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[Note: Short chapter, to be followed tomorrow by another chapter. As I was revising, I decided it works better as two, but with a smaller breather. 128 is basically done since it was part of this one, but I'll be happier if I give it a couple more hours of work in the morning. So after sleep and that, you can expect it in about 12 hours.

(For the purposes of calculating skip days, today and tomorrow will count as a single post even though we have two distinct chapters here. ]

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Moving hundreds of people was easier with magic involved, but it was still a process with its share of mishaps.

“How could you not notice the syrup was leaking, Yetza!? There’s a stream of it going all the way back to the train!”

“I forgot my bag!”

“Hold still. I’m trying to count you all, but I only have two eyes…where’s your brother?”

“She forgot her egg collection!”

“Where’s my right sandal? Has anyone seen a sandal?”

“Ojoo fell on the steps. He was busy complaining about the rooflines.”

“Ojoo!”

“Don’t worry. The Avowed caught him.”

And so it went. What had started as an orderly unloading of people and luggage turned into Alden running back and forth across the station so many times that it started to be funny. There was always one more errand, and sometimes on the way to complete it, he needed to stop a man with firm opinions about roofing from tumbling down the stairs.

Surely this is the final trip.

After several minutes of searching, he’d found a child’s missing bag beneath a table at the stall that held the used tablets. He straightened with the satchel and looked around the station for any stragglers. It was an open space, and Leeter-zis’s paint made it easy to identify participants in the Here-to-There. But Alden spotted no coral marks on the faces he could see, and among the backs turned toward him, there was only one that he recognized.

What’s she doing here?

Ryada-bess’s sage knight uniform made her stand out. So did her hair, which had followed its own ambitions and begun to escape and frizz around her head.

Alden jogged toward her to see if she needed help. She was standing on one of the poems embedded in the floor. The pale beige words were a sharp contrast to the dark brown that surrounded them, and with some help from his flashcard translation, he could read them as he approached. A line about an animal called a t’tchispa had caught his eye, but Ryada’s gaze was turned upward while she watched the stories playing out high above them. The swirling sand painted images of a trio of wizards who were making a spring bubble up from the ground.

He stopped just before he reached her, realizing something.

Ryada was alone. She was more alone than he’d seen her since they left Rapport I this morning, perfectly positioned for someone to have a quiet word with her. And their departure had been delayed so many times already. A few more minutes wouldn’t matter if someone did want to have that quiet word.

Happy to have identified this opportunity before he ruined it, he reversed course and headed for one of the exits.

[Stuart, Ryada’s the last person left in the station. She’s distracted by the ceiling.] In case that wasn’t a clear enough suggestion, he added, [Maybe Emban should come and tell her that it’s time to go.]

Was it odd to be so hopeful for the sakes of a girl who’d flown paper flyers with him and another who’d shown him the tattoo she shared with the squadmates she’d first faced chaos with?

Those weren’t deep connections. If he disappeared right now, back to Earth never to return, he doubted either of them would think of him again unless they happened to run across a basket full of bananas.

I’d wonder about them a lot more.

When he studied his spell book, every time he heard about a successful demon slaughter at Matadero, after his next affixation…

As he left the station, he looked around until he found Stuart. He was standing below one of the golden flags that decorated the haulers. They’d been provided by a wizard who’d greeted them when the train first arrived and welcomed all of the ordinary class members. It was a warm ceremony but much briefer than the one that had set them off on their travels this morning.

Stuart saw him at the same time and lifted a hand.

I guess he’d make it hard for them to forget me right away. If nothing else, there was a ryeh-b’t flapping around the siblinghold with his name. So the other members of the art’h family would have to think of him a little, even if they were just thinking how relieved they were that he’d stopped being a confusing interloper.

Alden delivered the satchel to its owner, and made his way back to Stuart slowly, trying to give everyone who saw him one last chance to say, “Oh no! I can’t find my…”

But nobody did.

