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Edited: September 10, 2025

NOTE: This chapter had a significant change from the first version posted here on Patreon. For any future readers who might want to enjoy the comments section down below but don't want spoilers, I suggest reading the next chapter as soon as you get done with this one, then coming back here if you want. That will result in a spoiler free comments section experience.

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Alden and Stuart left the courtyard as soon as the basics of Olget-ovekondo’s sentence were announced. 

Thrice the number of years Uro-bor had served his mother, to be spent in productive labor for the betterment of the Artonan people and the worlds that acknowledged the leadership of the Triplanets. And one-third the years of the average ordinary class member’s lifespan because of the damage his spell and the exploding wand might have caused if things had gone differently. Nine more years for agreeing to protect the Here-to-There and then betraying his path by doing the opposite. 

It was more than the rest of Olget-ovekondo’s natural life, but still “a gentle sentence” according to Executioner Vill-ma. After all, she could have ordered him to repay thrice the years he’d hoped to take from each member of the bor family in the future. Or thrice the number they had already served over multiple generations.

This mercy was in appreciation for the fact that Olget hadn’t drawn the process out by demanding mind readers or truth spells. When he had recovered from his collapse onto the courtyard tiles, Vill-ma would review his proficiencies with him so that she could find a placement for him that would make him useful and present him with opportunities to reduce his sentence.

“I wanted a happier end to the Here-to-There,” Alden said when they were back out in front of the executioner’s mansion, walking down the drive on their way to a place nearby that had a teleportation alcove. “But if I look at it another way, you and I did everything we could to make sure it stayed happy for the people we promised to guard, so it was good for almost everyone.”

“Yes. I’ve done my best to be proper, and you have been exceptionally giving of your time, thought, and abilities. We shouldn’t allow ourselves regret.”

“Why do I get to be exceptionally giving while you only get to be proper?”

“A votary on duty like I am right now can’t be called exceptionally giving in many circumstances,” Stuart said. “To meet every need with best effort is the job.”

“I hear that.” Alden tried to use his inhaler and found it was finally empty.“How surprised do you think Executioner Vill-ma is going to be when she realizes exactly who she was sharing her passion for Ro-den with? The person who suggested he help Anesidora before anyone could think to prevent him from volunteering and the Avowed he used for one of his crimes were right in front of her.” 

Stuart made an irritated noise. “I don’t think she has any way to know my role, but I can’t comprehend why it didn’t occur to her that you are that Avowed! She has to be aware that Aunt Alis commended the human she found on Thegund, since she seems to have learned so much about the situation. Maybe I should have told you to wear your embroidery, but I didn’t expect to meet someone with such an interest in Ro-den. Since she has that interest shouldn’t she assume any human traveling with me is most likely you?” 

He started walking faster. “She can’t imagine members of my family summon Avowed from Earth frequently. Or she shouldn’t if she knows anything about us. Maybe she assumes I’m someone who wants to do that to make a statement of opinion or status…and she believes my parents would indulge me?”

Alden could tell he was bristling at the very thought. They turned off the executioner’s drive onto a gray walkway that would take them to the local music school that had the public alcove.

“She obviously thinks you’ve been influenced by LeafSong. I’m your strong-looking, Artonan-speaking decorative guardperson. And every night, a ewtwee comes to freshen your pillows and tuck you into bed.”

“Bayab-oth received admonishment for lack of study in our toolless casting class, so his family no longer sends the ewtwee Ryeh-b’t to <<pamper>> him like that,” Stuart said. “Now we must endure his <<sullenness>> during what should be the most restful part of our day.”

“That’s so sad.”

“You sound like you don’t mean it”

“I am sorry he annoys you.”

The wind stirred. It felt more like being toasted by a low-power hair dryer than experiencing a nice breeze.

“Do you want to ask…” Stuart’s cheeks and ears began to purple. 

“Ask what?”

“I think you may wonder about my vision and cognition. You don’t have to avoid questions like that.”

So it’s that.

“I did notice you turning an eye earlier,” Alden admitted. “But I wasn’t thinking about it right now. I was actually about to ask you why your family doesn’t have any contact with Earth except for me, as far as I can tell. I’ve been assuming that if you ever felt like telling me why you don’t split your vision, you would. I’m curious, but it probably catches my attention less than it does an Artonan’s. I know so many more people who keep their eyes pointed in one direction than I do people who can look left and right at the same time.”

It took a few seconds for Stuart to respond. “During our first several interactions after you returned from Thegund, I indulged myself by imagining you didn’t notice at all.”

“I didn’t at first.”

Alden had noticed oddities, including Stuart’s tendency to stare a lot and blink infrequently during some of their conversations. But he hadn’t wondered specifically about the vision splitting while Stuart was serving him his first cup of the good wevvi and being so very Stuartish about his nerve damaged foot and his guest.

“Singular focus was the natural response when I learned to regard what was left of my mother’s mind trap as a threat to me. Healer Yenu encouraged it, and she supported my comfort with it as part of my healing. Now…” Stuart was speaking slowly. “I can divide my thoughts. I do so to cast spells. Or when I want to better understand what others are conveying when they pairthink. But it requires more effort than it would for a normal person of my species. And I don’t turn an eye often. I don’t like it, and sometimes I fear liking it too much.” 

“Why?”

“I often see her when I do it,” Stuart whispered. “She’s not like my old hallucinations because I don’t struggle to know she’s not really with me. But…there may be a possibility I could access what’s left of her gift to me and let it entrap me again. In a shameful moment.”

Iella-inwer’s gift to her son. A world with no pain or worry, where all things were beautiful.

“I thought… ” Alden revised the rest of the sentence several times before he let it escape. “I thought something like that couldn’t happen to you again.”

“I won’t let it,” said Stuart. “Maybe it can’t anyway. My mother was so talented and so knowledgeable. My mind trap seems to have been anchored not only within my mind but also alongside my spot in reality in a way that all my healers were unfamiliar with. But it’s almost entirely gone.”

“I’m sure it will be one day, Stuart.”

Stuart gave him a pained look. “Thank you. I’m less sure. Healers don’t alter the parts of the mind that truly resist. And the mind trap is how my mother loved me.”

Alden swallowed. Oh wow. What do I say to that?

“About your question. I’ve been avoiding this subject because I wanted you to feel as welcome as a warm day at the siblinghold, but since you’ve brought it up…the Rapports voted against making Earth a resource world. So much political power was expended that we only recently became confident we can manage all of the important votes that will happen as a result of the opening of the way to the place where the ilket lived.”

I guess I say nothing about the mind trap because he’s just bouncing right along to this. 

“The knights were against Earth? All of them?”

“I’m sure some disagreed, but the matter was so serious and so strongfelt for most that all cast the weight of their vote through whoever was serving as our representative to the Grand Senate at the time.”

“Quinyeth said humanity was controversial. Why don’t you like us? We’ve got great stuff on our planet,” Alden said lightly. “I know when your people arrived we probably seemed a little warlike and dysfunctional, but some of the other resource worlds are definitely more concerning in my opinion.”

“Are you offended?”

“No. But I like Rapport I more than anywhere else I’ve been on the Triplanets, so I hope all the knights there don’t think my species is the worst one.”

“You know they don’t think that.” Stuart sighed. “This is probably the kind of thing I shouldn’t say because of proper discretion. I’m not sure. You’re certain to hear about it eventually from someone, though, while we’re spending time together. And it doesn’t seem like it should be a secret to me.”

“Don’t you ever regret not letting me swear Privacy of the House?” Alden asked.

“I do not,” Stuart said firmly. “Earth was especially upsetting because your similarity to us presented so many opportunities for cultural upheaval, abuses, and…other issues. There were a lot of issues. But the Rapports would have voted against any planet. We don’t want to be responsible for more worlds. The benefit can be great, but we believe it’s less than the risk for now. And before Earth was discovered, wizards had mostly agreed that <<haphazardly>> seeking out advanced alien societies is a bad idea.”

“I can see how it would be.” 

“Stopping powerful individuals from trying has been impossible, though,” said Stuart. “One such person succeeded in finding Earth. Most knights and votaries believed the correct course of action was <<stealthy>> management of the situation from afar. Some would even have been in favor of abandonment and sealing. That might sound cruel…it is cruel…but such a strong statement that the Triplanets would refuse to interact with any species discovered by careless <<glory-seekers>> could have prevented many of those types from deciding that a new resource world will be their <<legacy>>. Or that they’ll find a selfless species more advanced than our own to bring chaos under control and teach us unimaginable magics.”

The street was quiet. No cars had passed, and the walkway soon separated from the road and wound in the direction of the nonagonal white building that was the music school. 

“What does sealing mean?” Alden asked

“It’s supposed to be a way of denying one part of reality interaction with other parts. I really don’t understand much about it, especially on the scale I’m speaking of now. The method for doing it is kept secret, or there would be people even worse than the glory-seekers deciding to chop off pieces of the universe they don’t like as if they were pruning a bush.” He paused. “I’m grateful my people met your ancestors, and that Earth wasn’t cut off.”

