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YeetimusMaximus

I read the chapter title in the voice of g-man

Arrogant Savant

Frankly in many ways Kai can't afford to think about romance considering his status as a "criminal who faked his death" and the pressure that comes with being the main key for getting into the hidden realm sanctuary. Also his PTSD being "tempered" by said sanctuary.

Dizzy

Oh thank god. It was so painful, but he's finally growing up.

Jordan A

I’m excited to see where this goes!

David

Kai being clueless with valela was all fun and games for everyone else until that moment where he should have known mentioning dinner with someone else was off limits. No turning back now, one way or another the dynamics in the group have changed.

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter. Now that Kai has freed up some time in his schedule he might want to consider getting a little less socially clueless.

Johan

Tftc

piranha

Heartbreaker 😈

GloinJr

Thank God he isn't gonna date minors 🙏 Lord have mercy hallelujah when I raised my concerns about this I had people talking to me about how Valela was mature for her age and how it's actually ok for Mat to date minors cus he didn't have much of a childhood or whatever. Thank god we're dodging the diddy tensei route Drewells you're the goat

Corwin

Curious if we will get to see his enchanting class soon. The practice there might be a good way to build up some funds while working on his alchemy later.

Reborn

Not speaking for or against anything, but when he died wasn’t he 17? He hasn’t even reached that age in his new life, so his own maturity still hasn’t really grown.

Mark

So far the hints at romantic tension and Kai's obliviousness towards it where mostly short comic relief elements in the story, and honestly, I would have preferred them to stay that way. But regardless of preference for this story element, the 180 from presenting Kai as oblivious to him suddenly thinking clearly about Valela's attraction to him here is a bit jarring and comes out of nowhere. The paragraph toward the end of the chapter ("He’d been avoiding every thought...") does a good job of retconning his previous obliviousness, but the switch still feels inorganic to me.

Federico

Man, I guess Hallowed Intuition does not warn against social faux pas :D

Brett

Maybe because he does not recognize that he’s actually going to die from that. Instinctively Matt knows a knife in the back is dangerous, but playing with a woman’s affection… that’s like defusing a bomb …

Draeysine

I personally, disagree. This is hardly him thinking clearly. He noticed something wrong with the vibe, and still didn't fully comprehend what was wrong until Flynn spelled it out plainly to him. I think this is the most organic interaction yet, at least in regard to Kai's refusal to think about the romantic tension between him and Val.

신현준

Gracias

Andrew Goebel

"Hmm, did he want more? " this line feels too on the nose for me. It's like solving the puzzle too quickly? Something like, "why was this making him so upset?" or "I'd rather be going to dinner with her" makes more sense with the cluelessness.

Some Guy

Thanks for the chapter

George

he's been solving this puzzle for a hundred chapters

Reborn

Unless Val changes her life plans drastically, I really don’t see a relationship between her and Kai lasting. Their life goals are to far apart, as she wants to go back and take over as leader of the archipelago and he wants to explore the rest of the world.

Thomas Adams

Well, we almost got a record scratch moment, the music definitely stopped, the background noise faded and there might have been a dolly zoom.0

A B

Edit suggestion: Isadora said she’s  book a private field.”  -> Isadora said she’s booked a private field.” 

Nicholas

Ugh, what a time to be caught up again. Kai and Val's relationship has been developing for a long time, so hopefully we'll see some resolution soon, now that things are pointed out clearly to Kai.

P.R. Bakker

I hope some friends will be with him for the spar as I smell an ambush. The fact that somebody doesn't act obnoxious doesn't mean they are trustworthy especially as she has a clearly not trustworthy twinbrother.

Gio

Nothing a long distance teleport cant fix. But in essence, I agree. While romantic relationship stories have their merit, I personally find them boring and I hope this story doesn't turn into that. Romantic relationship stories eat up a lot of pages on things I personally do not find interesting.

God

"Isadora said she booked a private field" sounds better imo.