The setting sun was about to dip behind the irregular swoops of the white rooftops that lined the street. Alden imagined they must look like tumbled piles of pillows from above. All around, people had stepped onto second and third floor balconies to watch what was happening with the Here-to-There.

It wasn’t much longer before the cheering and cries of welcome from those watchers told Alden that they were finally underway again. He’d joined Stuart and Bithe, and they were soon walking at the back of a procession that felt more like Alden’s original vision of an Earth-style parade than everything else they’d done today.

Many people had started singing. Stuart was rattling off a list of everything they had to do to houses and worrying that some of the wizards here didn’t know how to turn the blessing liquid he’d brought into a home-filling mist.

I practiced that spell. It’s very traditional! Why didn’t everyone else learn it?”

And Bithe had his own concerns. “I think he wants Uro-bor to plead on his behalf to his mother for the second wand to be promised to him. It’s extremely inappropriate for him to make the gift a source of guilt—”

“If I do a few extra houses myself…they can’t possibly plan to splash it on the floor!”

“All of the bors take the honor so seriously. They’re going to put it above their family stone. Where are Emban and Ryada? I can’t see them ahead.”

Alden didn’t know if Bithe and Stuart were comfortably carrying on parallel conversations by splitting their attention, or if they were just talking to themselves with no expectation of input from the other. But Stuart did hear that last question. He looked back toward the station’s front steps and then whispered an answer in Bithe’s ear, before adding, “Alden saw that she’d been left behind and thought Emban might want to have her chance.”

Alden gave him a thumbs up.

Stuart knew that gesture now and returned it eagerly.

“So…it’s now,” Bithe said slowly. “That’s…this is good. Emban has to ask. She’s been holding the request for too long to do nothing. And Ryada will say the right words to make everything as sweet as can be wished for after the sour is bitten.”

“What does that mean?” Stuart asked before Alden had finished unpacking the flowery language. “Do you know her answer already? The sour…is she going to refuse?”

His hands rose to grip the wooden beads on one of the enchanted necklaces he was wearing. “But you’ve encouraged Emban for so long. Why would—?”

“I found out what Ryada’s answer would be yesterday,” Bithe said. “And it’s not yes or no. She’s…just decided she’s not ready to deepen with anyone. If she was, it would be Emban, but she’s not—”

Bithe was whispering so quietly that Stuart’s small, alarmed noise was loud by comparison.

“Why isn’t she ready?!”

“It’s not…you’ve got no reason to be upset, Stu-art’h. It’s between the two of them, and—”

“Emban’s been gathering courage for so—”

“—and Ryada will say it better than I have. They know each other well. Don’t worry. We will not worry.”

“Will we not?” Stuart asked worriedly. “I worry you have handled this badly! You should have warned Emban.”

Bithe blew air out of his nose like a bull. “If I’ve handled it badly, you only prove my point that Ryada should handle it.”

Stuart closed his mouth.

Alden’s opened like it had a mind of its own. “I’m worried,” it blurted for him. “I don’t want either of them to be disappointed.”

Bithe looked like he might be thinking of burning a moth to death.

“Sorry.”

They walked a little farther before the knight replied. “I don’t want either of them to be disappointed either. They are almost family to me. You don’t even know them. I’m not sure you even know what we’re talking about, though your <<sentiment>> is well meant.”

“Alden is going to be my—”

“Lifelong friend. I heard your introduction of him this morning. And you’re going to ignore every voice raised against you to be one of…” Bithe shook his head. “How did I end up back here arguing with you two? It will all be fine, Stu-ar’th. Alden Ryeh-b’t. Think about misting spells. And home. We’re supposed to be thinking about home…that assignment could have been easier…”

He left, muttering to himself as they stared after him.

Lifelong friend.

“He’s bossy suddenly,” murmured Stuart. “Home is easy. Misting a dozen homes when I’m only one person is not. And Emban…”

He twisted the beads on the necklace a few times then dropped them. “We can’t do anything else to help Emban. We must hope it goes well even if it’s not what we expected.”

