felt the buzz of his earlier drinks make themselves known in his body. What would the hotel rooms look like if the lobby looked like this? Sarah and Lester probably weren’t heading back to the apartment tonight, so maybe Dan would also spend the night, especially if Lester was already paying for the room.

The idea of sleeping in a queen bed next to Lester and Sarah was really fucked up. Maybe he would get his own room instead, though he wasn’t sure he could afford the price tag here.

Sarah. He had gotten so lost in the grandeur of the lobby that he had completely forgotten about Sarah and Lester. His eyes scanned the lobby, but he didn’t see any sign of them. Her hurried in, eyes darting around until he saw a sign for the Lockwood restaurant. Dan made a beeline for an escalator at the back of the lobby and quickly ascended to the second floor. It only took a couple of minutes, but Dan strolled into the entrance of the restaurant.

“Excuse me, sir,” an elderly man in a white tuxedo said, stepping into his path. We are at capacity for tonight. Do you have a reservation?”

Dan stopped in his tracks and then slumped his shoulders, “Yes. Dan Decuck.”

“Very good sir,” the man said, “One moment. Ah, yes, here it is. Reservation for one. DeCuck. Right this way.”

The eldery man lead Dan through the restaurant, past a large glass enclosed wine room, through to an intimate dinning lounge. The restaurant looked packed with every table taken up. The lighting was low and romantic, just what Lester was probably aiming for. The man lead Dan to a small table in the corner. Dan sat down and was handed a menu. Luckily from his vantage point, he could just see Sarah from across the restaurant.

The elderly man stepped in front of Dan’s line of sight, “You waiter will be with you shortly sir. We’ll ensure your night meets your specifications.”

“Sure. Thank you very much,” Dan said as he craned his neck to the side to get a better look at Sarah. Lester and his wife were in a booth tucked back into a secluded corner of the restaurant. A bottle of wine and two filled glasses already on the table. Dan tapped his fingers, anxious for the waiter to come so he could order a drink to nurse his buzz.

***

“My friend just arrived. I wanted to double-check that we’ll be taken care of,” Lester said to the waiter. Lester had intercepted the man on his way to the bathroom.

“Yes, sir. Mr. DeCuck called ahead and let us know he would be covering your table tonight. It's his gift for the special occasion,” the waiter said happily. Congratulations again.”

“Thank you, but I don’t want to jinx anything,” Lester feigned a laugh. He opened his wallet and pulled out five crisp one-hundred dollar bills. After tucking them into the waiter’s suit jacket, Lester said, “This is for you and the bartender. Please make sure my friend is well taken care of.”

“Of course, sir,” the waiter said eagerly.

***

“Compliments from the bar,” Dan’s waiter said, setting down a dark-looking drink in front of him.

“Oh? Really? Thats unexpected. Why me?” Dan asked.

“No reason, we just wanted to ensure you enjoyed your night. Do you know what you want to order?”

Dan gave the waiter his order and took a sip of the drink. It tasted delicious, but Dan didn’t taste any of the alcohol. A free watered-down drink. At least it didn’t have a ton of ice like other restaurants used to make their glasses seem fuller.

“Could I order a beer too? Bud light if you have it?” Dan asked.

“Certainly, sir, I’ll be right back with it.”

Dan sipped his drink, trying not to overtly stare at Sarah and Lester. As they all thought, many eyes in the restaurant kept glancing in his wife’s direction. How could they not? The way Sarah was sitting, the slit in her dress was exposing a lot of her tanned leg. His wife looked so sexy, so classy, so out of reach. And Lester just looked like a bumbling buffon, completely out of place. Dan could only imagine what was going through everyone in the restaurant’s minds as they scrutinized the odd couple.

Sarah seemed to be engrossed in whatever Lester was talking about it, while taking sips of her wine. It didn’t make sense. Lester wasn’t much of a conversationalist. What the hell could be so interesting? Sarah looked over at Dan and shot him a warm, knowing smile. It was only for a second before she turned her attention back to the ogre sitting across from her.

Dan’s food arrived, along with his beer and a second dark drink. “The drinks are on the house,” the waiter added before departing. Well, if I’m about to watch my wife get fucked by that asshole again I might as well get a little drunk. He thanked the universe for the free drinks. Maybe tonight wouldn’t be so bad after all.

Dan dug into the steak he had ordered. It tasted amazing and the dark drink paired really well with it. Halfway through his steak and he already was feeling the effects of the alcohol. It was surprising given that the dark drink didn’t seem to contain much alcohol but maybe Dan had misjudged it. He looked down at the two empty glasses and reached for his half empty beer before taking another bite of the salad that came with his steak.

A surprised sound from a woman across the restaurant caught his attention. She was smiling, profusing, and holding her hands over her mouth in excitement. It took Dan’s hazy brain a second to register that she was looking at something a few tables over from her.

Dan’s eyes followed the woman’s gaze before they went wide in disbelief.

“Oh, what the fuck?” Dan couldn’t believe his eyes.

Lester was kneeling down on one knee next to Sarah who was seated at the table. She looked genuinely shocked. Murmured gasps filled the restaurant as Lester withdrew a small black box and opened it. The little fucker was doing a fake public proposal. Sarah’s eyes were as wide as saucers, clearly not expecting this turn of events. She stared down at the box in front of her. Lester was saying something, likely professing his pretend love for her as the entire restaurant and waitstaff were gawking at them.

Her eyes flicked up and met Dan’s gaze momentarily. Her expression told him that she wanted to reassure him she hadn’t known about this. Then it morphed as a mischievous smile formed on her face, likely because Dan’s jaw gaped open at the displace. Her eyes turned back to Lester kneeling in front of her.

Sharp knives felt like they stabbed into his heart as Sarah nodded and mouthed a ‘Yes’ to Lester. Dan’s roommate slipped the ring onto her finger, and a chorus of clapping erupted from the restaurant. Lester stood up and kissed Sarah hard.

Even from where Dan was seated, the kiss looked much more intimate than one would typically use for a public display of affection. His hand slipped to Sarah’s ass, and Lester’s head pivoted as he stuck his tongue into her mouth.

Several people slowed their claps as their heads swiveled to look at their table mates with raised eyebrows and knowing expressions. Eventually, Lester let go of Sarah. She waved to the people still clapping and gestured to the ring on her finger with the oversized diamond on it.

Soon enough, Lester and Sarah were seated again, and the clapping around them died down. Most people turned back to their respective tables, and a waiter brought out two flutes of champagne for them.

Dan felt his stomach twist again. It looked like Lester’s reservation for him as ‘Dan DeCuck’ wasn’t the end of his humiliation. Dan had felt so smart earlier checking the reservation, but he had sorely underestimated the depths of Lester’s machinations.

Dan shoved another bite of steak into his mouth and followed it up with a large gulp of his beer. There was too much going on in Dan’s life right now. He should have seen something like this coming, but unfortunately, he couldn’t devote all of his time to Lester.

***

Sarah stared down at the glimmering ring on her finger. It felt so much heavier than her other one. Her real one she quickly thought. Sarah shook her head at the odd mistake. She could still feel the eyes of some of the restaurant’s patrons on her as she sat there.

Lester looked at her from across the table with his trademark shit-eating grin on his face. The ogre-like man seemed very pleased with himself, no doubt at her husband’s expense.

“So, was your plan to give me this ring, or was it more to upset my husband?” Sarah asked as she took a long sip of her wine.

Lester was mid-chew while he spoke, “Is that any way to speak to your fiancee?”

“Lester….” Sarah started, “You know that we’re not really engaged, right?”

“Everyone around us seems to think so. We wouldn’t want to disappoint them now, would we?” Lester threw his food back into his gullet and followed it up with a small sip of wine.

“Dan didn’t look too happy,” Sarah muttered.

“I know,” Lester chuckled, “And I know that turns you on too.”

“That’s not true, Lester. I love my husband,” Sarah said.

“That may be true, but I know you also love it when I talk shit to him and steal your attention. You both like it. You’re both fucked in the head like that,” Lester said.

“You’re a real charmer, you know that?” Sarah said.

“You know what I mean. I’m just saying, I know you guys get off on all this shit, so don’t be too serious. No, what do you think of the ring?” Lester asked.

Sarah looked down at the large rock on her ringer adorned with an beautiful and intricate white gold band, “It’s stunning. Did you pick this out yourself? Is it crystal?”

“That’s a real diamond baby. Nothing but the best for my woman. You should wear it to work.”

“I’m not sure about that. People will notice.”

“That’s what makes it so hot. People will see it, and you’ll know that I own you.”

“That's not what wedding rings symbolize, Lester.”

“Sure they do. Maybe not in this PG bullshit era we live in now where everything is Disneyfied. But back in the day, yeah, it was. It meant you’re my property.”

Sarah didn’t dignify that with a response. That conversation wasn’t an avenue she wanted to go down. Sarah stared at Lester over the rim of her wine glass. When she didn’t respond, a self-satisfied smirk appeared on the ugly man’s face.

***

When Dan looked back up at the newly engaged happy couple, Sarah was walking away from the table towards the washrooms. He almost got out of his chair to intercept her but his plan died as many people stopped to congratulate her. He worried that he would look like some kind of hapless maniac harassing the newly engaged woman. But his wife hadn’t forgotten about him.

When she finally disappeared into the bathroom, he received a text.

S: I had no idea Lester was planning that. Asshole. The ring is nice, though.

S: By the way, the room number is 326.

D: He’s a sneaky fucker. Everyone seemed very happy for you guys.

S: Jealous?

D: Always.

S: Heading back. Talk to you up in the room.

Dan put his phone down and watched as heads turned, following Sarah back to her table. Dan decided it was a good time to sneak off to the bathroom himself and take a leak. As he stood up from the table, the accumulated drinks finally reared their heads, and he needed to put a hand on the table briefly to steady himself. He shook his head and laughed at himself before navigating through the restaurant to the men’s bathroom.

Standing there, peeing at the urinal, Dan couldn’t help but feel himself swaying from side to side. He hadn’t drank that much. What the hell was going on? Maybe those dark complimentary drinks were stronger than he originally thought.

Dan washed up and went back to his table. His steak and his beer sat waiting for him. The waiter must have been by as a new dark drink sat alongside the beer. Dan eyed it as he sat down. He sniffed it again but couldn’t smell any alcohol. Instead, Dan took a large sip of his beer and cut off another piece of steak.

Her looked over at Sarah’s table. Something wasn’t right. His eyes scanned over the area again looking at the other booths. Another couple were seated at the booth Sarah and Lester had occupied.

Dan quickly swigged back the rest of his beer, finished off his steak, and caught the waiter’s attention, indicating with a hand gesture that he wanted the bill. Nervousness spread through his body as he hadn’t planned on losing track of his wife.

When the waiter came by with the bill, Dan asked, “Did the happy couple just leave?”

“They left a few minutes ago. It seemed like they wanted to get a hard start on their celebrations,” the waiter chuckled. Dan didn’t respond and went to pay the bill.

“Uh, I think this is the wrong bill. I didn’t order any of this stuff,” Dan said, looking up at the man. The waiter grabbed the bill and looked it over.

“Excuse me, sir, I’ll be right back.”

It only took the waiter a few minutes to return but every second felt like Sarah was slipping out of Dan’s fingers. Flashes of what could be going on upstairs incessantly popped into his head. He tried to surpress the images when the waiter returned, haning him back the same bill.

“Excuse me, sir, this bill is correct. It contains your order here and that of the happy couple. I just confirmed with the team that all the extra items here were what they ordered.”

“The happy couple? Why am I getting their bill?” Dan said, trying his best not to slur his speech.

The waiter looked slightly off-kilter, “Sir, when you booked this reservation and that of the happy couple, you gave us explicit instructions that you would take care of both bills.”

Another unexpected ‘fuck you’ from Lester. Dan groaned and shook his head. It seemed Lester making peace with Dan’s presence on his dates with Sarah didn’t come without a hidden price tag. His fucking roommate would always keep trying to stick it to him. Dan’s eyes locked onto the total of both bills, and he grimaced at the total. This place was expensive enough just for him, and it appeared Sarah and Lester had been quite liberal with their orders.

Dan took out his credit card and quickly paid the bill, eager to get up to the room. As he got up to leave, his phone buzzed in his pocket. Dan blinked a few times to focus his vision on his phone. It was a text message from Jesse. It was surprising since Jesse had been ghosting him for so long.

Dan’s eyes bulged out of his head when he saw the picture Jesse had sent. It was a smirking Jesse standing in front of a door with the number 326 on it.

***

Lester pressed the button to close the elevator doors and handed Sarah the lush satin blindfold.

“Here, put this on,” Lester said.

“I can’t. What if someone sees me?” Sarah said, feeling her heart beat in her chest. Even though her mind was buzzing from the wine downstairs, she was still capable of rational thought.

“Who cares? You’ll never see these people again. And they’ll know you are about to do some kinky shit. I know you like that. Feeling everyone’s eyes on you. Just like you did in the restaurant with your new fiancee,” Lester pressed Sarah against the side of the elevator, causing her to sigh involuntarily.

She felt her breating grow more rapid as Lester snatched the blindfold out of her hands. With a steely gaze, Lester slowly started putting it on her head. Sarah felt her chest grow warm in anticipation. The possiblity of someone seeing her in this position. The thought of stopping Lester was restrained by and overwhelming desire to just let it happen. Maybe it was the wine delaying her actions but she didn’t stop him.

Soon, her world descended into darkness as the snug blindfold covered her eyes. Goosebumps spread over her bare arms. Her breathing was shallow as her arousal was notched up a degree.

“Good girl,” Lester slapped her bum gently before moving away from her. She heard him press the button to their floor, and the elevator started ascending. Sarah fiddled with the new ring on her left hand. It was heavier than her old engagement ring. The size of the diamond was at least a carat larger than the one Dan had given her. She desperately wished her blindfold was off so she could look at it again. The clarity was immaculate when she gazed at it at the dinner table. Had Lester really brought her a real diamond ring, or was it some kind of crystal?

Sarah felt completely alone and on display in the elevator. Lester wasn’t near her. What was he doing? Where was he? Was his eyes on her? Running over her body? A shiver ran over her skin at the thought of being unknowingly exposed like that. How did Lester know just how to get to her?

She bit her lip in anticipation.

The whole night had been wild. Wearing a dress like that to such a fancy restaurant, Sarah had played it cool the entire night, but she felt every man’s eyes on her and many women casting nasty glances all night. All of those men staring at her – desiring her.

And then publically seeing her with someone like Lester. The beauty and the beast. Liking connecting the dots that someone like Sarah would sleep with a man like Lester. Just these strangers knowing that about her. It had all been almost too much to bare throughout dinner and she couldn’t help but keep her thighs squeezed together tightly. It didn’t help that her dress exposed to much of her leg.

She was sure Lester had chosen his seat to display her leg and thigh for the entire restaurant.

And then he capped it off with a public proposal, guaranteeing all eyes were on her and her body. One set of eyes, in particular, flashed into Sarah’s mind – that of her husband’s. The arousal and impotent anger on them just served to make her even more wet. Lester and her husband had been jabbing at each other in the apartment, competing over her, and now it looked like the other guy won. Just how taboo of an idea that was….

She was just lucky Lester hadn’t followed her to the bathroom because she wasn’t sure she could say no to him anymore.

The elevator suddenly stopped after what seemed like an eternity. An unexpected gentle hand on her back caused her to jump.

“Relax, it’s time to get out,” Lester said from right next to her.

She shivered, not realizing Lester had been standing so close this entire time. His hand on her lower back guided her out of the elevator and onto the carpeted floor of the hallway. Her buzzed brain was worried about walking into something, but Lester expertly guided her, holding her close to him.

She appreciated his closeness and felt protected by him. She knew he wouldn’t let her walk into something.

“Evening,” Lester said as Sarah heard two footsteps pass them by. Someone had seen her blindfolded. Sarah’s body felt flush at the display. She couldn’t control her breathing any longer and could feel her bare breasts rising and falling against the sheer material of her dress. Thankfully, there was some small padding in the dress; otherwise, everyone at the restaurant and in the hallway would have seen how hard her nipples were.

“We’re here,” Lester whispered in her ear as he turned her to one side. She heard a small electronic buzz and a lock turning over. “Let’s step inside,” Lester said in a low voice and gently pushed on her lower back.

Sarah’s heels clicked on the floor of the room. It was probably laminated, but she couldn’t be sure. She heard the lock engage after Lester shut the door, and he led her further into the room. Sarah felt heat rising in her chest, but she didn’t know if it was from the alcohol or from being more turned on than she ever had been before.

Being blindfolded and paraded around in such a sexual way was a thrilling new experience. It was like a new kink had been unlocked or at least upgraded. Who knew what else Lester would help her discover about herself?

“Stand right here,” Lester commanded. The gentle hand on the small of her back disappared and she recognized the plodding cadence of Lester’s steps moving away from her.

“Say hi to Dan, Sarah,” Lester said, “He’s sitting in the corner in this room’s cuck chair.”

“Dan?” Sarah asked.

“He might be a little shy right now. He has that dumb look on his face right now. You know, the one where he’s too turned on to say anything and just nods along?” Lester said. When they had left the restaurant, Dan wasn’t at his table. Maybe he had come up here earlier somehow. Had Lester given him a keycard while she was in the bathroom, or maybe he had been waiting in the hall? But she didn’t hear his footsteps.

“Besides, I think he is a little tongue-tied because someone else is in the room,” Lester continued. The hair on the back of Sarah’s neck stood up at the idea of another person in the room seeing her. Watching her with hungry eyes in such an enclosed space. Watching her in front of her husband. Knowing the secret of her and Lester’s relationship.

Sarah wanted to ask who it was. She instinctively knew it was a man. But what if it was a woman? What if Lester wanted to see her with another woman? It wasn’t something she had ever considered or desired before. But in her current state and with Dan and Lester's eyes on her, she wouldn’t say no.

“Who is it?” Sarah finally managed to say.

She felt Lester’s presence right in front of her. He whispered softly, “It doesn’t matter who he is. Does it?” It was a man, after all.

Lester ran a grazing finger up her bare arm, making her shudder. “You’ve already told me that you’ll do whatever I want. Fuck whoever I want. You’re husband clearly wants it. Wants to see you be touched by someone else. And I think you want that, too.”

“I…uh..mhmm,” Sarah had trouble mustering words. Her brain couldn’t think up a succinct response, not wanting to ruin the moment. Arousal and desire had their hands on the steering wheel, and they weren’t letting go.

“Do you want this tonight, Sarah? I’m not going to lie. I’m interested to see what Dan finds so appealing about sharing you. But our stranger is going to have to wait his turn because I’m going to fuck you first tonight.” Lester whispered in her ear before licking her earlobe.

Sarah shuddered at his words and his wet, oversized tongue. Her knees were getting weak, and her mind was working on overdrive, hyper-analyzing every sound and touch on her body, trying to make sense of what was happening around her.

“Tell me you want it,” Lester breathed again, his tongue trailing down her neck. “I want to hear you say it.”

“I want it,” Sarah whispered. Her admission made her pussy slick with anticipation.

“Good girl,” Lester said, his voice baking away from her. He was somewhere in front of her. She desperately wanted him back. Closer to her. She turned her head to the side, trying to hear where he went. Then, the other side trying to hear Dan’s labored breathing from the corner of the room.

She fidgeted with her arms nervously, knowing that all eyes were on her.

“Uh,” a soft moan escaped Sarah’s lips, and someone pressed into her ass from behind. Hands were on her hips, an already hard cock pressing into her ass. Sarah turned her head towards her shoulder towards the mysterious man next to her. The unfamiliar cologne ticked her nose. The man’s hot breath on her bare shoulders sent a jolt of electricity right to her brain. He pushed on her hips, making her sway back and forth against his cock.

Sarah started to sway to the music of their two intertwined bodies. Her breasts rose and fell in time with her labored breathing, unable to comprehend what was happening. All she knew was that she was in the arms of a stranger as her husband and Lester watched on. The arms left her hips, but his cock kept pushing into her.

Sarah's hips swayed, pushing her perfect bubble butt out into the man’s crotch. His fingertips ran up the skin of her arms, caressing her gently. He emitted a groan that felt like an aphrodisiac to Sarah. She pushed her ass back further into him.

Soon, wet lips were on her shoulder as the man interlaced one of his hands with hers. His other hand played with the exposed area above her navel before his fingers started to run up the neckline of her dress, toying with the skin exposed by the dress’s deep cut. Sarah’s head lolled back as the man began to kiss her neck. His fingers ran up her chest until he was clutching her neck as he kissed the other side. He moved next to her, and his cock dragged across her hip. His hand and lips never left her neck.

He was in front of her, his leg between hers parting them. He stepped forward, making her step back. Her ass thudded against a piece of furniture behind her. It was low like a set of cabinets.

Both of the man’s hands grabbed either side of her face. He held her there for a second, mesmerized by the shallow breaths coming out of her lips. The hands holding her face pulled her forward. Sarah parted her lips, and soon the man’s wet lips were pressed hungrily into hers.

She welcomed the unknown tongue into her mouth and let hers dance across it –savoring his taste. He kissed her passionately with some kind of unknown longingly that put Sarah on her back foot. He didn’t kiss her like a one-night stand would. It was more like some long-lost soldier returning home, desperate for his wife’s touch. Sarah melted into the kiss.

Soon, she was kissing him back with the same passionate furor. His hands left her face and began running all over her body. Sarah held tightly onto his back, urging him closer. Pulling his hard cock further onto her body.

The man’s ranks ran up her bare back until they found the clasp behind her neck. He fumbled with the clasp for several seconds, unable to undo it. Sarah pushed back on his chest, letting her catch her breath from his lip’s onslaught. She gently pushed his hands away and reached behind her neck, effortlessly undoing the clasp and letting the sheer material of her dress straps fall down in front of her, exposing her large naked breasts to her unknown Paramore.

She heard a sharp intake of breath from the man, almost like he was moved to tears from seeing a beautiful work of art. Then he was on her again, but his lips and tongue were lapping at her breasts. Sarah could only hold on to the back of his head as his hands and lips mauled her breasts. She opened her legs wider, letting him press himself against her.

The pressure of his cock pushing against her pussy was intoxicating. She had never felt such an overwhelming, desperate desire for her as she did with this man. It was so different from either Dan or Lester. Lester had a deep, confident touch, while Dan’s was tender and loving. This man’s touch was desperate and passionate, like a man lost in the desert for weeks, and she was the first glass of water he came across. It was a completely new feeling, and she was lost in being the sole focus of this desperate embrace.

***

The elevator to the third floor was excruciatingly slow. Dan stumbled out of it like a drunk bullet as he scanned the plaque on the wall to see which way to go. Room 326 was down the left hall. He steadied his hand on the wall and tried to walk straight. The drinks had been way stronger than he thought.

He shook his head, trying in vain to regain some sobriety. He really should have ordered some water while he was at the restaurant. Dan kept trying to hurry as his brain ran wild with thoughts of Jesse in the hotel room with his wife. He fucking knew it. Lester and Jesse knew each other, but he might have been too late to do anything about it.

Dan opened his eyes wide, trying to read the numbers on the doors. His brain was fuzzy, and there was a delay before it could process what his eyes were seeing. After a few minutes of navigating the hallway and trying to ascertain the room numbers, Dan finally found himself standing in front of room 326.

Dan banged on the door loudly with his fist. He had used more strength than he intended but didn’t care.

“Lester, open up!” Dan said as he leaned his forehead against the door for support. I know you’re in there. I know what you’re doing with Jesse. Let me in!” Dan tried the handle on the door, but it was locked.

“Lester!” Dan said and kicked the door to accentuate his point.

The door opened and Dan tried to push his way in but the latch was still on the door, holding it open just an inch and half.

“There’s no Lester here,” a man quietly said, “Go away.”

Dan blinked and looked at a short man he didn’t recognize.

“Let me in. My wife’s in there,” Dan said.

“There’s no one here but me. Leave now before I call the cops, " the man said as he pushed the door close. Dan pushed against the door, trying to prevent the man from closing it. Unfortunately, the shorter man got it closed, and he heard the lock click.

“Sarah!” Dan shouted as he stumbled back from the door. He was sure Sarah was in there. But what if she wasn’t? Maybe he got the room number wrong. He took out his cell phone to check his message from her but dropped it on the floor.

Dan almost fell over, trying to grab it. He opened it and looked at his wife's message, squinting to see which room number she said. He looked at the number on the door and back at his phone, trying to compare them to see if they were the same. Even though his brain was fuzzy, he was pretty sure they both said 326. This was even the same door in Jesse’s picture.

Dan knocked on the door again, “Lester!”

***

“Holy shit,” Sarah breathed as her nails dug into Jesse’s head. He was eagerly thrusting against her like a teenager while his mouth lapped at her breasts.

Lester stood a few feet away, watching Sarah’s depraved fall from grace. He had already brought her down into the mud, and now he was determined to cover her in it thoroughly. Making sure she never got clean again.

Watching this cretin maul Sarah was turning Lester on. It wasn’t the same way that Dan got turned on, though. Seeing his wife in the hands of someone else was Dan’s Achilles heel that had allowed Lester’s charade to go on as far as it had. No, Lester was enjoying this on a different level. The power and control of someone like Sarah Williams, making her give in to her base instincts. That powerful, untouchable professional beauty that had walked into his apartment so long ago was almost completely gone, replaced by what Lester had conditioned and built her into. Seeing her give in to someone like Jesse, given his complicated history with her husband, got Lester off.

Knowing that his dominance over the young mother was almost complete.

A soft moan escaped Sarah’s lips as Jesse lowered her dress down her body. He was kissing every inch of exposed flesh as the dress dropped lower and lower. Sarah’s hands were embedded in Jesse’s hair. Soon, Sarah’s illustrious dress dropped to the floor, exposing her panty-clad body to her husband’s former protege.

Jesse looked like a man possessed, finally on the verge of achieving his dream. But nights go by quickly, and he would be a junkie looking for another hit. An easy pawn to control and move around the board as Lester saw fit.

