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John_Lasko

“Then, in a movement too smooth to follow, she simply... wasn't there anymore. ERRONEOUS QUOTATION MARK SPOTTED. FILING REPORT. REPORT SUCCESSFULLY SUBMITTED

IdolTrust

Totally some make a Dual Cultivation book for them to grow faster. I think they would be making their own “guild” or “company” or “ branch” in the set. Because of the boy with stone guardian and the two servants. This next part is a far out theory. When Ke Yin expands his inner world he might be able to connect himself to his group to improve their overall abilities. Like a sapling placed in the inner world to slowly expand it by transferring blue sun energy. Also, the servants could get a mix of blue and red.

Touch

Propose Edit I met Senior Sister Liu's gaze steadily. "Yes. We'll participate." I believe “meeting gaze steadily” in this context is a bit strange, a body language more so on challenging or trying to convince the truth. “Look at her and nodded” seems much more appropriate.

Krenn

I really do think he should have another go at the two suns world. Yes there's a danger to it of soul damage but the time loop is too good to ignore. Plus he needs to learn how to use the blue sun runes/glyphs/tatoo's. I know going about that will be difficult unless he finds a good way to hide the red sun from the blue monks.