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  • Chapter 17 (2,186 words).pdf
  • Chapter 18 (2,093 words).pdf
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C

Weird, I was just asking about his mother, and here she appears. Am I psychic?

Ryan T

"riveting stuff" lol. is eric's thing deadpan dad jokes?

Bill

It will be interesting to see how the negotiations turn out. I'm sure Mythic Guild will make something exceptional!!! Thank you for keeping the story so interesting!

Scott

Great chapters. Always happy to have the parents show up. I will say though it feels a bit surreal at this point, with Sal not going to any classes. Feels like there is so much going on without that.

crazyray

Just take your time to have fun and regenerate. And i like those 3 chapters.

Michael Murphy

Chapter 17: -Page 1: "The moment his gripped him in a hug" missing either father, mother, or parents after "his." Chapter 19: -Page 2: "meaning that they had a full panoramic view of haven through the reinforced glass wall" The H in Haven should be capitalized.

Cori Laraway

Thanks for the chapters! I can’t wait to read all the things: the rest of this meeting, the debut of Arachne, more Silverson Arts leveling, having Petro and Sofia go through Athena and getting their level-up maps, finding out how Fabi scores on the spider drone, having Sal go home to find out what is going on with Arkwright and tweaking things to his satisfaction, and all the things I know are going to surprise the heck out of me!

Luke G

The meeting has so far been tense, but very interesting. Robert is right, from his point of view, that no amount of charity will ever be enough because the Hunter Bureau can give the refugees safety but can't give them the other things they need: agency and purpose. The Bastion agent was able to get such a strong following because they did promise power, and through power agency, through their skill implantation research program. Achieving those goals also gave those involved purpose. I'm sure there were plenty of suggestions from the agent that the Bureau was doing everything they could to stop the refugees from getting power too. I have no idea how Sal thinks he can provide those opportunities but I'm looking forward to finding out, not to mention whatever cool thing he has to stun/excite everyone.

Justin

Loved the new chapters, the interaction between the characters was amazing and it was a genuine joy to see Upgrade show her nerves for a change. Erik was an exactly right and it was great to see him in your pages! I am eagerly awaiting next week's drop because Sophia "who was the star of the show" seems to want to chastise someone!

Robert Smart

Wow, first swear word in the series or just the first I remember? Appropriate timing though.

Maria

On another note, I’m having a problem with the timeline for the second semester. I went through Legions carefully, and I figure it’s about a month of time. Loyalists also seems to be about a month when I counted the days. Even if there are days not mentioned, it doesn’t get me near to the semester’s end, but Upgrade mentions when they’re building Arachne that she’s enjoying her end-of-semester classes. Also, we haven’t seen the resilience classes that were supposed to happen in semester 2…

Rainy

I love seeing Sophia and her using arkwright to make her own fashion line. I could also picture her seeing Vanessa in the uniform/body suit thing that was made for her and scolding Sal about his machines have no fashion sense! I had a question thats not about these specific chapters though. Did you know at the start that sals parents were secretly bad asses? Does sal ever ask his dad about the silverson assassins? I think thats what the one from paradox called them.