Sarah’s body shuddered at Jesse’s touch. He was ravenous, like a starved man devouring a steak. His hands streaked across her body, exploring every inch of it. A hand grabbed a handful of her ass, eliciting a powerful deep moan from Sarah’s throat. His lips were on hers again as they moaned together. Lester winced at the sight of their intertwined tongues.

But there were still some wrinkles that needed to be ironed out. Sarah was still far more willful than Lester’s other conquests. Which made her fall all the more sweet. She had disobeyed him the night in the apartment with Vernon, sucking his cock even though Lester had told her not to. And then she had gone rogue in Minnesota with Byron, thinking she was the one in control of her body.

That wasn’t the case any longer. She needed a reminder of that fact. And tonight was her punishment. In a way, she would only receive pleasure, but Lester had found that pain was never a good motivator. Sure, people would become compliant in the short run, but he was after deeper, lasting change. And that was more easily achieved through pleasure, something Sarah would be longing to experience again rather than simply avoiding pain. She would be a moth to his flame.

Lester also wouldn’t have considered this route a few weeks ago. But since Sarah had kept her use of contraceptives secret, it did open up a new avenue for him. He didn’t need to worry about Jesse taking away his ultimate prize, at least not for the time being. Soon, Lester would eliminate Sarah’s pills, and then her precious fertility would be his to claim.

Tonight being fucked by someone so beneath her would be her punishment. She had already debased herself with Vernon and Byron. She set herself on this path. The knowledge that she orgasmed with someone like him and took his seed would unlock new discoveries about herself that Lester would exploit. He just hoped that Jesse was up to the task.

Sarah’s hands grasped the belt of Jesse’s pants and undid the trousers with expert precision. Her hand disappeared into the material, and a grunt from Jesse let Lester know that she had found her intended target.

“Oh, hey,” Sarah breathed between kisses. Jesse’s pants fell to the floor, and his shirt quickly followed suit. The awkward young man was standing there in his boxers while the delectable Sarah stroked his cock. The sight of Jesse's cock did nothing for Lester, but he rested easy, knowing that the man didn’t give Lester anything to worry about in that department. Dan, on the other hand, wouldn’t be so happy.

Lester the time to put an end to Jesse rabid assault was soon closing in but his phone buzzed in his pocket. He quickly checked the message and smirked. He backed away from Sarah and Jesse and tip toed into the bathroom, shutting the door behind him. Lester turned a facet on and reread the message from Ned, his World of Warcraft guildmate and lapdog.

N: There’s a guy shouting in the hall, just like you said. What should I do?

L: Call the front desk and report it.

Oh Dan, you simple schmuck. It’s too easy.

Lester did the same and dialed the front desk, “Hey, there is some deranged lunatic on the third floor running up and down screaming. He’s kicking and pounding on all the doors. My kids are terrified. I think he is drunk, and he was waving something around that might even be a gun. I don’t know. I couldn’t see it from our peephole and wouldn’t open the door. Please call the police or security.

The front desk seemed to panic, so they quickly apologized before hanging up on him to take care of the issue. Lester called 911 and told them a similar message, playing up Dan's violent, drunken, lunatic nature.

It sucked to be whoever was in room 326, but that wasn’t Lester’s problem. Thankfully, he had been able to keep Sarah occupied with the blindfold and buzzed enough that she hadn’t even called him out when they got off on the sixth floor. Getting a room for Ned on the third floor hadn’t been a problem either.

Dan made his own bed when he decided not to play along with Lester’s plans. He had to be a white knight and insisted on being a pain in the ass. He’s just lucky that Lester couldn’t find a trustworthy person on the dark web to cause him bodily harm. Most of the ones Lester had looked at were likely undercover police trying to entrap people.

But now Dan had fallen into Lester’s trap. It was too easy. Jesse had elicited quite an angry response when he had danced with Sarah in the nightclub. That was when Lester saw how irrational Dan could become. Dangling Jesse and Sarah in front of him tonight was almost too easy. And Dan was just as predictable as ever. Now, the police would take care of him.

It was ironic that Dan’s own tax dollars would take him down when they should have been there to protect him from someone like Lester. He couldn’t help but chuckle to himself since he had never paid any taxes, but the system was helping him carry out his plan tonight.

Sure, he hadn’t wanted to bring Jesse into things earlier. But Dan was sniffing around and was getting too close. It would only be a matter of time before he figured that side of things out, and Lester would lose a handy tool. So he had decided to strike with him early.

He knew the status quo was about to change dramatically, but he would be in control.

***

Lester opened the bathroom door and decided things had progressed enough. Sarah was stroking Jesse’s cock against her panty-clad pussy, moaning with abandon. She was ready to be fucked.

“Lay her down on the bed,” Lester said, stepping closer.

Sarah couldn’t believe what was happening. She was in a stranger’s illicit embrace, and she couldn’t even see what they looked like. Not that she cared. Not at that moment, at least. All she knew was that she needed to be fucked, and tonight, there was no shortage of cocks for her to experience.

The man holding her turned her around, walking her backward toward what she thought was a bed. His lips never left hers. Not until the back of her knees touched the soft bed. The man broke the kiss and pushed her down by her shoulders.

Sarah’s legs snaked around his, beckoning him on top of her.

“Take off her panties,” Lester said from beside her. The other man started to tug down the lacy black panties Lester had bought for her. Reluctantly, Sarah relaxed her legs and allowed the garment to be pulled off of her.

“Give her a taste,” Lester commanded, and Sarah’s body tensed. For a few seconds, nothing happened, but then a wet tongue probed at her entrance. Her legs shot up at the contact and quickly came to rest on her unknown lover’s shoulders. His tongue began lapping up and down her slit, tasting her juices. The man moaned, sending lovely vibrations up into her pussy. His tongue licked down her slit and disappeared inside of her, forcing her open.

“Ohhh fuuck,” Sarah moaned as the foreign tongue lapped at her juices and spun around inside of her, dancing across all the sensitive nerve endings inside of her. She bit her lip, and her hands came up to her breasts, massaging and tweaking her nipples as the man ate her out.

She felt movement on the bed next to her. She turned her head towards the movement, and her nose realized what was happening. Lester’s musky aroma hit her nose, and she knew he must be naked, and his cock was close by.

Something pressed against her lips, and all doubts were gone. She opened her mouth, and her lips stretched to accommodate Leser’s girthy tool. It felt perfect in her mouth, and she couldn’t help but moan around it.

“Mhmmhmhmmhmmmmm,” Sarah moaned. A cock in her mouth and a tongue inside of her was a completely new sensation, and Sarah couldn’t help but feel she was discovering a new level of pleasure. How had she not known it could feel like this?

Sarah wrapped her hand around Lester’s cock and stroked him with abandon as she took as much of his cock into her mouth as she could. Her tongue quickly went to work, coating his shaft with her spit and eagerly licking him. The head of his cock pushed to the back of her throat, but Sarah wasn’t worried. She kept stroking and sucking his cock like she owned it.

A sharp flick of the other man’s tongue made her pull back and inhale sharply. His tongue grazed against her g-spot, and her hips lifted off the bed, trying to get more and more of that tongue into her. This guy wasn’t as skilled as Lester, but the sheer amount of input between his tongue and Lester’s cock was more than the pleasure centers of her brain were used to handling.

“God. Feels so fucking good,” Sarah moaned. Lester’s hands snaked around the back of her head, pulling her back onto his cock. Sarah didn’t waste any time and got back to sucking his massive tool.

Her hips were thrashing off the bed as she ground herself against the face of the man. He was holding onto her thighs for dear life. She hadn’t heard him breathe at all, but she couldn’t stop herself. His tongue was still flicking around inside of her, driving her wild. Both of his hands had a full ass cheek in each of them as he ate her out.

Lester pulled his cock out of her mouth with a pop, and Sarah desperately tried to find it again with her mouth. This fucking blindfold was in her way, but her hands were too occupied to take it off. His girthy cock slid across her cheek, and Sarah eagerly licked up and down his shaft. Lester kept pushing forward until his pubic hair-covered balls pressed against her face. She knew what her man wanted. Sarah renewed her grip on Lester’s shaft, stroking it up and down at a furious pace as her tongue and lips ventured into Lester’s pubic jungle and found his balls. She twirled her tongue around them, lapping at any skin.

She couldn’t help herself as she moaned into them. The tongue inside of her kept dragging over her G-Spot. Sarah’s body felt like it was on fire, and if she didn’t cum soon, she was going to explode. Her body writhed against the tongue inside of her, and she gripped Lester’s cock harder than she ever had before. Every little bump on Lester’s ballsack felt amazing on her tongue. She had no idea that her tongue could give her so much pleasure.

“Mhmmhmhmmhfuck,” Sarah moaned as she lapped on Lester’s balls. Strands of pubic hair matted her tongue, but she didn’t dare stop. She could feel Lester’s heartbeat in her hands as the veins on his powerful cock pulsated. Her hips thrashed against the other man’s face, but she never relented.

“Stop,” Lester said, and the man’s tongue slowly left her. “Go sit on the other bed and watch.”

She felt the man’s hand leave her ass, and soon she was alone on the bed. Something moved beside her. Weight pushed down on the bed, and she felt someone step up between her legs.

“Are you ready for me, Sarah?” Lester asked.

“God, Lester. Yes. Fuck me. I need your cock,” Sarah moaned, her legs running up and down the sides of Lester’s hips, beckoning him closer.

Lester chuckled before he pushed himself forward. Sarah felt the weight of Lester’s large frame push down on her at the same time the head of his cock pushed against her lips. Sarah’s legs slammed open wide to accommodate Lester’s wide body, and she sharply inhaled as his cock plunged into her dripping-wet pussy.

“Ohfuck,” Sarah groaned, her nails digging into Lester’s back. She racked her fingers over his skin, knotting themselves with the dense hair on Lester’s body.

“Ughhhhh,” Sarah wailed as her pussy finally had what it wanted. Lester’s large cock firmly embedded inside of it. But Lester wasn’t satisfied yet and pulled his cock almost all the way out before dropping all of his weight onto her again, his cock pushing all the way to the hilt.

Lester fucked her slow and hard, exactly the way she had come to crave. He pinned her wrists down, immobilizing her as he fucked her. Sarah’s hips rose off the bed in time, matching his thrusts. Each one delayed a second or two, making Sarah’s body ripe with anticipation of when the next thrust would come.

Sarah managed to get one of her hands-free, grabbed the back of Lester’s fat head, and pulled him down to her. Her lips mashed with his as his girthy torso crushed her breasts. Her tongue pushed into Lester’s mouth as he groaned back at her assault. Her legs wrapped around his ass, and she held him in place as he fucked her, and she kissed him. She was his and wasn’t letting him go until she got what she wanted.

The fire started to burn deep inside Sarah’s pussy again, and she held Lester tighter. His tongue pushed inside her mouth, and she sucked and licked on it furiously. His hips slammed up to meet his thrusts. She was close. So fucking close.

“AHHFUCK,” Sarah wailed into Lester’s ear as her orgasm exploded inside of her. It came so fast. The setting and all the teasing combined with Lester’s hot cock made her whole body shudder as Lester made her cum. All the muscles in her body tensed, but Lester pushed through the iron-like vice gripe of her pussy on his cock. Each thrust ramped up her orgasm, unleashing it to new levels over and over again.

Finally, Sarah came back down to earth, and the fog of the orgasm in her mind slowly started to clear. Lester’s thrusts were slower, but each one felt divine. Slowly he pulled his cock out of her, and the weight of his frame left hers. She hated the feeling and just wanted him back on top of her.

“Turn around,” Lester commanded, “I’m going to fuck you from behind.”

Sarah eagerly turned over onto her stomach. She pushed up with her hands and pushed her ass out to Lester. His cock rubbed up and down her slit, making her body quiver. Frustratingly, he didn’t push in. He just kept using his cock to tease her entrance. Sarah couldn’t take it anymore. Her nails dug into the mattress, and she pushed as ass back as far as she could.

Her pussy gripped onto Lester’s cock as she slid her ass back. Inch after inch of Lester’s cock disappeared inside of her.

“Uhhhhhhfuck,” Sarah groaned, feeling full with Lester’s cock, “God I love your cock.”

“I know, baby,” Lester chuckled as Lester spread her ass cheeks and slammed his cock into her. She lost her grip on the bed, and her chest fell onto the mattress. Lester held her ass up by her hips and kept slowly thrusting in and out of her.

She couldn’t imagine what she looked like. Even if the blindfold was off, her eyes would be tightly shut, just enjoying the immense pleasure of Lester’s cock inside of her.

“Tell Dan how it feels,” Lester grunted from behind her.

“God, Dan. It feels so fucking good. So good. Lester fucks me so good,” Sarah moaned, “I fucking love his cock. I can’t get enough of it. Ugh, Lester, make me cum baby. Feels so good.”

“What else?” Lester punctuated his question with another sharp thrust, making Sarah squeal.

“I’m his. I’m Lester’s fucking slut. I’ll do whatever he wants. Whoever he wants. God, Lester, fuck me, baby. I fucking love it. Love your cock. Fuck me.” Sarah moaned. She loved talking dirty. She knew it turned on Dan, but she knew Lester loved hearing her private sexual admissions. At some point, she forgot who she cared more about pleasing.

Sarah felt like a pretzel, but Lester’s cock was hitting the perfect spot. She didn’t dare move.

“Uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh,” Sarah moaned into the mattress.

“I’m gonna cum soon,” Lester grunted, “Gonna soak you in my cum. Where do you want it?”

“Oh fuck,” Sarah’s body lit up again like a Christmas tree in anticipation of Lester’s cum. “Inside me. Cum inside me. Fuck Lester, give it to me. Give me your cum. I want it. Fuck. Fuck. Fuck. Cum for me, Lester. Cum for me, Baby.”

“You got it,” Lester grunted. His sweaty hands gripped her hips hard. “I’m gonna drop my load inside of you. Take it, Sarah. Take it all.”

“Fucking give it to me.”

“It’s all yours bitch.”

“Uhhhhhhhh FUCKK LESTER,” Sarah’s orgasm exploded inside of her. Her pussy clenched down on his cock. Her nails dug into the fabric of the sheets. His strong hands gripped her hips, and she felt Lester’s cock begin to throb inside of her.

“FUCKINGTAKEIT,” Lester roared behind her. Sarah was dizzy from holding her breath, but Lester’s cock started to expand inside of her. The first shot of hot cum drenching her pussy threw her orgasm into a tailspin, and another orgasm exploded inside of her, washing away the last one.

Rope after rope of Lester’s hot, sticky, virile cum drenched her insides. Sarah bit her lip as the pleasure washed over her body, “UHHHHMYFUCKINGGODLESTER.”

Lester kept hammering her pussy as his cock shot out more and more cum. Her body responded in kind by squeezing his cock harder, trying to milk out every last drop of Lester’s potent cum. Each rope of cum sent her body into a new state of orgasmic bliss. This orgasm didn’t let up and kept washing over her body, dancing across every nerve, making Sarah go crazy.

Eventually, her orgasm slowly dissipated, and Sarah’s senses slowly returned to normal. She remembered she needed to breathe and let out a long breath as her body slumped onto the bed. Lester grunted from behind her as he pulled his cock out. His strong hands left her hips, and Sarah rolled onto her side. Lester’s cum was already leaking out of her.

“That’s how it’s done,” Lester said. “Your turn.”

Sarah had completely forgotten that her husband and another man were in the room. Part of her thought Lester was talking to Dan but she knew that was wrong in an instant. The other man was getting into the bed with her.

***

A strong hand with an iron-like grip held Dan’s shoulder as two police officers led him through the lobby. Dan could feel the eyes of the hotel patrons on him as he walked and stumbled his way forward.

The police officers didn’t seem to have any patience for Dan as they roughly pulled him through the lobby. The handcuffs pinning his arms behind his back dug tightly into his wrists.

“But my wife!” Dan slurred as the cops led him through a side door next to the rotating glass door.

“Yeah, yeah, buddy. It sucks that you’re wife’s stepping out on ya, but you acting like a drunk maniac isn’t gonna fix anything. You’re lucky you didn’t get shot,” one of the officers said.

The other officer opened the back of the squad car door. Dan was roughly thrown into the back seat. “She’s still in the hotel. With him….”

The officers slammed the backdoor shut, cutting Dan off. They walked away from the car. Dan tried to track where they were going. One went up and talked to the valet, but the other disappeared back inside the hospital. Maybe he was going to look for Sarah.

Dan slumped into his seat as the world spun around him.

***

The other man was gently kissing her chest. Lovingly, leaving a trail of tender kisses across her body. But that wasn’t what Sarah needed right now. She reached down between her legs and found his warm cock waiting for her.

Without warning, she gripped it tightly and pulled it towards her waiting pussy. Her body was still reveling in the afterglow of her orgasm with Lester, and if she played her cards right, she might be able to quickly get another one.

The man sharply inhaled as Sarah guided his cock to her pussy. She pulled on the head and lined it up with her entrance. Her legs wrapped around the man’s waist and pulled him forward onto her.

“Uhhhhhmhmmmmmm yes,” Sarah moaned as the man’s cock delved into her pussy. She tightened her pussy around him and didn’t let him go.

“Uhhhhhhmhmmm,” the man moaned above her. If she didn’t know better he was enjoying this more than she was.

“Fuck me,” Sarah moaned, “I want you to fuck me.”

Sarah was loving every second of this. The blindfold seemed to increase her other senses and helped trigger the powerful orgasms she had experienced. The man’s breathing was ragged already. Her hands ran up his back, and he was sweating profusely.

The man’s hips lurched, and he started to thrust in and out of her. He wasn’t as good as Lester, but he fucked her desperately like he had touched her earlier. Like he was quenching an uncurable craving. His cock felt amazing inside of her. There was a slight curve to it, making it drag across her G-Spot.

“Mhmmhmmm fuck” Sarah moaned as she wrapped her arms around the man’s back. Sweat covered her arms in seconds. The man lurched forward, and his weight pressed down on her chest. She could feel his sweat pressing against her naked breasts.

He was kissing her neck again until Sarah turned her head and pressed her lips hard against his. Their tongues swirled around each other as the man desperately thrust into her. He was like a man possessed by a demon, with nothing stopping him from achieving his goal.

“Uh, fuck. Right there,” Sarah breathed between kisses, “Right fucking there.”

The man just grunted in response.

“Keep fucking me. Right there. So fucking good. Please don’t stop. Don’t stop for me.” Sarah moaned into his ear.

“How is it?” Lester’s voice came from somewhere close by.

“Ughh it's good. So fucking good.” Sarah moaned, turning her head towards Lester.

“Do you like your surprise?” Lester asked.

“Yes. I fucking love it,” Sarah moaned.

“Are you going to cum on a stranger’s cock tonight?” Lester asked.

“Uhhh yes. So good. I want to. Please don’t stop.”

The man grunted atop her, and his pace began more erratic. It was like her words were pushing him into overdrive. She wondered what he looked like and what he sounded like, but none of that really mattered. All she cared about was his cock and what it could do to her.

“You’re really going to let this stranger cum inside of you?” Lester said.

“Ugh. No. I don’t know,” Sarah moaned. The man’s lips were on her neck. He was breathing hard like he had just run a marathon. His thrust kept rocking her on the bed. Her pussy throbbed from his curved cock and the nerves it was hitting. Sarah wrapped her thighs tighter around his hips, not giving him a chance to pull out of her.

A foreign sound broke the sounds of mating in the room. Sarah’s cell phone was ringing from somewhere. The curved cock rubbed against her G-Spot the perfect way, and a loud moan escaped Sarah’s lips.

“Who fucks you better?” Lester said, “This stranger of your husband?”

Sarah gritted her teeth. She could feel another orgasm about to rip through her, and she didn’t want to lose it. She didn’t want to keep talking to Lester. She just wanted to fuck.

“He does!” Sarah shouted, “He’s way better than Dan. I’m so fucking close, don’t fucking stop.”

“Don’t cum yet,” Lester said. Sarah wasn’t about to listen to Lester. Not right now. She kept thrusting her hips up to meet her mystery lover’s rapid thrusts. She was so fucking close.

“Take off the blindfold,” Lester said. “Do it.”

Sarah’s head lolled to the side, and she reluctantly listened to Lester. Her hands left the man’s sweaty back, and she pulled the blindfold off her head. Her eyes immediately locked onto to Leste’rs cock. It was still mostly hard even though he had just cum inside of her. Dan’s roommate, with a frog-like body, was sitting on the bed a few feet from her, staring intently at her. Her eyes saw an empty chair behind him. She scanned the room but didn’t see Dan anywhere.

“Where’s Dan?” Sarah said huskily.

“It doesn’t fucking matter,” Lester chuckled, his stare boring into her soul.

Her thoughts slid away as the curved cock inside of her kept pounding into her. She locked her heels behind his ass and grabbed onto his biceps, holding on as he dragged her whole body up and down the bed as he fucked her. The guy’s face was buried in her neck, but she could at least tell he was white by his skin.

“God,” Sarah moaned, “I fucking love this. Please don’t stop. I’m so fucking close.”

“I won’t,” the man said, rising on his elbows. Sarah blinked a few times as her mind tried to place his face through her brain fog.

“Jesse,” Sarah whispered, staring up at him. Before she had a chance to say anything else, his lips pressed onto her, and his tongue snaked into her mouth. She knew it wasn’t right, but it felt too fucking good to care.

Sarah moaned as she felt her body press into the bed. Her arms instinctively came up and wrapped around the back of Jesse’s head. Her eyes closed, focused on the feeling of his cock inside of her and his lips on hers.

“Did-did Dan leave?” She looked up at Jesse. His face looked like he was in pure bliss.

“Dan hasn’t been here this whole time,” Jesse moaned as his lips smashed into hers again. Sarah’s mind was embroiled in pleasure and thoughts. She hadn’t expected Jesse to actually ever feel this good inside of her. Part of her brain made the connection that Dan had been right. Jesse and Lester clearly knew each other somehow. That sparked another train of thought that flashed rapidly through her mind. Dan had got Jesse fired and was now taking out his revenge. By fucking her. It was such a wild, wicked thought, but her body loved it. Her hips bucked off the bed to meet Jesse’s thrusts.

Lester sat by the side, smiling and watching as Sarah gave in completely.

“You feel so fucking good,” Jesse moaned into her mouth, “I’ve been waiting for this for so long.”

Sarah’s mind raced, trying to do the math on how Jesse had ended up here and what the ramifications would be. The one consistent her mind landed on was that he needed to keep fucking her so she could cum. Her orgasm wouldn’t be held back any longer. Sarah could feel the dam holding back her orgasm start to crack.

“Don’t stop Jesse,” Sarah moaned into his shoulder. “Don’t fucking stop.”

“I’ll never stop,” Jesse grunted, his lips descended on her cheeks. Kissing her tenderly. He continued planting kisses lovingly along Sarah face and then onto her neck. The nerves in her body were lighting up like a Christmas tree as his lips danced along the sensitive areas of her neck.

“Mmmhmmhmmuhhhhhh fuck,” Sarah moaned, “Jesse, keep fucking me. Fuck me, Jesse.”

“Feels good?” Jesse asked.

“So fuckinggood,” Sarah whispered back. Speaking to him in that low tone felt so conspiratorial. Like they were star-crossed lovers doing something they shouldn’t be.

“Uhhh I fucking love you,” Jesse mumbled into her neck. Sarah knew that in some fucked up way that he meant it. The way he was fucking her felt like the way a man on death row would. Like it was the last thing he’d ever do. He was so desperate for her.

Desperate men usually were such a turn off but there was something about this. Something about the way he was fucking her like she meant everything in the world to him. Like a starving man sitting down in front of a Thanksgiving dinner or someone suffering from dehydration getting a glass of water. Like Sarah was nourishing Jesse’s very soul. Like she was the only thing in the world that could quench his thirst.

“Fuck I like hearing you say may name,” Jesse finally said when Sarah didn’t respond to him. “Say it again.”

“Jesse,” Sarah moaned into his hear in a sultry voice, “Oh fuck Jesse. You feel so fucking good Jesse.”

“I can’t believe I’m in a hotel bed with you again,” Jesse moaned, “I knew it would be magical but I never knew it would be so fucking good.”

Sarah didn’t know what he meant by that but she didn’t really care, “You should have known better. I’m fucking amazing.”

“God you’re so fucking amazing. You feel so fucking good.”

“Mhmmmmm you like that? What about this?” Sarah flexed the muscles in her busy around his cock, holding him tight inside of her.

“Ohhhhhh FUUUUUCK Sarah,” Jesse moaned into her neck, “Holy shit you’re so tight. I can’t believe it. I never knew it could feel so good.”

Jesse’s hips starting thrusting into her with desperate abandon. Sarah knew it wouldn’t be long before he would need to cum. She needed to cum first though, she couldn’t be left high and dry. She needed another mind blowing orgasm. But she wanted to Jesse to pull out. Despite her brain still being foggy she knew that he should do that. She needed to make herself cum soon.

Sarah’s hips were slamming back against Jesse’s cock, unconcerned with anything other than cumming. She tightened her ankles around his ass and gripped his back with her nails, pulling him down completely on top of her. The dam inside of her shattered.

“I’m so close. So fucking close. Jesse, please. Please don’t stop. Give it to me,” Sarah groaned.

“I can’t – I’m gonna cum,” Jesse grunted.

“You need – need to pull out,” Sarah wailed as her orgasm was quickly approaching, “Jesse.”

“Does he, though?” Lester was suddenly next to her, peering down at her. “Does he really need to pull out? You’re on birth control, aren’t you?”

“Uhhh—what?” Sarah’s mind was foggy from her impending orgasm, and she didn’t want to think. Didn’t need a conversation.

“All this time, you’ve been on birth control. Teasing me and letting me think you weren’t. You can take his load, can’t you?” Lester said.

Sarah could take his load. Jesse could cum in her, and she wouldn’t get pregnant. But that didn’t mean it was right, “I can’t. He can’t. We shouldn’t.”

