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Hey Everyone,

As promised, here's some chapters before the Monday release. It's more crafting stuff, but I had a lot of fun writing them. We'll have more interactions with other people and then will be able to move on with the story. I really enjoyed writing the Arkwright sessions, and this is an evolution of that. :)

I'm feeling much better now, and Chatfield has landed on my doorstep for the next 10 days. I'll be entertaining him and we'll be working throughout. The fecker sent over like 18 bottles of red wine before he arrived, so those of you wanting drunk chapters might get your wish. :D

Hope you enjoy the chapters and I'll see you all on Monday. Please don't expect 5 chapters then, though. I've no idea how the weekend will go. :)

Brian

Comments

Justin

LOL Drunk Chapters...I have been heard!!!! 😊Looking forward to getting back to having fun man, hope you and Chattie get blissfully blitzed!

Sloth

I’m annoyed he hasn’t bothered to get Perfect imprinted yet. It wouldn’t be difficult for him to set aside an hour with quest to get it done. He’s a savior anyways so he earned it. Now though, surely he can use skill paragon to just do it himself? I imagine he’d also be able to remove abilities in the same way he could knot them up before.

Matt Hamm

How do I find book 5 chapter one?

Alistair Reid

So this will be my first comment other than a generic good job! So I will start with good job! I genuinely do enjoy the story. And although sometimes the direction the story takes isn't my favorite, I overall enjoy the story. That being said, I REALLY do not like Sal being nerfed by no longer being able to replicate weaves in his body. I dislike it enough to leave my first negative comment. It feels like backpedaling, like you were worried he was too strong and wanted a way to improve his weave in one way, while restricting Sal in another way. It also makes me wonder if you are setting up a weakness in Sal on purpose, a kryptonite type thing. Sure Sal is op with gear...but slap a dimension lock on arsenal and next thing you know he's helpless and kidnapped by the bastion (a story arc I would personally hate). I still am a fan, and still will trust your storytelling, but it just sits wrong with me. Even if the skill creation ability is improved, the loss of utility makes the overall rating a definite downgrade.

C

Yes. More Strains! More undiscovered creations and possibilities. The NEW ERA IS UPON US ALL!