There was a young girl with a blue pet ryeh-b’t watching from a balcony to their left. It stood on the railing, spreading its wings. Over the snapping of the flags, the calls of locals and newcomers exchanging phrases rose loud:

“Where have you come from?”

“Where do you go?”

“There are houses here where no hearthfires have burned for many nights.”

“We have brought wood. Maybe those houses are for us. Maybe the fires will burn again.”

“Actually,” said Alden, his eyes skimming over Olget-ovekondo, whose own eyes were watching Bithe join the bor family on their hauler, “home can be difficult. As soon as Leeter-zis told me to think of it, my thoughts emptied. Except for a couple of things that I don’t…they probably aren’t right for his spell.”

A house in Nashville, helping his mother wrap small gifts for children who visited the House of Healing in Chicago, Boe coming over one night when Connie was out—memories of places that he didn’t have anymore.

Stuart didn’t reply for a while, and Alden assumed he was back to figuring out all the details of the move-ins. But when he looked that way, Stuart was still focused on him. “I saw Leeter-zis’s plans,” he said. “You can’t do it wrong. Anything you think will be fine.”

“That’s a relief,” Alden said after a minute. “He folded in my Earthliness.”

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I left but did not know I left myself behind.

Like a t’tchispa after its shedding,

I don’t know how to live in new skin.

I press my soft belly to once-familiar stones, asking,

“Why do these not fit me?

How far must I run

to find myself again?”



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Comments

Arugula

Hi

Frijj

Night sleyca! Thanks for the chapter!

Sleyca

CHAPTER 228 PREVIEW: “Your breath smells like recovery sauna potion, and your face smells like bad breath.” “Thank you so much, Haoyu.” “You dress better for the aliens. Can I see the egg?” “This is usually an undershirt. I have pezyvas. The bromelimas tree looks great.” Alden passed his carved egg to Lute and leaned away from Haoyu. He dropped his messenger bag on the kitchen table beside a partially eaten baguette and a concoction that looked like chicken tenders smashed up with butter to make a spread. (These are literally the next lines. I thought they were really funny coming immediately on the heels of my poem, and I still think they are. But being in the same chapter made them funny at the expense of the emotion built in this chapter in a way that didn't work. So. Two chapters! )

jarwain

I wonder if aldens power can be used to find lost things? If he's entrusted with something but the entruster doesn't know where it is?

jarwain

Also that poem and knights just ooof

Ploddingpanda

Thank you! I love the poem at the end, it's beautiful ❤️

Sleyca

Thinking up the poem was probably my favorite part of writing this chapter.

Uroš

> “Where have you come from?” > “Where do you go?” Where have you come from, Cotton-Eyed Joe I'm sorry, I had to. This is the first thing that popped into my mind when I read those lines :)

Andrew Tobin

Alden and Stu always make me feel more feels. This whole story is feels, but I think when Alden is dealing with friendships and loss it’s more feels.

Tori, Writher #1 Fan

Ooh. Alden's contemplations of home have been one of the beautiful things about the whole quiet rabbit choosing season matadero arc, and I love how the here-to-there arc and spell build on it. And now we have this poem that feels just right for it.

Andrew Tobin

I hope Emban isn’t too disappointed and finds the positives. Bithe is so interesting as this third wheel of a tricycle that is also a bicycle - both insider and outsider. I wonder if how he relates - if he would be fine with the, deepening without him, because what’s meant to be, or if it’s isolating… if it lessens his place or his heart is encouraging of it. It must be difficult especially with the whatsitcalledwhenyoursoulisxonstricted also affecting him. We know so little of him, and his pov, but he has been kind of central to the latest chapters and how Alden relates to these events.

Christopher

The upcoming rejection reminded me of the Nat ship, or lack there of. It has made me melancholy.

Llainway

Thanks Sleyca!

zero

Why am i crying? This was beautiful and sad

Cayos

Thanks for the chapter! Small nit/correction I think the "is" needs to be removed or "sure" added before "everything" "And Ryada will say the right words to make everything is as sweet as can be wished for after the sour is bitten.”