“But you can,” Lester pressed, “Can’t you? I know you want to feel it explode inside of you. Admit it. It would feel good.”

“It’s not right, Lester. He’s Dan’s old coworker, and it would break Dan if it happened,” Sarah moaned, conflict spreading over her face. Just the fucking idea of it was ramping up her impending orgasm. Such a fucking dirty idea. Jesse cumming inside Dan’s wife, taking his revenge that way. It was too fucking hot. Sarah’s hips started thrashing against Jesse’s cock.

“But you’re protected. Right?” Lester pressed again, clearly pushing for her acceptance.

“Yes, but–uhhhhhh mhmmhmmmmfuuucck,” Sarah moaned, “We…..still…shouldn’t. Fuck.”

“It’s so fucking wrong, Lester,” Sarah groaned again as her legs tightened around Jesse’s hips.

“But I bet it feels so fucking right, doesn’t it? When has it being wrong stopped you before?” Lester sneered at her.

“Uhhhmhmmmm fuck Lester, you’re so fucked up. Mhmmmmmmmm god. Jesse.” Sarah’s brain was going haywire. Not wanting to stop but not wanting to cross this line. But wanting to cross it at the same time. She didn’t have time to think about the consequences. Her body was on fire, and it wanted to cum. Her hands crawled across Jesse’s back until her nails dug into his ass cheeks.

“We shouldn’t. We can’t. He needs to – I need to — OH FUCK,” Sarah’s eyes snapped open, and looked up at Jesse.

“UHHHHHH,” Jesse grunted, and Sarah felt hot, warm, sticky cum explode inside of her for the second time that night. A tsunami of an orgasm washed over her body. A wave of heat washed over her, drowning any objections to her coupling with Jesse. Her nerves frayed as each one lit on fire and throbbed in time with the wave washing over her.

“F-FUCK,” Sarah screamed at the top of her lungs as her muscles contracted. In that moment, she and Jesse were one being connected by his cock, completely unconcerned with the outside world. The only thing that mattered to them was their mutual orgasms.

More of Jesse’s cum blasted into her, mixing with the spunk Lester had already unleashed inside of her. She felt so fucking dirty having taken cum from two men, but she was reveling in that feeling. That she could make two guys cum back to back.

Jesse’s lips met hers, and their tongues danced together as Sarah continued to ride the wave of her orgasm, and more of his cum spurted into her. Slowly Sarah started to come back down to earth as Jesse’s cock stopped erupting, but it stayed firmly embedded inside of her.

He continued to kiss her longingly. Sarah was still awash in her post-orgasmic bliss, drunk from the sex, and kissed him back without reservation. Sarah’s tongue slipped into his mouth, and his tongue met hers. They lazily tasted each other as Sarah felt the energy drain out of her body.

Jesse might have stayed like that all night, with his cock inside of her. But Lester had other ideas.

“Get off,” Lester said and touched Jesse’s shoulder. Jesse flashed him a defiant look, but it crumpled under Lester’s harsh gaze.

Sarah was utterly spent. Her body was exhausted from two back-to-back fuck sessions. She looked up at Lester and saw him towering over her. His cock was hard as a rock, standing out at attention about her.

Jesse crawled off of her, and she lost track of where he went. Lester leered down at her with a domineering smile.

“Time for round two. You’re going to be busy all night.” Lester sneered. He moved down the bed, grabbed Sarah’s legs in his meaty hands, and pulled her body down the bed towards him.

***

“Hi this is Sarah Williams I can’t come to the phone right now so please leave a message and I’ll get back to you.” Sarah’s angelic voice said.

“Sarah, it's me. I’m in jail. Call me back,” Dan said and hung up the receiver on the payphone. He rested his head against it before a police officer roughly grabbed his shoulder and pushed him back into the cell.

Dan stumbled but managed to catch himself on a bench and sat down. A dozen or so other guys were in the large cell with him, most minding their own business. Dan laid down, hoping the room would stop spinning.

He never should have drank at the restaurant. He couldn’t remember the last time he felt like this. The guard who took his picture said something about having to sit in here until at least morning when the cashier and bond office reopened, but Dan didn’t really understand it.

All he knew was that Sarah was still at the hotel with Lester and Jesse. He could only imagine what was happening and felt range pouring over his body. He felt immensely ashamed as well since he could feel his dick hardening just at the thought.

This was a new low for him. Thrown in the drunk tank while his wife is probably cumming on other guy’s dicks. His brain was still foggy as he tried to piece together just what had happened tonight and how he ended up here.

He knew his brain wasn’t working properly, throwing out one dumb idea after the next. But one thing was crystal clear. He had been right. Jesse and Lester had known each other. He didn’t know how, but they did. Maybe it was because Jesse’s company needed help with the hack that just happened?

But that didn’t make sense. Jesse had been there at that club. That was way before. Unless they just met after somehow? Dan wasn’t sure about the timeline. And it was a leap that they’d work together after such a short time since the hack had just happened. Even Sarah’s hack had happened months and months ago, and the hospital wouldn’t have been able to fix it without Sarah because she knew Lester.

There was something there. His brain was itching at something. Like he was fumbling in the dark, trying to peel back the corners of it. But he wasn’t sure just yet.

His mind kept going back to that club with him, Lester, Sarah, and Jesse. Was it weird that two of those people had workplaces that got hacked? That seemed like a weird coincidence. Dan was aware that more and more companies were getting hit with ransomware, but it happening to two people he knew just seemed…off somehow.

Those hackers probably make a killing. Just look at how much money the hospital paid Lester to help fix it for them. Dan’s stomach turned, partly from the alcohol but mostly from the thought of Lester now working for the hospital. He’d be around Sarah all the time. He knew that Lester would just try something at their house sooner or later. But Dan had ordered the hidden cameras that would come in soon. He’d put them in the house to be able to see everything that happened. They got them sent to his office, not wanting Lester to see them. He didn’t want Lester to know about them. They would trick anybody; the cameras disguised as outlets looked exactly the same as the regular outlets in the apartment. No one would be able to tell the difference.

He wished he hadn’t had to buy them, but he couldn’t trust Lester—not at his home. If the hospital had never been hit with ransomware, Lester would never have been so involved in Sarah’s work life.

Dan burped and turned onto his side. Something in his brain clicked, and his heavy eyes shot open.

What would things be like if Lester never got involved at the hospital? They’d probably still just be doing the dates with him. It’s like he wormed his way into their life. Could Lester have something to do with the hack at the hospital?

Sarah and Jesse’s workplaces both got hacked. These were two people that Lester knew. Lester was some kind of cyber security wizard. Could he have something to do with it? Would Lester do that?

Without a shadow of a doubt, Dan realized that if Lester had the power to do something like that, he probably would. If Lester was willing to go to those lengths, what else would he do?

Dominos seemed to fall in Dan’s drunken mind, so he sat up. Dan had already been wary of talking with clients in the apartment, not wanting Lester to overhear. But what if Lester had some way to circumvent Dan’s efforts? Dan’s mind snapped to the fact that all his devices were connected to the apartment’s WiFi, which had been set up before he moved in.

Could Lester monitor what Dan did on his computer and phone? The memory of Dan’s rejection from a job application and the weird resume with his name on it popped back into his mind. He knew it wasn’t his resume and hadn’t submitted it. Could Lester have been sabotaging his job hunt all along?

“Fuck,” Dan exhaled as his mind started racing.

Was Lester really monitoring him? Reading his emails, watching what websites he visited, what jobs he applied for, the clients he worked with, maybe even listening in on conversations….

Had Lester been spying on him this entire time? Sabotaging him? And did Lester hack Sarah’s workplace and Jesse’s? Why would he do that? The more his drunk brain thought about it, the more it felt like a veil had been uncovered, and Dan was seeing reality for the first time. Dan kept going over it over and over, trying to keep his drunk brain on track.

Lester was manipulative and slimy, but would he actually do that? Dan wasn’t entirely sure, but he didn’t know where Lester’s moral scruples started or stopped. Could he do those things? It seemed possible for someone in cyber security to do so.

Just who the hell was Lester Marshall? And what the hell was happening in that hotel room?

Comments

Chris N

Yessss when you refresh and a story pops up lol

Bob James

Wow. Intense

J Lewis

Only thing missing is the attachment showing Sarah’s dress.

LH_reads

Wow! "One went up and talked to the valet, but the other disappeared back inside the hospital." Surely that was supposed to be 'hotel', not 'hospital'. "Sarah flexed the muscles in her busy" typo

None

Was waiting for Jessie… so hot and intense and i hope there is more about the all nighter to start next chapter… this was incredible

Darrow

Dan really is so thick.

LH_reads

I would have liked to hear those three little words from Sarah again this chapter, but I guess it would have messed with the new dynamic between Jesse and Sarah. Hopefully next chapter.

Mark Albright

This chapter moved the plot not one inch and made no sense. Lester and Sarah were in Middleton working at the same place and neither of them made a move toward the other. No mention made of Sarah working for Lester. Sarah and Dan talk like everything is fine. Lester is more interested in whoring Sarah out than taking her himself. And he gets Dan thrown in jail, which takes him out of the picture for a night. But Sarah will take Dan's side when he tells her what happened. Lester's made mistakes before, but they were done out of lust for Sarah. This was just a stupid overreach on his part. I fear the author has decided to jerk us around for as long as he can. One more chapter and I'm gone.

Vinny

Liked this one slightly over the Alpha - a few more tidbits added for clarification. The ending was expanded giving Dan more insights into the whole situation. I just curious as to why he picked a state of inebriation to give Dan his moment of clarity. As he starts to review in his mind all of the coincidences regarding the events from the recent past, it becomes even more apparent as to how blind Dan has been this whole time.

Michael Haase

I agree, the story went nowhere. Even the teases directed toward Dan DeKuck were lame. How to reestablish the basic three way dynamic will become more difficult as Sarah becomes nothing more than a cock hungry slut. So, Jesse finally fucks Sarah and she likes it, he fucks her better than Dan....Maybe Sarah and Jesse go somewhere, hard to see with Lester around.

Volkfly

A marked improvement over the Alpha. Well done.

LB

Perhaps the alcohol dulled his conflicted cuck urges??

Michael Haase

"So you actually fucked Jesse?" "I did Dan." "How did that happen?" "Lester blindfolded me, and I was so turned on, he told me you were watching." "So you didn't know?" "Not at first, but the blindfold came off before we finished and I recognized Jesse." "And he wouldn't stop when you recognized him?" "No, by then it was to late, we couldn't stop." "What do you mean "To Late" "I needed it baby, Jesse has a nice cock, it was to good to stop." "A nice cock?" "Yeah, it's pretty big, maybe just a little bigger than yours, but he's got the perfect curve and it hits my G spot perfectly, I needed to cum." "And...?" "Ohhh, that curve baby was irresistible, he made cum." "You didn't realize I wasn't there?" "Sorry babe, not till we were thru, it was an intense orgasm." "So, now you have Jesse too?" "Only if Lester lets me, but his curve fits perfectly so I hope so."

Vinny

Well I have been in Dans situation and I have to admit that being in the drunk tank does give you pause for self-reflection. Hopefully also in regards to being a stupid cuck.

LB

Disagree. We had Lester being frustrated by the changed locks when trying to replace Sarah’s birth control pills. Although modern contraceptives come in blister packs not bottles. Sarah confirmed she was taking them. Dan’s realisation about Lester’s ability to track his online correspondence should put him and his new cameras on a path to foiling some of Lester’s plans. Jesse’s involvement and Sarah’s inability to say anything other than “fuck me harder” or “fill me up” even after she realises Dan isn’t there puts her on a collision course with the reality of her descent in slutdom. The two week break, the ‘proposal’ all designed to heighten her sexual desperation that was already evident to Dan when she walked into the apartment. It’s going to be a lot harder for them to pretend to play happy family after this. Who knows how long this series will go on for. My guesses, Lester still has goals to achieve. Sarah’s pregnancy, her anal virginity & playing house with her. He’s made his job harder now by pushing Dan so far but he will no doubt get his way. He won’t end up with the girl though. His hacking will come back to bite him just when he thinks he’s finally won. Then Dan and Sarah are left to pick up the pieces. Not that Sarah will ever be able to go back to her pre Lester self. The baby in her womb and the desire for strange cock will not let her.

Pascal

I find Sarah's character less and less interesting. She's become far too easy a woman to fuck and make come. If I were Lester, I'd start to tire of her, but I suppose for him the ultimate goal of all this isn't to make Sarah love him, but to humiliate Dan.

Jörgen Tännfäldt

Maybe so his day after confrontation can be cut down as drunk falsities? Maybe Jesse's text is gone, and Sarahs text doctored to say the real room number, with a guilty Sarah lying to dan.

Vinny

Honestly the sex is becoming tiresome. The story needs a reset or change in direction to keep the tension. Dan getting the “goods” on Lester is a start so hopefully the next chapter will keep that momentum.

Elfy

The plot hasn't moved in months. Don's entire plan has been to be to set a specific scene which demonstrates Sarah's further fall. He frames every chapter around a specific scene. Character development doesn't matter. Plot arc doesn't matter.

None

Agree with much but last part of chapter …it is written to show us that Dan is figuring out what Lester has been doing as he is thinking as he sits in jail …..does Jessie become the new toy for the couple? Their need for this will not go away but the dynamic may change with Lester being too careles…it would be a wonderful change I think as Dan and Jessie become successful business partners and she now needs Jessie and what ever big cock he brings her….and Dan ? Well nothing changes for him

Elfy

I guarantee the author of this post had a fucked up teenage years

Elfy

It doesn't matter what dan knows. Don isn't focused on a realistic arc or story. If he was, this wouldn't have gone on for over 2 years. I am here to laugh, because it's amazing how many people are actually invested in hilarity.

Darrow

I'd go with LB on that. Dan's not the brightest guy. He feels superior to and contemptuous of Lester, and can't let that go. Except when he's in cuck mode. This is the first time he's 'respecting' Lester as a threat and rival. That said, my god, but Dan is deeply stupid. He's impulsive and erratic. He had two opportunities to interrogate Jesse and Lester, and blew them both by acting prematurely. He has no strategic thinking, no tactical thinking, he just sort of blunders around. He just gets handed drinks on the house... and drinks? He allows himself to get drunk over and over, despite being a lightweight with liquor. He's overdue for epiphany. Maybe the alcohol dulled his smart-stupids to let him actually think clearly.

Charlie_Chuckles

How long will Dan stew in jail waiting for Sarah. I hope Lester has Sarah kick Jesse out by making fun of him like she did with Dan to turn him off from her. He is getting too attached. Lester and Sarah didn’t have a proper engagement celebration but Don you gotta reintroduce some pillow talk between these two. It can’t only be about the sex. . I’m sure the weekend will be enough time for Lester to change the narrative about Dan to her. Dan will face a lot of obstacles in his pursuit of his wife. First he is in trouble with the law. It might be a public intoxication only but what if the DA tacks on disturbing the peace. Now Dan will be stuck in Chicago until court, have additional expenses like bail, legal fees and community service and the potential of losing his government contract gigs. Next Dan and Sarah will have a heated conversation about Lester, Jesse and her whereabouts. Dan will give an ultimatum that Sarah ignores. On the topic of Lester. He is cunning. He still has an ace up his sleeve he hasn’t used. I’m sure Ned being there in the hotel and his conversations with Jesse, Lester is prepared for the Lincoln Group retaliation and will twist it to his advantage by using the hospital or Dan’s businesses as cover. In the end Lester could go away with Sarah to a non extradition country to live out their sex fantasies and torment Dan by emailing him the videos

Darrow

Personally, I really like Sarah as a cock hungry slut. Nothing wrong with that.

Gee

Remember in chapter 23, Lester told Dan and Sarah he had plans for the following night. Hence Lester insisted on the date that afternoon they walked in the Chicago apartment door. Bare with me here! Lester had the set up on separating Dan and Sarah from the start. Ned in an apartment across from 326. The photo of Jesse outside that (326) apartment door. Now Jesse and Lester are going to town on Sarah’s mind & body. On a different floor and room within the hotel. Between Ned and Lester, they have Dan being taken into custody by police, for being intoxicated and creating a disturbance. The police have collected Dan and put him away for at least the night and possibly longer. What if Lester’s busy plans for the following night always included Sarah!!! With Dan out of the way, uncontactable, Lester only need fabricate a cuck tale, that Dan is giving the happy couple space to celebrate their engagement. Lester has devious plans to introduce Sarah to all sorts of sexual depravity, that will leave her forever changed as a woman. She will never be satisfied with just being Dan’s wife, mother to his daughters or the vanilla sex they use to share

Charlie_Chuckles

I’m sure Lester will do a lot over the weekend to make Sarah submit to him but a quick clarification in your statement. Correct Ned is on the third floor but he is not in room 326. Lester even said later he felt sorry for whoever was in that room but ultimately didn’t care.

Charlie_Chuckles

Would be a good way to shut down Jesse down and his desperate pursuit of Sarah if she says those three words to Lester. It broke Dan

Gee

Sarah started the hotel room scene blind folded, told that Dan was Present in the cuck chair and another stranger was also present. Before leaving the apartment, Sarah asked Dan if he wanted her to be a good or bad girl. “Bad” was Dan’s answer. Now Sarah is on the verge of an intense orgasm from Jesse, with Lester provoking her orgasm with the right weighted dirty talk, who can blame Sarah for finishing her orgasm with Jesse and witnessed by Lester.

Mel

Dan has finally woken up. He plans to fill Sarah in but when she sees the message she will go straight away to bail him the next morning with Lester. Dan is livid and becomes aggressive towards Lester but Sarah tells him to stop overreacting, it was an honest mistake. Dan sees she is still wearing the ring and decides he can’t trust Sarah with his new theories. He has to let her fall further into debauchery while he seeks some favours from his new friends in DC to bring Lester down and eliminate him permanently. But will it be too late to stop her from being bred.

Gee

Ahh! So true. He must be across the hall with peep hole view

Darrow

Actually, Dan may be in a lot of trouble with his new friends in DC. The last thing an alphabet agency wants are unreliable people with criminal records who have an alcohol problem. Getting seriously drunk in public and causing a disturbance is likely to be something they dislike and don't want to be connected to. Having an arrest record, even more disliked. Dan's little outburst and temper tantrum may well have destroyed or damaged his side business.

Darrow

Dan's in jail for the night? Was it a Friday night? If he's in for public intoxication, he'll be released without charges the next day when he sobers up. But if he's actually arrested that's different. If he's arrested, then there are charges, if there are charges, he can't be released until he sees the Magistrate. The Magistrate doesn't sit on Saturday or Sunday, so Dan might not get released until Monday morning. Hopefully that doesn't happen. But it could be very convenient. Maybe convenient enough to pay little bribe in the right place, to the right person....

Darrow

I like that Dan is finally figuring things out, although he's done it in the most half assed way possible. Dan is figuring out that Lester has been surveilling him, because he finally got the idea to surveil Lester. This all comes about because he starts thinking of spying on his wife and Lester, literally gloating over having cameras in his own bedroom and so forth... resulting in the light bulb moment: 'Wait, if I'm going to do it to him... maybe he's already doing it to me?' And then comes the train of thought, the realization, the various obvious clues that Dan never picked up on, the realization of how easily he would have been compromised, including all of his passwords. He still hasn't guessed half of it, including that Lester has cameras all over. And he's moved clumsily enough with his confrontations with Jesse and Lester, that Lester's figured out that it's only a matter of time before he puts the pieces together. Dan's dumb enough that he may immediately change all his passwords, which would surely tip Lester off. And allow Lester to play innocent, while digging his game deeper. And while Dan may have ordered surveillance cameras, did he order them from the Apartment? Did he order them from his credit card? Lester may be able to access those records. Even if he was half-smart about it, there's still a chance Lester would spot the cameras. He uses them himself, he knows where to look and what to look for. Even assuming he doesn't, would he care all that much? He doesn't care about his own reputation. So if Dan has him fucking on video, so what? On the other hand, Sarah will care massively that Dan is spying on her. That kind of thing is 'break the marriage' material. Doesn't matter that she might have been breaking the rules having Lester in her bed without Dan's say so. Dan setting up cameras without letting her know is marital suicide, there's no coming back from that. Hell, even letting her know would be dicey and difficult to navigate. *** Some random observations - Sarah didn't tell Dan everything that went on in the parking lot. She's keeping secrets from him. Trust is breaking down. Equally, there's friction with Dan, he accuses her of doing the Parking Lot without permission. That's Dan's resentment surfacing. But it's also unfair from Sarah's perspective - he had his chance. Once it started, it started, no calling time out in the middle. *** Extremely easy for Jesse and Lester to come up with a plausible explanation. The story: Lester didn't know who Jesse was, but Jesse knew who Lester was. Jesse did pretend to be Dan and send Sarah to fuck Lester after all. BUT more importantly, Jesse knows exactly who Sarah is, he lusted after her while working with Dan, looked at the dirty pictures she sent Dan, dry humped her while sleeping, etc. So when he saw her on the Dance floor at the club, he decided to take his chance, and it was going so well until Dan made a scene. That's when Lester saw Jesse for the first time. Later, they ran across each other, Lester noticed Jesse and asked what that was all about. Jesse figured out who Lester was, and they talked. That was part of how Jesse knew so much about Dan's cuckolding (although he already knew the beginning of it). Jesse called up Lester to brag about having Sarah to himself in Minneapolis. It's exactly the sort of shit that Dan believes Jesse would do. Lester admits to being jealous, and believing Sarah was fucking Jesse. See? Completely airtight. Plausible, covers all of the facts known to Dan and Sarah. Lester won't crack. Jesse might possibly crack, with enough pressure. But Lester's probably got him coached, and he's got a lot of leverage, good and bad, including Sarah's pussy. Even if Dan doesn't believe, he's got nothing to work with. *** The best thing Dan's got, is the awareness of two hacks - Sarah's hospital and Jesse's company. But he'll have trouble making anything of it. Lester's apparently unconnected to both hacks. In one he rides to the rescue... and it's actually Sarah that pulls him in. I'm not sure that Dan realizes it. But if he puts it to Sarah, she'll say, she knows, that the only reason Lester is involved in any fashion is her. He's innocent. On the surface, he's not involved in Jesse's hack at all. The only connection is that Lester knew Jesse, and he knew Dan worked for Jesse presumably (Jesse would have bragged), and he knew about Minneapolis. That might be good enough for Dan, but to Sarah it will be crazy talk. Of course, it's definitely paranoid. But if the Lincoln Group security guys look up Dan and he tells them... well, they're occupationally paranoid. And if they lean on Jesse, he might crack. But for the rest of it, Dan will come across crazy and misinformed, especially to Sarah. *** Lester realizing that Dan is figuring things out surprised me. Obviously, Jesse's panic and blabbing is a big red flag. But what's interesting is the way Lester seems to smoothly pivot to next level stuff. He's made enough stupid mistakes (and mostly been lucky) and is narcissistic enough that his lack of respect for Dan might have lead him to yet another mistake, underestimating Dan's waking up to him. But no, he realizes Dan is on the verge of figuring out his stunts, will inevitably figure them out, and is calmly proceeding to next level. *** I wonder what Sarah's aftermath is going to be? Dan will have admitted or demonstrated that he's drunk, violent and jealous. Not a good look for Dan in Sarah's eyes. She's already keeping secrets from him. He's already failed and frustrated her. And she now definitely prefers Lester as a sex partner. I think this inevitably lessens her regard. It may make her more skeptical of Dan's new claims. Dan has a knack for mishandling this kind of thing. He'll come across as paranoid and hateful and maybe abusive. But I can't see her not having empathy for what Dan went through, heartbreak for his getting arrested and in jail, for his suffering. It's going to tear at her heartstrings. And because of that, she'll have some deep guilt over what happened and the way it happened, particularly the night of great wild satisfying sex over and over, while he suffers. Of course, she'll have loved the sex, won't want to feel guilty about that. She had no idea it was Jesse until it was well along, and she had no idea whatsoever Dan was in trouble. Why should she feel guilty about things out of her control? She may get suspicious of Lester though, and the way he played it. He clearly, obviously excluded Dan and lied to her about it. Dan may have gotten drunk and made a scene in front of the wrong room, but he was entitled to be in there. And Lester knew how Dan would react to Jesse. So maybe there is something to Dan's ravings after all? Sarah's feelings are definitely going to be complicated.

Royston smith

Agreed Darrow. I have been waiting for the 2 cock scenario for months now and love it that it finally arrived. I think Don has done a great job in plotting the trajectory of her desires. Lester saw what her weaknesses were and has exploited them par excellence. Long may it continue. Naysayers be damned.

Royston smith

So, as I am not overly familiar with the American system of justice (perry Mason not withstanding) can one of you fill me in with the likely outcome of Dan’s arrest(for such I think it was). Could charges be pressed by Ned for instance for “threatening behaviour” which might lead to a jail term? Only Lester’s plan to frame Dan would be seen to fail if Dan is allowed out within the next few days in my opinion. If he gets the chance to talk to Sarah and explain his theory about Lester, she surely will see that Lester has been economical with the truth. His achilles heel is Jesse. Even she is going to wonder how they know each other. And her mind must surely drift back to the dance club..

Allan Harrison

Definitely not my favorite chapter, but they aren't all going to be golden. I probably would've liked it at least a little more if either someone less obvious of a choice than Jesse had fucked Sarah, or if she had pushed him off, particularly after saying he loved her. She could even punctuate it by saying she only loves Lester, perhaps still thinking Dan could hear her, or with plans to tell him later to get him riled up and horny.

Royston smith

Excellent analysis Gee, with just one flaw. When she comes down to earth will she not wonder how come Jesse was there? If Dan gets out of jail sooner than later, will his theories not seem more plausible once she knows Lester has lied about knowing Jesse?

