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C0bra$

Thank u for the story

micah Hogan

Thank you for the chapter!

Firinen

Undead mushrooms

Kaden

I’m so excited to nerd out then pass out

NicN

Tftc

Belial

With that reaction, I bet it's fungal zombies

GeneralBlack

Oh I am surprised! Jake is not one to declare exterminatus on sight normally

Karim Saadi

Mushroom undead ?😂

Berks

Fungi undead

wyattmon

Whats a poison world without mushroom? Thank you for the chapter!

solomon pagan

Zombie mushrooms really?

Fdrugc

Tftc

Phoenixdrop

I’m guessing more traditional zombie virus undead than what the risen are lol probably those fungus zombies from that one show I can’t remember right now

Demi

or zombie monkeys....it could go either way

joel southard

Thank you for the chapter

micah Hogan

Is it gonna be some sort of undead fungus? Or maybe like a cordycep?

Scott Miles

Some kind of fungal parasite? Ttftc!

Azayrian105

Calling it now it’s a bait and switch. These aren’t mushrooms.

Cinaeda

that kinda sounds as if those are undead mushrooms :D knowing Jake. enjoyed the chapter, many thanks! plus there was tea!

Seiryus

Jake has an uncanny ability to find mushrooms wherever he goes

Jeroen Turkstra

Tyftc Loving the realizations Jake is having about differences between monsters and enlightened races. I’m guessing, like others, these are gonna be mushroom undead somehow, bc what else could get his extinction drive going but evil mushrooms.

Beemoss

Tftc

Dave Mccoll

Would love to see Villy create a B-Grade avatar of himself and do a some cool insane shit with Jake on some world wonder.

Stevean Bozek

Cortyceps mushroom zombies. I'm pretty sure even the Risen would hate such disgusting creatures

Dhia

mushroom undead i believe? possibly wielding crossbows?

Misa

Tftc

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter

Tom

Undead mushroom men?

Ryan Linus

Monkeys not mushies

mpop

Undead mushrooms?!

Jason

lol at everyone (including me) thinking, "Ooh, undead toxic mushrooms?"

DirePants

Didn’t see that coming

Levi

Yeah it's an undead fungus 🍄‍🟫 society

Ben Cox

Has to be mushrooms, how tragic that Jake avoided being dragged to mycotic depths by going to the pantheon of life only to stumble into Venus and find undead mushrooms. Tyftc

Mitha

Absolutely. Thought I'd sound smart posting the idea, but everyone has it apparently.

Comeback Kid

I'm going to guess that instead of mushrooms, they all have puns for names. Like the Polter-guys, or the No-bodies.

Joshua Little

Thanks for the chapter.

Alex Cox

I think this is Jake meeting undead based off the mushroom that rains spores down on ant colonies to further the spread. Always wondered if it would classify as a Plant Monster or as an Undead entity to the system. It'd be hilarious if this is the only 'enlightened species' here tho

Borakthrash

Frog, frog, MUSHROOM, MUSHROOM, SNAKE ITS A SNAKE

Spicyice101

I doubt he can, though, since a lot of a God’s powers seem to be based on concepts, so I’m assuming even downgraded to B he will be overpowered due to his concept knowledge. He also can’t artificially trim his knowledge of concepts to be more in line with a B grade’s knowledge either due to his bloodline, so I doubt we are going to get a Villy & Jake adventure for a long, long time.

Tomer Yud

im thirsty for more

Siethrobo

Was going to say, only one thing elicits that reaction from Jake.

Sylphie

Ree!

Timothy Spradlin

Damn... everyone in chat is saying mushroom zombies. I agree but man what a twist if we were all wrong lol

Michael mann

Cordysept zombies! 😁 Time for Jake to show his scary side!

djthomp

Doesn't really feel like a monkey world so it's gotta be fungi.

P A J

Such immediate hatred... could it perhaps be... the mushrooms return?!