“Me too.” What else was there to say to that?

“The Rapports lost the vote, and the Grand Senate violated the rules it had set for itself. Humans and Earth were too <<captivating>>. And so your Contract was formed, and it must not be allowed to fail. The worst fears of knights were never realized anyway. Earth has been untroubled by <<genocidal>> wizards and chaos. Mostly.”

“Genocidal wizards are a big fear for a small number of humans,” Alden said. “So don’t casually say that if you’re ever giving a motivational speech to my planet.”

The Artonans had made so many cures for human disease; creating a single plague had to be easier. If history had gone in a much more evil direction, they could have released a germ, waited a few months, and then moved in as the proud owners of a new Artona IV. It would have a tolerable climate, edible food, and be fully furnished with cities they could live in until they built new ones. 

“We were discovered by just one wizard?” Alden asked. “Acting on their own?”

“That’s right. Our children’s children will be told another story, I’m sure.”

“What was the wizard’s name?”

“They have none,” Stuart said.

No name. As little glory for the glory-seeker as possible I suppose.

“I see. And your family hasn’t had anything to do with humans or Earth in eighty years—eighty of my years—because they voted against our inclusion, and they’re following their principles.” 

“Their principles have been preyed upon by time” Stuart said dryly. “You’ve seen how eager they are to help themselves to my fruit baskets.”

“I’m corrupting the family of the Primary and the Quaternary.”

“The state of things was already changing,” Stuart said in a more serious voice. “They say the first Rapport tends to change at Father and Aunt Alis’s pace. I believe the two of them just haven’t had time to think much about humans over the last several years. But Aunt Alis has recently been offended by the justifications of a group that wants Earth to have a higher percentage of Ryeh-b’t Avowed. And Father got to meet you after you helped me!”

He said that last part brightly. Like the Primary had been given a special treat.

He loves his father so much. It’s on his face every time he talks about him.

“Stuart, is the Primary able to come home for…will he be here for you? During your first binding.”

“No.” Stuart gestured to indicate they should follow the walkway around the building toward the back. “I don’t think he needs to be. He’s already said what he wants to say. He has a way to call. And meeting me a little later, when I am happy for what I’ve gained instead of grieving what I’ve lost, will be good. I will be proud on that day.”

I can’t believe he’s not coming. I really can’t. 

“When do you think you’ll do it? I’d like to know so that I can…do whatever you’d find helpful.”

Stuart stopped walking. He stared at Alden.

“My soon-friend, I will make a place for you in the ceremony of that day.”

“Then I’ll be there.” Alden swore it as firmly as Stuart just had. “No matter what.”

“This coming weekend will be Welcome End,” Stuart continued. “It’s a time of celebration and socializing focused on the declared who will soon become knights. We’re approaching the end of summer. Most people choose to have their first bindings during the period just after Welcome End and through early fall. Until recently, I was planning to do that, too. Mine would have been ten days from now, on the anniversary of Father’s first binding.”

A bubble of fear formed in Alden’s gut. 

“But I agreed to the delay my family wanted,” Stuart said. “So it will be half a year. The second and fifth Rapports are in the southern hemisphere, so they’ll be having their end of summer then. I’ll do it with their declared.”

“You have to go to another Rapport instead of being at home? Just because of that agreement?” Alden found the idea much more enraging than he would have expected. “Stuart, that’s not fair to you at all!”

“No,” Stuart said, eyes widening. “I’ll be at home. But I wanted it to be the right season somewhere on the Mother.”

The wind had picked up enough to blow a crispy piece of plant across the walkway beside them. It was brown, dry, and dead. Alden watched it.

“That’s a long time and no time at all,” he said finally.

Stuart tilted his head. “I’m not sure what you’re thinking. Will you tell me?”

“I’ll finish the most important part of my choosing season before you do it,” Alden said. “That’s what I’m thinking.”

“My first binding shouldn’t influence you. Your choosing season is your own.”

“I’ve chosen to let it influence me. Don’t worry. I’m trying to do what’s right.”

They found the alcove and arrived back in the art’h summonarium not long after that. The moisture in the air and the decent temperature were so welcome that Alden could have melted onto the floor and slept with minimal encouragement. But he had one more responsibility to consider.

“Where’s Kon?” he asked. “Is he with some member of your family, or did he go back to Earth? I expected him to send me at least one message to let me know what was happening here.”

“I should have shared the update I received with you,” Stuart said. “I’m sorry. That seems obvious now, but I was tired. He wasn’t here long. Olorn Mom gave him a gift, and they sent him back to Anesidora.”

“All right…I’ll go collect my suitcase and head to Anesidora, too, then. And you need to get some rest.”


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Comments

Michaellogan

Thanks for the chapter

세희

SOUP!!!!

JJ Hunter

*dances in delight*

zero

Thank you for the chapter 🙏

Daniel Pataki

Yay! I always wait out "chapter-title roman-numeral" ones until the end, then binge them all at once so I can avoid cliffhangers. Here-to-There was... a challange. Thanks for the chapter!

Zero

Uhhhhhh, That last bit is a bit concerning. Thanks for the chapter.

Venno

Oh man, I am full of anxiety

Gregory

I think Kon may have a mug that can make any beverage. And we’ve seen Olorn’s skill so I suspect carbonation would not be an issue. More concerningly, Artonans don’t care about Anesidoran law so if I’m right about what it does then I’m betting alcohol is also an option.

Quý Lưu Thanh

Oh no, the Informant finally sniffed out alden’s trail

Guus van der Borg

Okay, 'can't split his mind' theory officially dead! It's a bit of a weight off my shoulders to be honest. :) And also a little gratifying to hear that while he can, he usually doesn't. That made me a little right... ...right? :)

Thomas Todd

Soon...... I can feel things coming to a head, Alden will make his decision and the consequences will fall as they will

puppy0cam

Saturday morning cartoons have never been so uncomfortable!

Taitenator

No! You turn that eye away! He’s a QUIET rabbit! *panic stations*

Gregory

I suspect Kon is not going to be a good enough liar for this. Even without bringing the magic panopticon AI into things, other students may push hard enough on this to see the seams.

Jazehiah

Kon has some of Olorn's priceless pottery. Alden has less than ten days to choose. It is indeed a very long time and no time at all. The line feels like a subtle nod to something. Hmmm... must be my inagination. Alden's quiet rabbit™ days are numbered, especially if he's already made the list of "top fifteen people you need to know about" curated for The Informant. Elias' house is fantastic, and reminds me of Wallace & Grommit.

Daedalus

The last little exchange just makes me think of the scene in Doctor Who with 11, “I think you’ll find that in universally recognized as a responsible adult” “That’s not a certificate, it’s just a paper with wavy lines on it” “It shorted out? Finally, a lie too big.”

Taitenator

I’m pretty sure Stu said it was *going* to be in 10 days but has been pushed back half a year

Gregory

He’s quiet the same way he’s Intensity 4, and both involve, among other things, publicly flying around on a general’s cookie.

AutumnLeaves

It's coming... the end of Alden's Choosing Season and the beginning of Stu's affixation. I'm on tenderhooks for both of them. I hope it goes well!

Francis

Eeeeeeek! The Informant is simultaneously scary and cool. If he can influence his luck a little bit to have a better Saturday, I am thinking that Aulia taught him a wordchain or two. Probably in the past when they still hooked up regularly.

Jim

TYFTC! Dun dun dun. The Informant knows.

Francis

And it *is* more difficult for him to do, so you were half-right!

Eva

Oohh what delicious soup. Things are coming together.

Not_You

You know, this chapter started with the informant and I said to myself, “oh that’s not good”

Kemlion

Aaaaahhhhh I need more 🥺 Stuart isn’t allowed to fail his affixation or I will wither away.

Eva

postponing next chapter so I can read it on my birthday is going to be extra good

zombie

Artonians love their rituals, therefore it always appeared to be strange that there is almost zero integration of Avowed in their rituals. The help doesn't get a seat at the table? Fear of contaminating ancient rituals with modern untested Avowed? There are several ways to interprete it, including intentional distance between Avowed and Artonian culture so they don't turn themselves into knights.

PatienceHoney

Hahaha! Yeah. Poor Kon. I was thinking that there are things looming too large in one's mind for a normal person to lie about them.

JJ Hunter

I bet this isn't the first time Alden has made it into the Informant's chosen top fifteen for Saturday morning snooping!

Daedalus

It’s probable that the rituals predate avowed, and that there simply hasn’t been enough incentive to change them

Nait02

Do we know who Elias is?

Terrestrial_Biped

I'm not sure he's manipulating luck. He may just be saving up treats for himself. Like, it's his cheat day on his diet, it's the day he splurges on costly luxuries, it's the one day he actively spies on interesting people, etc.