Andrew Tobin

Now I’m like, what if you were soulmates - not in a traditional “one soul would find another” or romantically,but in a way that you open yourself on a level to two others, so deeply you see each others true beings, and then two decide to deepen that without you. Man, that could wonderful for them, or… yeah, or Bithe could want that elsewhere and be totally cool, and we have no idea because we know next to nothing about Bithe other than he’s a little moody right now.

Andrew Tobin

There’s always Lute and Emilija until we hear otherwise, and Kon and Everly, and Lind-otta and Esh-erdi and Lexi and Boe, and…

Andrew Tobin

His aunt finally getting her shit together when she finds a moment without the responsibilities she’s been ignoring is relatable in a way I am uncomfortable with. And kind of sad for Alden. But also good. And his parents. Heart emoji, heartbreak emoji, heart emoji.

Skydow

Tftc from a guy at 3am. Goodnight!

Super Super Supportive Supporter

Oh I just realized, Alden hasn’t been keeping the bag a secret, and everyone in the know knows that the bag means something This probably includes the Informant and therefore Aulia as well

Fabian

Thank you! Its too good

WannaBeATree

Another avian(?) to add to the metaphor of Alden's readiness. "There was a young girl with a blue pet ryeh-b’t watching from a balcony to their left. It stood on the railing, spreading its wings."

Steffen

Thank you Sleyca, this brightened my day. As these chapters so often do.

Robert Mullins

Ryada truly is her skill. About to turn Emban to a puddle of tears. And Emban is her skill too, because next time she will ask to better effect

Catherine

No I think it’s correct the way it is written. It works both ways

Super Super Supportive Supporter

“Where have you come from?” “Where do you go?” “There are houses here where no hearthfires have burned for many nights.” “Cotton-eye Joe”

Robert Mullins

The thing with the bag does make me wonder if there is something similarly unusual about Alden's spellbook or if all the unusualness was spent on giving him one at all?

TexNox

I feel embarrassed that as soon as I saw the line: “Where have you come from?” “Where do you go?” My brain immediately said: "where have you come from?" "Cotton -eye Joe"

Yaboku

“He’s bossy suddenly,” Well, how do you think he found out Ryada didn't want to deepen with anyone?

Aspiring Moth

suggestion: add 'green' to the description of ryada-bess's sage Knight uniform. on my initial skim I thought it meant sagely as in a design suggesting wisdom or something. saying sage green would make it more explicit. plus it helps people less likely to know uncommon uses of already rare words, like ESL speakers

Kemlion

So ready for next chapter, with the “lifelong friends” Is Alden tempted to tell Stu? I feel like that phrase had impact on him when said and he immediately started thinking of home. With mother appearing last chapter…. Please tell Stu 🥹

JJ Hunter

The ironies of Alden getting so gung-ho about matchmaking after his own confession to Natalie that he's not ready to be dating anyone himself right now-! Ryada is temporarily alone, yes, but alone with a poem that feels like it was written post-affixation by someone finding they don't fit where they used to fit, and don't yet know their new self well enough to find where they could fit with others again. I love that Stu and Alden make such a solid pair of friends - Stu alone enhances his many singular oddities. Stu in combination with Alden draws the eye to how much this pair of seeming opposites are of similar minds about the important things.

JJ Hunter

Shout out for the man concerned about skylines, skylines are worth being concerned about! Glad Alden helped him avoid a nasty tumble down the stairs though; that is not how anyone wants to introduce their feet to new ground!

Robert Mullins

So, there was cause at some point yesterday for Bithe to be told by Ryada that she isn't ready to deepen yet and if she was it would be with Emban. How curious that that 'just happened' to come up in conversation one day before Emban asks. Of course, it could have been Bithe trying to get an idea of her mood going into it so that he'd know what to expect.

Francis

The chant at the end was so touching! I can really empathise with Alden and the knights. I'm an immigrant and I don't feel like I have a specific home. I don't even want to visit the country I was born in anymore.

Francis

Yes and shouldn't the knights wonder how he got hold of a real bag

Charlie

Was Alden able to use his skill to find the bag? Perhaps not, if it was lost, but it would be nice.