Xander

TFTC :) Welcome back peeps. I thought we'd be back on normal nonschedule after the weekend so I wasnt expecting this this early. Hope yer feeling better Zog. Oh and since everyone else has seemingly gone for "Fung-dead" I'm gonna put my money on Undead slavers instead :D Its a long shot but thats where the big bucks are. Suggested edits: "he had a lot of gaps in ** knowledge, " missing word "his" " in many plants and *whatnot* growing in" I realise this is a stylistic choice but maybe "other resources" instead. the "and/or whatnot" thing has always slightly jabbed my brain. It just seems too much like slang, especially from this well educated future leader or someone like the Sword Saint. YMMV though. " into *slumber once more*. We were one such team. The goal was never to slay the Boglord, but merely to make it return to the depths *and slumber once more*." Repetition. Since both sentences repeat the same information you could consider a rewrite of this bit otherwise I would suggest just ditching the last four words. "but was solely due to ** racial variant*," it feels like this is missing "the individuals" "about two months’ worth of flying **." missing word "away" "Jake had *long noticed* that his range with One Step" odd phrasing. perhaps "noticed early on" instead. "Not that Jake thought...to affect" you use affect/effect in this paragraph four times. its a little repetitive. Disrupt, influence, alter, infect, change. Lots of choice for swapping one or two out just for the sake of some variance. "Why no race in this Minor World *were*." should be "was" i think since race is singular. " benefit the *entire* world innately" unnecessary and repetitive from the sentence before. I suggest just ditching this. "die early *without barely* gaining any levels." The phrasing here is wrong. Either ditch "without" and add a comma or change it to "while" "was that his *entire* view of the subject" "whole" feels more natural here " Holy Church *because of* how their souls" suggest "due to" instead to avoid repetition. "Unsurprising, *seeing* the kind of world " perhaps "considering" instead since you use "seeing" later in the sentence as well

nathan

Undead mushrooms haha definitely

Richard Rader

Undead Mushroom People…. Fun

Clint

Definitely feels like a fungal plague that animates the corpses as a zombie hive. Somewhere between the yellow musk creeper and the last of us with a side helping of cordyceps.

Eden

Actual undead, not enlightened risen

Eden

Lmao i didnt even think about that, would make toysl sense for undead in this poison world to be fungal carriers

Ty Cooper

Undead mushroom men? Tftc

James Davis

Im assuming given Jake's reaction to the undead that it's mushroom related somehow. Maybe zombie like monsters similar to the last of us

Kyle

It’s the swarm

Jeroen Turkstra

I’m loving people going for the non majority guess. Saw another mention crossbows. But this feels like a more viable alternative.

Talmadge Hires

Was a reason given for the new chapter timing? It’s coming out almost 3 hours earlier. Not that I’m complaining

Corvid

I like to imagine that while jake is casually drinking tea with the Githyanki, Miranda and friends are all screaming and running for their lives in the prima seat. Just show him casually taking a sip, then smash cut to Lillian and William coated in bits while some B grade tests their fate.

zran

nah, is improbably they are wrong, there very few things what could trigger such reaction from jake so quickly, so unless this undeads shares the likeness of a certain orange f ..... it must be mushrooms

Corvid

Took the words right out of my... Mouth? Fingers? Keyboard? Eh, whatever. It's cordyceps

Brandon King

You just know that somehow jake is going to put some jake juice in that life pool and shenanigans, ensue..

NiceTryMate

I feel like Zogarth likes to sometimes remind readers that he doesn’t have a set release schedule. The chapter title says it all; Questioning assumptions.

Ctrl Alt Dust

Undead Fungi!! Death to them all.

brjenness

new conspiracy theory... phentonyl was first created by a mushroom.

Brian Small

Undead mushrooms people?

ABTelford

If Jake is automatically onboard with killing them - it’s gotta be fungus among-us. My guess is an animating-the-dead parasitic fungus like there is in South America. If it’s not some kind of mushroom then all us guessers are gonna have funny reactions tomorrow.

Gracie

tyftc 🧟

Jeryd Greer

Cordyceps body jackers incoming.

Hornbach

Next chapter: The last of Us Venus edition

Lemonsqueezy

I got the same feeling. These are undead "possessed" by mushrooms making them zombies.

Lemonsqueezy

Ophiocordyceps: the mushroom genus that takes control of creatures making them zombies.