Terrestrial_Biped

I take back all my thoughts that Boe was too paranoid last chapter. There's no need for a passing super to notice pencil impressions; MBF could notice. MBF just got very interested in Alden and Alden's people. MBF has the brainpower, memory, and attention span to put together truly tiny clues. MBF won't tell anyone but Elias, and Elias has no interest in tattling on unregistereds, but still.

JJ Hunter

Olorn-mom makes the *coolest* equipment. What a thoughtful choice for the youngster who came loaded with souvenirs for 50+ people - a way to share each gulp a thousandfold. More glimpses of Artonan politics, and how Alden is already having more impact than he may have realized. I like that the first human most Rapport I folks are meeting is coming as a friend instead of as a servant; that seems a neat way out of the dilemma of past rejection and current principled reserve. Stu sharing more of his truths, including not really wanting to lose this lasting anchorpoint of how much his mother loved him even as he dares not interact with it beyond the briefly glimpses lest he find it still has power to snare his mind. You can tell from how he walks Alden through that conversation that many of his peers have wondered if Stu had reduced cognition from his particular habits of vision and mind. Stu seems so matter of fact about it, all blushing aside; this is part of his history, part of how he is in the world. Take him or leave him, this will not change further from the steady state he's found.

Lady Kyhira Tenti

I like to think that our current timeline is where Rapport 1 won and the Artonians collectively said "nah" I knew the Joe conversation had to do with the similarities between humans and Artonians Every time we get a glance of the informant is interesting. Is he still investigating the submerger incident with the fifteen names? Or is it more related to Aulia main quest of human wizards? I'm waiting for Alden to accidentally on purpose bare half of Stu's affixement burden and keep him stable or them to join authorities.

Glitter Rabbit (C)

Kon is a good friend. Maybe not the best liar but he is a good friend

Jeremy Goldberg

predicting stu gets stuck back in his happy place during the pain of affixation, and alden helps him by eating his foot bone. edit: “What was the wizard’s name?” “They have none,” Stuart said. That line went hard. Do y’all think the wizard had his name taken away by magic? Like literally nobody knows what to call the guy? edit 2: man, the soup-bowl runneth over today! So many interesting questions answered! edit 3: if the Gulpy Cup works by pouring one gulp in and getting 1000 gulps out, Alden should introduce Kon to ✨Natalie✨

Robert Mullins

There were definitely a few people in the comments that misread that as meaning Stu's affixation is in 10 days rather than Stu's affixation was delayed a half year. But with Artonan years around 15 earth months that makes it roughly 7 months to go. Which coincidentally lines up with the earliest estimate of when Alden will affix.

Ers20

Hah, so Kon *did* swear Privacy of the House (probably). Which we're conveniently reminded was a thing earlier in the chapter.

Terrestrial_Biped

No one's a good liar when up against an Avowed with sensory enhancements. I'd cut him slack for that one.

Christopher

Ruh Roh the informant is being nosey!

Terrestrial_Biped

I'm pretty sure this is Saturday morning cartoons for Elias. He's not working, just doing a little recreational privacy invasion.

Francis

If the Informant finds out that Alden befriended knights and tells Aulia, then Alden will be kidnapped and wake up married to a Velra.

Keven Leigh

He said no matter what. Even when he has to go through his own affixation just before. Spicy.

Francis

How many paragraphs did it take you to realise that it is about the Informant?

Terrestrial_Biped

"I indulged myself by imagining you didn't notice at all" is SUCH a heartbreaking sentence.

J Reynolds

The Informant hasn't learned how to read Artonan.

Arugula

The rabbit is out of the hat xD

Terrestrial_Biped

Sealing sounds like it might be important. I wonder if that was done to Gorgon's world. I wonder if sealing has a memetic component, and that's part of why Stu doesn't know about them.

Middle ground

“Just a normal house in normal woods with a few normal wizards in it. The people Alden knows are kind of boring.” Wow, not a single part of that was true. I’m really curious what the Informant is going to be able to deduce. Eventually I’m sure he could find the truth but will he do it before Alden goes public. More likely I think he’ll find out who Alden’s “boring friends” are and will latch on to the idea of trying to use Alden like Lute’s grandmother was using the maid at Leafsong. I can’t wait to see their reactions when they realize he’s accomplished their lifelong dream. That and there’s no way people will believe it’s not replicable. Everyone will be hunting him, hoping to become wizards. Registered, unregistered, every nation, and wizard faction, his only path is to become a knight. I think they’re the only group that could keep him from spending his life as a lab rat.

Wallaby Vonwise

I was not in the comments, misunderstanding this issue. I was quietly and privately not coming to that realization. Alden's timeliness both for and against him is it's own kind of spell impression.

Gaffer

This chapter was the baptism scene at the end of The Godfather, with Sleyca taking care of tantalizingly dangling loose ends. Stu’s single-mindedness, the Human Controversy, The Informant / Medhi’s info-watch, Zeridee’s commendation comment, Artonan factions…a lot of Chekov’s weaponry just got cleaned and loaded. Speaking of which… “the other [(Kon)]—Familiar, must have seen his face in an old report. Oh yes. That one—“ What did happen in Moscow with Kon and Lexi, exactly!?

Terrestrial_Biped

I just understood why everyone was surprised Quinyeth knew some human words. She's a secret anthroboo because it wouldn't be looked kindly on in Rapport 1.

maledei

I already started writing a comment about how we know that Mehdi is carrying one of the informant's spyphones, to show how I'm all knowledgeable about the lore and can remember things. Then it was spelled out in the last paragraph and I wrote this instead. Hello!

SFGuru

It might be to do with Kons talent rather than the Moscow incident. Someone who can repair complex broken objects would be super useful to all Wrights

Faces The Wind

Two things my husband pointed out. 1) If anyone was ever going to learn Alden's secrets first its the informant, which I personally think would be a terrible situation. 2) So thats where the primary is going, to prance in front of the Ilket with his new sanctuary ship... and I wonder if they are gorgon's people?

Armo

Literally like two, as soon as I realised it was talking about a dog.

SFGuru

I forgot Medhi wears infogear!

Faces The Wind

Hadn't thought they used magic to strike his name, but that is interesting! I was just thinking they had to do SOMETHING to try to uphold not encouraging wizards to pull that BS... so removing his name from all records and at least legally and historically un-naming him and socially shunning him is severe and appropriate for telling everyone that your legacy will never be remembered as yours if you try to make a new resource world your legacy.

Terrestrial_Biped

Definitely not. The ilket were technologically advanced. Gorgon says his people would seem primitive to humans in almost every way.

Gaffer

The three-multiples in the justice system are interesting, including the ninefold-return policy for knowingly bearing false witness a few chapters ago. Meaty worldbuilding tidbits this chapter. “Thrice the number of years Uro-bor had served his mother, to be spent in productive labor…”. And there is why Olget feared the charge of entrapping the bors. Uro-bor ain’t young. 180 years perhaps? Thrice the years for malice, I’m guessing. “And one-third the years of the average ordinary class member’s lifespan…” 30 more for reckless endangerment roughly? What’s the difference in average lifespan of the ordinary class vs wizards, I wonder? “Nine more years for agreeing to protect the Here-to-There and then betraying his path by doing the opposite”. And the smallest charge for what offended Stu and Bithe the most personally given their oaths and soon-oaths.

puppy0cam

> The moment was just after sunrise, this morning if he wasn’t mistaken. They had just exited one of the boys’ dormitories on the Celena North campus Fascinating. Even if he doesn't have to pay for his own information, he still follows the rules regarding recording in public vs private spaces. At least for routine stuff like Saturday morning peeping. He obviously doesn't follow those rules for people of actual note considering the ambassador kept his infogear in a safe inside another safe.

Andrew Reise

Theory: Alden’s skill is related or similar to how they perform sealing, and that’s why his skill requires permission: to ensure the user of the skill has to get approval to seal so that people don’t just go sealing off parts of the universe they don’t like with it, as Stuart put it.

Phlinn

Two random thoughts: I wonder if part of sealing involves a contract with anyone from that world who remains on artonan worlds, a contract gorgon is balking at. Secondly, I wonder if Gorgon is the person who discovered Earth. Or associated with the person who did so.

SinCinnamon

Oooooohhhhhhh I like Elias. Trouble for our « intensity 4 » rabbit incoming.

Jeremy Goldberg

Makes you wonder about the nonagon… Oh crap, new nonagon theory: The Nine-Edged Son is literally a criminal wizard who got temporarily transmogrified in order to pay his debt to society.

Sky23

Thank you for the lovely chapter as always, any chapter where Stewart and Alden interact for any length of time is automatically one of my favorites. The executioner is going to feel like such an ass when she finally realizes who Alden is.

J Reynolds

Here's a funny thing (that won't happen. It would be funny, though.) Elias hires a Sway / Reader of Mind to do some mind-reading of Alden. Said head-shredder gets teleported to Esh-erdi to answer some pointed questions about why they're rooting around in Alden's head.