Bob James

So I enjoyed this chapter and there are some key changes that IMO add the emotional aspects of the story. There now seems a slightly more clearer pathway to the impregnatation of Sarah. Potentially a few things would be good in the next few chapters. 1. Perhaps this threesome scene is revisited and Sarah is tricked into thinking Dan is actually Jesse and then through Lesters manipulation allows Lester to cum in her but not Dan. 2. Sarah willingly and without prompting admits to loving Lester. 3. Sarah works the family situation to spend more time with Lester. 4. Dan installs the cameras but DOES NOT tell Sarah and observes her pillow talk without prompting. I do think given Dan has ended up in jail he needs a win of some description just to balance things.

Royston smith

Mark, you can’t go! Your comments (apart from this one) make me laugh too much. Your analysis(including this comment) are also always informed. We also need you to edit the chapters as the current editor is letting far too many mistakes past the cutting room floor. I counted at least 10 spelling mistakes that hadn’t been corrected from the CCC version. I agree with you about the hospital situation and, in fact, suggested an extra scene should be added at the beginning covering off Sarah’s new job role at the alpha stage, or, as you call it the CCC stage. However, I disagree that Lester has made a mistake. I think he will find a way to have Dan kept in jail for a decent period. I am wondering about the “dark drink”. Could this be an illegal substance that a blood test would reveal? Would it entail a lengthy jail term? I believe you are an American so perhaps will know more about their legal system than I do. The only objection I can think of to my theory is it would involve hotel staff collusion.

Bones

This was a bald-faced lie from Lester. I wonder if this will at least in some minor/moderate way impact Sarah's trust of Lester. Perhaps as little as she won't believe that story again (that Dan is there) or a much as giving her some resistance to his charms.

Dbop

Chapter was alright overall, but it's beginning to feel repetitive. We need to swe some more progression. Sarah needs to start to fall harder and faster.

Darrow

I found Jesse a disappointment. I guess because it was too obvious and too easy. Like a consolation prize or a participation trophy.

Darrow

I agree. I think it needs to impact trust. It's just too flagrant a lie.

Darrow

I don't have knowledge of the American criminal justice system. So it's hard to say. I suspect that Ned won't anchor a prosecution. I think Dan has a chance to persuade Sarah, but it's an uphill battle.

Michael Haase

Dan has pretty much exited the story. He's around only to demonstrate Lester's conniving to sleep with another man's wife. Sarah barely teases him anymore, there is little talk of denying Dan sex, no interest in controlling Dan's masturbation issues while Sarah is away or with Lester. Sarah has lost interest in Dan so, he no longer creates the cuckhold premise the story relied on. I wonder, maybe Sarah needs Lester's financial help to bail Dan out of jail. Lester makes Sarah promise to deny Dan sex until his court hearing in order to bail him out. Of course, Sarah reluctantly agrees, and Lester becomes her exclusive lover. Just a thought, it brings Dan back into the story, Maybe Lester demands Dan wear a chastity device to prove his abstinence. A high tech version, controlled via an app, monitors location, erection attempts and lock schedule. Guest can be added as view only, an erection attempt log and chat option are available. Sarah can see how often Dan gets aroused, when and what time. Lester is the App Admin and is the only one who can release the lock, or maybe it's Sarah in control, could be fun.

Curiouser69

Less intensity than previous one... although enjoyed the suffering of Dan from Lester's hand. Lester is a sociopath and so is Sarah ,she just pretend to love Dan and it will be proven when she will take Lester's side when dan will realise about Lester's plan and he will reveal them to Sarah.Lester is the real alpha in Sarah's eyes and she is now more intimate with him than dan not only physically but emotionally. Overall I expected more from this chapter....I thought Sarah will more actively humiliate dan and participate in his suffering more openly but that didn't happen. she should realise that higher the Dan's suffering,harder the Lester's dick and higher the sexual pleasure. Now Sarah should stop pretending about Dan's feeling.

Rjh200m

MA - I think Lester stayed away from her at work so that she was super horny for him on the hotel weekend. Sarah was dying for it even before she entered the apartment.

Rjh200m

Lester wants Dan in jail for the night so he can further fuck and indoctrinate Sarah. Lester told her a few weeks ago he would fuck her all night. Plus he won’t let her check her cell phone until probably after they leave the hotel the next morning.

Rjh200m

I think that Sarah did quite a lot to humiliate Dan and manipulate him in this chapter - - She lied about the car scene, not telling Dan that she fucked Lester on the hood of the car and the involvement of Otis. And in the apartment she quickly stopped Lester from talking about it, by acknowledging that Lester mentioned the hotel date night,….this was to prevent Dan from knowing all that happened in and on their car. - She didn’t pursue Lester at work so that she could be in a state of hyper horniness for the hotel weekend. Presumably she didn’t have sex with Dan either. Lester also stayed away from Sarah at work because he wanted her horny for the hotel night. - Sarah discarded Dan for the weekend before she even entered the apartment, setting the stage for her to spend time with Lester. Dan was an obstacle that she wanted to neutralize (sound familiar?) - Sarah openly kissed Lester by using her “sexy stare” to stop Dan from saying or doing anything. Then she rubbed Dan’s nose in it by such an intimate kiss with Lester. Sarah did nothing even to try to talk Lester out of the kiss. - She jumped at the chance to wear the sexy dress, pretending to Dan that it was important to her that he approved/liked it. She was wearing it no matter what. It was for Lester and other men, not Dan. And it was amazing that Dan thought the dress looked so hot on her when the reality was that there was no way he was even going to touch Sarah that night. - Sarah openly thought that the competition between Dan and Lester turned her on and she basically got so horny thinking about Lester winning and Dan losing. She likes humiliating Dan because it turns her on, it’s not about turning Dan on anymore. - She readily agreed to take her rings off at Lester’s request….and then she accepted the ring from Lester and went through with the proposal scene in the restaurant. All she could say to Dan was that she didn’t know about it. And by the way, she loves the ring and said how much better it was that the ring Dan gave her. Will she even take it off? - She did not really care when she learned that Dan was not in the room, she obviously was more interested in getting fucked and she again professed to Lester in front of Jesse that she basically now belonged to him. She now seems to have moved Dan to third in the pecking order of sexual satisfaction based on her reaction to Jesse - how much she likes his dick and how genuine he seemed in his desire for Sarah. In contrast to previous chapters, it seems that Sarah in this chapter was co-conspirator with Lester to make the hotel night happen. She very obviously manipulated Dan every step of the way. In this chapter her level of humiliation of Dan increased and it seemed that she saw Dan as just a prop to support her hot night with Lester. With the ring, the proposal scene and what followed in the hotel room, Lester is clearly saying to Sarah that she now belongs to him, and it’s more tangible and out in the open now. Sarah did nothing to counter this.

Rjh200m

Gee - I agree! Lester planned this out and he will try to keep Dan in jail for the weekend so he can continue to indoctrinate Sarah, with the theme being that her marriage to Dan is over, that she now belongs to Lester and she needs to start acting this way. He certainly was upset when Sarah referenced the competition between Lester and Dan for her before they left the apartment. Lester does not want any competition, he wants Sarah to realize and openly acknowledge that she belongs to Lester . This includes her telling Dan. In fact, they are now engaged! So they have to be exclusive, meaning no sex with Dan. I don’t know how exactly he will get Sarah to agree, but the way this chapter went, it’s plausible she does. But as I think we can all see, perhaps he doesn’t have to do anything as the sex between Sarah and Dan is fast disappearing. Lester certainly keeps her busy and I actually think Lester may keep Jesse around. He saw that Sarah was turned on by him and having both Lester and Jesse fucking her, along with other “one offs”, she will literally have no time or desire to have sex with Dan.

Rjh200m

I was struck by Sarah’s thoughts on how she felt about Jesse being so enamored of her, how “genuine” he was in his feelings for her (not to mention she loved his dick). We all know that Sarah gets super turned on by men desiring her. First it was Dan, then certainly Lester and now Jesse (others as well). It turns her on so much and she will probably want to see Jesse again. Lester may allow this only because it’s another way for him to condition Sarah (he gives her approval to do so and directs her), but also because he knows it will further hurt and humiliate Dan. It’s also a big test of Sarah’s corruption. After she gets over her very brief period of guilt (say by the middle of the next day!), will she continue to see Jesse even though Dan is likely to be very upset?

KB

Literally nothing was added or changed. Huge let down. Yet again

Chescojoe

I hope the next chapter includes the rest of the night fucking and dirty talk.

Sigma

Darrow, always insightful comments. May I make a small suggestion please? You include so much in one post that its difficult to reply to anything specifically, which makes the reply conversation challenging.

Rjh200m

Remember when Sarah said that Lester never lies to her when she was upset that Dan didn’t tell her about letting Ned (?) use the peephole instead of him? How important honesty is for Sarah! So this should impact her, but we will see, she seems to be all over the place right now. Perhaps Lester will rationalize it to her and she will accept it.

Rjh200m

Another lie that Sarah is telling Dan - earlier in the chapter she said to Dan not to worry, she can control Lester. I can’t believe that she is this clueless, especially given what she tells Lester (“I can’t say no to you”). Each time that Dan raises the issue of whether things are going too far and that Lester is pushing too hard, Sarah tells Dan not to worry, she can handle him. Seems to me that she is purposely misleading Dan. We can no longer think that she is just being naive.

Arc

Arc

*IF* it does, then congratulations on being happy being made to pay double for one chapter's worth of content being split across two months... Half the work, double the pay...

Arc

Dan needs to take the backseat, supporting-character role that is where he belongs in this story. As I said elsewhere, even if he once *was* the main character, he's definitely NOT the protagonist of this tale now (Sarah is), while Lester has been the antagonist all along. Focussing on secondary characters as overwhelmingly hard as this chapter did only detracts from the overall tenor of the story, barely (as others have concurred) moved the plot, gave us almost zero information about what's going on in Sarah's head, and basically wasted our time and money this month. DAN doesn't need a win: he's a secondary character in a story that *definitely* isn't about him any longer, if it ever was. Secondary characters don't have needs, they solely exist to support and flesh-out the main characters' arc.

Arc

Wow! -- if *this* half-effort 'chapter' is a "marked improvement" over the alpha, I have to thank-you for wholly alleviating any contemplations I may have ever entertained about upgrading my subscription! 🤔🤦‍♀️😝

Mark Albright

Couldn't agree more. This chapter made me feel like we the readers were all just like Dan, being manipulated and strung along by Lester, milking us along for a few more dollars. Tell you what, Mr. Silver, I'll write you a check for $500 right now just to get somewhere with this story. Have Dan figure it out, have Sarah get pregnant, have Lester get run over by a train. Do some fucking thing.

Bob James

Yeah, let's agree to disagree on this one. The interplay between Dan, Sarah and Lester and the gradual diminishing of Dan's role to be the key aspects of the overall story. His role in the story and what happens to him is a key aspect of the 'toxic' nature of the plotline.

Arc

@Rjh200m - addicts have genuinely-astonishing capacities to rationalize/justify the irrational/unjustifiable when doing so facilitates them servicing their addiction...

Arc

A reality that draws ever nearer when wasted, half-effort entries like ch24 take my money but give me practically nothing in exchange.

Volkfly

Understood. I have considered doing the same. The story is getting lost and too drug out.

Arc

Darrow said, "Sarah as a cock hungry slut. Nothing wrong with that." Except that it then becomes just another trite, cliché, old, and boring, re-expression of content for which there are literally *thousands* of examples available for free on Literotica. Nobody here is paying for boring, unoriginal, commonplace content, and housewife-turns-slut is so entirely overdone and blasé at this juncture as to be pornographically indistinguishable from pablum.

Arc

TBH, while I don't expect it, It'd still be freaking hilarious if the 'dark' drinks had been spiked with something akin to Rohypnol, and, when mixed with the beers Dan himself bought, both exacerbated his inebriated condition AND inflicted induced-amnesia such that he couldn't actually remember any of the important details/revelations when he awakens the next day... 🤔😄

Sigma

Dan's thought: "They would trick anybody; the cameras disguised as outlets looked exactly the same as the regular outlets in the apartment. No one would be able to tell the difference." I bet something will click in his mind to check the "regular outlets in the apartment" and realize what Lester's been doing. Also, since Lester is going to be in Chicago so much, could Dan either disable the cameras in the apartment and also explore Lester's computer?

Arc

There a LOT of these. It kinda surprised me to learn that actual editors review these things; given how commonplace such errors are (and continue to be) in each chapter...

Rjh200m

Dan is sitting in jail while Sarah is fucking Lester. And she will be all night and probably into the next day before Lester even lets her know about Dan (Lester won’t let her access her cell). Once Dan gets out, it’s gotta be a huge part of the story in terms of the Dan-Sarah relationship dynamics. There has to be a reckoning between the two, no matter what results. There just cannot be another discussion of “don’t know how things got out of control”. It’s time for Sarah to say what she thinks/wants and it’s time for Dan to take a stance with both Sarah and Lester. If he continues his wimpy back and forth conflicted feelings, it will be very disappointing. He has to stop encouraging Sarah and crying about it later. If I’m Dan, I’m coming out of jail swinging, at both Lester (literally) and Sarah, figuratively, but certainly not buying her “sexy stare”, “I can handle Lester”, or “I’m doing this for both of us” lame excuses and rationalizations.

Arc

As I proposed elsewhere, Dan's going to be held till he can see a Judge, potentially as late as Monday. Hopefully this leaves Lester the weekend to freely fuck Sarah senseless, and become so emotionally compromised, while secretly coming to revel in the fantasy of being his fiancee, that, when she finally does get Dan's message(s), she's more annoyed about having to stop being fucked silly to go fetch her loser, absentee husband out of jail, and so, when that confrontation finally occurs, she actually comes out in full throated support of her Chicago Boyfriend, while leaning into belittling and demeaning Dan out of annoyance, and, in so-doing, genuinely discovering just how much the combination of siding with Lester (whose cum is literally running down her legs at that moment) while verbally berating Dan, actually turns her on. If it turned out that the free drinks Dan was being served had been spiked with something akin to Rohypnol, the beers he drank in combination could easily result in an induced-short-term amnesia, actually depriving him of clear memories of the night, and even of the revelatory connections that he'd arrived-at while languishing in the tank... Of course, it's just about as likely that, as with the missing bathroom scene between 23 and 24, Don time-jumps us several-days/weeks ahead in 25 and completely glosses ALL of this over...

Darrow

I think a normal person would click on that idea immediately. Dan? Fifty fifty if he ever gets there.

Arc

But not where it counts... 😉😋😄

Darrow

Correct on all points. BUT third place is not bad. Dan is still ahead of Verne... maybe. She did things eagerly for Verne that she would never do for Dan. So, maybe fourth? But Dan is definitely ahead of Byron. Sarah found him creepy. But was still willing and wet, and easily dominated. Fifth? Otis? She found him creepy too, but took a facial. But I think Sarah would definitely place Dan ahead of Otis... for now. And Thornhill. And Cash. And other strangers watching. .... Dan's ahead of all of them them. Basically, Sarah prioritizes sex with Dan over random strangers watching and coming on her...

Darrow

Sigma. Good point. I'll do shorter but mroe posts.

Chescojoe

She definitely wants Lester in the driving seat so she tells Dan what will pacify him.

Chescojoe

I do think this chapter was way too brief. Loved the content, just not the length.

Arc

If Dan's not charged, he can simply be held for up to 24hrs, at which point he must either be officially charged, or released. If he's charged with an actual crime he may have to stand in front of a judge and request bail (or ROR), but if it's only a misdemeanor, he'll likely only have to post a prescribed, fixed-bond, and get a court date, then be released. It's unlikely there's enough to charge him with an actual criminal offense (assuming we have all the info, maybe he punched a cop or something while being arrested?) so he'll probably be out on Monday. There are no laws against having illegal drugs *in your bloodstream*, so even if they suspect he's high on something illicit, they won't test for it because that's not an offense and they won't care. They would only test for such drugs if he credibly claimed to have been assaulted/poisoned, and opened an investigation into *that*...

Rjh200m

Arc - if Lester has two full days with Sarah in the hotel without her leaving his control, he is going to do everything to complete her corruption, physically and mentally, including turning her against Dan as you describe. His goal will be to have Sarah walk out of the hotel as his, both in the bedroom and openly. With Dan totally removed as an obstacle. The trend suggests that this will happen….at least initially, but it will be interesting to see how Dan responds. I know that there are a lot of negative reactions to this chapter….but it will be interesting to see what happens….Lester’s engagement proposal to Sarah including the ring was very audacious and I think he will push this as hard as he can to instill in Sarah’s mind that she is now his, including no sex with Dan. Lester has basically used the hotel weekend to make a fundamental leap in his control of Sarah and removal of Dan….from this perspective, I think the story has moved forward.

Chescojoe

Halfway through the hotel night, Lester makes a phone call and 3 minutes later Otis shows up to fuck her while Lester and Jesse take a break.

Sigma

Totally agree with you. This chapter has moved many things forward while also providing some pretty hot scenes. I'm one who happened to really enjoy the Jesse scene, especially the wording of Sarah's thoughts. However, while if it was me and I got dropped in jail like that then I'd also come out swinging. I'd be pissed as hell and strategic as hell. My great concern for the next chapter is, however, than Dan starts pinching his nose again. Its now time for Dan to start his way back and not in a small way. Yeah, cameras in the house, etc. But how about some 'strategery' on his part? How about talking with Sentinel Systems about his situation and his suspicions. Wouldn't it be better to go to them first before they find out he got dropped in jail? What about ransacking (neatly) his apartment while Lester's in Chicago to see what he can find? Anyone who's been in jail, or even handcuffed and 'detained' by a cop (unfairly or not) gets sudden clarity. I'm pretty disappointed Dan got a hard-on while in jail and thinking about Sarah getting nailed, well, maybe it was the alcohol. But dude, grow a pair. Its time.

Darrow

It wouldn't be a good idea for Dan to take his personal problems to Sentinel. They don't need bullshit, they hire Dan to eliminate bullshit.

Darrow

Michael Haase - Jesus Christ. Do Chastity devices like that exist? Cripes.

Darrow

Arc - that's profoundly insightful. I've known drug addicts and alcoholics, and yes, you're exactly right. Sarah in addiction mode.

Rjh200m

What’s interesting about the Jesse character is that he is probably the right partner for Sarah if the marriage with Dan fails and she sees the doom she is facing with Lester. Jesse is young, good looking, physically appealing to her, he seems to genuinely like/love Sarah, his desire for her turns Sarah on….and he is rich (from his dad/family) which gives Sarah and the girls a solid financial foundation. Oh…..and Sarah knows that she can handle and manipulate him!

Darrow

"Something about the way he was fucking her like she meant everything in the world to him. Like a starving man sitting down in front of a Thanksgiving dinner or someone suffering from dehydration getting a glass of water. Like Sarah was nourishing Jesse’s very soul. Like she was the only thing in the world that could quench his thirst." Sarah experiencing Jesse fucking her. That sense of worship and adulation. Jesse's breathless at the sight of her. Sarah seems to respond really really strongly to this, and it made me think of her sexual relationship with Dan. The relationship with Dan is about her pleasing him, teasing him, catering to his fantasies and getting him off. And what does Dan get off on? Degrading her. His fantasy is to see her with inferiors - that's why Lester was such a hit for Dan. Lester was such a loser. Dan's sex is about him being catered to, without him having to do anything or give anything, and to have Sarah serving, including being degraded. Deep down, underneath the loving relationship, there's something one sided, and maybe ugly about Dan's sexuality. Not just cucking, but a need to degrade, to impose inferiority and subservience. He wants Sarah to be beneath him, wallowing in the gutter for him. Their relationship is not about her being desired. She's an object. It's about her serving his desire. I'm flashing back to the scene where they go out parking, they get an observer, Sarah performs but doesn't come - the whole thing is about pleasing Dan. The reason it comes back to me now, is that Sarah really seems to get off on Jesse's worship. And he flat out worships her. He's the most beautiful woman he's ever seen, he's in heaven. It's all about her, and she's the one drinking it in. Looking back, this is a running theme with Sarah. She really enjoyed dirty dancing, because a stranger was crazily into her. She enjoyed being watched by strangers as she plays with Lester or Dan, it's affirmation and adulation. Even Otis, she gets off on his response. Part of Lester's power over her is just his crazy lust for her, his desire for her, demonstrated over and over. Even Byron's desire for her excites her. Byron as creepy as he is makes no secret, crude remarks - she's not offended, she enjoys his desire. She loves teasing the Pizza Guy. Some of her remarks and conversation allude to this - "Im hot! I'm great!" When Lester sleeps over she brags about how she could get any man. When Lester fucks her, it's all about her. When Jesse fucks her, it's all about her. Even Byron, although for Byron it's also about fucking over Dan. The strangers who watch, it's about her. Sarah loves being wanted, she loves being desired, she loves being looked at. It's about her, an affirmation of her. She drinks that in, and she responds to it. It's a major motivation for her. We dwell on the sex and the orgasms, Sarah herself dwells on the sex. But I think there's an emotional side where she's getting major charging up and loving it. Whereas with Dan, she's an object, serving his fantasies, and being beneath him. The best sex that Dan has with Sarah is when Dan kicks Lester out of the house and just goes and takes her. For Dan, the excitement is in conquering and claiming her. But for Sarah, with Dan that night, she gets something else - it's finally about her. It's about Dan wanting her. She enjoys getting taken and claimed, there's definitely a sub streak. But for once, it's not about catering to Dan, or his fantasies or excitement, it's about her. In this sense, maybe Dan is the toxic one. Throughout the series, he's always been about himself. It's Dan's world, and everyone is there to entertain him, or to be an adversary, an obstacle, a prize... even his wife. Maybe that's what made it so easy - the fact that Dan wanted to degrade his wife and have her wallow, so he threw her at Lester. But Lester really wanted her, and Sarah likes being wanted. And maybe this is the key - Sarah's ego is starved by her marriage with Dan, and as long as Lester and others feed that ego, she'll just keep on the path she's on.

Darrow

Afterthought - none of this alters the fact that Lester himself is a career criminal and a genuinely dangerous, destructive and toxic psychopath.

Darrow

Honestly, I'd love that. But I'd be happy enough to see Sarah back in Middleton at the hospital, in a new position under Otis.

Darrow

Random Thought about the Hospital: As the new IT Manager there, Lester is 1000% uninterested in doing the job at all, he's literally blowing off duties. But things actually need to get done, there's work to do. He's not doing it. That's bad news long term. Also, Sarah remarks that he's letting people go from Hospital IT, including very senior people who were there longer than she was - including people she considered friends, or very friendly with. Long term people are the institutional and corporate memory. That counts. Thornhill and his cronies are thrilled. Tons of cost savings and new 'efficiency' in the IT department. Except that Lester's not working, and he's firing people who would be otherwise doing work. So work is not getting done. The Hospital's IT department is moving slowly to a catastrophic collapse and crisis. It'll start slow, bills not getting paid on time, then not getting paid at all, payroll problems, invoices not going out, medical records going astray or getting mixed up, not entering the system. Given the calls that Lester is ignoring, we're already seeing that. Eventually, the whole thing goes boom. Normally, Thornhill would just blame an underling, like his IT Manager. But Lester doesn't care, he'll walk away.

Rjh200m

Darrow - all very thoughtful and perceptive points. Even outside of the sex, she wants more attention from Dan. Remember how she liked that Lester cooked dinner for her (or so she thought), and she made the comparison to Dan always focusing on his work? How she liked Lester’s massage because he was focused on her. And throughout the story she has argued with Dan about the sacrifices her and the children are making to support Dan, and she feels that he has to support her more, like when she was mad at him for not asking about her big meeting that day which resulted in her not getting promoted. Their relationship is complicated and there probably is no right or wrong…..but, they certainly need to figure things out in terms of moving forward (or not). Too much has now happened for them to maintain the status quo.

Darrow

Final thought for now - Sarah's career at the hospital is definitely nose diving. She's lost her office, been moved to cubicles, has lost a lot of her responsibilities and authorities. It's definitely a major demotion. I suspect Thornhill is deliberately trying to push her out. She was a rival for his position. First thing you do when you take power is get rid of the competition. But from the disclosures, Thornhill's approach seems to be widespread - massive replacements, cost cutting, half assing. I think it's not just IT that will have massive problems. The whole hospital is heading for a crash.

Mark Albright

Thanks for the kind comments, Royston. And yes, he does need an editor.

Allan Harrison

I had kind of glazed over the bulk of her reaction to Jesses love/obsession talk, but even with that factored in, I still think her stronger addiction to Lester and his magical wonder cock should at least have led to her telling him something along the lines of, "Your dick is pretty good, but nothing like Daddy Lester, and you're only getting me because he said so. If it were up to me, you wouldn't even be here, and I'd be taking him and only him all night long. Him and his huge daddy loads, that is."

Mark Albright

As to this last chapter, it could have been improved greatly with one brief addition. After Dan and Sarah have their phone conversation to start the chapter, Sarah ends the phone call and rolls over into Lester's arms. "Did I do good, Daddy?" "Yeah, your husband's such a dumbass. He doesn't even suspect I'm laying in his bed with his naked wife all over me." "Don't be mean. He just trusts me is all." "Well, he's a fool then to think you and I would be in the same city and not fucking every day." "That's true. Are you complaining?" Followed by a quick, for them, sex scene with lots of kissing and "I love yous."

Charlie_Chuckles

Another dose of reality. We never hear about Dan having a best friend. At this time of need why not reach out to him to bail you out if Sarah doesn’t answer. Hell my best friend knows a lot of embarrassing things about me but if I need advice or helping hand he is there for me. No questions ask. Dan might not like the advice he may receive but a best friend definitely has your best interests at heart not Sarah. It does tell you a lot about the couple who doesn’t have one single friend. A lot of trouble could have been avoided.

Elfy

That anyone would actually analyze this story is hilarious. It's total wank garbage. Don is writing an epic to make money off of dumb asses and people who are laughing at all the people who are so engaged in this stupidity. This story is over 2 years old. No publisher ever would green light this nonsense. It's laughably bad.

Elfy

Once you change your mindset and realize Don is mocking fans of this, it becomes immensely entertaining. Frankly, I don't care if he believes this is a serious effort. It's so hilarious, I have to give it props

Rjh200m

Dan has no best friends because every time he met someone they realized that they would rather be best friends with Sarah…..only joking!

