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ThePickleBoss

Why have you done this to me 😭

Scion

Yeah this Cliff isn't fun

Phoenixdrop

Okay so that’s interesting and now I can’t wait even more for the results

Dan Isl

I knew there would be a POV switch lol

DeadSlime

Why author your extending this one seen over several chapters! You could have fed us their motivations slowly when we actually cared about them. They’ve only been introduced like 2 chapters ago I as a reader am not invested in them. It just distracts and feels like a waste of time to read. It’s not even the chapters are bad you’ve just placed them at a point that makes them uninteresting. What makes it worse is you’ll probably have the next 2 days dedicated to just these other Povs. Really doesn’t help it took so long to reach the blue sun academy making it more exhausting when you continue to delay.

Rah

Damn that’s both of tmrw chapters done then

Touch

I agree with this, I literally skip these chapters just so i could get to care or know about the characters first. Just come back for a reread today And I shouldn’t have come back, there’s not much point other than skimming major point