Daedalus

It occurs to me that potentially the reason for the Executioner not realizing it was Alden on Thegund was because she (rightly tbf) assumed that the Avowed in question probably has some vacation from being summoned.

Daedalus

It also wouldn’t happen that way - it would be Alden that gets teleported

Lee

Thanks fr the chapter. Kon is severely underestimating that gift. If it's anything like Alden's earring...it would probably be the best cup of orange juice this side of the Galaxy. Who's the other characters? I miss your funny character list but it made me lazy to remember side characters. Hehe

PeasOfCrab

What a chapter - so much info revealed. And now the timeline of Alden's Choosing Season has largely been revealed.

Jim

I'm 100% sure after today that Kon has a new tattoo

Jim

One other thing that jumped out at me. The wizard who discovered Earth pissed off the people so much his name was forgotten

BeautifulBusinessBoi

Chekhov’s infogear has finally been fired lmao. I do think it’s kind of sweet that the informant considers all of the Avowed his family, even tho it’s worrying in a fun way. And he’s apparently a lot less close to Aulia than he was before, so who knows if he makes this info available for sale?

Elle

He wanted to be a quiet rabbit.

Skull Leader

I am curious if Alis how recent she was offended by the justifications a group had for wanting more human Ryeh-b’t Avowed. Was this AFTER she met Alden and gave her commendation? Cause I can see that the fastest way someone would offend her would be for them to use Alden's commendation as a justification for why more Human Ryeh-b't would be a good thing. It diminishes his actions if someone were to imply that average human Ryeh-b't would act/accomplish what Alden did. I could be wrong here but I feel like Alden is part of the reason she is offended by their justifications.

Bzzt

This is interesting. I’m assuming the informant already knows all there was previously to know about Alden Thorn because he’s been conspicuously hanging around Knights. But it’s funny how he stumbles immediately into the new information

GreatSwordsmith

The informant's attention sure is scary. Everyone thinka he's just a normal spy, but with his skill he can extract information from people without them ever saying it aloud. Hopefully he won't decide Alden is interesting enough to warrant that

Jazehiah

I dunno, Alden used some of the same phrases when talking about Matadero. "Just a normal cube. Very boring."

Eva

His AI screens for the interesting stuff, we are just here for this particular moment.

jose sanchez

NOOO!!. ¿Se viene el final del conejo tranquilo? Is the end of the quiet rabbit coming?

Guus van der Borg

I just realized, dimensional exploring being frowned upon might be another reason why Stu hesitated to explain the original intent of his chosen skill. When he was hesitant to say the original intent of the skill he said it was because many previous owners were dissapointed that it took some growing before it could be used that way, but now I think part of it was also that Stuart thought it might sound to others like he was one of those 'glory hunters'. Another reason why people might frown upon Stuart's choice to be a knight. They might have issues and/or think Stu has inappropriate intentions with his skill choice. (Though I doubt his family thinks that way.)

MelRein H

That's real bad. Everyone knows Alden is an interesting kid already, but until now, no one knew he was hanging out with a knight regularly. Much less the primarys son. People may have very very rude inclinations if they learn of that.

abowden

It's interesting to finally find out what the controversy with earth was all about. And yeah, I guess it makes sense. I'm also fairly certain I know what the mug does, given it's name, who likely made it, and their specialty in multiplying materials that are otherwise hard to obtain. It's also amusing to learn that the informant actually does it for the love of the game. I have a bad feeling about what a surveillance/data crunching/ghostly simulacrum creating network of the caliber he has access to will be able to glean from Alden.

J Reynolds

Wow. The Artonan justice system. "You tried to utterly screw up the lives of many people. In such a way that all the advantage redounded to you. Well, I guess you should repay this. FOR YOUR ENTIRE LIFE!" And this is from an executioner who is pretty junior. What could a senior executioner do? "Hey. Let's keep de-aging you, so you can keep on serving until you have repaid the loss of lifestyle that you could have caused. In full!"

Ers20

I feel like it's been implied a few times now that human wizards are absolutely a thing the Artonans considered and are extremely conflicted on. So I'm guessing that when Alden does reveal things to Stu, at least some of his fears will prove true and Stu will feel obligated to tell someone...

Npf

A Free Skeleton

Artonans and chaos showed up on Earth at about the same time, so probably one caused the other. That is, either the Artonans exposed Earth to chaos by visiting, or chaos made it to Earth some other way and the Artinans followed to clean it up. This is one of the big mysteries of the lore. Or it was, I guess; I think Stuart just flat out told us it's the first one. Just tweeted it out. Some explorer found Earth, and then the Artonans had to either seal us off (?!) or give us the standard chaos-management package. This is very clearly a matter for proper discretion, I'm so glad Stuart sucks at that.

STORRM

"The people Alden knows are kind of boring" i kinda want to see kons pov now as he shows up and meets the primary's family, his internal monolog as it all clicks but he comes to the wrong conclusion.

Ano Ano

She must have been offended before she met Alden. People saw the commendation as an expression of that disagreement and not the genesis of it.

Npf

The informant finding out Alden's big secret could very well imply Aulia finding out too. Finding out if humans can do wizard magic was their big shared goal that the informant has mostly given up on.

Dalton C Vieira

Could someone please remind me who Elias is?

MWF

The informant is generally inclined to keep things to himself unless someone asks, so my only worry is what he may be inclined to tell Aulia

Jess

I'm sorry, I want to concentrate on all the lore dropped in this chapter - but did they really give Kon a wizardly Big Gulp?

MWF

He's the Informant, an OG Avowed Wright with a huge spy network AI and apparently a curious ability we haven't seen in action uet

Jeff Wells

This reminds me of the recent deluge of cold murder cases being solved by DNA evidence gathered via companies like 23&Me. Obviously most of the murderers are smart enough not to submit their own DNA, but I'm most cases even a second cousin's DNA narrows the search enough to identify the killer. There is a similar kind of situation with de-anonymizing private digital data. With enough data points you can infer a whole lot of accurate information even without direct access to any of that info.

MWF

I'm currently of the opinion that chaos is something like geothermal energy except for the universe: it's always there below the surface, but generally not that close except in a few select places. I'd imagine that what the Artonans do is either drill down to access it or harness naturally existing weak spots.

Jason Harpster

Undone by SWAG!!!!!!! 😆🤣

Tauwetter

Sounds like the US justice system to me… Though the penalty is higher because he is part of the privileged class, so maybe not. The system seems to work towards repayment and personal betterment, not pure punishment and, if I understood correctly, he can reduce the sentence by showing commitment to his obligations.

11037

One must admit Alden is a good choice for entertainment. It's like there could be book written about him or something.

MWF

Lol, so true. General disinterest in ignorant Avowed aside, how often was she going to get the chance to ask an Avowed victim their opinion on the wizard who misused their services?

Fabian

Alden gonna affix holding pain to save Stu.

Jeff Petkau

Sleyca: "It was going to be ten days from now...I agreed to delay half a year." I read this as saying it's going to be in ten days, and the half a year is almost up. From the comments I can see that some other people made the same mistake. It might help to add a word: "It was originally going to be ten days from now..."

William Johnson

It's really more his little secret, that he's friends with the primary's son. Although info grandpa getting interested in Alden might risk the big secret if some of his equipment can detect authority use.

Taylor Young

I found the statement that Rapports feared a wizardly genocide on Earth to be ambiguous — could mean that Artonan wizards might have genocided humans or that human wizards become a thing and genocide humans or, I guess, most darkly that humans get genocided by Artonans because human wizards become a thing.

Ducktacular

Kons ability to supply bonding potion has been increased a thousand fold. Next arc will be the fated show down between Medhi and Helosia.

Aspiring Moth

"hey Satan, mind if I preserve that important part of the universe?" "sure, bud" it would need outside verification from approved authorities for that to be the case. BoaB just needs some potentially shady guy to give a thumbs up in its general direction

Monraz1995 1995

Ughhhh, I loved the episode and at the same time it reminds me that I hate to start series that are not finished (something I do all the time, yes, I'm crazy). I am left suffering while I wait for more episodes. PS: Thanks for the chapter xD

Cassie Brooks

Whoever is left standing after they drain 1000 gulps wins the prize of explaining to Orlorn how and why

Isak Mark

If the knights were against earth being a resource world and are actively against contact/summoning humans why are Esh and Lind on earth? something doesn't add up.