Mark Albright

So there were two potential advancements in this chapter. One, the way she readily discarded her wedding ring and joyfully accepted the engagement ring. At first she referred to the ring from Dan as the real ring. The second time she referred to it as her old ring. And Lester is pushing her to wear it to work. That has some potential. The second thing is at one point Sarah thinks to herself she knows what "her man" likes referring to Lester. This is an advancement in her thinking, but it may take seven chapters to acknowledge it out loud.

James

Disappointing. felt short. Hopefully Jesse is out the way for good

Ana

i really expected the person to be her boss and i was a bit hesitant about jesse but, i came to really enjoy it and i wish or hope that we get to see what the rest of the night looks like

Rjh200m

Lots of differing opinions on Chapter 24, but I think Lester giving Sarah the engagement ring was a great twist to the story. It simplifies all the drama about what Sarah will do, what she won’t do, what is she thinking, etc. into one simple decision/act. Once she leaves the hotel and returns to everyday life including going back to Middleton, does she: - leave Lester’s engagement ring on her left ring finger? - or does she take it off? We know what Lester will want her to do. And we know what Dan will want her to do.

Mark Albright

I think she'll try to appease Ðan by wearing his ring when she's around him and please Lester by wearing his ring the rest of the time. This works well unto Dan sees on his hidden cameras at home Sarah put the wedding ring away and the engagement ring on. Uh-oh.

Rjh200m

Lester will want her to wear his ring at work…or she could wear both! This would generate a lot of questions from family, friends and co-workers….

whiterhino

Posted this in the general comments section as well...I am on the side of this chapter left me wanting a bit more for our sexy Sarah. Fucking Jesse was not debasing enough for her punishment from Lester IMO. Although someone else cumming in her was good, I just wish it was someone even less appealing. She has been fucking bareback disgusting Lester forever. She let homeless dirty Cash cum all over her perky tanned tits. She ate a D&D nerds old semen. She got felt up, rimmed and sucked disgusting Vernon. She rimmed Lester, got her perfect featured face glazed by an old overweight janitor. Plus so many other degrading acts. So fucking young, eager, in shape and relatively well hung Jesse was not a step in the right direction. Wish it was even Ned. Hopefully the next chapter swings back to the darker side of her degradation, hopefully this was a holiday place holder. I still would love to see more of the disgusting characters above come back for more use of her body, or add new ones if needed. I especially would like to see her groped and used willingly by the D&D crew. So many hot scenarios could be used to humiliate her and give her the degrading feelings she so desires.

Tom

I love Sarah with her new sex partners, May I suggest her next step into depravity: a) Lester arranges for the sleazy CEO to fuck her, b) Sarah does the janitor often and does not tell Lester about the affair c) Sarah finds the cameras, erupts in disbelief and tosses Dan out of the house. Lester moves in and arranges a couple gang bangs, d) Dan is forced to get Sarah's father involved to restore some order in the marriage and finally, e) Byrons company determines Lester was involved in the hack of secret documents and eliminate him

Mark Albright

I think she will wear his ring at work since he's already told her to. Lester will tell the people at the hospital they're engaged, and she'll go along with it. She becomes more and more comfortable with Lester being her fiancee to the point where she starts showing the ring off. The fantasy blends into reality.

Jon Smith

Please get rid of Jesse. It's beyond time to get that particular pawn off the board.

Richardcat

Several thoughts on this series. First we can get rid of any notion that Sarah and Lester will become a loving couple. Lester is incapable of love. In addition he despises Sarah and Dan. They represent the studs and cool people from high school who made his school life miserable and who look down on him. In one of the earlier chapters he asked Sarah if she ever thought she’d be fucking him when she first saw him and she said no she didn’t think she’d be fucking a loser. He became very angry at that. Here he is talking about dragging her into the mud, covering her with it and she’d never get clean again. He plans to cleave her completely from Dan and destroy both although he will use her as long as he can. Dan appears to be figuring things out. The question is whether he will try to confront Lester impulsively as he has been prone to do or get more information and get the authorities involved. If Lester suspects Dan is getting close to figuring things out I would guess that Lester will resort to blackmail of the couple. He has plenty of video material on them. If Lester impregnates Sarah he will be done with her except maybe fuck her fora bit. He will go after another victim if he has not been taken down.

Richardcat

Forgot to mention Jesse. He is infatuated with Sarah. Lester will degrade her to such an extent in front of Jesse that he may no longer interested except for a fuck.

FU

Well, once more Dan silver I have to say great writing. I wonder if Dan and Sarah realize that Dan is actually been her pimp all this time and she is a working prostitute and a hospital administrator in her other life. Damn there’s pimped her out for rent and she has willingly done it like some kind of young naïve girl that just stepped off a bus in New York City. I am hoping in the next chapter that list it finally take Sarah‘s ass with Jesse‘s cock in her pussy and she gets so addicted to the feeling of two cocks that she’s never gonna go back to Dan and her ordinary life, and she will willingly let Lester sell her to the highest bidder, maybe even selling Sarah‘s virgin asshole to someone that will pay tens of thousands of dollars for the privilege of being the first to fuck her in the ass. Then again, maybe Lester fucks her all night long without letting her come until she swears that she’ll never fuck anyone else again but him, and then he finally lets her come and it breaks her. Then it’s too late for Dan no matter what he’s figured out he’d have a hell of a time proving it, and Jesse is too stupid to know how to do anything to help Dan. I know Lester is kind of antihero, but Dan is a piece of shit. He turned his wife out and let another man fuck her for his own sick perversion and then for rent, he deserves everything he gets.

Gee

Let’s not forget Lester start his chats with future prospect accomplices, by showing a photo of stunning Sarah. Lester gives his accomplices instructions, so that he maintains his control and goals set for Sarah. Lester we can assume vets his accomplices cock size. To ensure they are not a threat to the pleasure his size can give Sarah But! Bigger than Dan, to weaken Sarah’s resolve to other men due to the pleasure they can bring her. Lester takes great joy in getting Dan to accept his new cuck status, because Dan realises he can’t bring Sarah the same amount of pleasure. Lester is deliberate in his planning with the couple, so that he individually conditions each to submit to his will and perform his bidding. Lester is fluid. As the couple plan their counter move against Lester’s latest sexual conquest, he is able to blow past their counter move due to his surveillance and planning . This is what makes this Story a hot read. The what if’s & what will happen.

FU

I do as well I want Lester to break Sarah down to a lowest common denominator and actually make promises to Lester that she will keep and he will enforce. I’m just not sure Lester can get the job done and truly make Sarah a slut that will fuck anybody on command.

MV

Excellent post. Agree with much of it.

Rjh200m

By the time Lester gets done, Dan will be like a football player who never gets a chance to play (with Sarah), relegated to the bench while everyone else gets their chance.

Rjh200m

There are some co-workers still at the hospital that will ask her what happened to Dan! What does she say?

Rjh200m

She will put Dan’s ring back on and move Lester’s much bigger and more beautiful ring to her other hand. When people ask about it, she will say that her boyfriend gave it to her!

Gee

Absolutely! Benched every game, anxious & nervous for a start

Darrow

Actually, you're completely correct. Dan was trading his wife's company for a break on rent. That's what the arrangement for 'dates' were, and everyone accepted it was going to be sex. Sure, Lester lured and manipulated them both into it. But they went along. Particularly, Dan went along. He was the one getting the benefit of the arrangement - the discount or holiday on rent. Sarah wasn't getting any advantage for herself, except whatever Lester gave her in the form or clothes or lingerie or restaurant experience. That Sarah went along with it, even enjoyed it, didn't change what Dan was doing. They may have stumbled into it, and it was manipulated and occluded and fuzzy, but it was what it was. Anyone could stand back and see it, and call it out. And he certainly traded his wife to Byron. Byron had no doubts about the arrangement. Neither did Jesse. And both Dan and Sarah verbally went along, even if they had their own scheme. Everyone knew what it was, with no doubts. Dan willingly made Sarah a prostitute. But you know what? I think if he'd thought of it in those terms, it would have excited him. Much as he loves Sarah, he enjoyed degrading her. Their sex was all about her serving him, and his fantasy was to have her used by men who were inferior to her, and inferior to him.

Darrow

I agree that Lester is a psychopath incapable of love or most any human emotion. But he is obsessed with Sarah, so he might want long term ownership.

Gee

Hi Richardcat In chapter 24, Remember Lester’s thoughts about being the first to claim Sarah’s fertility and then as a passing thought, he hinted that Jesse could perhaps be next after him to have her fertility, “Lester also wouldn’t have considered this route a few weeks ago. But since Sarah had kept her use of contraceptives secret, it did open up a new avenue for him. He didn’t need to worry about Jesse taking away his ultimate prize, at least not for the time being. Soon, Lester would eliminate Sarah’s pills, and then her precious fertility would be his to claim.” “At least not for the time being” Lester thoughts

Mark Albright

Watching from the bench the most unlikely starting quarterback in the history of football - Lester!

Richardcat

Could be but I think he has a plan for her and when that is complete he won’t care what happens to her.

Darrow

I believe that his thinking process was more along the lines of: "Well, if she's on the pill, then I guess it's fine if Jesse comes in her. It doesn't threaten my ultimate plan for her." "It will corrupt her further and lower her inhibitions that much further if she has other men come in her. So I will allow Jesse to come in her, and get her to allow and enjoy it. Possibly, I will have other men come in her, to the point where she is even more morally depraved and corrupted." "When she is ready, I will have her go off birth control, and be solo to me."

Rjh200m

Darrow - you have it right. Lester let Jesse cum inside her because he is conditioning Sarah to have the cum of multiple men in her at the same time. Next step could be a gang bang where Lester watches. Lester wants to impregnate Sarah himself because that would be the ultimate step of him “breaking her” and having her fully submit to him. It would also be the ultimate blow to Dan. Lester will do this very strategically for maximum impact!

Mark Albright

So I'll attempt to summarize the wishes of the readers, although I'll undoubtedly leave someone out. Some want Lester to win, even though he's a diabolical sociopath. Some want Dan to win, even though he's a wishy-washy, wimpy wuss. Some want Sarah to win, even though she wants to have her cock and eat it, too. Others want everyone to lose, with Sarah fucking every man mentioned in the story and all the readers (Yes!) Others don't really know what they want, they're just along for the ride. The problem is the author is motivated to string everybody along because he has over 900 members paying at least $15 a month (over $14,000 a month). So inste

Mark Albright

So instead of wrapping things up toward his own conclusion, he is throwing things in there to appeal to everybody. This does not lead to creative, artistic writing, but to writing by committee. And the end result will not be good.

Chris Casey

I think Dan is fourth not third since Byron also satisfied her more than Dan

Sigma

Imagine what Sarah and Dan could have accomplished together if they actually worked together instead of getting involved with all this Lester crap! She's a competent professional woman. Look how good Dan is at his job, how he's managed to snag some great contracts for his own business. Imagine if she helped him with marketing, or admin tasks, or billings/collections or even client visits?! In no time he could move back home, have enough income to help support the family and pay all the bills. Sarah could help out even when at work. She could use weekends with Dan traveling to meet clients/prospects rather than stay in the apartment or having dates with Lester. At one time they were a great team. Now its hard to see this team ever working together again. Too much has happened.

Sigma

How many more chapters? I'm reminded of Dornbusch's Law: The crisis takes a much longer time coming than you think, and then it happens much faster than you would have thought."

Fuzzy Shark

Interesting don't think Lester will have any problems explaining the room issue. He will say Dan was so drunk he got lost and made a scene on the wrong floor and got arrested. Remember , Sara had on her blindfold in the elevator and did not see what floor they got off on. As far as Dan not being present, again he got drunk and lost. Not sure how he explains Jesse's involvement, other than hoping she is so corrupted now she won't care as long as she keeps getting her mind blowing sex. Poor Dan has a rough road ahead of him to change the status quo!

Luster

Yeah well this reader is one more month and then I'm out! I've had enough of this crap story just dragging it out like you say for the money. The story could have been an all-time great so many options but he's just dragging it all through the mud repeating all the same crap every month. Hell I'm rooting for Otis, and Lester's group of Dungeon & Dragons hoodlums but look how long we had to wait for Jesse to actually f*** Sarah. Was a great story but I'm not devoting year three to this thing. Enough is enough Don! These last two chapters simply we're a serious and utter let down to I'm guessing, 95% of us out here. Give us a good Christmas present that's all I can say for all of us who have put two years of Our Lives into this

Rjh200m

I am going to go out on a limb and say that the story will end after a few more chapters. Why do I say this? First….because Don Silver has invested so much time in essentially portraying Lester’s plan from day 1 to break Sarah, capture Sarah - whatever terms you want to use - and to separate her from Dan. This can be summarized in Lester’s words from Chapter 5 - “I am going to take her from you, dumbass. You won't recognize Sarah by the time I'm done with her.” Based on Chapter 24, he is very close to his goal. He has already won in the bedroom and now he is closing the deal by working on Sarah completely accepting him outside of the bedroom, exemplified by the engagement ring, wedding proposal scene, and the ongoing sex and conditioning of Sarah in the room while Dan languishes in jail. A few examples from Chapter 24 of Sarah’s rapid acceptance of Lester and how close she has gotten to him - - “The size of the diamond was at least a carat larger than the one Dan had given her. She desperately wished her blindfold was off so she could look at it again. The clarity was immaculate when she gazed at it at the dinner table. Had Lester really brought her a real diamond ring….” - “Lester and her husband had been jabbing at each other in the apartment, competing over her, and now it looked like the other guy won. Just how taboo of an idea that was….” - “She was just lucky Lester hadn’t followed her to the bathroom because she wasn’t sure she could say no to him anymore.” - “In the hallway….His hand on her lower back guided her out of the elevator and onto the carpeted floor of the hallway. Her buzzed brain was worried about walking into something, but Lester expertly guided her, holding her close to him.” - “Being blindfolded and paraded around in such a sexual way was a thrilling new experience. It was like a new kink had been unlocked or at least upgraded. Who knew what else Lester would help her discover about herself?” - “In the hotel room…..She appreciated his closeness and felt protected by him. She knew he wouldn’t let her walk into something.” - Also in the hotel room…”Good girl,” Lester said, his voice backing away from her. He was somewhere in front of her. She desperately wanted him back. Closer to her.” Second….I believe that Don Silver realizes that his longer term success is based on writing compelling stories, not turning out endless chapters to appeal to subsets of readers and generate subscription fees. I think he sees that many readers are anxiously awaiting an outcome. I’m not saying how the story will end or who wins or loses, Lester, Dan or Sarah or some combination. I do think, however that we are getting to the end of the saga based on what has happened, especially the events in this chapter. The status quo doesn’t work anymore, there has to be some resolution either way. Of course, I could be completely wrong!

Mark Albright

I hope you're right and I'm wrong. It just seems to me he takes us in one direction, only to pull back. Lester dominates Sarah, she bends to his will, insults Dan, and then she and Dan have one of their talks, and everything's hunky-dory. But you make some excellent points about how Sarah's feelings toward Lester intensified in the last chapter. And you left out the part about her thinking of Lester as "my man." Anyway, two things should force the issue in the next chapter - how does Sarah react to wearing the engagement ring and how does she react to Dan being in jail.

tim

What are you even talking about? Its a porn story. Not Shakespear. People are having a good time. If you're not then just dont subscribe lol

Chris K

Except that she texted him room #326, and she won't be wearing the blindfold when she leaves the room (on the 6th floor) eventually

Mark Albright

Maybe he blindfolds her when she leaves. She seemed to like it. Maybe a trip to the sauna for a massage, wearing only a robe.

Richardcat

Maybe he blindfolds her when they leave and he takes her for an encounter with Cash. Although he would need to be limited due to STD risk.

Rjh200m

All - here is a possible opening scene of the next chapter. Lester continues to have sex with Sarah and condition her in the hotel room over the weekend while Dan is stuck in jail. He continually emphasizes to her that they are now engaged and a formal couple and that her relationship with Dan no longer matters. He gives her prescription medication to keep her sedated and compliant, and to prevent her from thinking coherently and reaching out to Dan. He takes her in the ass. He gets her a tattoo and piercings, marking her as his. Then on Monday morning, he makes her clean up and het dressed in a very expensive outfit he bought for her. They kiss goodbye, and then he slaps her on the ass, telling her that she needs to go bail hubby out of jail. He tells her he will see her in Middleton. Sarah walks out of the hotel in a sex and drug induced daze. Dan doesn’t believe the state she is in when she gets to the detention center. She does not seem too concerned about what happened to Dan or how it happened. She just wants to get Dan out of jail and then go home. Dan is in shock and says to her “Sarah, I don’t even recognize the person you are right now”. She puts a finger on his lips…”Just get in the car Dan and be quiet.” It’s at this point that Dan realizes that Sarah still has Lester’s ring on.

Mark Albright

A later scene has Dan in the apartment alone wondering what Lester and Sarah are up to in Middleton. She seems very distant with him on the phone, when she bothers to answer. She is working for Lester now and seems quite happy about it, saying he's a "great boss." When he asks her what happened at the hotel, she is dismissive of him, simply saying Lester didn't make her do anything she didn't want to do. Dan has found out some of Lester's underhanded stuff, but Sarah cuts him off when he tries to talk about it. When he asks her if she and Lester are getting together outside of work, she laughs and says "what do you think?" He wants to ask her is she still wearing the engagement ring, but he's afraid he knows the answer. He managed to get the cameras installed at their house in secret and this is the first day he will be able to see what is happening there. He turns on his monitor and he sees Lester there alone in his house sitting on the sofa with his feet propped up on the table, wearing only what appear to be new bikini briefs. He wonders if he's broken in and is thinking of calling the police. Then he sees Sarah come in. She kisses Lester very familiarly and then immediately drops to her knees and starts sucking on Lester's cock like someone starving finally getting a meal. His dick starts to stiffen as he watches.

FU

Your analysis of this chapter is spot on. One thing you didn’t mention was her immediate acquiescence to not wearing her wedding rings, cutting Dan’s objection off immediately. Then came the proposal from Lester and her reaction to the ring shock and surprise at first, but then her thoughts went to how gorgeous a ring it was and was it really real. I think she’ll take it to a jeweler to find out, when she discovers the real value of the ring, she will be pulled farther into Lester’s orbit, seeing financial security, and that is the third leg of the tripod. But the other thing about it that was telling was when Lester said he wanted her to wear it at work and her only real argument was that people will see and notice something was different about the ring she was wearing, or the rings she wasn’t wearing anymore. Then her thoughts went to well could I wear it, is it real? There is absolutely no consideration of Dan in her thought processes anymore. I think at some point Lester is going to arrange a wedding that Sarah will go along with, whether Dan is there or not it will not matter, then on the honeymoon he will turn her into his personal money making cash cow.

Todd

Don said that the story is divided into three arcs. Could this be the end of the second arc? Dan has finally started to realize what he’s up against. If he doesn’t take dramatic action now he realizes that he will lose Sarah now.

J Lewis

DS is masterful in keeping the reader curious about the next chapter. The proof there is probably in his checking account. I’m really interested in the Jesse angle. The only ones who know that Jessie took that selfie in front of room 326 are Jesse, Lester and Dan. Sarah isn’t aware of the selfie. So when Sarah and Dan have their next conversation does Dan hold back on his Jesse info to see if Sarah offers it up or does he confront her about it and what will be her explanation? Secondly how does Sarah respond to Lester knowing he told her two whoppers…1) the room number which she relayed to Dan and 2) Lester telling her Dan was in the room. I hope Ch25 doesn’t disappoint.

J Lewis

I believe that this chapter was the beginning of Lester’s final assault in fracturing Sarah’s and Dan’s marriage. Ch25 will tell the reader if he is successful. If he fails he will be play his “ace in the hole” which of course will have the reader anxiously waiting on Ch26. DS is a genius.

Mark Albright

Aside from whatever else Lester does to Sarah in bed, including light bondage, he will parade her around the hotel in skimpy outfits. Holding hands, tender kisses, introducing her as his fiancee, having her show off the ring. Conditioning her to accept her new role as belonging to him. She pushed back at first when he told her the ring meant she was his property, then didn't argue when he said it again. He will keep saying it until she agrees, then make her say it. Every time they go back to their room, he becomes more and more dominant with her.

Rjh200m

This has been Lester’s method all along, constantly putting him and Sarah into a situation where they are a couple in public. It goes back to the first date where he told the waiter that it was their anniversary, and the DnD night where she posed as his girlfriend, etc. In all instances, Sarah goes along with it. It’s still very interesting to see that Sarah actually enthusiastically accepted Lester’s ring and proposal in the hotel restaurant. Why would she do this? All of these public displays orchestrated by Lester are designed to condition Sarah to accept him and to be comfortable with him out of the bedroom. A logical next step (from Lester’s perspective!) is for them to act as engaged with the ring on her and, of course, to be an exclusive coupe. Which means that Sarah does not have sex with Dan. Somewhat hard to believe that this could happen, but when you look back at what Sarah has agreed to, anything is possible. Dan has to do something drastic to counter the path that Lester and Sarah are on.

Mark Albright

Keep up the good work, DL. I was wondering who the non-paying members DS has. Now I know one of them. Might not want to be so obvious, though.

J Lewis

DS might have non-paying members but trust me I ain’t one of ‘em.

Mark Albright

Sarah has been comfortable with Lester out in public for awhile now. Remember how at first she was kind of embarrassed to be seen with him, wondering what other people thought. Now she enjoys other people seeing her with him. To the point where she doesn't hesitate to accept the ring and intimately kiss him in a room full of people. It turns her on that other people might think she's too good for him. Of course, at this point, what doesn't turn her on?

Gee

I believe Sarah is turned on by Dan And Lester competing for her. Sarah May be pissed at Lester for lying and manipulating her and Dan but Lester will remind her that he owns her, that she belongs to him. This will make Sarah’s arousal peak and she will drip between her thighs for him. Sarah not knowing what Lester will do with her next, to cement his hold on her! This is what gives Lester all the control. In the end, Lester’s lies won’t matter. Sarah will lay back and spread her thighs wide open for him.

Mark Albright

He will tell her he told Dan the wrong room number because he didn't know how Dan would have reacted watching Jesse fuck her. "Besides, I'm tired of that little cuck always wanting to hang around, watching us."

Luster

Well a lot of people are thinking it! And someone might as well come out and say what garbage the story has turned into. It's literally the same thing every month with a little bone throne in here and there adding just enough of the same only in a different angle

Rjh200m

Gee - I agree with you in terms of Sarah’s thinking and what turns her on, but how does she reconcile this with her husband sitting in jail? If she lets Lester rationalize this away, then she is done, Lester has won.

Mark Albright

How about this? Sarah insists on going to see Dan in jail, so Lester goes with her and offers to put up bail. He insists he had nothing to do with Dan ending up in jail and she believes him. The police tell them Dan can't be released until Monday. The let Lester and Sarah see Dan for a few minutes. During the entire visit, Lester and Sarah are holding hands, as Sarah is now conditioned to not even think about it. Dan notices she is still wearing the engagement ring, but doesn't say anything about it. Sarah makes Dan thank Lester for bailing him out. Sarah and Lester go back to the hotel, leaving Dan with the image of them kissing as they walk away.

Gee

Hi RJH, At this time she doesn’t know. If Lester has her phone, he will delete those messages from Dan. I believe Dan cry for help will go unheard, until Lester has broken Sarah down completely. (2 days of non stop illicit and intense sex for Sarah. Nothing that the young married mother will ever be able to walk back) Sarah will find out when Lester allows. She will feel guilty and yes she will go and bail him out, with Lester’s permission of course. As to how the couple reconcile their marriage, family, friends and professional lives after all that has and will continue to happen, time will tell! I believe Sarah will be putty in Lester’s hands. She will continue to fall to her knees with just a domineering look from Lester. She will obey Lester because she can’t get enough

Richardcat

And hopefully the end is near. I’m 82 and may not live until the end of this story. 😊

Rjh200m

Richardcat - hold on a few more months, the end is near!

Gee

🤣🤣😉 We’ll all be gone from getting to many shots away

Rjh200m

It’s very interesting to read earlier chapters to see Sarah’s thoughts “way back when” and how they basically set the stage for her behavior in later chapters. Here are two examples - First is when Lester and Sarah were in his SUV in Chapter 12 with the stranger watching; the stranger says “Girl, why are you wasting your time on a fat man like that? Why don't you hop your ass on out and join me in my car? I'll show you a real good time. We can go right now" Sarah grabbed a condom package and, reached up and undid the clasp on her skirt, letting it fall to her ankles. She turned and ripped open the condom package and rolled the condom down Lester's large cock.. “Tempting...but Lester just gets me off so well. I'm not going to give that up. He may be big but he knows exactly how to please a woman." If she did not want to give up Lester’s cock back then, she certainly will not want to give it up now! The second is a quote from Sarah back in Chapter 9 that does not augur well for Dan right now….the quote is Sarah responding to Dan after he tells her how he got Jesse fired in retaliation for Jesse tricking Sarah into going into Lester’s room to get fucked…. 'Dan, I...," Sarah hesitated, trying to find her thoughts. "Is it wrong that I'm kind of turned on by how diabolical you are? Can you imagine how she will feel when she learns of all of Lester’s machinations including getting Dan thrown in jail. She may orgasm right on the spot after hearing about it!

Roleplay Literate

Im begging. Please give Dan some slack. Let him stand up to Lester and take back some dignity and agency. Take Lester down a peg because that man is horrible and wants to literally get Sarah and Dan's kids kidnapped to get rid of them! We need more balance! (But of course this is your story so do what you want. Just venting my frustrations as a reader.)

Roleplay Literate

Also. Anyone know when we found out Sarah was still on birth control?

Mark Albright

I think Lester is going to start selectively telling her some of the things he's done. It might not necessarily be the whole truth, but his version of it.

