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Ekko

Another minion appeared or even the Masked One.... Also Wu Kangming is one arrogant prick. The whole flexing with stuff his teacher told him makes him seem even more of an ass, lol

Rah

Maybe the masked one, since he seems to terrify him

Neil H

> telegraphing Interesting word choice.

DeadSlime

One thing I’ve got to add is that having multiple chapters in a row from a different POV is kinda frustrating. If you matched the tones of Ke Yin chapters for the beast tide you could have some really nice parallels between them. I enjoy these chapters but I don’t really enjoy the diversion after you took multiple chapters setting up the beast tide to just cut over to Wu Kangming. It comes of as rather frustrating as it interrupts the pace for a long period of time.

Yanni

If I had to guess the masked man will get his addition to his collection even if he has to go himself. I also think he only sent those two out so he could confirm if Wu Kangming was actually protagonist material.

Gerald Monroe

Presumably li yuan saw sword grampa.

Christopher

Here’s hoping MC can smack him down, but it seems unlikely given the golden finger Wu Kangming has received.

Amari Charles

You think that the masked man can defeat the sword Saint once he possesses Wu Kangmking?

Ekko

Well, the Masked One is a System Guy so everything is possible

Dan Isl

Indeed. To add on a more general note, please try as much as possible to avoid the traps that tragically few authors can resist in this genre - frequent side-character POVs, flashback chapters, elongating a single temporally short scene across multiple chapters, and repeating the same scene from multiple POVs. As readers we're in it fundamentally for the MC's unique and interesting perspective, and cutting to something else, as interesting or convenient for exposition as it may be, is unlikely to be as satisfying as continuing the MC's journey.

Spencer seidel

The Masked One is the sword Saint that is why he was horrified, they were just there to give his new discipline some experience.

musashi

The OP Collector may hurt the Sword Saint giving Ke Yin an opportunity to help Brother Wu.

1FantasyFanatic

I love the alternate POV chapters. Really fleshes out the world.