Cassie Brooks

It is interesting to put the scene where the Informant is deciding to abuse his mastery over reality brought about by his skill in a very wizard-like manner in the same chapter as the scene where Stuart lets Alden know that ambitious and powerful wizards are too influential to prevent the senseless expansion of the Triplanets. It just feels like a good parallel. Wizards are to Earth what Elias is is to Alden’s choosing season

Taylor Young

gently correcting to “tenterhooks” so your wordchain doesn’t fail in the future 😉

Matt V

Well, this puts Alden on a timeline. The question is, which decision is on the timeline? At the very least, he's telling Stu either before or just after his affixation. But I think there's still a decent chance he tells Stu much sooner, and alternatively, this could be the timeline on when he commits to knighthood. I'm envisioning a scenario where Stu is yet again shunned/babied by his peers and struggles to find his "first squad of peers", and Alden steps up. My assumption has always been that Alden completes at least one full year at CNH, and this timeline would fit. Though I don't think Alden will be ready to completely cut the cord on his Earthly tethers. I could see a universe where Stu comes to Earth instead of the other way around. Or they split time between the two as they work toward whatever the special bonding thing Emban was trying to get with Ryada in the Here to There. No matter what, I think we're getting a major shakeup in 6 months.

Taylor Young

“I’m corrupting the family of the Primary and the Quaternary” with fruit baskets. I literally did a blurt laugh at this line. 😂😂😂

Taylor Young

Not all knights felt the same way, but they agreed to have their vote cast that way in deference to how strong the feelings were among most. Maybe Esh and Lind were squishier?

Tauwetter

I always thought Stu should become an exchange student at celena north. Imagine him in engaging with the unexpected 🤣

Jim

I wonder if forgetting A wizard's name is magically enforced. Like, someone literally cannot remember his name if they see him or its gibberish, some shun symbol or their mind just skips over it if they read it

Rodmin

Oh.... i thought until now it is in 10 days and was excited that those 10 days would hopefully be over in a few rl months. Of it takes another half a year in the story that would be what? 2-3 years away?

Stuart Brown

The two elements written together here - between Alden thinking about his choosing season between Quiet and Loud Rabbit, and the Informant perhaps beginning the first steps of forcing the issue regardless of Alden's wishes - is very interesting. It looks like the start of a race between Alden and the rest of Anesidora over who gets there first - does Alden reveal it on his own terms and in his own way, or is it thrust upon him when too many prominent Anesidoreans are made aware of Alden's many peculiarities?

Gaffer

The informant is going to be hitting reload to get the latest scoop on Saturdays just like the rest of us

MWF

Lol, agreed. Although I will say this is the first time I've followed a series so closely as it was being written. I have a newfound respect for how much time, energy, and discipline it takes to make a really good series. If it's this hard being on the "slurping up the soup" end of it, how difficult it must be to write on a deadline and juggle so many plot possibilities.

Cassie Brooks

It is SUPER BAD to me that wizards want more Ryeb’hts. At least with this info in mind. It speaks to Stuart’s comment that they live in an age of excess. Knights having to protect every single resource world from which selfish wizards try to source servant labor even though the knights are nearly all aligned against taking on more responsibility than is required. Alien species being slowly deprived of power in favor of abilities more convenient for wizards. Ro-den making artificial demons (though who can say what that’s for). The Ryeb’ht lifestyle boiling down to being disrupted all the time and appearing as good as possible to Artonan society. IMO- the knights and resource worlds are owed a little more from those with power than they seem to be granted right now.

Tauwetter

I doubt it is magically enforced, but names are incredibly culturally significant. Mourning names to remember a loved one and bithe forsaking his family name so his father can’t claim him as his son are just some examples. Stripping a wizard of his name in history sounds like one of the worst punishments or slights to an ambitious wizard.

Krae Z Hand

Intensity level 4 is getting farther and farther away. Alden, you are going to be living at 99 very shortly

J Reynolds

Next chapter: Alden goes back to Matadero and has a four hour nap. Then flies to Anesidora where everyone gives him the third degree.

jose sanchez

I understand that life doesn't happen in the order you want it to, that when it hits, it usually happens all at once. And that pressure creates diamonds. But this kid needs a break, maybe a vacation to Chicago where he can stabilize and cut all the threads he wants with his own hands, instead of having them ripped out. What I'm saying is that the timeline could be stretched a bit by giving a little time between events so they aren't compressed into a matter of days. By the way, I love the story so far, and it's more of a wish than a suggestion. P.S. Don't use so many *

Whaler Whaler

The way my heart dropped at "...tell me why Alden Thorn is interesting...,"

C D

Gorgon is probably the last of the first species that the Artonans first encountered, the ones responsible for their societal uplift.

Gregory

Presumably the artonan ambassador to earth is part of this faction, since he wants the same thing, and is a jackass. Worrying that he got his position, given that.

Emdee

“Earth was especially upsetting because your similarity to us presented so many opportunities for cultural upheaval, abuses, and…other issues. There were a lot of issues" Wonder what those could be :) More confirmation on how _unbelievably_ similar the Artonans are to humans. A couple of similar quotes from past chapters: 110: "'Chainer is already ultra rare on Earth, but it doesn’t even exist on most planets.' He held up his hands and wiggled his fingers at Alden. 'There are some unique anatomical requirements if you want to be good at the whole job instead of just parts of it.' ... And then the Palace took a peek at Earth and thought, ‘Wow. Look at those aliens. Those are some gorgeous bastards. Let’s introduce them to our holy purpose.’" 209: “I’ve spent the past several nights reading the opinions of your planet’s <> and scientists on the human mind, and the opinions of Artonan healers and philosophers on the same. I will develop my own knowledge as we go. But isn’t it a wonder? To have found thought so much more like than unlike our own in another part of the universe! And so the Artonan conclusion of "oh these humans, similar body, thought and so -- why not magic?" surely was the undercurrent of the discovery, and those in the know have an idea of how the last (and only) one went. We see that they've started to drawback from Earth as well: 70: "The Triplanets had been more hands-on in the decades immediately following the creation of the Contract, when the discovery that the rest of the universe was out there and pretty far ahead of Earth had caused a lot of upheaval. Nowadays, they weren’t as eager to involve themselves." Is this because the Rapport has started to get its political power back like Stuart just said? Also 80 years to regain your all political capital and still not getting your way... how badly did they blunder lol or was it literally them versus 90% of their society? I can't help but wonder how the Rapports feel about humanity considering Joe's famous quote, even if they voted against the inclusion of Earth as a resource world. 28: You see, we Artonans generally consider Avowed to be either children in need of instruction [paternalist faction?], beasts of burden [rabbity wizards], gifts from the holy universe [chainer church?], or existential threats to our species [Joe + some knights?] Mother knows best, but we don't know enough about her to understand if she has her own agency. Is she making decisions for the entire species? 60: "It’s not illegal for you to have it. Or use it. Or learn magic. It would deeply gratify some to know you are pursuing your course. And it would mortally terrify others." The thing I cant help but think of is that Alden revealing his magic isn't just setting intensity level 99 for himself, he's resetting the complete framework of Artonan/Human relations. All the while coming in as a human knight as a statement that he is upholding the highest duty even while revealing humanity's potential. I would be a conspiracy theorist if I was an Artonan in the anti-Human political party and I see this kid roll up

Aspiring Moth

I understood the gifts from the holy universe faction to contain the knights and those most involved in the fight against chaos. the avowed are a large group of reinforcements to a battle that seemed like a losing one. this faction thought existence was in imminent danger, and designed masterwork infinitely scaling skills. they wanted the whole purpose of the contract to be delivering these skills to avowed and aiding them in their use fast forward a few thousand years, and no one really thinks reality is in imminent danger. and knights are stronger, so they take the majority of the burden. this resulted in avowed being less useful than initially thought, especially when combined with the neutering that the other factions insisted on. Joe said that the philosophical descendants of the Holy universe people still insisted on the original 300 avowed skills being preserved in some form though the knights with actual political power that we've seen in relevant contexts are Alis-art'h and Esh-erdi. neither treat avowed like existential threats, or regard them as workhorses, or children to be spoken down to. I think then that the current knights must still be the philosophical descendants of the holy universe faction, even if they don't really believe in their principles completely or with the same fervor

David

“… and it must not be allowed to fail. The worst fears of knights were never realized anyway. Earth has been untroubled by <> wizards and chaos. Mostly.” I know that it was stated that no competent wizard would have used the sinker-sender to attack Matadero, but Stu seems to be implying here that certain wizards have a motive for an attack like that. Is this why Esh was so concerned? I have no idea what that motive might be, but if the Knights are afraid that genocidal wizards might do something to Earth, there must be a reason for them to fear that. Is it the xenophobic faction, scared that humanity might be similar enough to become wizards? Does the fear stem from precedent? Are these mysterious motives the same as those of the demon Stu’s mom fought?

Skull Leader

I can't get the image of Bayab-oth acting like an entitled young master of your average Xianxia out of my head. And on a bad day, Stu deciding to just face slap him. Course honestly Stu more likely to metaphorically face slap someone in a biting verbal social shamming than physical action. Which is still fairly on brand with Xianxia stories.