Mr Shuttlesworth

Chapter 24 - whilst Jessie is fucking her, Lester gets her to admit it. There was also a time where she alluded to it when discussing things with Dan. This was only a few chapters ago,

Charlie_Chuckles

Would love to see Lizzie involved soon to push Sarah into have Lester’s baby. Could be arranged easily by Lester. The temptation of being rid of Lester forever and the deletion of the remaining videos would outweigh any self doubts or guilty conscience she may have in assisting Lester this one last time.

Chris

Agreed. I don't care at all about Jesse, but Lizzie coming back could add a very interesting competitive dynamic and it doesn't hurt that Lizzie's chapter was one of the hottest in the story.

Rjh200m

Lester would tell Sarah that Lizzie wants him back and he is considering it. That they have agreed to have a baby and be exclusive. Sarah does not want to lose Lester so she may agree to get pregnant.

Mark Albright

Remember how easily Lizzie was manipulated by Lester before. He lured her back with the promise of videos, then when she woke up and he was fucking her she made no attempt to stop him. And then went along with telling Sarah what Lester wanted her to because he said there might be more videos. So I could see Lester using her again to make Sarah jealous. A really hot scene in the hotel, where Lizzie and Sarah compete for Lester's cock. Sarah will agree to say and do anything Lester tells her to. Including having his baby. There are many unknowns to how this story ends, but it seems apparent that Sarah will be carrying Lester's baby at some point, and not accidentally.

Thomas matchett

Not to sure about this chapter , it seemed to lack something , But. Dan finally twigging about hacking of company’s and his pc , what else will twig, that was good. But also some of the story is getting a-bit repetitive, maybe it’s time to wrap it up me thinks

Ken Cara

Anyone consider the possibility of Sarah carrying Jesse's baby instead of Lester's? It would make for delicious irony if that were to happen. After all of Lester's devious planning and machinations to restore Sarah's fertility, only to have a lesser man (in both Lester and Dan's eyes) claim Lester's ultimate prize would be quite upsetting for both men. It would, however, be poetic justice for Jesse to be the one to impregnate her because as shown in chapter 24 there appears to be a real romantic attraction between the two. Jesse appears to be in love with Sarah and should be the father of her child.

Ken Cara

On another another level of irony, it would be fitting for Dan to grow enough "stones" and smarts to outwit Lester and bring about his eventual downfall only to lose his wife to a lesser man, Jesse, whom he has utter distain. Truly the stuff of the great paperback love story novels that used to grace the grocery store checkout isles.

Mark Albright

That's the kind of outside-the-box thinking this story could use. Lester could get Jesse a job at the hospital to annoy Dan. Then Dan finds out stuff to take Lester out. Dan moves back to Middleton, thinking all is well now. Except Sarah has to work late quite often with her new co-worker, Jesse. And she likes to call Dan "Jesse" when they role play.

Rjh200m

I think a Sarah and Jesse relationship is possible. Jesse is wealthy, he is young, and he is attractive and in shape. All things Sarah likes. Plus she loves his dick, another key attribute., and she knows that he really likes her and that she can manipulate him. But this assumes that Sarah’s marriage to Dan fails (this is certainly possible) and that Sarah finally sees the evil side of Lester. It also assumes that Lester stops pursuing Sarah, which is very unlikely. Lester will not give up Sarah unless he is forced to do so.

MV

But......every married woman would know that the initial lust at the start of a relationship dies off. I'm sure she's intelligent enough to know that Jesse's Urges wouldn't stay the same forever. I'm sure Dan was a thrusting stud for her at the start? I'd expect her to prefer to have Dan as Dad at home, but to have freedom to date Jesse and others.

Gee

Hey readers Remember when Lester tried to enter Dan and Sarah’s home and could not gain access, due to Dan changing the locks. Remember Lester received a work email and that at first annoyed him. Lester hates reading these trivial emails but this email made him smile with delight. Perhaps Sarah is now Lester’s administrative assistant, courtesy of the new CEO!!! Sarah will be certainly working under Lester’s direction moving forward. Her time will be spent on her knees sucking Lester’s huge cock or over his desk being ridden and sired. I think Lester will have Sarah worshipping him even more. As Sarah’s responsibilities and authority are stripped away from her, she will begin to feel even smaller and worthless than she already does. Sarah will seek out Lester’s sexing of her to cope with the stress!

Rjh200m

MV, That makes a lot of sense, but I think that if Sarah wants to have any freedom, Lester needs to be out of the picture.

Mark Albright

She'll get excited bringing him coke and cheetos every morning, wearing sexy outfits for him, calling him Boss or Mr. Marshall.

Richardcat

I totally agree. Although she may like having sex with Jesse he is not capable of dominating her like Lester does. That domination which goes with his submissive desires and his big dick will keep her under Lester’s control unless something happens to Lester.

KB

I just want to see more of Sarah’s personal life to be brought down with her.

Rjh200m

I just don’t see Sarah accepting working for Lester, especially if she is relegated to an “assistant” role. This would strip Sarah of any professional pride she has and would demean her in the workplace in front of colleagues that she has known for a long time. But this view may be based on the Sarah we have seen in earlier chapters who wanted to be successful in the workplace and really wanted the CEO job and was very upset when she was not even considered for it. But the Sarah of chapter 24 - who accepts a ring and proposal from Lester in public and agrees to getting blindfold and fucked throughout the night - might very well accept being Lester’s sex toy at work. Plus she can’t afford to be unemployed!

MV

Agreed. I'm still not happy with the speed of Sarah's apparent transformation in 24, though, but we'll have to see how she acts in the confrontations in 25 (unless Lester keeps Sarah and himself out of Dan's reach, so there aren't any). In 23, although she said all the 'I love you' stuff, it was always in the throws of sex, as usual. We still had zero proof that she felt real affection for him. Suddenly, in 24, she's catching real feelings for him. Life doesn't happen like that, and this is exactly what I was concerned about Don doing. If we are seriously to believe that she is really falling for Lester, Don should have started to write her thoughts on that 2 or 3 chapters ago, and started to build them up.

Gee

Sarah has gradually seen her authority and responsibilities stripped from her by the current CEO and new HR Head. Sarah Ihas lost her office and is relegated to a cubicle. She most definitely needs her job as she knows she needs to keep her daughters lives as normal as possible. Regardless of her and Dan’s adult personal and professional lives falling off a cliff. Sarah has even hinted at going into business with Lester with a new side hustle, that potentially could be a great earner. Dan completely shut that down. I think that Lester has already created a side plan for Sarah. One that may shock her! One that she may have no choice , other than to participate in! I believe Lester will introduce Sarah to this side hustle, due to a desperate financial need. Lester would use this persuasion before blackmail. This is why I believe Lester is introducing so many male partners into his and Sarah’s sex dates. Lester is turned on by degrading Sarah. The muddier she gets, the less chance she will be able to recover! Lester will televise Sarah’s debauchery to his clients, make a shit load of money, Sarah will love the sexually intense stimulus and the money that comes from it. Then Lester can impregnate Sarah as a finale to his complete domination of Sarah and Dan.

Rjh200m

I agree that the timing is a little bumpy and a lot happened in Chapter 24. But to be fair to DS, we saw indications of it in previous chapters, Sarah enjoying the dates with Lester (talking during meals), how unpredictable Lester is, how he surprises her with the intimacy and massage and cooking dinner, how aggressive he was with her former boss., as well as her basically turning to Lester every time she felt stressed with work, her and Dan’s financial condition, and the working and taking care of the kids during the week. And there was numerous times when Sarah said to herself that she was becoming drawn to Lester despite his rough edges. So, it’s not unreasonable to see that Sarah’s feelings for Lester are growing. But not having more of Sarah’s internal thoughts is frustrating because we are constantly struggling with what you mention - how much of it is sex-induced and how much of it is her true feelings when she is not horny. I still find the restaurant scene in chapter 24 hard to believe - Sarah enthusiastically saying yes to Lester’s marriage proposal (as portrayed from Dan’s perspective). I’m not saying it was genuine, but even that fact that she “played the part” was somewhat strange.

MV

Definitely. All along, I've wanted Don to keep the characters true to who they've been throughput the story for them to be believable. Yes, there have been some changes in her because of everything that's happened, but she showed in the apartment ("Play nice, Lester") that sensible Sarah is still in there, and she didn't want to hurt Dan. I feel the restaurant scene didn't fit well with that, because the Sarah in the apartment wouldn't want to belittle Dan like that, imo. Others may think it's nothing, but it just doesn't sit well with me, how DS is writing the changes in her. It's just my opinion, but it's what I've been worried about for a while, because when the real confrontations start, I feel she'll act out of character for the 'real' Sarah.

Ken Cara

I'm not suggesting that Sarah ends up with Jesse, rather just postulating the irony that he becomes the father of her child. Unlike Lester who has malicious intent, Jesse appears to have genuine affection for her... and she seems to know it. In times of extreme duress, women tend to bond with men who show them affection, and it appears that Dan (at least in the short term) will be in no mood for tenderness. I suspect that Dan’s time going forward will be a mission to undermine/destroy Lester. He’s much too wounded now to consider Sarah’s feelings. Lester will likely plant the notion in Sarah’s mind that Dan is jealous and irrational, but in his arrogance undoubtably will underestimate Dan’s abilities much to his detriment. Sarah in the meanwhile will be caught in a tangled web of having to deal with a pissed off hubby and a boyfriend, Lester, who compromises her position in everything (i.e., marriage, work, family and self image). As much as she loves the sex… her life is falling apart. What I’m suggesting is that while Dan and Lester are battling for control, it’s Jesse whom everyone underestimated that ultimately wins the prize of Sarah's heart and womb because he becomes her emotional rock. Lester in the end will fall because evil usually over extends itself and Dan will likely prevail… but at great cost. His wife is now pregnant and in love with a guy, Jesse, everyone underestimated. Sarah and Dan will stay married… but Dan will have to live with Sarah and Jesse being an out of wedlock couple with a child - an unsettling ironic consequence of his unbridled cuckold behavior.

Rjh200m

While she tried to calm things down between Lester and Dan in the apartment, she did give in pretty quickly to Lester’s request for a hello kiss. Dan was clearly agitated by Lester asking and tensed up. But Sarah quickly gave Dan the stare to tell him to back off. And the kiss with Lester seemed excessive. At least Dan thought so. But again, the question is did Sarah do it to excite Dan, or did she do it to please Lester, or did she do it because she genuinely wanted to. Maybe a combination of all three. But it seemed that Dan was taken aback by it.

MV

I think a combination of all three, as you suggest. However, as I've said elsewhere, I expect things to change going forwards. Now that pennies are dropping for Dan, he must start speaking up, not just being a paralysed hard-on. She may not stop what she's doing, initially, but it will be on the clear understanding that she's defying Dan. When that happens, and it becomes crystal clear to Dan that he could lose her, then the whole situation must surely change.

Arc

*This* is what makes it a 'toxic attraction'! Sarah"s already discovering that humiliating Dan turns her on; things will finally turn the corner in this NTR story when she willingly starts conspiring with Lester and participating in sabotaging and demeaning Dan. It seems like a lot of old school romantics here have forgotten that a major aspect of the NTR genre is that the cuck invariably loses the girl to the antagonist! Sarah's already falling for Lester, now we need to see her start leaning into it, and putting Dan in his place as 2nd-fiddle (at best!)

Royston smith

Evening gentlemen. You know sometimes I surprise myself. I know this is a little self indulgent but Permit me to re-issue what I consider now to be an uncannily accurate prediction of 24. Then I will predict the action in 25 in future posts (although it would be beyond uncanny if I did it again). On 9th November I posted the below, well before the release of alpha 24. My prediction of Jesse being the “Stranger” was spot on. So, ch 24 offers up some intriguing possibilities. In order to game them let us assemble the evidence from previous chapters. In the following I am assuming that Lester will be the prime mover of events. This may be a false assumption, but as it has proved correct throughout most of the series, I think not. So, what do we know? 1. Lester has said he may ask Sarah to agree on a dare while they are out. 2. Lester has said he will make her fuck someone she hates. 3. Lester has said the next time she comes to Chicago , he is going to book a hotel room and have Sarah fuck another man in front of him and then fuck her himself all night 4. He has also said, at the end of 23 that he was going to “knock Dan down a few pegs. It felt fitting to do that next”. He could combine 1,2,3,4 in some way, but 3 and 4 have to be the focus in my opinion, as Lester never forgets and never forgives. He is going to pay Dan back for humiliating him by throwing him out of his house a couple of chapters back. Its for this reason I think Jesse will be Lester’s mystery man who fucks Sarah. I think when Jesse feels the heat over the Lincoln group hack he will run to Lester and apologise and try to get back in his good books so he can get another crack at Sarah and ask for protection from the LG. He may also have to spill the beans on what type of project the LG are working-on and give Lester the lowdown on Byron in return for Lester’s cooperation. I know Lester is pissed at Jesse but he was his go to man in 22 precisely because he thought he was a controllable variable. Now he is in play again he would be the ideal pawn to exploit. Also, Lester knows Dan loathes Jesse, so using him fits with his desire to knock Dan down a peg or two. Not only will he have made Sarah fuck another man without Dan being present it will be Dan’s nemesis Jesse. Touche! It also makes sense viewed from the internal logic of the story and Sarah’s perspective. Jesse has figured throughout the series in important ways. He has driven the plot forward on 2 occasions so far, so why not one more time. Sarah seems intrigued by him too and the size of his cock, and knows it will piss Dan off, so she will want to lean into the bad girl trope and do it. Remember how she taunted Dan in 22 about Jesse having a better job than him. I can imagine Lester ringing Dan and have him listen in to Sarah and Jesse going to it, just to punish Dan or something similar.

Rjh200m

Perhaps when Lester and Sarah are finished with their incredible sex hotel room weekend, they visit Dan in jail. She still has Lester’s ring on and while she is fine with bailing Dan out, her and Lester have some conditions that Dan needs to agree to. While talking, Dan notices how Sarah is discretely rubbing Lester’s cock with her new ring shining brightly.

MV

I can't see him agreeing to conditions, tbh.

Rjh200m

Kudos to you Royston! We will expect the same level of accuracy for your Chapter 25 predictions! The “knocking down Dan a few pegs” is interesting. Getting him thrown in jail might have exceeded what you thought Lester would do, but I would bet that Lester recorded the session with Jesse and will send it to Dan to basically rub salt in the wound!

MV

And, of course, if she tries to lie to Dan, initially, about Jesse being the one, it's another nail in the coffin, for now, of them still being a team.

Mark Albright

Maybe you're the Silver Whisperer, Royston. If so, cook something good up for the next chapter, please. I think it's time for Sarah and Lester to have a much more open relationship, both in Chicago and Middleton. Dan needs to be plotting his next move home alone in the apartment while Lester and Sarah carry on unabashed at the hospital, Lester's hotel room, even in the house, where Dan catches them with his new cameras.

Darrow

Kudos. You called it. I thought Jesse was too obvious, and too centered on Dan, but you got it right. Lester's revenge may continue to unfold, and it may well involve Sarah fucking someone she hates. Now that he's opened her up to strange cocks and completely popped that cherry, I wouldn't be surprised if he uses her, even convinces her to be used, in a blackmail scheme to compromise Thornhill. Or Otis may be getting lucky. As for Dan... we can count on further humiliations.

Rjh200m

In the next chapter, we will see in what condition Sarah leaves the hotel room and what her emotional state is. Lester is clearly ramping up the intensity of his efforts to control her and neutralize Dan. But here are a few signs that Sarah is crossing the threshold to complete control by Lester (I am excluding radical stuff like Sarah showing up at the jail and saying to Dan that “Daddy says that you need to stay in jail a few more days to learn your lesson”!). We will know that this is happening if - - She is not completely devastated to learn that Dan is in jail and does not immediately insist on going to see him, no matter what Lester says. - She, in any way, tries to claim that Dan winding up in jail was an innocent mistake, was because he got drunk, or that Lester had nothing to do with it. - The next time Sarah sees Dan, she still has Lester’s ring on. - She tells Dan that her enthusiastic response in the restaurant to Lester’s ring and proposal was not to embarrass Lester and that she was actually touched by what he did. - She says to Dan that Jesse is not a bad guy and that she really liked getting fucked by him. - She reverses course and agrees to carpool with Lester between Middleton and Chicago. - She accepts working for Lester at the hospital without any push back or deciding to immediately look for another job.

Rjh200m

Oh and by the way, I think there is a flaw in Lester’s strategic planning and logic. In Chapter 14, Lester shows up in his tuxedo and fucks Sarah to numerous orgasms in her wedding dress on her bed…. In Chapter 24, he gives her an engagement ring and proposes to her…. Shouldn’t this be in the reverse order!? Or perhaps there is a method to his madness!

Mark Albright

One passage that stood out to me that no one else has commented on comes from Sarah's thought process. As she is sucking on Lester's cock, it says "she knew what her man wanted." If she is now thinking of Lester as "her man" he may have already succeeded in making her his. Earlier she had thought of Dan and Lester as "her men." Sounds like Dan may be on the outside looking in now.

Rjh200m

Yes….and as you have been alluding to for a while, next stop after the honeymoon is the maternity ward!

J Lewis

My last view on the current progress of TA until 25 is published is 24 (and perhaps 25) was Lester’s final assault in completing Sarah’s corruption. He acknowledged that the current status quo is over. Makes you wonder if Dan is kicked out of the apartment or if Dan even entertains the idea of still living there. Every person has their limits. Hopefully 25 will be one of the all timers in this story. Just pray it isn’t DS version of Al Capone’s vault.

Rjh200m

For the final corruption of Sarah to take place, there has to be a Sarah - Dan rupture such that she no longer considers his wishes, requests or preferences when it comes to her relationship with Lester. This goes back to what Lester wants…he wants Sarah when he wants her…and he wants Sarah to show him affection whenever she wants without her feeling any guilt or restraints, basically without her worrying at all about Dan or even considering Dan. I don’t think it’s enough for Lester to have Dan withdraw from Sarah. What Lester really wants is for Sarah to withdraw from Dan in favor of Lester and Sarah to freely and openly acknowledge that and fully embrace it. It looks like Lester’s goal is getting closer and closer, but he is not there yet. But there will need to be some surprising developments from Dan and Sarah to reverse the current course.

Mark Albright

I feel like we've been trying to see inside of the vault for four or five chapters now. In fact, it feels like he opens one vault only to find a smaller safe inside the vault. Enough of the slow burn, Don. Light the damn 🔥.

J Lewis

The story at times is like one of those Russian nested dolls. You unscrew the top of one doll and inside is another and then another and so forth.

Royston smith

So, my fellow members of the Silververse, how will things go down in 25? Shall we game it? This is a long one (as Sarah always says to Lester), so pin back your lug holes and listen carefully. Let’s focus initially on what we know is going to happen. We know Lester is going to fuck Sarah for the rest of the night, as in 23, Lester says:” I’m booking us a hotel room, and you’re going to fuck someone else in front of me. And then I’m going to fuck you all night.” Also, at the end of 24 we have Lester saying:”Time for round two. You’re going to be busy all night.” In the quote from 23 Lester says: “I’m going to fuck you all night”, not we. So, It seems that Jesse’s involvement will be terminated by Lester. However”round 2” could imply Jesse will join in. My take on this is Lester will not want Jesse there all night. He will want to work on Sarah on his own. So, Jesse will be dismissed. I don’t think it will just be all night, however, he will want to work on her the whole weekend whilst Dan lingers in jail. He tells us that he knew Dan was getting too close to figuring out the Jesse angle, so he decides to come out in the open and use his “pawn” Jesse to control the new normal/status quo going forward. That implies to me he will want as much time with Sarah as possible so he can make his play for her. To convince her that Lester is her man and she is his girl. It also implies that he will want to keep Dan in jail as long as possible and prevent Sarah finding out about his predicament. In order to achieve this he will have Ned make a statement that amounts to implicating Dan in “disorderly conduct”, which can carry a maximum jail term of 30 days. However, it would more usually be settled with a fine, probation or a supervision order. If the latter no criminal record would ensue, but if the former two, then it would. This may be complicated by the “dark drink” which I think was spiked with a drug such as ghb or rohypnol. Both are odourless, colourless and tasteless. Dan gets drunk on one beer and becomes uncoordinated, dizzy, dry mouthed and has slurred speech. All symptoms of such drugs, mimicking drunkenness, but acting quicker than alcohol. If the police do a urine or sweat test this may be revealed, although these drugs leave the body pretty quickly. Whatever the outcome Dan may face the loss of his job if he is convicted of a criminal offence. Lester is certain to either want him out of the way in jail or, at the very least, to ruin his financial standing through job loss and a criminal record. He will thus turn the screw as much as he can through Ned,as his proxy, pressing charges. This will give Lester time to work on Sarah. Sarah is on the edge. She pretends to herself she isn’t, but she is. She didn’t want Lester to reveal all that had happened to Dan, cutting him off when he was going to tell him she promised to fuck a stranger. She unconsciously offers herself to Lester as soon as she gets to the apartment:”You know, that sounds nice,” Sarah stretched her hands over her head, still stiff from the car. Her t-shirt rode up and exposed her midsection. Dan caught Lester’s eyes as they roamed over her exposed skin. “It was a long ride, I could use a little wine.” Then she gets lost in the kiss with Lester and is flustered when Dan notices. When she goes into his room “she couldn’t help but feel like Julia Roberts in pretty woman, being showered in gifts and taken care of. It was an odd feeling that she didn’t quite know how to categorize in her mind. The only clear thing to her was that she attributed the feeling towards Lester. Despite his numerous flaws and abrasive attitude, she couldn’t help but feel a certain fondness for him. And there was a physical longing that she couldn’t deny either”.So she is near to the point where she will be making decisions solely with her pussy. This will be Lester’s pitch to Sarah: Only I can satisfy your physical and emotional needs. You are mine now. This was the clear implication of his speech to Sarah about the ring:”That’s a real diamond baby. Nothing but the best for my woman. You should wear it to work.” “I’m not sure about that. People will notice.” “That’s what makes it so hot. People will see it, and you’ll know that I own you.” “That's not what wedding rings symbolize, Lester.” “Sure they do. Maybe not in this PG bullshit era we live in now where everything is Disneyfied. But back in the day, yeah, it was. It meant you’re my property.” She doesn’t answer because she knows it is true. Notice she doesn’t outright say she wont wear it, just people will notice. She stares at him over her wine glass, and deep down she knows it is now what she wants. It just remains for Lester to prove it to her over the weekend. This I think he will do. I am not sure exactly how, but it will happen. Lester can be very persuasive, as we know. He will also poison her against Dan by painting him as a drunken ne’er do well. A loser who can’t provide for her or satisfy her sexual needs. A guy with a secret drug problem he has kept from her. At the end of the weekend he will persuade her to carpool. At the hospital he will make her wear his ring and install her in his office. He will switch her birth control pills for dud ones using the intelligence provided by an email he has received from work:”He stopped on one that made him raise an eyebrow. Then a wicked grin crept onto his face.It looks like an opportunity to get past the William’s locked doors just presented itself. The universe truly was on his side”. It may not happen in 25, but Sarah will be impregnated by Lester soon, once he has neutralised her birth control measures. Here endeth my prediction for what it’s worth. Let’s hear yours.

Rjh200m

Royston - great stuff. I can’t argue against Lester being successful based on what has happened to date. But based on your scenarios, Sarah would have to see Lester as a viable partner outside of the bedroom. This is certainly possible, but it won’t be sex-induced, it would be the result of Sarah looking at Lester from a much wider perspective. Again this is reasonable based on what she knows about him and the time they have spent together not fucking. But a question for you. What possible work email could Lester see that would make him think that he has a viable path to switch Sarah’s birth control pills? As for predictions….what could turn the tide for Lester so that Sarah sees him as a viable partner and alternative to Dan? It won’t be the sex (she already has that). It will be the realization that Lester can provide her and the girls with a solid financial foundation and security. No more living day to day. Plus, Sarah likes getting the fancy stuff, clothes, jewelry, etc. She already said to Dan the possibility of her going into business with Lester, I think she will revisit this and seriously consider it, especially since she will be working with Lester at the hospital. And remember how impressed she was with Lester’s $200,000 feet for rescuing the hospital’s IT system, and her thought of how such an amount could change her (their - her and Dan) life.

Mark Albright

In conjunction with what you both conjecture I think Lester will focus most of the rest of the weekend on romancing and spoiling Sarah. He will treat her to a massage at the hotel, maybe a couple's massage, take her shopping, buy her extravagant gifts and jewelry, take her to a fancy restaurant. Of course, at every place they go to he will introduce her as his fiancee. Any lingering resistance to that reference that she had will fade away. Eventually she will start referring to him as her fiancee and showing off the ring to people. There will be numerous public displays of affection to the point where it seems quite natural to her. Then at night he will take her back to the hotel to reinforce his physical control over her, maybe even tying her up to have her thoroughly submit to him. Meanwhile Dan has figured out lots of avenues to pursue to expose Lester once he gets out of jail. The problem being that by the time he gathers enough evidence, it will likely be too late. Sarah will have gotten used to the feeling of belonging to Lester and liking that feeling.