Lemonsqueezy

Everyone, including myself, seems to think they are some sort of Ophiocordyceps mushroom.

Lemonsqueezy

I am theorizing that Jake is going to "upgrade" one of these frog people by the end of this small arch, on purpose or by accident. This seems to be one of the primary means Jakes forms alliances. He influences one member of a society with Jake juice, that person becomes extremely powerful by comparison and has an innate alliance to Jake by seeing him as his father or patron.

Josie

Ah well it's not the awkward "you want me to genocide these snakes for you?" I was thinking of.. yet 😊

Nathan Holliday

Oh my god! It’s an undead mushroom isn’t it!

Rewdan

Let the carnage begin. A mass slaughter of the undead

Rewdan

I have a feeling that Zogarth has had a bad experience with mushrooms 🍄

Andrew

I think it'd be cool if Jake leaned more into his perception special interest by like easily being able to perceive things like the gender of a race. I get that it's like his personality but he's got way too much perception to play a fool on basic traits imo.

Kevin Watson

they’re absolutely mushroom related, i’m guessing ophiocordyceps. is it too naive for me to hope that this shaman comes back with jake?

Foot of Doom

The mycotic undead have arrived!

E

Jake could really benefit by having a toxic world right next door that grows his palate. And he could really help them since he just so happens to specialize in helping monsters evolve into high tier variants

blucube 14

Thanks for the chapter!

Biggy smalls

It be kind of neat if these likely undead mushroom operated like the flood from halo with a hive mind. Hopefully Jake pisses off this A grade hivemind boss and has to come back in Late B grade or early A grade to deal with it.

brjenness

The Bizney Group had a chef use poisonous mushrooms to knock Zoggy unconscious so they could use their security forces to take over his dungeon shortly after it became popular. they also kidnapped his lifelong friend to get him to sign over rights to the dungeon and make it legal. Zoggy had to sign over his rights to save Astrid, but he was able to use a special amulet to escape with her to our dimension. so, yeah, you could say it was a bad experience.

brjenness

demon lord greets jake by calling him dad. takes jake a little while to figure out villy is playing a prank on him.

Austin Barton

Last of us zombies? Mushroom zombies? Planet extermination?

D

Endless empire?

Mrburns93

Mushroom zombies? Dope

joker ledger

what are the chances of this shaman joining Jake monster family? he got Sylphie at E, Sandy at D, and Vesperia and Jasper at C. Following that, he would be making some at B ranks.

Carl Never

This is going to be so sick on audio ive been in the habit of driving into the sand dunes and listening with the sunset the world building from this arc is going to fit right in

Carl Never

Well when the aliens invade and it turns out you slept with a man with 3 boobs ill remeber this comment ill still say hell yeah 3 boobs

Robert Thomas

Can anyone help me? I am pretty new around here, and I really want to read all the Side Stories. Any help would be appreciated.

TwoMoreYears

I'm betting tomorrow we'll be meeting some undead with mushrooms growing out of them.

Yiskah

Jake needs more points in perception if he can't perceive the difference between a male and female.

Thomas Mccullagh

I wonder if villy shut up because this entire pocket dimension will end up being worshipers of his, as soon as they learn of him when Jake unleashes his aura fully or something. And villy cracks jokes non stop about it

ABTelford

Nope, because amphibians don’t have breasts and I am SO glad Zogarth didn’t give them any because I hate hate how all these authors give non-mammalian species milk-making organs. So, thank you Zogarth!

ABTelford

Go to Collections at the top of the page and they will be under Side Stories. They’re mostly in order.

Danny

Undead mushromms inc xD

JW Saxby

Tftc 🍻

ZanSanCho

Tftc Zog! Im crossing my fingers that its The Last Of Us style mushroom zombies

Levi Lowry

When Jake mentioned the risen and holy church being natural enemies due to the nature of their factions made remember sanguine and the founding of the vampires. I would love to see a new god come in and make a version of a transcendent similar to what sanguine made. Would be fun to see

Summer Coff

I like this chapter a lot. I think this story is at its best philosophically when it delves into the posthuman, where the civilized isn't more valuable than otherwise.

Chloe

Tyftc