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Hey Everyone,

Really sorry about this, but I only have three chapters for you this week. I'm going to try and get the next ones out in the next few days, but it's been a hectic week with construction happening at my house and me not able to get sleep. Apparently, according to my Whoop (Strange device Benjamin Kerei told me to get) I'm averaging less than 4hrs total sleep a night, which is wild. Hoping to get myself back on track soon, as we've 26 days until the submission date. :)

Anyways, hope you all enjoy this... and sorry for the evil cliffhanger last week. Hopefully you'll forgive me with this one, knowing that you'll get chapters sooner than a week.

Really appreciate all the inconsistencies you guys are finding. I'm making notes of all of them, so keep them coming when you find them. Also, as we finish up Book 4, I'll be changing the Patreon tiers and am looking to see if I can grandfather all of you at your current prices so you won't be affected. Apple has put in a silly new clause that means 30% of the cost of people registering with Apple devices is pushed on me rather than Patreon.

I've wanted to change the tiers for a while now, but wanted to focus on delivering the story first. Hope you've all had a great week, and I'll be in contact soon with more chapters. :)

Brian

Comments

Nate

Yay, for a moment there I thought I might have to actually work today haha now I can read these while at work.

Elli

Take care of yourself! That's always most important!

Nate

Void needle sounds like an OP weapon. Why do I get the feeling Sals going to try make Phase and Devour into abilities on the orb when he gets back? Those would be great abilities for front liners.

Thomas Todd

So Sal has a suit that can have new armour just added on to it as he develops it ...... Quest will have a breakdown if he reveals this

Gabriel Albino

Kind of expected the suit to have an evo rune but that's cool. I just dont think that something at epic would be able to produce legendar stuff even if it is during a limited time, unless that the energy cost is absurd Idk if it makes sense. Excited for the test drive though

Alteron

Thanks for the chapter, they are really flowing nicely

BrianJNordon

You'll remember that the Overcharge ability allows a grade increase. Anthony used it in the tournament. It's possible but takes a lot of essence to maintain :)

Benjamin Hartmann

Thanks for the chapters, get more sleep. And thanks for the info for apple devices. Don’t know if it applies to me but it is easily fixed. Happy reading everyone!

Nate

I can’t wait to see Upgrade’s massive fit when she realises that Sal and Fabi should not be left alone together in a workshop. Especially when they marked void needles and Strategist’s Dominion.

Gabriel Albino

That is what im expecting. Its just hard to think that another student is the only other example of such a handy ability so far. Hopefully the power curve of the general hunter and hero gets more exposure! Keep up the good work!

Scott Gable

Can’t wait for Sal to return and be like ‘hey I went away for a couple months, built a crafting vending machine, and I now can make guns materialize out of thin air’…

Dale Medford

Ok, finished those. Ready for more chapters now :)

Dawn Zeleznik

His new suit sounds great. For some reason I thought it would be like a pair of coveralls. 😀Can’t wait to see what it does in a dungeon.

Sloth

Got spoiled with 6 chapters last week. Now it feels like it’s not enough

Timothy Olyphant

Man.... I had a hunch you'd make it epic grade on first glance, but it's really myth grade without calling it myth grade sprinkled with legendary components like the guns. This suit is so overpowered if he get a hold on all the different funtions of each suit.... watch out. Only thing left is building up his confidence and he will clear dungeons alone.

Nate

What does submission date mean? Is it hen you need to have book 4 to the publisher?

Ron Blondeau

Loved the new chapters but, like most people I wanted more! Going to need some rereads regarding the battle suit as it sounds complicated.

Charles Gillentine

Bro is gonna need a bandolier full of cores for all this lol

keoki

Thanks for the chapters. The jumpsuit sounds cool, since he might always have a base-layer of protection on too.

Maakolo

tftc! Though didnt Sal already have a vague idea of how the suit would work, since he read a description in a previous chapter?

Heather Herren

Awesome!! Can’t wait to see what the suit does!!

Josen Pottackal

It feels like you're jumping the shark with how op everything is getting without enough struggle to justify it. It's cool in the moment, but it feels very hollow.

Dr. Chaos

Just wondering. How is Sal going to protect the Arkwright from being teleported or portaled out of his workshop?

Tanstaafl

Regarding the blatant and undeseved greed of Apple, take a lesson from Amazon. Allow a rate from those of us that use the web version of Patreon a base price and pass along the surcharge to those that use the app. If Apple does it Google will follow. Encourage your fellow creators to allow web users to avoid the app tax - it isn't worth it anyway. I get notified via email and use my PC to read the comments and th chapters. DO NOT ALLOW Apple to play mafia and demand 30% for doing nothing!

Robert Smart

Hmm it was a cliff but it took as 3 chapters to jump off. Anyway love it. This dungeon is gonna be interesting.

Dlandis

A stupendous day coming for a too good to be true moment, hoping the hammer isn't too heavy. Also, this last batch there were a few paragraphs that started with 'al' not 'Sal'.

Sean Shivers

The initiative and vendetta sets feel like they have the wrong names... initiative is reactive? Vendetta is proactive?