Gee

I believe you all have some correct scenarios that will play out. Keep in mind that Lester is a spider that is immersed in a dark underworld. His soul is tainted by narcissism, sociopathic tendencies, computer hacking, theft, scams, power, corruption, sex, manipulation, black mail, drugging, filming and selling those videos to clients. Ever since he found or suspected that Sarah was on birth control, he has guided Dan and Sarah to this most important cross road in their marriage. If Lester succeeds, Dan will be an unwilling but helpless cuckold. Sarah will fall willingly into sexual perversion and depravity. Lester orchestrated the date night so that Dan would be out of the picture for the whole week end after his arrest. Lester intended to take Sarah for the whole week end from the start. Even Lester has to rest between dumping his massive cum loads in Sarah. This is where Jesse comes in. Round 2 has Lester ready to fuck Sarah till she passes out. I believe this is when Lester and Jesse will spit roast and DP Sarah. While she is in a sexually catatonic state, she will be helpless and give in completely. Lester is going to make the most of this opportunity to addict Sarah to sex with him & strangers because it turns him on! Sarah May resent Lester for it but the intensity of her bodies responses to Lester’s ministrations, will override her rational mind from this point in time, moving forward. Even after finding out about Dan’s where abouts! Lester uses the trappings of wealth to spoil Sarah because he understands that it will appeal to her deepest evolutionary physiology when choosing a mate. -Lester fucks her the best. -Lester creates sexual encounters that explode Sarah’s sexual expectations by fucking her in numerous locations, introduced strangers, made her fuck while talking to her father on the phone etc -Lester can provide a more lavish life style. -Lester plans his dates better. -Lester buys her lingerie, outfits & evening wear that fit her to a tee! -Lester buys her a more expensive, larger and higher quality engagement ring. Etc Lester not only wants to win Sarah from Dan. He wants to own her completely. To do this he will muddy her so badly, that she will be broken in as his submissive sex slave. Engaged - yes! Shared around and turned out like a common whore -yes! Impregnated - yes Filmed and sold to the highest bidders - possibly I have always believed Lester gets off on breaking strong, beautiful, intelligent women down because of his youthful resentment and humiliation he feels suffered from them. He may wish to marry Sarah on some level but his baser side of his persona will win out. He has spent years resenting, targeting, hurting, blackmailing, sexing impregnating, filming, selling & manipulating them. This is what turns Lester on. There is no way Lester has turned a corner all of a sudden. This is my take on chapter 25 moving forward Your thoughts readers?

Rjh200m

Sounds like it’s going to be a very busy next few days for Sarah! Will be interesting to see how long it goes before she learns about Dan.

Mark Albright

I also think Lester should open a joint checking account with Sarah with some large amount of money in it. Knowing she doesn't have to worry about money any more could be a real aphrodesiac for her.

Rjh200m

Here is a variation of the Lester wins scenario - let’s say that Sarah survives the onslaught by Lester this weekend and comes to her senses. She is very upset at him for getting Dan thrown in jail, she takes his ring off and places it on the table. She realizes how out of control she has been. Her and Dan realize they need to reengage and focus on them and their kids. Lester being very strategic, does not push the issue. He stays away from Sarah at work and does not text or talk to her. But he knows that Sarah gets hornier and hornier when they don’t have sex. We have seen this in the story many times. Dan and Sarah are doing great. They look forward to a hospital charity event. They show up looking fabulous and are mingling with the crowd. But then they see Lester, who is in his badly fitting, rented tuxedo. Now Lester turns his full attention to Sarah, does all the things he knows turns her on. Including getting close when she is not next to anyone to whisper things in here ear, does she miss him? Has she thought about him? Is Dan giving her what she needs? Of course this drives Sarah into a hyper state of horniness. She starts glancing at Lester’s crotch area, she sees the bulge. Then Lester sets it up so that Dan is talking with some folks about a business opportunity. Lester gets Sarah alone somewhere in the building and fucks her senseless. In and out of her very classy charity event-type dress. Lester is a little rough with her, almost punishing her for wanting to go back to Dan. At the end, Sarah is slumped in a chair totally exhausted, Lester’s cum is all over her. She does her best to look presentable and rejoins the party. She sees Dan and Dan sees her. Both know immediately what happened…..and it occurs to both that she cannot go long without getting fucked by Lester, that their plan to go back to their “traditional” relationship is just not happening. And then Dan notices that Sarah has Lester’s ring on again,….

J Lewis

Only problem with this scenario is another rinse and repeat reconciliation of Dan and Sarah ie status quo. DS in his writings in 24 acknowledges that the current status quo is finished. So Dan’s and Sarah’s “traditional” relationship is likely over now or at the end of the upcoming chapter. I am anxiously waiting Dan’s and Sarah’s next conversation after Sarah leaves the hotel. FYI based on monthly release dates of TA chapters Chapter 25 draft has 88% probability of being released NLT Saturday 21st with most likely date of the 20th but maybe DS gives everyone a early XMAS gift and pushes out earlier this week so final can go out prior to 25th.

Mark Albright

I like your scenario, RJ, but agree with J Lewis it's probably gone too far for that. What if the next morning Sarah sees Dan has called, but decides she doesn't want to hear him whining like after the hospital parking lot fun.. So she décides to listen to his message later. Besides, she thinks, she's still on her date with Lester and she wants to see what he has planned for her next. Lester keeps her busy doing some of what we've all suggested, and before she realizes it, the date has extended to the second night. She remembers Lester said he had other plans for the next night, but she's glad he chose her instead.

Royston smith

Rj, as usual, good points well made. Point 1: the email. Yes, I had puzzled over that. After much head scratching I think it will be an email from another head of department, to Lester as head of IT. It will be Sarah’s new HoD boss passing on a request from Sarah to homework on a certain day. Lester, as her new boss, will have it in his power to grant her this. He will use it as an excuse to check up on her at her home. Point2: yes, I agree it seems a stretch for Sarah to capitulate emotionally and admit she feels romantically attracted to Lester as the story stands now. But I am sure Lester has thought about that. He will play into her obvious love of her new diamond ring, new dresses, romantic meals and I think he will use his ace, which is to suggest a collaboration of some sort to oust Richard from his position in the hospital. Remember he said he was going to dig up dirt on him? Well I am sure he has. Sarah will jump at the chance to get her own back and win back her position of influence at the hospital. But this will make her not just emotionally but financially dependent on Lester.

Royston smith

I like your general point Mark. I think Lester will definitely wine, dine and flash his money about with Sarah. It is definitely an aphrodisiac for her. She loves expensive, classy clothes and jewellery. I like the tying up scenario, too, but not sure it will happen so soon. You know how Don likes to drip feed different sexual scenarios.

Royston smith

Gee, I agree with all of what you are saying apart from the Jesse bit. I cant see Lester sharing her all night. He wants to work on her both sexually and romantically, so having Jesse there will get in his way. Much as I would like a dp scene! As to the dark side of Lester, I see his crusade to possess Sarah as his ultimate conquest. Remember his constant refrain has been: “Sarah was not like other girls. What a piece of work is Sarah Williams”. He wants to show the “Rubes” that life is much more dangerous than they realise, once they step out of their safe zone into barbarian territory. To him, Sarah is a denizen of rubeville gone rogue under his tutelage. It is his ultimate victory, to make a loving wife and mother submit to him. After all the suffering of his adolescent years he finally has a beautiful woman on his arm who hasn’t been drugged or blackmailed. Who willingly submits to him. And what a woman! Every man would give their right arm for her. Just to be in her company would stiffen the organ of any man. I think his business venture with Sarah may ultimately be selling videos of their love making with her knowledge and cutting her in with the profits. I don’t think it would take much persuasion to persuade her to do that a few chapters down the line.

Royston smith

So, there are still some interesting loose ends from the last chapter. How will they be resolved? 1) Sarah now knows that Dan wasn’t there in the room. She also knows that Jesse knows Lester. When Lester stops fucking her, what will she make of all that?How will Lester explain it? Will he confess he has deceived her? Or, will he spin her another yarn? I think he will admit he knows Jesse, but spin it so it looks like he was competing with Dan. He knows the competition between the two men for her affections turns her on. Will she be angry with him? Possibly. But Lester can be very persuasive and is good at acting the part. I think he will get over that bump without too much trouble.

Royston smith

2) Dan’s eureka moment. So he has tumbled to the hacks and Lester’s monitoring of his internet usage and his emails. Even the fake job application. But he still hasn’t worked out that Lester is video recording and listening in to all Dan and Sarah’s movements in the flat. But he will. Consider this passage from 24: “Dan had ordered the hidden cameras that would come in soon. He’d put them in the house to be able to see everything that happened. They got them sent to his office, not wanting Lester to see them. He didn’t want Lester to know about them. They would trick anybody; the cameras disguised as outlets looked exactly the same as the regular outlets in the apartment. No one would be able to tell the difference”. Exactly, Dan. You haven’t been able to tell the difference but now you will, as you realise Lester has installed those same cameras you have ordered for your home in the apartment. When Dan realises this he will be even more determined to break Lester’s power over them. But will he be able to convince Sarah?

Rjh200m

Royston, MA, J Lewis, Gee - all excellent points! Royston - I really like your psychological analysis of Lester, I agree 100% with your reasoning as to why he wants to conquer Sarah.

Rjh200m

Say Dan uncovers all of this and has the opportunity to share the information with Sarah in a normal environment, i.e., outside of the sexual haze that Lester envelops her in. How will she react? Will she be revolted by his behavior? Or will she see it as an immense effort by Lester to win her over no matter what it takes? This could really turn her on, as we know she likes the intense focus of men on her and their desire for her. It might turn her on enough to overlook what Lester has done to Dan. It might even turn her on enough to negate her supposed demand for transparency and truth, especially since she has been recently lacking in these attributes with Dan.

Mark Albright

I think one of the lessons Sarah has learned from Lester is that lying and deceit are ok when used to achieve something you want. She will see Lester's actions as proof of how much he wants her. And she will decide it's easier just to lie to Dan than hear him whine.

Gee

Hi Royston smith and fellow readers! Your thoughts please I believe you all have some correct scenarios that possibly will play out. Keep in mind that Lester is a spider that is immersed in a dark underworld. His soul is tainted by narcissism, sociopathic tendencies, computer hacking, theft, scams, power, corruption, sex, manipulation, black mail, drugging, filming and selling those videos to clients. Ever since he found or suspected that Sarah was on birth control, he has guided Dan and Sarah to this most important cross road in their marriage. If Lester succeeds, Dan will be an unwilling but helpless cuckold. Sarah will fall willingly into sexual perversion and depravity. Lester orchestrated the date night so that Dan would be out of the picture for the whole week end after his arrest. Lester intended to take Sarah for the whole week end from the start. Even Lester has to rest between dumping his massive cum loads in Sarah. This is where Jesse comes in. Round 2 has Lester ready to fuck Sarah till she passes out. I believe this is when Lester and Jesse will spit roast and DP Sarah. While she is in a sexually catatonic state, she will be helpless and give in completely. Lester is going to make the most of this opportunity to addict Sarah to sex with him & strangers because it turns him on! Sarah May resent Lester for it but the intensity of her bodies responses to Lester’s ministrations, will override her rational mind from this point in time, moving forward. Even after finding out about Dan’s where abouts! Lester uses the trappings of wealth to spoil Sarah because he understands that it will appeal to her deepest evolutionary physiology when choosing a mate. -Lester fucks her the best. -Lester creates sexual encounters that explode Sarah’s sexual expectations by fucking her in numerous locations, introduced strangers, made her fuck while talking to her father on the phone etc -Lester can provide a more lavish life style. -Lester plans his dates better. -Lester buys her lingerie, outfits & evening wear that fit her to a tee! -Lester buys her a more expensive, larger and higher quality engagement ring. Etc Lester not only wants to win Sarah from Dan. He wants to own her completely. To do this he will muddy her so badly, that she will be broken in as his submissive sex slave. Engaged - yes! Shared around and turned out like a common whore -yes! Impregnated - yes Filmed and sold to the highest bidders - possibly I have always believed Lester gets off on breaking strong, beautiful, intelligent women down because of his youthful resentment and humiliation he feels suffered from them. He may wish to marry Sarah on some level but his baser side of his persona will win out. He has spent years resenting, targeting, hurting, blackmailing, sexing impregnating, filming, selling & manipulating them. This is what turns Lester on. There is no way Lester has turned a corner all of a sudden. This is my take on chapter 25 moving forward

Royston smith

Gee, I agree with all of what you are saying apart from the Jesse bit. I cant see Lester sharing her all night. He wants to work on her both sexually and romantically, so having Jesse there will get in his way. Much as I would like a dp scene! As to the dark side of Lester, I see his crusade to possess Sarah as his ultimate conquest. Remember his constant refrain has been: “Sarah was not like other girls. What a piece of work is Sarah Williams”. He wants to show the “Rubes” that life is much more dangerous than they realise, once they step out of their safe zone into barbarian territory. To him, Sarah is a denizen of rubeville gone rogue under his tutelage. It is his ultimate victory, to make a loving wife and mother submit to him. After all the suffering of his adolescent years he finally has a beautiful woman on his arm who hasn’t been drugged or blackmailed. Who willingly submits to him. And what a woman! Every man would give their right arm for her. Just to be in her company would stiffen the organ of any man. I think his business venture with Sarah may ultimately be selling videos of their love making with her knowledge and cutting her in with the profits. I don’t think it would take much persuasion to persuade her to do that a few chapters down the line.

Royston smith

So, one of my favourite characters from fiction is Emperor Palpatine. It’s interesting , therefore, that in 24 Lester is listening as “the imperial march blared out from the center console of Lester’s SUV”. Is Don telling us something here? Well let’s run a few EP quotes past you all: “Everything That Has Transpired Has Done So According To My Design.' Yes,that’s Lester, alright. “Power! Unlimited Power!' Again, definitely Lester. “Your Feeble Skills Are No Match For The Power Of The Dark Side.' Sounds familiar/Lester to Dan? I rest my case.

Royston smith

So, my fellow silverites, what do we make of the following passage? “there were still some wrinkles that needed to be ironed out. Sarah was still far more willful than Lester’s other conquests. Which made her fall all the more sweet. She had disobeyed him the night in the apartment with Vernon, sucking his cock even though Lester had told her not to. And then she had gone rogue in Minnesota with Byron, thinking she was the one in control of her body. That wasn’t the case any longer. She needed a reminder of that fact. And tonight was her punishment. In a way, she would only receive pleasure, but Lester had found that pain was never a good motivator. Sure, people would become compliant in the short run, but he was after deeper, lasting change. And that was more easily achieved through pleasure, something Sarah would be longing to experience again rather than simply avoiding pain. She would be a moth to his flame. Lester also wouldn’t have considered this route a few weeks ago. But since Sarah had kept her use of contraceptives secret, it did open up a new avenue for him. He didn’t need to worry about Jesse taking away his ultimate prize, at least not for the time being. Soon, Lester would eliminate Sarah’s pills, and then her precious fertility would be his to claim. Tonight being fucked by someone so beneath her would be her punishment. She had already debased herself with Vernon and Byron. She set herself on this path. The knowledge that she orgasmed with someone like him and took his seed would unlock new discoveries about herself that Lester would exploit. He just hoped that Jesse was up to the task”. So, to me this next ch 25, will be the climactic one. It will set the tone for the rest of this dark arc. The language Lester uses here lays bare his intentions: A”moth to his flame”. “Unlock new discoveries about herself”. It’s punishment for straying away from Lester, (his girl shouldn’t stray) but also pleasure (like she has never experienced before (2 cocks/constant, mind blowing comes). He is closing the circle/administering the final blows to Sarah and Dan’s relationship. After this weekend he intends that she will be truly his.

Mark Albright

The question then is, if he is successful, what does he intend to do with Sarah after she is his? Some, if not most, on here have speculated he will use her for profit and pleasure and then discard her. I think that the prospect of having a beautiful woman like Sarah at his beck and call will be something he doesn't want to get rid of. While marriage and day-to-day parenting seem like a stretch for him, I think he would be quite content to have Sarah remain married to Dan and for both of them to raise his kids. And Sarah would be his whenever he wanted, however he wanted. I think that would be his ultimate goal. But it's not possible for me to know how a mind like his actually works. So who knows?

Michael Haase

Dan is toast, he's no longer even a minor player in the story. No one cares if he's in jail, no one cares if Sarah denies him, no one cares if Sarah uses a cage on him, no one cares if Sarah lies to him, no one cares that he's lost. He's out of the story and the story is dead.

Royston smith

Hi Mark. Yes, that is a good question. I don’t think Lester has thought too far past making her his by achieving her complete sexual and psychological submission. He wants to make her pregnant, to seal the deal as it were. Does he really want to marry her? I think he does, but only to make her his in a full stop, end of sentence kind of way. He gives the impression he doesn’t care about societal norms, but I think he does in the sense of wanting to have a beautiful woman on his arm, who is willingly his, not coerced. Who has willingly taken his ring and has feelings for him. He feels it his validation against the rubes and jocks he so hates. Lester is a long term strategic planner. He told us he had a plan early on and I think, in his mind, he is near the end of part 2 of his plan. Part 1 was to fuck her part 2 was to make her his bitch. Note how he used that word in the last chapter for the first time. Whether he has a part 3 in mind I honestly don’t know. Don hasn’t revealed too much of Lester’s thinking beyond the complete corruption of Sarah trope. If I had to speculate I would say he will get her pregnant in order to force a breach between Sarah and Dan so they divorce. It also makes her “his”. He will then offer to marry her and long term I think he will continue her corruption by getting her to do sex videos with him and openly telling her he is going to sell them. Perhaps set up her own channel where he can showcase her.

Rjh200m

Royston, I agree that chapter 25 will be key. Couple of thoughts - To the best of my recollection, every time Sarah and Lester have sex, Sarah goes back to Dan, or Sarah has to go back to work or she leaves to do something else. Lester always wanted more and while Sarah would capitulate (sex in shower before work, sex the morning after in apartment), he always wanted her to stay. I think for this hotel date, after Lester fucks her all night, she will stay with him for the next day or so (assuming he figures out a way to keep Dan out of the picture). And perhaps even longer. This is key to Lester’s plan. Lester will literally fuck her to exhaustion at the hotel. He wants to completely overwhelm her sexually, both physically and emotionally. To include total obedience to him when it comes to her body and sexual satisfaction. This means Dan is off limits for her in terms of sex. Throughout the story, we have seen Lester create an alternative reality for Sarah - on the first date it was their wedding anniversary, on another date he made Sarah get up from her chair and bend over and kiss him to show people they were together, now he proposes to her in public, gives her a ring and she enthusiastically accepts. He will continue this theme, doing everything to upend her sense of reality. Hammer into her that they are now together and her marriage to Dan is essentially over (emotionally, not legally). All of the above is Lester’s plan and intentions. What could stop this? Not sure but it would have to be a radical response by Sarah or Dan, and this seems unlikely at least based on the current trend.

MV

I take on board what you've said, Rjh, but I keep being reminded of Don's words before 24 came out, "The next chapter should show some of my cards". Now, for the people who are on Team Lester, they might take that to mean that him getting Dan stuck in jail, and probably having Sarah to himself all weekend, shows his final assault on making her his forever. I take a different view (of course). I take Don's words of 'showing his cards' as a reference to the penny dropping for Dan, of him planning to hide cameras, etc. I take it to mean that it's absolutely not going to all go Lester's way. Maybe in the short-term. Maybe Sarah does, indeed, fall further under Lester's spell and stand up to Dan in Lester's defence, causing a split. But I take Don's words to mean we're going to see a resurgent Dan.

Rjh200m

MV - I hope you are right, I too would like to see Dan get much more aggressive, but this would be based on him realizing the dire threat Lester poses to Sarah, him and their marriage. Hopefully the weekend in jail spurs him to action. As you indicate, he may face resistance from Sarah at least at first.

MV

I think he's finally realising that this is not just a pushy 'bull', but someone who is very devious, and is trying to destroy his marriage. It's just amazing that it's taken this long for him to see it.

Mark Albright

I also want Dan to fight back because him just rolling over provides no real suspense, no confrontation. But I think for Dan to have a chance for winning Sarah back he has to do some strategic thinking, something he has done little to none of thus far. He should start by pretending to roll over for Lester, acknowledging to him that he can give Sarah things he can't. He has to act like he is supportive of Sarah belonging to Lester now and telling her he loves her and just wants her to be happy. Then as Lester and Sarah carpool back to Middleton where Sarah will now be working for Lester, Dan gets busy finding out all he can about Lester, past and present. There's a lot there to find out. But he doesn't present his evidence half-ass and piecemeal, but waits until he has his ducks all in a row and ready to fall. In the meantime he has to play the role of Dan Decuck to the hilt, a role he should be good at. That's enough for now.

Gee

Another factor to consider Royston and Mark, is How long will Dan be willing to put up with raising Lester’s child or children. As a cuckold, Dan may or may not find this situation appealing for any stretch of time. We won’t have long till Chapter 25 hits our screens

J Lewis

Oh to be a fly on the wall the next time Dan and Sarah talk…oh damn we will be!

Mark Albright

I hope we will. Sometimes DS leaves these key convos out, but hopefully not this one.

Gee

Very good points Royston I look at Lester’s sexual habits and history. We know what turns him on, as I mentioned above. Lester up till this point has included Jesse, Cash, Otis, stranger in the car park, the D&D group in Sarah’s sexual hazing (reluctance). This all while wooing Sarah! I don’t imagine Lester falling back to any normal monogamy type of relationship. Other than to ensure Sarah is impregnated by him and no other competitor for her fertility. What are your thoughts ?

Rjh200m

I don’t see any scenario where Dan agrees to raise Lester’s child; just too much to ask of him. Sarah getting pregnant by Lester? sure. Sarah wanting to keep the baby? sure. Her and Dan remaining married and raise the child as their own? Don’t see this happening.

Mark Albright

No, I see Lester wanting that to happen. I don't see that as actually happening.

KB

I assume he will share her or their videos on the dark web of some kind? Destroy her personal life. He has blackmail against her

Royston smith

So, I think I have given a pretty detailed account of what I think will happen in 25, in various recent posts. However, one thing I haven’t covered is the Dan/Sarah conversation, post the wild sex weekend when Dan gets out of Jail. Presumably he will be bailed by Sarah and stories will be compared. I think it wont go well. Dan will pursue the Jesse line, being convinced,quite rightly, that he knows Lester and Jesse are in cahoots and their target was Sarah. Sarah, will have no choice but to tell him the truth. That Jesse has come inside her unprotected. She will plead innocent by means of the blindfold, but Dan can counter that with “why didn’t you stop when you knew it was him”. This will be the last straw for Dan. He is used to Lester railing his Wife, but Jesse is a no go area. At least Dan respects both Lester and Byron as “men” in a weird kind of way, but the ineffectual, hapless Jesse? This will strike at his manhood in a way that will ignite the blue touch paper. Sarah will fight back, with her usual tropes and excuses. “Lester said you were in the room”! It’s your fantasy that got us here” etc. She may even hit back with the”loser” trope that Lester has been cultivating with her. Drunk/druggie/cant support your Wife and kids financially. At least Lester is successful and has a financial future! You don’t. Ouch! It will get messy. Their relationship will break down for the immediate future. Whether they ever get back together depends on whether Dan can prove his suspicions about Lester to Sarah. Whether he can become a strategic planner or not, and match Lester’s machinations. However, if Lester gets her pregnant then all bets are off. That will be the end.

Roleplay Literate

My only issue with this take is her kids. She has kids and her parents. This is going to cause issues.

J Lewis

Now there is that law about revenge porn. Mutual destruction…Sarah loses her reputation…Lester loses his freedom. It will be interesting to see how DS writes the conclusion…eventually.

Mark Albright

So here's another possibility, another monkey wrench, as it were. What if Chapter 25 reveals Sarah has been lying to Dan more than we knew? She and Lester have been hooking up regularly back in Middleton. Remember Lester tells Dan it's been awhile since he and Sarah have gone on a real date. Trysts at the hospital don't count, he says. Trysts, plural. This would actually make more sense than Lester ignoring her at work. Some have said he ignored her at work to make her want him more for their engagement weekend. Actually, the more she fucks Lester the more she wants. That's what Lester is counting on by getting Dan out of the picture. Sarah simply won't be able to say no any more, regardless of Dan. Remember she said she was glad Lester didn't follow her to the bathroom, she wouldn't have been able to say no. I think he already had her well-prepped for the weekend at the hotel.

Rjh200m

Royston- perhaps Sarah’s first line of defense is a tactic that has proven successful with Dan every time she has used it - the sexy stare along with a sensual touch, “you know baby that this turns you on, when I fuck someone you don’t like….” But Dan needs to not give in to this again and push back. At this point, Sarah will go to her second successful line of defense “I’m sorry baby, things got out of control, happened so fast that before I knew it, Jesse’s cock was inside me….you should have been there to protect me like we agreed to protect each other when one of us was getting lost in the moment…” She turns it back on Dan and tries to make him feel guilty. If Dan still resists and starts criticizing Sarah, then she goes with the heavy stuff you describe above! I agree that if she brings up drinking, drugs, and Dan’s inability to financially support his family, their relationship could take a nasty turn.

Royston smith

RJ, I considered whether both those lines of defence would work for Sarah at this point in the story, and I don’t think they will. Remember when Dan discovered them together in their BR at Middleton and threw Lester out? They had quite a knockdown row then before they both calmed down and decided to forgive. This time we are further down the road, Sarah is obviously even more under Lester’s spell. She has spent the night with him, gets lost in his kiss, is eager to go on a a-date. All things Dan has noticed. Then, she fucks Jesse, the guy who tricked Sarah onto Lesters cock, who is a malingering, incompetent no good. Someone who Dan loathes even more than Lester. Then she allows him to come in her. And don’t forget she took Byron’s cock too. It will be a step too far for Dan. He will explode in anger and she will defend herself. A lethal marital cocktail. This also makes sense from the point of view of the internal logic and rhythm of the story. A breach is long overdue. It will give the story a dramatic twist and leave it open for Don to plot Sarah’s further corruption in the next few chapters, as she comes completely under Lester’s control. This will be the climatic chapter, mark my words.

Royston smith

So the work email Lester receives: “He stopped on one that made him raise an eyebrow. Then a wicked grin crept onto his face.It looks like an opportunity to get past the William’s locked doors just presented itself. The universe truly was on his side”. Who is it from and how can it help Lester get past S&D’s locked doors? I think it must be from another head of department at the hospital addressed to Lester as head of IT. It must be from Sarah’s current line manager asking Lester to deal with an issue concerning Sarah. But what? And how will it help him gain access to their home. I confess I am flummoxed. Anyone have any ideas??