Matt DiMeo

“ I’m trying to count you all, but I only have two eyes” Never change multi brained artonan mom.

Anthony Lutz

Yet another chapter reinforces what Mother said in CH59: "My children tell me home is harder to find every time you change."

Charlie

Yep, clearly meant as a running theme of the story.

John D Jones

Ryada is currently Authority-Ace.

WannaBeATree

Child of Earth? Resident of the Internet? Or my favourite: Home is where the wlan connects automaticaly.

Endaris

Everyone was fully aware Emban wanted to ask during the Here-to-There. I would even say that it is rather natural for the topic to come up between Ryada and Bithe in a best friends setting before teleporting to Rapport I.

Aspiring Moth

it still takes him around half an hour to do that in perfect conditions, and we don't know if it works if the entruster doesn't know where the item is. maybe soon he could do it, but not this time

Eva

Are dragons not lizards? Or in the snake/eel family like in the Tunnel Rat webnovel? (This is how I am learning, accepting fantasy novels as partially factual 🙄)

Gaming with Bigby

Over the snapping of the flags, the calls of locals and newcomers exchanging phrases rose loud: “Where have you come from?” “Where do you go?” COTTON-EYED JOE INTENSIFIES

J Reynolds

The poem at the end made me think of this from the Lord of the Rings: Where now the horse and the rider? Where is the horn that was blowing? Where is the helm and the hauberk, and the bright hair flowing? Where is the hand on the harpstring, and the red fire glowing? Where is the spring and the harvest and the tall corn growing? They have passed like rain on the mountain, like a wind in the meadow; The days have gone down in the West behind the hills into shadow. Who shall gather the smoke of the dead wood burning, Or behold the flowing years from the Sea returning?

Awesomepossum15

Love that even though the "deepening" requires a lot of context about alien culture and magic, it's still so so relatable to teen dating.

NoMoreLurkingAtTheClose

It’s an Ubi Sunt poem! I guess the one Sleyca wrote here technically doesn’t have a “where is…” question in it, but it’s very much implied (and there is a perfect “where” question in the ritual Here-to-There phrase just a few paragraphs back)

DAK

Man. I can’t tell what’s a head fake and what’s definitely happening with those wands. If this was your next light novel, Alden is being obviously set up to save the wand and save the day from the weak diplomaed son. But this is a well written novel dealing with complicated emotions and any lame-sauce villain wannabes are primarily there for background flavor rather than a cheap way to get a sense of justice or levels. The tension!

Jeremy Goldberg

Nooooo! I’m worried too! Poor Emban. Poor Alden and Stuart. Poor Cotton Eyed Joe 🙁

Hallow

I love the alien poetry so much, thank you for this wonderful chapter. Though, I do hope that Emban will be okay

MWF

She reminds more me of Kon than Alden in some ways. Super outgoing but still quietly working on some personal stuff on the side.

Ian T Hathaway

“Alden is going to be my—” “Lifelong friend. " Let the man speak for himself! Shipping goggles off, great chapter as always. Love that final poem, hate how close to home it hits. Keep it up

Robert Mullins

Wonder if Stu had an internal foot in mouth moment when he realized he said "home is easy" to the orphan who lived with a nominal but barely functional aunt before being forcibly relocated to an abandoned lab in a chaos zone, before being forcibly relocated to another country into a temp dorm before being relocated to a slightly less temporary school dorm?

PeasOfCrab

And then also had to be hospitalized and given a semi-permanent room in a magical alien hotel/facility.