St Patty

This would prolly be referring to the Artonan political faction that see Avowed as existential threats

Merf

He might have been given the privacy of the house tattoo

Cassie Brooks

What I will say in Elias’ defense is that he is not aligned with Aulia (see Know Thyself), the Triplanets, (don’t know the chapter but the deal he struck for the Key of Voices), or Anesidora’s Council (the convo with SkySea). He also seems to actively want to distance himself from people who want to control the power of Avowed. If anyone on Anesidora were going to figure out Alden’s secret and make some bargain with him that actually resulted in more cover for Alden, it would be Elias

BelligerentGnu

No no. Alden may need a break, but what *I* need is a confession scene already!

foldedcorners

Well shoot, we knew it'd happen eventually as soon as this old fart was introduced, and the ominous "even the delegates keep their phones in a safe"

Aspiring Moth

Lexi and Writher will definitely be giving Alden a talking to, assuming Lexi is staying on campus for the weekend due to his housing situation. Haoyu and Lute will just find it funny, probably

Tauwetter

He tried to give friendly advice Olget, how much worse would it be when he actually tried to verbally slap someone?

Terrestrial_Biped

Timing doesn't work out. They're slated to affix at roughly the same time. Skills are unusable for about a month after affixation.

Matt DiMeo

I wonder if the Artonans have more luck in unnaming people than the Ephesians did with Herostratus.

Scarlett O'Hare

I don't expect that the Informant is going to force the exposure of Alden's magic. He might force the issue of why Alden is hanging out with the Primary's family, and try to schmooze with Alden. Though I would also expect Alden to not want anything to do with the Informant due to wanting privacy.

Emma Mass

I think this chapter more or less confirms that chaos is like a contagion that requires innoculation to spread. Stu art mentioning having to seal a realm being cruel; perhaps because if the sentients on the other side were ever capable of travel, are now barred from doing it, but I think it's largely because it creates an entrance for chaos to spread unchecked to a place that didn't originally have it, to life that may have no idea how to defend against it or no resistance to it. If chaos is like a exponentially replicative virus, the more foothold it gains on reality the stronger, more prolific and difficult to contain and eliminate it becomes. I'm beginning to suspect that chaos is an artificially made problem. Some wizard, or group of wizards very long ago, botched a spell, or maybe even intentionally created a malicious spell, that resulted in the unstoppable contagion named chaos. Also really paint the empire of the triplanents as imperialistic. Uncaringly spreading their influence And exploiting the power, by creating systems that keep the resource would fascinated by their new abilities but never truly allow them to succeed, while also at the same time hoping the resource worlds they inadvertently introduced chaos to would fix the problem for them, and if not, using them to fix the problem. I get why the rapports are so up in arms about it

JennP

He wanted to be a Quiet Rabbit for a while. Not forever.

Gaffer

“Thrice the number of years Uro-bor had served his mother, to be spent in productive labor for the betterment of the peoples of the Triplanets” Sure hope someone out there could use a few hundred years’ castings of a shitty force spell that can’t even kill a kooba puppet

11037

I've envisioned the opposite, that chaos is a natural consequence of their magic, like pollution. Or maybe entropy. It seems like it might be authority that's been unbound from identity.

Endaris

"a ewtwee", if this is not supposed to be aN ewtwee I want some guidance on the pronounciation

Npf

I've thought for a while that one reason Artonans might not have wanted earth as a resource world was because the two species being so similar might make Artonans worry that humans could eventually develop authority senses. Which would of course be terrible if people they've forcibly affixed learn (like alden) to feel the horror of what it actually is doing to them. It would be considered super unethical. I think Ro-den may have mentioned that idea early on too. Either way, Artonans should be absolutely horrified if they find out about Alden's authority senses. There might be big huge political ramifications (if Alden goes public, would the artonans stop creating new avowed from earth??), but I would hope that a big part of anyone's reaction would just be horror on Alden's behalf. That he got some of the worst parts of being a knight on accident.

Nathan

Feels very much like voyeurism, I didn't like that.

Lystic

I know the Informant has been shown being shady AF, but I wonder if his storyline is going to play out that way. When you think about it, what Alden has - connections, potential magic lessons - aren't things that can be stolen or forced from him. He's going to need some kind of healthy relationship with Alden in order to pry out what he wants. He should have enough data on Alden to know that he hates old powerful people showing up at his doorstep and coercing him with money or power. I wonder if this is the beginning of something more political. The knights seem spread thin and worried about taking care of new resource worlds. Wouldn't it help relieve them of some burdens by making sure Earth could take care of itself? By, perhaps, getting a small group of powerful avowed learning magic so they could protect it? And maybe only after they swear an oath Alden saw during a ceremony on Artonan I, only this time they swear to Earth?

SnuggleCat

The informant using people's lives as Saturday morning cartoons is both funny and concerning. Really says a lot about the character.

shawn greer

i love this. "the mind trap was how my mother loved me" we got closure on a few things here. stu's lack of split vision. when he affixis. alden set a deadline for his choosing season. why earth is controversial. and ofc we got the end to the HTT.

David

My theory is that when a wizard goes searching for a new dimension, they poke a hole through some kind of membrane, which — either from the magic itself producing chaos or from the ambient chaos in the wizard’s universe leaking through — contaminates the new dimension. If nothing is done, that seed of chaos metastasizes and eventually breaks through at the point of first contact, allowing a steady stream of chaos to pour through. I think the sealing that Stu mentioned stops that, but it doesn’t remove the original chaos that snuck in, which will eventually accumulate and destroy the dimension. It probably takes a very long time, but to cause a problem and not do anything about it is indeed cruel. The alternative is to send protectors and to train the native people to defend themselves, an obligation that the Artonans have utterly failed to meet. They seem to think that because and while the chaos crisis isn’t urgent, the people they’ve conquered don’t require the consideration they’re due. This state of affairs has persisted, civilization after civilization, for thousands of years, and their negligence has reached a point where they cannot even disclose the true nature of the chaos problem (even among soon-friends!) without destabilizing the nascent contract and consigning a world to oblivion.

MWF

...I'm going to need to look that one up but I *think* I know what you're talking about. (Library of Alexandria guy? No?) I really need to study classical history more.

Jack Slash

Another really good chapter aaa, and v smooth transition from the here-to-there to what happens next, feels a bit like an epilogue but we'll get to see what happens right after. The slow but steady pace feels really nice. Thank you for the chapter!

J Reynolds

"Olget, today we're going to teach you how to use a Cleaning Wand." [Olget is handed a broom]

denatured

I've been wondering if Whan-tel’s Art: Conducting Power through the Hands is somehow as special as the Forgetful Traveler's bag. Are those extra hard spells for the gifted? Is Alden unknowingly prepping to slap a bunch of faces, chinese-webnovel style?

Jose Oxrim

Hello sleyca,(if u even see this). I am saddened to say i am no longer able to sub as im trying to change my financial situation. I will be here till end of month. Super Supportive was and is a wonderful journey to be on. I hope to get back here soon. May you be blessed with overflowing ideas.

Person Guy

Since he was able to proceed directly from wizarding for kindergartners to that with no real guidance or even basic cultural understanding of magic, I'm going to guess not.

Jose Oxrim

And of course, thank you for the chap. I am rooting for Alden reveal and it being fun and epic. I have recommended this book to many peopol who i hope will find as much enjoyment in it as i did.

C. Adkins

Thanks for the chapter! And as my daughter was born today, Im going to pretend Sleyca made this soup extra special 🥰

50cant12

The turning of an eye in so many ways

puppy0cam

Why does the triplanets seal individual worlds away from the universe when it would be more effective and future proof to just seal themselves and the rest of the worlds under their management away from the wider universe? if it really wants to avoid encountering new species, then sealing itself away seems like an optimal strategy.

ghostb1tch

ahh yes, those not-special, very boring friends of Alden hahaha

Ano Ano

When Stu turns an eye, he often sees his mother. A remnant of a mind trap that made all his days perfect. Then we have the Informant turning his eye to Alden Thorn on a day he sets aside to be as perfect as possible. Great mirroring. And with the meat of the chapter being about how the knights didn't want to contract Earth due to the danger, the theme of what the powerful will risk for a selfish "perfect" is pretty great.

Jim

“When the mug was filled, it was to be carried upstairs by a single levitator disc controlled by a remote placed in a drudgery box by the small robot that reigned over several such boxes in the hidden space beneath the staircase.” Harry Potterbot?

Glitter Rabbit (C)

Okay, Stuart revealed another one of his truths to Alden. It's also clear to me that Stuart is very aware of Alden's intense interest in Magic. He likely doesn't know why Alden is so interested, but it is just fitting that Stuart has his own observations about Alden that he does not bring up. I have absolutely no clue how their relationship will develop over the course of the next five (Artonan) months. I was so utterly convinced that Alden would tell Stuart his secret sooner rather than later. I don't know why exactly, but this arc has made me doubt a lot of things... I almost don't want to return to the school arc even though a lot of interesting stuff is happening there too. Anyway. Let's hope Alden survives Lexi's wrath.

