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Hey Everyone,

My travelling started a couple of days ago. Will be heading to the UK tomorrow and there's going to be a lot of back and forth until I'm back next week. I don't think I'll have much writing time, so the chapters for next week will be delayed by a few days. Really sorry for the inconvenience.

I'm still working on the Appraisal sheet, so don't get your hopes up on it being in these chapters. I didn't want us to spend too long on Sovereign, so it'll be wrapping up as we progress with the plot and the meeting with Arcology soon.

Hope you all had a wonderful weekend. Let me know what you think!

Brian

Comments

John Power

You're a bad man Mr Nordon, what a note to leave it on! Thanks for another great batch.

Jonathan Campbell

Why are all 3 labels shown as duplicate files?

Stefan S

Ye yes yes. We are all supportive and want Brian to have a great and fulfilling life - lots of love, travel and adventures.....BUT on the other hand - that cliffhanger. Heavy sigh :) Anywho, would be fun to see Villa and/or Vanessa with the murder bot in the reclaimed zones. Thank you for the chapters.

Chris Bagby

Not cool man! Ending without telling us what it ended up being. You like the little cliffhangers don’t you! Now I have to wait till next week but it would be great to see the guild in a dungeon! Great chapters! I hate you!

Cole

Not another cliff nooo 😭😭

Dawn Zeleznik

An outing will be a fun read. I like the thought of Berry finding out about the drones shape when they get there.

Cary Serack

Brian, that was a mean way to end that last chapeter!

Kiriah

I think we've all been looking forward to the Sovereign build so it taking as much time as needed for you to get the information out is fine with us. I know that I (we?) also like seeing more of Fabi and Sal interacting. Would like to see more of it!

Richard Moore

Have to love a good cliff hanger and being told the next section will be delayed 😁

Meghan B

Love it. Can't wait for the appraisal sheet and I'm glad the death net iterations are being dealt with. It was giving me anxiety that he was paid for a job he wasn't even thinking about. It doesn't take much to make me worry hahaha. Yay Crafting!

Bryan Swanson

THe new chapters are awesome! Love the way this book is staring off!

Jonathan Campbell

Damnit Brian! You're an evil man for that cut off and not including the next chapter!

Rook

Anyone know a good way to read these on iPhone? The default PDF reader won’t let me increase the font size, neither will iBooks on a PDF. Makes it hard to read without zooming and scrolling left to right, which is painful. Can just use tablet, but often I’m reading on my phone.

Prachi

Yes when I export to kindle, there is an option to make the layout adjustable. I just choose that option. It lets me read the text in a higher size in my kindle.

Rainy

I cant wait to see how the death nets pan out.

Gecko

chapter 11 "sal reached down for the next leg" they only had two at that point, blathnaid has run off to collect the others and has not returned yet

Jeremy Gray

Brian, Sir, most humbly, and I say this respectfully and with the highest level of dignity. YOU SU... Actually, I really don't want to get banned, and I. . Okay. So, amateur writer here. I sit in AWE, IN AWE! I really liked these chapters. And when I got to the end of Chapter 12, I shouted because I realized I have to wait... some more. GREAT WORK. Thank you.

Joseph Kozachek

Great chapters. Some thoughts on future developments: visit to Doc Ameye…gifts of replacement glasses with all sight, a suit with a drone, an upgrade kit for protocol, and one of the mythic workstations so the doc could craft mythic….. On the harbor town..imagine a full demon assault…that penetrates the outer wall by overloading a single area (which results in a future change of the outer walls where they are folded like ribbon candy and can tighten or relax to adapt to volume)…. And panels slide over all the doors, windows and walkways and the whole town starts to glow with venom stone….a new crusader built from the wreck of the old one lightened by using arsenals for storage starts flying and firing at the demons pushing them back long enough to evacuate the remaining people at the dock and then the mythic guild arrives in the foreshadowed battle carrier

Zac Crow

When are we gonna see sal and divinity explore being a couple? This needs to happen.

joey sorrentino

I always felt it was weird that sal started off as a pussy whisperer in the first book then just becomes a monk. I know hes got alot of shit on his plate but college kids been finding random rooms to fuck in for 5 mins since time immemorial.

Robert Crews

Great chapters I hope jsoverine keeps Tank tied to Sal I think that they have a potential too become allowed for their home Town a legend of their very own

JimS

As Brian said in his intro last week, this week's chapters will be delayed by a few days because he has been travelling

Zac Crow

Dude I keep checking patreon repeatedly. Must be over a hundred times since Monday morning. I need fix man. You can't get me addicted to your series then cut off my supply!! Im dying here man!!!

Burt C

Nice idea - the spiders reproduction - and I like Seth's cloning capability - could we add the cloning feature to Jackal to duplicate itself to become even more powerful in demon fights and do other tasks like delivery.