JJ Hunter

Things I want to know in the chapters to come: - Did Alden get to keep his sauna potion inhaler? - Will the carved o'odee eggshell be crowning the Bromelias tree? - Will the brothership of the huntski lodge be pretending Alden has nothing remarkable on his face when they leave for gym out of roommate solidarity? - How many jokes will Haoyu manage to squeeze in about Alden's temporary facial adornment when they're out of public earshot? - Will Alden 'randomly' encounter Colibri, Head of Campus Image, and refuse to explain his (temporary) updated image? - Will there be in-school memes about it, and will they break containment to external social media? - How much will Foxbolt live the coral color and bold shape of Alden's adornment? (She had blue and orange eyeshadow previously.)

denatured

How does that work with two brains? Both count some and add? But what if each brain counts the same kid? Now you have to compare notes! I once helped supervise a party of 7 year olds at an arcade and let me tell you, you can never stop counting. Forget eyes, you need drones.

JJ Hunter

- Will Alden realize Bithe likely shares many of his same worries about fitting in and being accepted by his peers? - Is Bithe's name pronounced with one syllable or two syllables? - How many houses will Stu aerolize the liquid blessings for? - Will Emban be relieved to have asked regardless of what answer she receives? - Will the dramatic kooba fight be recounted as epic poetry? Will there be impromptu slam poetry riffs?

SnuggleCat

That poem is beautiful

Aspiring Moth

I'm hoping something happens to break the wand at the afterparty, so Alden can call Kon to fix it. no instant summons for non rabbits, but if you have a rabbit who knows someone with a repair skill... Kon loves a good party anyway. it'll be fun for him

Jess

Bithe is trying so hard now to be patient with the clueless rabbit who doesn't even go here.

JJ Hunter

Patient with both Stu and Alden; Emban is almost family to him, so her cousin and his soon-(best) friend are both people he's trying to get along with

Josh Delgado42

Thank you for the chapter, and the poem. That was thought provoking. Nothing like alien poetry to make you think haha

Rodmin

I'm sorry, but I'm just such a big Alden/Stu-shipper, just can't get those giggly-thoughts out of my head each time when Stu is so adorable and Alden so thoughtful. 😭

MWF

Everyone keeps bringing up Cotton Eye Joe and I kinda see it now that it's been mentioned. But what popped up in my head was "When the Truth comes Out" from that one musical episode of Scrubs, specifically the refrain: "It's best to know the truth, of that I have no doubt, but you'll have to face the future when the truth comes out."

ThoMiCroN

That’s the most Rabbit job Alden ever had: exploiting the tracking feature of his skill.

ThoMiCroN

It’s good that the poem does not rhyme in English, since it was not written in English in the first place. Poetry is generally untranslatable across languages not because the meaning can’t be conveyed but because the sounds don’t follow the same systems. Shakespeare’s poetry is impossible in French because there is no tonic stress so you can’t play with that in French. Poetry in French often seeks « rich » rhymes where as many syllables as possible rhyme, something English doesn’t care about much. In French you can make visual rhymes with letters that are not pronounced, which wouldn’t make sense in English. In Mandarin, you can repeat the same syllable like shi and just change the tone and produce a meaningful story.

Nedardo

Did Blithe get authority friend-zoned?

J Reynolds

It's amazing how different a poem in translation can be. Especially if there are multiple translations of the same poem. Wikipedia has something pretty good about that. Check out 'translations of The Iliad' article . it's amazing what different authors see is important.

S

Part of me wants Bithe to be the Artonan who first learns that Alden is some sort of errant knight

Faiir

Was it ever explicitly stated that Alden cannot be the entruster himself, or was it just implied?

JJ Hunter

It's heavily implied that the Bearer and "the one you choose to serve" must be different people - Mother outright tells Alden that it's not a skill intended for solo combat, and the associated sigil appears to show the skill works as patterns between two distinct points of reference, two distinct entities. 59: "A complicated sigil appeared, glowing in bright blue light on the television screen. It was a circle full of dizzying geometric patterns that seemed to shift slightly every time Alden tried to follow them with his eyes. Two bright dots shone on either side of it, barely touching the circle’s perimeter. "'One twelve,' she said. 'The Bearer of All Burdens.'"

ThoMiCroN

I just had a thought. It would be nice if a conlinguist collected all the Artonian words of the book and tried to make a proper language with them, and perhaps include some sounds outside of the human vocal ranges.

Lonoran

That's a beautiful poem