Richardcat

You very well could be right, Mark. The phone conversation between Sarah and Dan at the beginning of the chapter is telling. Dan is concerned about Lester and Sarah working together in Middleton. Sarah says “are you worried about what might happen?” Dan says “ after what you told me happened in the car, yeah, obviously.” I doubt she told Dan about Lester fucking her over the hood of her car and that she initiated that action. He tells her next time she has to wait until he responds to her text. She says “Yes, Dad, God” and laughs. That’s not what a loving wife or partner would say. She is definitely detached from him. He is more like a brother than husband to her.

Mark Albright

It's also telling that he says the next time, meaning there will be a next time Sarah wants to fuck Lester. And a next time. And a next time...

Mark Albright

Someone speculated that it was an email telling him he had been approved to transfer Sarah to his department. While that would make him happy, I don't know how that relates to him getting in their house. I am flummoxed as well. Even bumfuzzled.

Fuzzy Shark

Also doubt she told him the janitor was involved, didn't she say that she and Lester just fooled around in the car at the parking lot and cut the convo short to keep Dan from inquiring more?

Nike-Victory

I think Sarah might be lying based on the conversation they had walking up to the apartment, ““Has he bothered you at all? I mean, since the car incident,” Dan asked. “The car incident?” Sarah raised an eyebrow at him as they walked down the hall. “You know when you fooled around with Lester in our car without my permission?” Dan said. Sarah looked straight ahead. There might be something there that she wasn’t telling him.” It’s the last part that has me wondering.

Royston smith

Yes I think you are right Nike. Later on she cuts Lester off when he is about to reveal she agreed tio fuck a stranger.

Richardcat

Yes, she has moved out of the hot wife category into the cheating slut wife category. I also wonder when Dan and Sarah talk about the kids as well as when is Lester going to fuck her in the kids bedroom. That would really blow Dan’s mind as probably the marriage too.

Gee

Life isn’t fair & Truth is darker than fiction

Gee

I believe if Lester gets Sarah to agree to fuck him in her daughter’s room, it will be when Lester has disposed of Sarah’s pills, she is fertile and ready to be impregnated and become Lester’s breeding bitch!!!

Rjh200m

Things we will no longer hear Sarah say when Lester wants to fuck her (he kisses her shoulders, feels her ass, caresses her nipples, whispers in her ear)…. “I have to text Dan” “We have to wait for Dan” “Not here Lester, it’s where I work, I can get into trouble” “Not in my house, Lester, you know Dan’s rule” Things we will hear her say…. In his SUV - “Do you want me to get into the back seat now” In the apartment - “After we fuck, I want to sleep in your bed all night” At work - “Whatever you want, Boss” In her house - “What Dan doesn’t know, won’t hurt him”

Mark Albright

Underneath Lester's desk at work - "Gluck, Gluck, Gluck, I wuv woo, Daddy."

Mark Albright

In Sarah and Lester's bedroom - "How am I ever gonna get knocked up when you keep fucking me in the butt?"

Royston smith

“So just who is Lester Marshall”? Says Dan at the end of 24. It is a question that has been posed several times now in this series. It’s fascinating me, as it must have significance or why repeat it? Ch 22: “The two of them thought they were just playing a game. That they could use him for their own fantasies and cast him aside when they were done, but they didn’t know anything. They didn’t know who Lester truly was or what he was capable of”. Ch 24: “All these fucking rubes think they got it all with their little houses and white picket fences. They don’t know what life is really like. How dangerous the world really is”. Lester clearly implying he knows how dangerous life can be. That he has experienced its darker side. That he has “walked on the wild side”, as Lou Reed would say. In ch 23 he says the same thing to Jesse. So, does Lester have a secret which Don hasn’t revealed yet? Is there more to him than just a sexual predator, an IT hacker, a purveyor of internet porn?I think there is. But it’s a secret, a mystery, I cannot yet fathom.

Rjh200m

Great question! I would guess that something very bad happened to Lester sometime in his life that has made him incredibly angry, paranoid, skeptical and really devoid of enthusiasm for life and relationships. Perhaps when he was younger. He is obviously antagonistic toward women, maybe his mother abused him? Maybe his father abused him? Maybe he had no one in his childhood that cared about him. We seem to focus on him doing bad things but if there is a genesis for his behavior and Don Silver visits this in the story, I think it will be Lester as a victim sometime in his life, something very bad. How else to explain his utter distain for other humans?

Richardcat

Lester has given hints about that over past chapters. He’s well versed in the dark web. He indicated getting rid of the girls and making it so Dan would get blamed. He searched some for a hit man for Dan but thought too many were police traps. He has disdain for the Sarah he first met. His plan has been to bring her down below his level. He loves fucking her and is intoxicated by his dominance over Sarah and Dan. He does not plan to live with her but wants her available to him whenever he decides. He will get tired of her and I wouldn’t be surprised if he used her to recruit other women before he dumps her. His time with Sarah will end when he senses he may be exposed to the authorities. At that point Sarah will probably be sold to someone like Chronos. Dan will be disposed of along the way. That’s my dark side thinking although not necessarily the way I would like it to end.

Rjh200m

Lester using Sarah to recruit other women is intriguing. Could be a TA2, where we are introduced to Sarah’s friends, neighbors, college roommates, etc., Lester “forces” her to set up meetings and gatherings where Lester is there. Sarah basically gives Lester the information and access he needs to seduce them, to include his devious schemes and coercive techniques if needed. Maybe Sarah just provides the information or maybe she is more proactive and works closely with Lester to snare his targets. What does Sarah gain from this? Lester still fucks her, although he has lost a lot of the enthusiasm for her compared to when he was corrupting her. But now that he owns her totally, he fucks her every now and then because he still enjoys making her cum, including the moans and facial expressions. But Sarah will accept whatever Lester offers at this point. This is a dark scenario!

Mark Albright

I'm surprised Lester doesn't have Sarah call him Master at this point. Maybe that's next.

KB

Are we ever getting chapter 25? Jesus Christ lol

Royston smith

Well he has called her bitch for the first time, so Master can’t be far away.

Mark Albright

She accepted being called his slut, so I guess she'll be fine with being Lester's bitch now. The more he degrades her the more she likes it.

Darrow

I think the darkest outcome for Sarah would be for Lester to remake her in his own image, selfish, predatory, indifferent. Not a pawn but a partner in crime.

Bob James

Are we getting chapter 25 alpha draft tonight??? Does anyone know?

J Lewis

Just minutes ago DS posted on Discord he was using Google docs offline and somehow lost thousands of words from 25 BUT “aiming for tomorrow hopefully”.

Richardcat

She didn’t protest. Next he will call her whore-which she technically does fit the description.

Rjh200m

He may show up at work one day and give her the stare, this time Sarah won’t look away, she will stare back…. Then he tells her to follow him, and he brings her to a secluded part of the hospital, one that she did not even know about…. It’s a room with a bed where Otis sleeps if he is working extended shifts over several days…. “Now we have some time alone Sarah” Otis says….”In the car, I know you wanted more, baby” and now I can give it to you”… “You don’t have to worry about that guy right now” he added…. “In this room, I tell you what to do, and if you want my cock, you better be a good girl and do what I say….” “Now get on your knees and take my cock out, it’s time to make up for all those times that you ignored me…” Immediately and without one second of thought, Sarah knelt before him….she started to massage the huge bulge that was now only inches from her…..her mouth and pussy were already opening….”

Earl0849

I could see her cocking both Dan & Lester. Otis could show her off to the brothers & Sisters. Also think Lester's boss going to get some. This lady is beyond control.

Earl0849

She is to hot for Lester or Dan. Her home may become party city for Otis and friends. Many ways to go with this but this time I think Lester over played his hand. He can't hold her down anymore

Rjh200m

Soon, Sarah was sucking on Otis’s rapidly growing dick, she was intoxicated by its smell and how it felt in her mouth, so different but so good. “That’s it baby, take care of your new secret Daddy….” “Look at you now…..no more Mrs. Williams, important hospital executive dressed so fancy…..” “Now you’re on your knees, sucking the janitors cock, and enjoying it…..” “This is your new place baby, my hospital slut, and don’t you forget it….”

Rjh200m

Sarah was desperate for Otis to fuck her, her pussy was dripping. “No fucking today baby, all you get is a taste”. “You are used to getting fucked in fancy offices, hotels and your nice big house.” “When I fuck you, it’s going to be in my world not yours….I may bend you over the trash bin and fuck you from behind….maybe I’ll take you to the steam room and fuck you up against the water pipe…..maybe my friends and I will gang bang you in the generator room so no one will hear you screaming…” I’m going to do things to you that your wimp hubby cannot even dream of. Even fat boy, who thinks he owns you, won’t be able to give you the deprived sex you truly crave…”

Richardcat

At the end of TA 23 Lester indicated that he was going to talk to Otis. My guess is he is going to have Otis find a room where they can DP Sarah. I don’t think he will allow, probably by some threat, Otis to have her alone. He feels that with all the effort he has put into corrupting her that no one else deserves her unless it’s under Lester’s direction. I expect soon Lester will take her ass and then give that out to others. When she is off birth control he will watch her very closely.

Rjh200m

If Lester tries to tell Otis what to do with Sarah, Otis should kick his ass and dump him in one of the hospital trash dumpsters! Something Dan should do by the way.

Earl0849

I think Lester stepped into the muddy water letting Otis get a taste. Otis like all janitorial staff knows his way around the hospital and is connected. He is not some piece of trash like Lester clearly thinks he is. He is street smart. Otis knows where the drugs are and how to get them. With Lester & Dan spending time in Chicago this opens door for Otis. Sarah already tasted him she will be easy and Lester and Dan may have to work together to keep her. If Otis turns her out he can make money off her. Surely Otis knows some crack heads if he would need to help her along a little but she is a slut so don't think that will be necessary. Lester and Dan up against Black cock and yes black pussy going to be an awesome task to overcome. Sarah could be used and used hard at hospital stoned and well fucked.

Mkm560

Was it mentioned in the story Otis was black? If so I totally missed it.

Mr Shuttlesworth

I don’t believe so - fairly certain he is white. There was speculation prior to chapter 23 that he might be. Pretty sure it was somewhat cleared up in that chapter though. I might be mistaken though.

Rjh200m

It’s worth looking back at past chapters to appreciate Lester’s consistency in pursuing his objective with Sarah. Here is an excerpt from Chapter 15 which seems like such a long time ago - “Sarah had finally succumbed and let him cum in her fertile pussy, unprotected, willingly. But he needed to dominate her completely. Dan and her kids might be the things letting her hold on, but he needed to make her let go. He needed to break Dan’s will and teach him his place. He would make her his. Completely.” Clearly he is super focused on separating Sarah from Dan. And by all accounts, he is nearing his goal. Perhaps his strategy for making Sarah “let go” with regard to the kids is to get her pregnant so that part of her life has to shift to her child with Lester…and, therefore, she has to focus on Lester much more on a daily basis (in addition to them now working together). Sarah would now have an even stronger emotional bond with Lester because of their child; a fundamental part of her life is now connected to and involves him. And of course, Lester would keep trying to make it closer and closer until Sarah’s life revolves totally around him. A less sinister strategy than what Lester alluded to in an earlier chapter regarding the kids. But we now know how important it is to Lester to get Sarah pregnant.

Mark Albright

I think after the weekend his focus will shift from him deceiving Sarah into becoming pregnant to having her willingly give up birth control. So that the next time she says "put a baby in me, Daddy" it will be a conscious choice on her part. She wants to have Lester's baby. For her it will mean her complete surrender to him.

Earl0849

A good point. I noticed that all men introduced are inferior to Lester. I wonder if there could be an Alfa male perhaps at hospital that could disrupt Lester's plan? Sarah is already to the point where large cocks are hard to resist.

Earl0849

I thought I read when Sarah first saw Otis he was black. Looking back I cannot fine that passage. So will stand corrected.

Earl0849

Thanks for info. Think Otis could cause problem for Lester if Sarah gets a taste. With Dan in Chicago and Lester spending time in both places only means more time for Sarah to be exposed to Otis. Lester could have over played his hand.

Darrow

No, I think he's found the key to turning this on its head. Sarah's decision to go on birth control wasn't even discussed with Dan. It was 100% hers, and I think it was her acceptance or wish to have more and more uninhibited sex with Lester. I don't recall whether Lester had cum in her by that time, its vague as to when she went on the pill. But she was definitely ready for him to come in her. As I've said, Lester has figured out how to turn it around and work on her depravity. Now that he's figured it out, and had her confess to being on birth control, that allows the prospect of other men coming in her. It allows him to share her freely with whoever he chooses, and as we've seen... she wants to be shared. She's been 'dirty-talking' being shared since the guy jerked off outside Lester's SUV. She actually french kissed the guy through the window. Well, now the secret is out, and Lester is going to have her put her pussy where her mouth was. Originally, she was loyal to Dan, and just played with Lester for Dan. Now she's switched loyalty to Lester, but she's still nominally with Dan. Once Lester has her fully fucking other men, having other men come in her, and her loving and welcoming each ejaculation, it will move her further from Dan and more completely under Lester's control. His only risk is that she'll start leaving both Lester and Dan behind and fucking on her own. But Lester is control obsessed, and look how upset he was by Byron. He's also deeply manipulative and very aware of Sarah's desires. Dan had her fuck other men to please him (Lester), or support his career (Byron). Lester will have her fuck other men for her pleasure, he'll use her wanton-ness to reinforce and extend control. He wants her at the point where she'll willingly and enthusiastically fuck anyone he tells her too (she's practically there), but only who he tells her too (bad news for Dan... she's getting close to that point). Eventually, when he tires or grows bored, he'll move onto the final frontier - impregnating her. But by that time, Dan will be absolutely and thoroughly crushed, if he's still in the picture, and Sarah will have explored mad levels of wanton debauchery. Unless he's turned her into a female Lester clone in the end.

Darrow

One thing I agree with - at some point, Sarah will want Lester to impregnate her.

Michael Haase

Lester has Sarah's pussy lips pierced, he puts rings in each lip then places a lock thru each ring blocking entry without removing the lock. Dan, isn't allowed in without Lester's permission. Oh my, what control Lester now has.

Rjh200m

Darrow- great post. I sort of missed the extremely key point that you highlight that Sarah has not told Dan that she has gone on birth control. This is a huge development, not the part of her going on birth control, but the part about not telling Dan. And I think your reasoning for this makes total sense. And are you saying that she did not tell Dan because she has made an emotional leap to Lester and having sex with others totally outside of the “agreement” she has had with Dan to be in it together, plan things out, keep in touch, have a safe word, etc?

Rjh200m

MH - Dan will have to take her to a locksmith to be able to have sex with her!

Richardcat

In one of the earlier chapters after Lester stopped using a condom Sarah told Dan not to worry that she was using precautions.

Tom

Let's hope so. Sarah is now beginning to realize her true sexual self

Earl0849

I think One thing is clear. No matter where this story goes Sarah is going to sink lower. Perhaps even lower than the perv Lester wanted her to go. If that happens Lester will lose control. Otis could turn her out to his friends. Richard & his assistant could corrupt her and introduce her to Bi sex. Alcohol & drugs could become a factor again though Otis or Richard. All this could come into play. Dan & yes Lester love her but through what they started they may lose her. They may have to work together to reclaim her a task that it may already be to late to succeed at. Sarah does not love Lester she loves his cock and is addicted to his cock and all cocks. Her addiction will take her places Lester nor Dan even expected her to go.

J

After reading commentary from a lot of people here, I think there are a few important points people are missing. First off, Marcus at the Lincoln group is going to find Lester. I'm not sure where that part of the story is going, but these guys don't look to be any good and I think Lester is going to be cut down by them pretty badly. I think this is going to tie in with right around the time that Dan gives Sarah the information he finds from the hidden cameras. Next, If Sarah's domination really is complete, it's not going to be Lester finding her birth control and it taking her off of it. She's going to do it willingly. It's going to turn her on even more and then she's going to tell Lester when she is fertile. I have a feeling the work email he saw that he was so interested in was an email about Sarah's healthcare or a checkup with her OB. Obviously, it could be something completely different like having Sarah put under him in the org chart as well. So where does it go? I think that Dan is out of the picture for a week in jail or something like that, Lester figures out the birth control and makes Sarah willingly come off of it, simultaneously while trying to figure out what to do with her kids, the Lincoln group is searching for Lester and finds him, and Dan starts building a case against him. Everything comes falling down for him at the very end, but there's the question about whether or not he's able to impregnate Sarah and if she's actually willing to let him go. There's also the potential that the Lincoln group makes him a deal. They can send him to jail or hire him but makes him stop pursuing Sarah. Overall, fantastic story and great writing. I'm really intrigued to see what happens in the end.

Michael Haase

Well, Sarah knows Dan is fixed, so the birth control was always protection from someone else.

Mkm560

I have a little theory for a few chapters now that Sarah will find out she's pregnant, decide to move to Chicago to be with Lester and when she does the TLG takes its revenge on Lester leaving Sarah crawling back to Dan or someone else.

Darrow

Yep. It was a paradox for Sarah. She expected, or accepted or wanted unprotected sex with Lester. She knew it was going to happen. She couldn't discuss this inevitability with Dan. He'd either unrealistically refused or order it not to happen... and he'd fail. It would be childish and rather silly of him. If they keep playing with Lester, he'll come in her, she knows. So pretending Dan can just order it not to happen is dumb. She's not going to go to him, try and reason with him, and let him do or order her to do something dumb that's going to get her pregnant by Lester in the long run. The other option is just as bad - suppose she laid it out, Dan was convinced, he understood it would happen inevitably, and he decides to do an end run by breaking the whole thing off. No more Lester!!! No more of Lester's big cock!!! No more of Lester's fantastic fun games that are so satisfying!!! She can't let Dan cancel it either. So her best option is that she knows best - she goes on the pill, accepting that sooner or later Lester will come in her, but counting on his not wanting to knock her up too soon, she doesn't tell him. And she doesn't tell Dan. Dan's finding out she's on the pill may be a pivotal moment - it's the moment she has to reveal to Dan that she doesn't trust him or his judgment, and that more than Dan she's really been in control all along.

Rjh200m

Thanks Darrow, great insight. Lots of dynamics changing between Sarah and Dan….

Rjh200m

Also, it takes two to tango doesn’t it…While Sarah has certainly fallen under the influence/control of Lester, she is also maneuvering to get what she wants!

Darrow

Regarding Otis, here's the thing: Otis has unrestricted access to every single bit of the hospital, every office, every storage room, file rooms, to the server room, electrical panel rooms, the security room he's got the keys to everywhere. He probably has access to sections of the hospital that are disused, steam tunnels, even places that aren't even on the blueprints. Actually - not 100% sure of that, I figure a hospital this large would have an entire janitorial staff, not just Otis. But he's likely either connected with the other Janitorial staff on either a buddy basis or as a supervisor. But he can likely get access to anywhere and anything he wants with minimal effort and incovenience. He probably can't get into locked drawers and filing cabinets, but I think that Lester could probably help. And he can't access the computer system, but Lester owns that already. But think of the possibilities - Otis can access anywhere, he can disable or foil security cameras, temporarily disable elevators or wall off areas, he can install cameras and microphones, he can clean up messes so that no one knows anything's happened, etc. etc. For a guy like Lester, playing with the hospital, Otis is an unlimited skeleton key. If Lester wants to do something about Thornhill, Otis would be a convenient accessory. Think of that first sexual encounter where Sarah gets the facial, as a kind of job interview by Lester. Otis got to play, but Lester set boundaries and Otis respected them. Otis divulged information. Otis isn't infatuated like Jesse, uncontrollable like Vernon, he's not some mentally ill street person like Cash. He's someone that Otis can deal with - someone who makes deals, and can be trusted to do his job in return for rewards. Someone who can keep an eye on Sarah and everyone else, especially Thornhill and his little gang in Lester's absence, who can provide spaces, set up space to order, or carry out missions. He can help Lester put Sarah through all sorts of sexual situations, he can even one on one Sarah for Lester, as part of breaking her boundaries (if there are any left). He can also assist Lester in fucking over Dan - sort of a guy in the scene.

Darrow

Yeah, I agree. The Lincoln Group is eventually going to be on Lester's trail. I guess then we'll see how good Lester really is.

Darrow

I also suspect that Dan's hidden cameras shtick is going to backfire on him disastrously. Sarah will take it as an ultimate betrayal. Trust would be over. But some interesting things - suppose Dan, in process of bugging Lester's apartment with hidden cameras discovers there are already cameras.... Or supposing that Lester, who is clearly experienced with surveillance, notices that Dan's set up hidden cameras, and carefully ferrets them all out. Now he's got an advantage - he knows Dan's watching or recording, but Sarah doesn't know, and Dan doesn't know that Lester knows. Lester could put Sarah into all sorts of situations, extract all sorts of confessions, betrayals, sex talk, claims of love, all of this. He could put on a show for Dan to carefully rip out Dan's heart and emasculate him completely to the point he might harm himself, or disappear, or break or simply give up on or even hate Sarah. What Sarah sees as harmless secret sex talk that Dan doesn't need to know about could end up wrecking Dan. Dan could, for instance, end up watching Sarah service Otis and his friends in their home. Or Lester could put certain information, dangle things in front of Dan, to make Dan act in certain ways. Alternately, even if Lester doesn't have a clue, he's still going to put Sarah through paces and make her say things that will break Dan's heart. Lester does make mistakes, but he's lucky, and he's able to improvise. Still, it's nice to see Dan having an actual plan or idea. Dan's kind of an idiot.

J

I think he's an idiot for letting Lester into his and Sarah's life to begin with and I think he's an idiot for letting it continue the way it has, but I don't think he's an idiot when it comes to Lester. Specifically. Most people are not used to dealing with truly malicious psychopathic people. Even in the last chapter he was asking himself if it was possible that Lester could be this evil. I think it's reasonable not to think someone could be that terrible. Obviously, Lester is being that terrible too him and he's seeing it for what it is now. At least I hope. If not, he is an idiot and that diminishes the story a lot. But I don't think the Don's going to let that happen.

Rjh200m

Dan has to see that Lester is going after him, man-to-man. You don’t have to be a genius or psychologist to see this. Lester has been so upfront with Dan about what he is doing. And I think that this is where there is the potential for a real interesting plot twist. It would be very boring if we have chapter after chapter of Lester screwing (figuratively) and outsmarting Dan. I think Dan will strike back hard regardless of the consequences because this is what Dan has done when directly challenged by Lester or Jesse. And yes, it is driven by Dan’s temper and tendency to get violent. I don’t think Dan will forever work to build a legal case against Lester or try to convince Sarah that Lester is evil. He just needs to demonstrate to Lester that he is finished being a door mat and that Lester is in real danger if he does not back off. Lester is smart yes, but I don’t think he is brave or courageous, especially when it comes to physically reacting to Dan. Lester only understands one thing and that is force, whatever form it is in. Do I think this is how the story will evolve? Not necessarily, this is why I say potential plot twist. But I would love to see it!

Rjh200m

I think a hot scene in the next chapter is that Lester tells Sarah no more sex with Dan. But he agrees that she can have sex with Dan one last time. So, at the apartment Sarah and Dan are in his bedroom. They have been through so much but recognize that they still love each other and need this intimacy no matter what happens going forward. So they are making love. But Lester opens the door and looks in. He is totally naked and he has his cock in his hand, fully extended and big. “Hey Sarah, this is for you baby if you want it, I’ll be in my room waiting for you. But don’t make me wait long.” Dan yells at Lester to get out and close the door. The whole time, Sarah was just staring at Lester. “I can’t believe him, can you?” Dan says to Sarah. Then he resumes where he left off, kissing Sarah, positioning his dick to enter her. But when he does, she does not pull him in. She is not talking sexy like she did before Lester entered the room. She seems distracted. She seems to be still looking toward the door and not into Dan’s eyes…. “What’s wrong baby? Did that upset you? Lester can be such a jerk” Dan whispered to Sarah. “Don’t worry, it will be ok.” Sarah slides her pussy off of Dan’s rapidly shrinking dick…. “I’m so sorry Dan, but Lester wants me now. And I can’t say no. If he didn’t come in and show me his huge cock, I would have been ok, but now I can’t stop thinking about it inside me. You know Dan, don’t you, how good he fucks me. You have seen how crazy I get when he takes me.” Sarah then got up and walked toward the door. She turned to Dan….. “Wait for me baby, I’ll be back later….and don’t you look through the peephole and jerk off. This is private time for Lester and me.”

Mark Albright

Despite her admonition, Dan found himself drawn to the peephole. He got there just in time to hear Sarah say, "Thank God you interrupted us, Daddy. I wanted you so bad."

Rjh200m

More likely than not, she screams in horror and runs out of the house. And she refuses to babysit the kids anymore because she now knows what Sarah is up to. But, perhaps as the saying goes, “the apples doesn’t fall far from the tree”….maybe her mom can’t take her eyes off of all of those cocks…..and it reminds her of all of her exploits when she was younger….

Earl0849

Can't see her refusing to watch the kids as she has them mostly all the time now. But she could be drawn in which could be another chapter. Think this would drive Lester's ego even higher. To have the Two of them crawling after his cock.

MV

Sarah's not really going to be in a position to be angry about 'betrayal', as the second she let Lester back in the house, let alone with the kids upstairs, she betrayed Dan.

sp

Specifically: 1. if Sarah was not wearing Lester's engagement ring during the work week, then Lester could ask her to put it on when they start sexting each other on Friday night while Sarah is home with the girls. Then, Lester could ask Sarah to take some selfies that highlight her engagement ring as she poses for the selfies. 2. This could lead to Sarah having an inner monologue about what Lester actually said and what she was thinking when Lester proposed during the dinner in Chicago. As stated by many others, this could include Sarah reflecting on how manly Lester is and how pathetic Dan is for allowing this to happen. (Regardless of where it comes in the chapter, would love to read more about what Lester and Sarah actually said and what they were thinking during the public "proposal" scene). 3. Definitely agree that there should be more "imprinting" of Lester getting Sarah to say "I love you" and to get Sarah to say that she wants Lester to make her pregnant with a baby boy. This could be an additional scene playing out in the morning at the hotel or as an additional scene back in the apartment in lester's bedroom and/or in the final scene on the futon. ... just my own "wish list".