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[Picture Series] Crystal Shadow 02 (Patreon)

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2016-01-05 13:50:15
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2026-06
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[10 Years later : Crystal Empire's Garrison]

General Sombra : Dismissed!! *He orders all of the Crystal Guards to leave the training ground since all of today’s training was done. But just when he was about to leave, the voice of a familiar somepony called him from behind.*


Crystal Heart : How was your new recruits training today, Sombra? *She said with her sweet and crystal clear voice*


General Sombra : Everything is fine, milady. How did you manage to leave your tower again this time? *He said with his monotone voice, which signaled that he wasn’t pleased with the princess leaving the safety of her tower. But his smile betrayed his words, showing that he was actually pleased to see her regardless"


Crystal Heart : I just sneak out while the guard wasn’t watching the door. *She smiled at him as she said that and proceeded to walk closer*


General Sombra : Your father would be angry if he knew, and you will cause me and my guard in be trouble once again...You do know it is my duty to bring you back to the king right?


Crystal Heart : What about your lover's duty? Are you not obligated to allow your marefriend to have some freedom outside the tower? *She look at him with her adorably big eyes that can melt everypony’s heart if they look at it*.


General Sombra : True...So where do you want to go this time, Crystal? *He said it like her eyes didn’t affect him. But his smile told her the truth that he couldn’t resist. He could never say no to that face. The eyes of the mare who saved him ten years ago*


Crystal Heart : Somewhere that we can be alone for a while with my secret coltfriend. Let's head to our secret place!


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This is my third Picture Series, dear. It is an original story that I'm come up by myself this time. It don't base on any story out here. [Or it might similar to some story that I never read before...I'm not sure]. 


Beware, This is a mature story. Content with romance and erotic. You have been warn...


PS2. Beware broken English. This pictures series have no proofreader since my current proofreader not comfortable to work for NSWF stuff. But if you be kind and help me fix it by comment to this post. I will be glad and fix it.

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Lorvianne

[10 Years later : Crystal Empire's Guards Barrack] General Sombra : Dismiss!! *Did he ordered all of the Crystal Guards after the day's trainning was done. But when he was about to leave .He heard somepony call him from behind.* Crystal Heart : How was the new recruit's training today, Sombra? *She asked with a sweet and crystal clear voice* General Sombra : Everything went fine, milady. How did you leave your tower this time? *He said with a monotone voice like it didn't pleased him that the princess had leave the safety area. But his smile showed what he really meant " Crystal Heart : I just sneak out while the guard don't watch the door. *She smiled to him as she walked closer* General Sombra : Your father will be angry if he'll know of it. And you will cause trouble to my guards again...But do you know that it is my duty to bring you back to the king? Crystal Heart : What about lover's duty? Can you not help you marefriend to have some freedom outside the tower? *She looked at him with her adorable big eyes that could melt everypony heart if they look at it*. General Sombra : True...So where do you want to go this time, Crystal? *He answered coldly, like her eyes didn't had any effect on him. But his smile still hold the truth, he coudn't say no to these eyes. The eyes of the mare who saved him ten years ago* Crystal Heart : Somewhere where i could be alone for a while with my secret coltfriend. Let's head to our secret place!

Bro-Nii-San

Sorry to butt in if it is unwarranted but, I just thought I would help a bit with the English here, seeing as this does not have a peer-editor. [10 Years Later : Crystal Empire's Barrack] General Sombra : Dismissed!! *He ordered all of Crystal Guard to leave the training ground after today train was done. But when he was going to leave, somepony called to him from behind.* Crystal Heart : How was your new recruit training today, Sombra? *She asked with sweet and crystal clear voice.* General Sombra : Everything is fine, milady. How could you leave your tower again? *He said with monotone voice like he wasn't pleased with the princess leaving the safe area but, his smile showed that he didn't mean it." Crystal Heart : I just sneak out while the guard aren't watching the door. *She smiled at him and walked closer.* General Sombra : Your father would be angry if he knew. And you will cause my guards trouble again... But do you know that it is my duty to bring you back to the king? Crystal Heart : What about lover's duty? Can you not help you marefriend to have some freedom outside the tower? *She looked at him with her adorably big eyes that could melt everypony's heart if they looked at it*. General Sombra : True... So where do you want to go this time, Crystal? *He said like her eyes isn't effect him. But his smile still told the trust. He couldn't say no to that eye. The eyes of mare who save him ten years ago.* Crystal Heart : Somewhere that I can be alone for a while, with my secret coltfriend. Let's head to our secret place! ((Most of the mistakes I noticed were small mistakes that are easy to make if you do not understand English very well. Using "call," instead of "called," and other similar mistakes. Everything should be more or less grammatically correct now. Hope this helps!))

J V W

Welp I had time to help tonight but you guys beat me to the punch. Well played I'm glad we all want to help Loveless be the best he\she can be. I don't know Loveless's true gender...XP

Bro-Nii-San
>>1168603

I had actually just pledged today, and have not had a lot of time to check out some of the later posts. Just happened to be on when this popped up, and saw that Loveless was looking for an editor. Since I write in my free time now and again, I decided to help out. Not sure how many others normally try to help edit.