MWF

I think somehow this chapter confirms for me that Gorgon is an Ilket. His POV chapter way back when mentioned something about his homeworld being lost beyond the gates of space and time which sounds pretty reminiscent of sealing off a universe. It would also track with a horrible disaster destroying his world/getting it quarantined and explain why the Artonan knights were consequently being reaaally against taking on a new resource world in the wake of that disaster. The timing might also hint at why Gorgon wound up on Earth as it was probably easier to sneak him into a less established world that wasn't used to normal artonan strangeness. And it lines up because the Ilket kerfuffle seems to have happened decades ago and that's when he wound up on Earth. I do wonder a bit about why his form would have changed (but he did say it did) and why he'd consider his species primitive, but everything else lines up. Granted I could be way off base bc Alden only has so much info but it would explain some things.

MWF

Also I understand way better why Stus family is so worried about him. Tolerating eternal torment is one thing, one very big weighty thing, but setting up a showdown between eternal torment and a utopian mind trap in his brain seems like it would run a very real risk of driving him insane. Also also, me and my thing for side characters, poor Mehdi. I hope he gets the chance to travel someday. I wonder if he would've been a rabbit if he could've. I'm having trouble imagining it but it would go a little ways towards explaining why he was so prickly towards Alden in particular.

Stuart Brown

When Alden's auriad is revealed, I wondered if some people on Artonan or Anesidora might assume he had been given one by the Art'h family. The info about the knights being strongly against Earth makes it less likely for Artonan society to think this (although they might still blame Stuart alone for it).

Daniel Andrews

I actually hope to god that Alden’s auriad is discovered by the informant. It would make the plot shift in an interesting direction.

Maximus

Oh, it's going to happen! He's definitely going to confide in Stu before Stu is bound, right? Oh, I do hope so.

Super Super Supportive Supporter

Before I read on, I have just read the phrase ‘Cup of a Thousand Gulps’. I don’t know what it does yet. But did the concept of a cup which is always half full recently enter the cultural zeitgeist? Because two days ago I had a dream where an artefact was found, a cup that would always remain half full of the most recent mixture of liquid it contained. You could never truly replace the liquid within, only endlessly dilute it. When it was found, it turned out the last person to use it pissed in it. Anyway reading on!

pierre boucheron

Kon's mastery of deception is astounding, truly

Sebastian Winter

I am wondering if Stu’s binding is the first point where Sleyca said the story could end. 7 months in story is about 2 years of writing time at the current pace, and Sleyca said the first point where they might end the story was about 2 years away…

JJ Hunter

Bithe's agonizing over whether to summon Kon makes so much more sense now, doesn't it. The Rapportsfolk must set a high bar indeed for when a human Avowed must be summoned.

JJ Hunter

I keep thinking of Esh saying, "Envy from people who see only the reward, and not the wreckage, isn’t worth the turning of an eye" (177).

puppy0cam

even if the informant figured out Alden has an authority sense, Alden wouldn't be able to teach him magic because of his contract with Ro-Den. He cannot act in a way that he believes would allow people to benefit from what he leaned from Ro-Den. That includes the system's attempts at bribery when you have refused afflictions for too long. Which is a course of action that they are highly likely to take if they gain an authority sense. They might not take the bribe the first time but they would the second time when they realise the contract stops giving a fuck about consent beyond that point.

Person Guy

That would, I think, only actually restrict Alden if he thought about people trying to avoid affixations after learning magic as a way for them to learn about system bribery.

Obbu

The topic of 'genocidal wizards' that Stuart mentions is a fairly interesting one for why the Earth contract might not have been aware of the plot regarding Matadero. If whatever 'sway' was involved was actually a wizard using mind control spells of some description, the contract would not be able to sense their thoughts.

50cant12

As soon as Alden returns to earth, he's going to be teleported into Esh's Arms

50cant12

I don't think it will be but I'm so excited for the upcoming drama

JJ Hunter

Heh. I was wondering if Alden might be tempted to stay at Matadero and get a nap in before returning to Anesidora and braving Lexi's potential wrath (happiness? confusion? anxiety?).

David

Predictions for the effects of the cup of 1000 gulps:

David

He can take one sip of something tasty and experience it for much longer He can take one sip (eg of water) and gain the effects of drinking much more. Best used with expensive potions! He can share the cup with 1000 other people per beverage (hopefully it self-sanitizes…) It provides the same effect as an IV bag, but it’s very portable

Martin Svensson

My original guess, there must be wizards that disagre about humanity etc... And the possible risk of throwing the Velras under the bus, a bonus, only a bonus. (Additionally, there is some slight risk that a wizard might be able, to forget his own crime, in theory at least, but this sounds overly complex. Anyway, looking forward to Sleyca continuation)

JJ Hunter

"'I noticed.' The Informant grinned. 'Show me more.'” A man excited by secrets, our Elias. Of the human Avowed we've met, he seems more than most to lean strongly into one primary skill, one defining / unifying persona ('the Informant') as his guiding star. To be the informant (to whom? anyone who can hire him?), he must first become informed; his 'perfect' Saturday includes recreational reviewing (i.e. snooping) of noteworthy footage. What criteria does Elias give his 'MBF' for selection? Wizardly secrets? Gossip-worthy events? Possible leverage on people he's coded persons of interest?

JJ Hunter

Given Elias is the one with “Γνῶθι σαυτόν” ('know thyself') written on his roof (188) like an advertisement of his temple of oracle, have a recommendation to feast your thoughts in this temporary fast between chapters: Sheena McKeever's "γνῶθι σαυτόν: A Reassessment of Plato’s Medical Metaphors, The ‘Self’ as a Scientific Subject of Ethics" is a fascinating and accessible read. https://web.sas.upenn.edu/discentes/2023/06/11/%CE%B3%CE%BD%E1%BF%B6%CE%B8%CE%B9-%CF%83%CE%B1%CF%85%CF%84%CF%8C%CE%BD-a-reassessment-of-platos-medical-metaphors-the-self-as-a-scientific-subject-of-ethics/

JJ Hunter

One wonders how 'authority' in this canon might map to 'soul' in Plato's writings, and what knowledge Elias thinks he's gained about himself and his 'self'. He's signalling human philosophy has bearing on his path and the services he provides; is that mere posing, or a deeper commitment to pursuing all knowledge that might help him bridge what missing an authority sense obscures?

Cassie Brooks

If the “old report” that Elias recognizes Kon from is another MBF report, then it maybe something like gossip. On the other hand, the interest in the goblet specifically probably means that Artonan connections to Avowed are deemed more interesting than, say, Jacob’s drug deal.

happypotamus, The Bearer of All Bananas

Artonan punishments are harsh. One problem with retributive justice systems, "three eyes for an eye" etc., is they create bad incentives. If you injure someone and the punishment will be severe, you may as well go on and murder them: dead people can't bear witness against you so you reduce the chance of being prosecuted, and you can be beheaded at most once, so you've already maxed out the punishment at some point before murder. It's surprising to me that the Artonans don't have a rehabilitative justice system, since in the Aldenverse a mind reader can get inside the head of the criminal and gain a better understanding of their chance of reoffending than is possible in our world. Ancient Earth justice systems were often retributive, but modern Earth justice systems are more about deterrence and rehabilitation. It's possible the sentence imposed on Olget is merely formal and then the Artonan justice system functions as a rehabilitative system afterwards, but this seems unlikely given how important it was for Olget and his brother that the witnesses unsay the allegation of the most serious crime. Another puzzle is that drugs and alcohol are freely available on the Triplanets, and this should cause a bunch of petty crime. Olget's particular crime might be unusual but there must be many other wizards like him who get drunk or high and then do something dumb. But Alden and Stu have to travel quite far to get to the Executioner, so there can't be that many of them, and she can see them immediately, so she can't be that busy. (I didn't get the impression she cleared her busy docket because he was the son of the Primary.) It is explained that most people resolve things privately rather than go to the Executioner, but it still doesn't quite add up. Given Sleyca's careful attention to worldbuilding, I suspect there are elements of the Artonan justice system that are not as they seem, or haven't been fully revealed yet, since what we've seen so far seems to have some gaps.

Jeremy Goldberg

I wonder how much of Oglet’s sentence he’s actually going to serve? For all we know, most wizard criminals get sentenced to hundreds of years of labor, but end up reducing their sentences to just a few years. It’s also possible that most wizard criminals are blackmailed into tattoo-contracts by whoever catches them, instead of going through formal channels. Finally, the justice system as shown here looks more like a recompense based system, rather than a retributive system, although I am not an expert.

AnonymousBlob

When there’s no new soup to read, there’s always old soup. This story is so beautiful, both in content and in writing. Doing a re-read, and came across this lovely paragraph in 118. ”He went backward in his mind, all the way to a better learning cushion in a worse place. Backward to the soft voice of an Artonan kindergarten teacher and the achingly hopeful presence of a grieving girl who kept reaching for a learning partner so that she wouldn’t be alone in the chaos anymore. Back to the moment when he’d first returned the friendly pat.” Got something in my eye just then…

Anthony Lutz

Probably countered by the fact we got a POV of oglets thinking on the situation, but what if the whole wand explosion was Tass's idea, in complete conspiracy with the family. Oglet is the perfect scapegoat to get the Bors to come back, even if other wizards (eg stu) realised it was him, the damage was not expected to be fixed so the bors would have probably returned. And I think it was odd that the whole family seemed happy to cover up the situation effectively destroying evidence.

