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Seth

Whoohoo!! The next chapter releases on my birthday!!

Voror

Hmm shame about losing the Earth card. If they somehow got the set that could be very potent but that may be a bit much to ask. The revelations are interesting. The first card in the heart being the key set you need to complete makes some sense though I wonder if that means that if you bonded with a dragon over one cars that wasn't your original it would lock you out of ascending. That comment about the soul of a warrior not knowing how to handle utility cards even as a set to their full potential or ascend them feels like it makes the Master set all the more potent. It overall seems like it covers every aspect with the caveat you need to train in all those areas to use them which one can't do for everything. Still it seems worth noting.

Georgia Guy-Williams

Loved the brixby attitude... Very interesting with the card lore

Seth

Which was illegal enough to almost get him killed the last time (Long) Bai found out he had unapproved Legendary pairs. Typo found: o got typed instead of u

Jill Richardson

You probably caught this already but before Arthur went into his pocket dimension, Horatio was sad Soledad went into a pocket dimension without him, but after Arthur came out, Horatio had gone in with Soledad. Also, the timelines don't work. There's 48 hours to the 2 eruptions when they start planning for pocket dimensions, then they take days to prepare, the big group goes in for 9 months (and it's never stated how many hours real time that is), then Arthur goes in for 10 hours and comes out before the first eruption, and then the big group comes out a few hours later having spent either years or a year and a half in the pocket dimension. I thought Marion was 19 so why did he have a huge growth spurt? Also, smaller issues but... what happened to the mindsinger's sister? And if Arthur thinks he's growing those apples from his seeds... that's not how apples are reproduced. They are grafted. You can grow a tree from seeds but it will be genetically different from the parent variety and might taste bad. If he really got all those farming skills, he'd graft.

BluePegasus

I sense a card crafting session in the near future. I love those!!!

Christopher Reed

I am truly addicted to this series, please keep it coming! All the skills 1 was my first ever litrpg book and opened a whole new world for me, love your writing!

Valmorian

thanks for the chapter! perfect start to my birthday, your the only author I follow not currently on break.

Benjamin Walsh

Since Brix was already funneling life force to him during the battle, who doesn’t he top Arthur up so he isn’t drained?