Robert Mullins

Reminder chapter is close to 30 hours away instead of 6.

Alex Scriber

I appreciate that Olget’s sentence was based on the length of time he’d attempted to harm others for - it makes the sentence feel more just to me.

LittenLeKitten

Tass is happy about the Here-to-There, though. The whole reason they did the big, traditional journey is specifically because she wanted to do it, IIRC. And given how much the people from the village seem to love and respect her, I doubt they would leave in the first place if she herself wasn't the one encouraging them to go.

Chris Phoenix

I just ran across a non-fiction page about steelwork in the space program, which resonated a whole lot with parts of Super Supportive. For example, "Nevermind what that selfsame deviously-subtle water might have been doing to things, slowly, creepingly, invisibly, down there underneath the surface, unseen, unseeable, wicking, migrating, following surfaces and edges around to strange and distant places as water will, into things further away than you might at first, or even ever, imagine, including working its way along and into faying surfaces, possibly introducing corrosion into areas where corrosion would be fatal, or who knows what else." (I was re-reading the Waves chapters earlier today.) And this next section somehow feels like Alden trying to do his job in adverse circumstances, right down to the overly hot climate (but the author swears more than Alden does): "And you're the Turnbuckle Guy. The Pod Covers have been hung on the tower. And today, it's time to adjust the location of the Pod Covers so as we can mate the RSS to the Orbiter properly without smashing into it as we do so. And you're outside on the open platforming of the RSS. No air conditioning for you Mister Turnbuckle Guy. And it's the middle of summer, and it's suffocatingly hot and humid, and the Pod Cover is blocking all of the pitiful little breeze that's trying to blow across the blistering-hot sunbaked steel and concrete of the Pad and cool you off, and you're by turns knees-down on the steel-bar grating, or reaching too far up and across from a ladder, and the fucking wasps have built yet another goddamned nest up under the Floor Steel over your head and they're flying around and they don't really want you there, and you don't really want them there, and now the fucking horse flies have shown up, and you're sweating like a pig, but that only makes it worse, and your shirt's sticking to you like a wet sponge, and the motherfucking adjustment barrel will NOT go, no matter how hard you twist with the fucked-up pry bar, because the damnable siamese twins are, yet again, binding, locked in a battle to the death with each one trying to make the mounting bracket go a different direction as you spin (or... try to, anyway) its adjustment barrel, and there's five engineering, management, and QC overseer people standing around looking over your shoulder tapping their toes while you sweat and curse, wanting you to hurry the fuck up, and... Stop a minute here and consider this. Welcome to the fucking Space Age!" https://www.16streets.com/39-B/39-B%20Construction%20History%20-%20Space%20Shuttle%20-%20Page%20060.html

puppy0cam

you know what's really annoying? encountering a phrase in the story that I'm not familiar with, thinking to myself "oh I'll just google it!" and then realising no this is definitely a story thing and Google will just think I'm crazy if I looked it up.

puppy0cam

Chapter predictions!

puppy0cam

Stuart slips on a banana peel dum de dum don't mind me I'm just burying this fertility increaser in the garden Lexi is mad that both Alden and Kon are refusing to spill the deets on the interdimensional adventure they had together. A new change has happened to Alden's dreams. Lesedi Saleh gets a summons Mehdi gets a new upgraded model of infogear for free! the informant is so kind! A wizard cleaning up the ocean screws up a spell and it starts raining acid.

Insomniac

I wonder if Elias has a file on Alden and if he is, or willing to, sell his information. Also wonder if he takes payments from people to not sell certain information. His existence seems to be an open secret and Elias seems to be damn good at what he does. The easiest, and maybe most cost effective, way to keep your information safe would be to just pay him to. New head cannon that the grand witch's floating castle primarily exists as a countermeasure to Elias.

JJ Hunter

We know Aulia purchased an information 'lock' on Manon after Hazel killed her; Elias told her most people think Manon purchased it herself (188). Not clear if that's a comprehensive lock on everything about Manon, or just her current status / most recent doings, but it's suggestive of just how much the Informant is dominating the local information trade.

Ryan

A thought I've had- do we know if Knight skills are actually different from original Avowed skills? I would think that in those early, dire, days, the knights would have wanted as much firepower in their Avowed as possible, and what's better than a Knight skill? (Allowances for lacking an authority sense notwithstanding)? That said, we have only ever heard it called an Avowed skill. I wonder what other hidden abilities/affixations/ foundational points are being hidden from the Avowed - some ability to improve authority control/perception?

St Patty

Not confirmed, only common point known for sure between the "around 300" original Avowed skills and the skills Knights choose is that the skills have no growth cap.

SnuggleCat

Broke cat has left the chat. Will return when the mice grow more plentiful.

J Reynolds

"Alden, I want you to teach me magic," said a sinister, unnamed guy. "How the heck do you know I can teach you? And why should I, anyway?" "I heard you have a friend who is unregistered. Shame if someone snitched him out. You will teach me magic, won't you?" It was not actually a question. "Damn you, Object Shaper!"

Alan Miller

After re-reading yesterday's RR chapter, I'd forgotten entirely about that whole little segment of "how to embody being the wrong kind of wizard"

Jakc

Wow, the sentence is so harsh. It shows again that wizards are a bit fascists.

Aspiring Moth

fascism is when you give people community service for gross abuse of power against members of a lower class

JJ Hunter

"On the flight to campus, Alden checked his inbox and told himself that receiving over a thousand messages since he’d last looked wasn’t frightening. As was his usual habit, he focused on communications from the growing list of people he actually knew and left the rest of it for another day." (186) How many unread messages do we think Alden will have in his inbox when he gets back to Earth this time?

Aspiring Moth

something I think we largely overlooked "Bayab-oth received admonishment for lack of study in our toolless casting class" so they have freehand casting classes even at university level. if someone were hypothetically an avowed wizard who couldn't publicly use their casting tool, knowledge from this class would be very useful if you wanted to use an auriad spell as a fake spell impression freehand

Anthony Lutz

Its interesting that it's at the university level, but should be expected to some extent. You can cut down a tree with your bare hands, but using an axe (tool) or chainsaw (better tool/ritual?) makes it much easier to do. Its like teleportation, Alis had a ritual on her ship, but planets use sumonariums, and id assume the first wizard teleporting to the top of the mountain wasn't using any tools because they didn't know yet what helped them focus. Freehand casting would help the wizard learn what's really happening with the authority usage, despite the inefficiencies involved.

Jazehiah

I don't know if I've said it here, but I strongly suspect that wizards can reduce their own community service sentences by contributing more than what was expected of them. I think we got hints of this with Ro-den. Not only did he work non-stop for several days, but he submitted proposals to hasten the cleanup. Stu even suggested going to Earth because it would allow for more opportunities than teaching at Leafsong. There are other, smaller examples/hints I can think of, but none quite so concrete.

y r

Can someone remind me what MBF stands for?

Matt DiMeo

We don’t know, but it’s often speculated to be “Man’s best friend”

Catherine

I'm curious about how accessible life extension magic is for the common wizard. We know that Stu has access and is even planning to use it for Other Alden but of course he is an Art'h.

Blorcyn

Yeah. But on the other hand the Primary seems not-ancient. To be the Primary, you’d think they’d be very very old, and certainly there’s probably a lot of life extension, but he doesn’t seem thousands of years old to me?

Terrestrial_Biped

I think it's almost fully explicit, tbh. Vill-ma's remarks on both Olget and Joe indicate it so clearly I don't see how it could be missed. From this chapter: |||Vill-ma would review [Olget's] proficiencies with him so that she could find a placement for him that would make him useful and present him with opportunity to reduce his sentence.||| From last chapter: |||But now [Joe's] submitting modifications to decontamination spells, corrections to other scholars’ work on Earth oceans, and recommendations for strengthening our ties to the human species in the aftermath of this event. [...] All of that must now be evaluated toward his credit!|||

Daniel Andrews

Tftc! Has the next one been delayed?

Daniel Billings

"Cup of a Thousand Gulps" Artonia 1 is 7 Eleven, confirmed. Kon got a Big Gulp

Alex

The transition from the last chapter to this one was jarring. I triple rechecked that I didn't somehow miss a chapter. I kinda expected the punishment to be at the beginning of this one.

Jacob Harris

oh my god Stuart has human-thought-structure-ism. the Stu'lden Pair Bonding future is gaining more momentum by the moment.

Alex

“She’s not a hallucination because I don’t struggle to know she’s not really with me. But That does make it a hallucination right? If he couldn't tell if its real or not, that would be delusion. Maybe. I might actually want to look up the official definition of hallucination now.